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16:58 Lapoozza: rohit!!!!!!!!!!
16:58 Lapoozza: i was waitng for u the whole day
16:58 Rohit6: yo
16:59 Lapoozza: yooo
16:59 Lapoozza: i submitted finally
16:59 Lapoozza: pls have a look
16:59 Rohit6: nice
16:59 Rohit6: alright
16:59 Lapoozza: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/363536
17:06 Lapoozza: how bad is it
17:06 Rohit6: 4/10
17:06 Lapoozza: give me some sugegstions plz
17:07 Rohit6: 00:29:632 (1) - dont use these types of sliders
17:07 Lapoozza: the long one?
17:07 Rohit6: yep
17:07 Lapoozza: ok...
17:07 Rohit6: it just looks bad
17:08 Lapoozza: i thought it went with the music
17:08 Lapoozza: ok
17:08 Rohit6: no the beat is okay
17:08 Rohit6: just the shape is bad
17:08 Lapoozza: aah ok
17:08 Lapoozza: if i make it nice shape
17:08 Lapoozza: then good?
17:08 Lapoozza: something like oval
17:09 Rohit6: 00:22:675 (1,2,3,4) - this and 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this are the same beats
17:09 Rohit6: yet mapped differentl
17:09 Rohit6: y
17:09 Rohit6: 00:24:415 - NEVER MISS A DOWNBEAT
17:09 Lapoozza: the same beat thing
17:10 Lapoozza: i
17:10 Lapoozza: cheked
17:10 Lapoozza: what u mean nby same beat
17:10 Rohit6: the same music
17:10 Lapoozza: aah ok
17:10 Lapoozza: and got ur downbeat thing too
17:11 Lapoozza: i shuld have mapped something there
17:11 Lapoozza: yeah
17:11 Rohit6: 00:23:762 (4) - slider starts on a weak sound and ends on a stronger sounds
17:11 Rohit6: sound*
17:11 Rohit6: you should always start sliders on strong and end on weak
17:11 Lapoozza: ok
17:12 Lapoozza: got it
17:12 Rohit6: 00:29:632 (1) - actually remove this slider
17:13 Rohit6: i would rather you map to the background
17:13 Lapoozza: ok
17:14 Lapoozza: done removed the slider
17:14 Rohit6: 00:45:284 (1,2,3) - you miss the really loud white tick here
17:15 Lapoozza: that was intended
17:15 Lapoozza: but sure
17:15 Lapoozza: i can cnge that
17:15 Lapoozza: *change
17:15 Rohit6: you generally dont want to map to the weak sounds
17:15 Rohit6: always map to the loudest instruments
17:15 Lapoozza: ok
17:16 Lapoozza: rohit at the end can you put all of this into the thread as well plz
17:16 Rohit6: 00:48:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - literally hell to read
17:16 Rohit6: ill post the log dw
17:16 Rohit6: 00:49:088 (2,3,4) - this looks like a triple
17:16 Rohit6: 00:49:632 (5,6,7,8) - these look like 1/2
17:16 Rohit6: while being 1/4
17:17 Rohit6: you should avoid doubles in a hard diff
17:17 Rohit6: use sliders
17:18 Rohit6: [http://puu.sh/kCLO5/cd113411c0.jpg try this]
17:18 Rohit6: 00:48:762 (1) - here
17:19 Rohit6: youve missed a lot of downbeats
17:19 Rohit6: just clarify all of those
17:19 Lapoozza: i had a feeling
17:19 Lapoozza: ok
17:19 Lapoozza: can i use sliders ending qith hit circles
17:19 Lapoozza: is that fine?
17:19 Lapoozza: nnice
17:19 Lapoozza: ok
17:19 Lapoozza: i wil put that there
17:19 Rohit6: 00:52:241 (1,2,3,4) - why map so leniently here
17:20 Rohit6: there are equal beats
17:20 Rohit6: you can use 1/2 sliders
17:20 Rohit6: brb
17:20 Lapoozza: i was kind of giving a break to the playre
17:20 Lapoozza: k
17:32 Rohit6: 01:06:154 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is off
17:32 Rohit6: 01:10:502 (8,9) - this is kinda unrankable
17:32 Rohit6: for a hard diff
17:32 Rohit6: 01:16:588 (1,2) - same for this
17:33 Rohit6: 01:38:762 (7,1,2) - nc patterning is bad
17:33 Rohit6: you should have a pattern
17:33 Rohit6: like every downbeat or every two downbeats
17:34 Rohit6: 01:38:980 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is off
17:34 Lapoozza: ohh
17:34 Lapoozza: i can use reverse sliders?
