sjoy wrote:

00:41:905 00:42:258 - 为什么要空拍
00:43:140 (1,2) - 这节奏有点蛋疼 感觉1比较适合滑条 毕竟重音
01:04:846 有音阿 直接忽略掉有点难受

01:04:846 跟VOCAL 是3/4
03:22:846 突然空拍 很蛋疼
03:24:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这种相比前面的跳太小儿科了
03:43:317 钢琴3连不要了么
03:47:376 (3) - 是3/4节奏
04:15:082 莫名空拍 ，换成滑条都好
讲实在的，最后一段还不如前面难，难度分级有点大

neonat wrote:

好久没谈

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Artist: 瑶山百霊

Title: 蒼月の懺悔詩～Universal Nemesis
Romanised Title: Sougetsu no Zange Uta~Universal Nemesis

You can add these to tags: LEMiao (composer/arranger) , 蒼羅杏 (Lyrics) , U.N.オーエンは彼女なのか？

Flandre Scarlet

00:36:435 (2,3) - not sure why this spacing is so big compared to the rest
00:37:140 (6,7,1) - quite underwhelming imo, entering to the new section of the song
00:51:611 (2) - NC here instead
01:23:552 (4,5,1) - maybe re-position 01:24:082 (1) - the current pattern feels a little uncomfortable
01:38:376 (2,3) - the sounds I hear in the music is at 01:38:464 and 01:38:552 - not at 01:38:376
01:53:023 (4) - the vocal is at 01:53:287 - I suggest you re-snap, and you can make it a repeat slider, as that seems to fit more to this kind of vocal
02:00:082 (4,5,6) - try this rhythm instead? Could fit more to the music imo:

SPOILER

02:09:964 (4,5) - use same shape? lol
02:11:640 - map to the vocal here? ---no i think
02:15:611 (3) - shift it slightly away from 02:14:905 (1)
02:25:670 (6) - remove clap on slider end
02:38:023 (4,5) - feels weird with the strong beat on the slider ends
02:50:729 (3) - ^ the vocals at the end
02:55:581 (6) - nothing really in the song here, I suggest removing it
03:36:258 (7) - move slightly more to the right
03:40:670 (4) - compared to 03:39:611 (1,2,3) - it is placed more downwards, I think you can make them look more symmetrical
04:04:582 - I think you should map to this beat ---no i think
04:13:493 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you mapped to the vocals at 04:19:140 (1,2,1,2) - but before that you used a generic beat rhythm, I think I'd prefer the more unique vocal rhythm you used at 04:19:140 (1,2,1,2)
04:26:905 (3,4,5) - ^
04:42:434 (3,1) - can blanket


GL