17:34 Lapoozza: will that do?
17:34 Rohit6: where
17:34 Lapoozza: in the parts
17:34 Rohit6: 02:00:067 (5,6) - overlap sliders are very hard to read
17:35 Lapoozza: yeah
17:35 Rohit6: you can copy the objects
17:35 Lapoozza: can i use reverse
17:35 Rohit6: and then paste the link here
17:35 Rohit6: select>copy>paste
17:35 Lapoozza: k
17:35 Lapoozza: 01:16:588 (1) -
17:35 Lapoozza: here
17:36 Lapoozza: can i use revrse slider
17:36 Lapoozza: instead of overlap
17:36 Lapoozza: slider
17:36 Rohit6: http://puu.sh/kCMwD/3636854bbc.jpg
17:36 Rohit6: do this but without overlap
17:36 Lapoozza: ok
17:37 Rohit6: 01:17:458 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - feels undermapped
17:37 Rohit6: 02:15:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing is off
17:37 Lapoozza: k
17:37 Rohit6: use more lenient ds
17:38 Lapoozza: ok
17:38 Rohit6: 02:22:675 (1) - not snapped correctly
17:38 Rohit6: press ctrl+shift+a for aimod
17:38 Lapoozza: what does that mean
17:38 Rohit6: it'll show you the unsnapped notes
17:39 Rohit6: it shows you general things that are wrong
17:39 Lapoozza: says end is not snapped
17:39 Rohit6: yea
17:39 Lapoozza: how to snap end
17:39 Rohit6: you just dragged it all the way
17:39 Rohit6: make it end on a beat
17:39 Lapoozza: ok done that was easy
17:40 Rohit6: you need to work on patterns more
17:40 Rohit6: and play more please
17:40 Rohit6: oh you already have a 7k playcount
17:40 Rohit6: learn to play insanes and then you can easily map hard diffs
17:40 Lapoozza: ok
17:40 Lapoozza: yeah
17:40 Lapoozza:
17:40 Lapoozza: i do play u see
17:41 Lapoozza: k
17:41 Lapoozza: thsese days I am taking time off from ranked maps
17:41 Lapoozza: for like the past 10 days
17:41 Rohit6: play ranked maps
17:41 Lapoozza: i was wrokign on my streams jumps and accuracy
17:41 Rohit6: but play good ranked maps
17:41 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/533622 U1 overground - Dopamine]
17:41 Rohit6: this is a good one
17:41 Lapoozza: have it
17:42 Rohit6: ill recommend you some good 4* maps
17:42 Rohit6: if you want
17:42 Lapoozza: yeah yeah plz do
17:42 Rohit6: the way you have mapped
17:42 Lapoozza: I am tired of my recomended diifculty maps
17:42 Rohit6: is a very old style
17:42 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/50719 Groove Coverage - 21st Century Digital Girl Remix (Nightcore Ver.)]
17:42 Rohit6: like this
17:43 Lapoozza: yeah have this too
17:43 Lapoozza: i use it for jump training
17:43 Lapoozza: very good song
17:43 Lapoozza:
17:44 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/145366 Yousei Teikoku - The Creator]
17:44 Rohit6: ar9+streams
17:44 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/250577 Wotamin - Gigantic O.T.N]
17:44 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/291430 FujuniseikouyuuP - FREEDMAN]
17:44 Rohit6: good for learning alt tap
17:44 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/178643 3L - Three Magic]
17:44 Rohit6: good to learn triples
17:45 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/267978 The Pretty Reckless - Kill Me]
17:45 Rohit6: good to learn reading
17:45 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258335 An - Encryption]
17:45 Rohit6: streams
17:45 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/266925 MitiS - Open Window (feat. Anna Yvette)]
17:45 Rohit6: insanely good map
17:46 Lapoozza: plz give me some advice on jumps
17:46 Lapoozza: I can stream pretty well now but it always the jumps that kill me
17:46 Lapoozza: tbh i wanted to make this a streamy map
17:46 Lapoozza: too
17:46 Lapoozza: have both
17:46 Lapoozza: k
17:46 Lapoozza: jumps plz
17:46 Lapoozza: plz giff advice
17:46 Lapoozza: streams no probs
17:46 Lapoozza: thats the only thing I can do
17:46 Lapoozza: which diff btw
17:46 Rohit6: alright
17:46 Rohit6: i think i lagged out
17:47 Rohit6: for jumps
17:47 Lapoozza: haha
17:47 Rohit6: dont focus too much on where to click
17:47 Rohit6: just clear your head
17:47 Lapoozza: yeah yeah thats the part where i get stuck
17:47 Lapoozza: i mean hat exact thing u mentioned
17:47 Lapoozza: i keep zooming my eyes too much at the spots
17:48 Rohit6: thats exactly what you shouldnt do
17:48 Rohit6: just keep a distance
17:48 Rohit6: and dont freeze
17:48 Lapoozza: how u know where to land
17:48 Rohit6: just look at the approach circles
17:49 Rohit6: you'll learn a lot if you learn to play hidden
17:49 Lapoozza: ok
17:49 Lapoozza: one last question
17:49 Lapoozza: are there any maps I mean hards one that rewards streamy styles
17:49 Lapoozza: hidden
17:49 Lapoozza: ok
17:49 Lapoozza: right now what i do is I mmake OD 10 copies of my songs
17:50 Lapoozza: and ake circle small
17:50 Lapoozza: and play them
17:50 Rohit6: lol
17:50 Rohit6: dont do that
17:50 Rohit6: try to play od7-8
17:50 Lapoozza: ohh
17:50 Rohit6: and max cs5
17:50 Lapoozza: i thought OD 10 made u listen to the music more carefullly
17:50 Rohit6: you just need to learn hidden atm
17:50 Lapoozza: muh bad
17:50 Lapoozza: ok
17:51 Rohit6: od10 is kinda unplayable sometimes
17:51 Rohit6: if its badly mapped
17:51 Lapoozza: haha true....I get your point....
17:52 Rohit6: you only need to be able to play insanes and low extras to know how this game works
17:52 Lapoozza: tbh I can play a few insanes
17:52 Lapoozza: like dear yous 4.5* diff
17:52 Lapoozza: and that pretendre song
17:52 Lapoozza: and also can play a bot of the airman 5 * song
17:52 Lapoozza: i men abt 80% acc
17:53 Rohit6: yeah
17:53 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/404823 Pendulum - Watercolour (Radio Edit)]
17:54 Rohit6: good map to learn jumps and stream
17:54 Lapoozza: k...
17:54 Lapoozza: lastly what do u sugegst
17:54 Lapoozza: i mean should i take comeple time off
17:54 Lapoozza: from ranks
17:54 Lapoozza: to practice
17:55 Lapoozza: bcoz I dont really care abt my PP u see
17:55 Rohit6: its a curve
17:55 Rohit6: you should play both
17:55 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/772983 yak_won - Sewing Machine]
17:55 Lapoozza: k
17:55 Rohit6: perfect map to learn streams
17:55 Lapoozza: nice
17:56 Lapoozza: can u tell me if this is good
17:56 Lapoozza: viewtopic.php?t=77719
17:56 Lapoozza: i am folowing this
17:56 Lapoozza: currenty
17:56 Lapoozza: i am mi nlvl 2
17:56 Lapoozza: right now
17:56 Lapoozza: and also this thing called James Training
17:56 Lapoozza: with the Be4U maps
17:56 Rohit6: lets see the maps
17:56 Lapoozza: ok i link it
17:56 Lapoozza: hld on
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/75074 Commercial Club Crew vs Clubmaster - Sakura Girl]
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/73494 capsule - JUMPER]
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/52946 Nightcore - Festa!]
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41561 Nakahara Mai - Anemone]
17:57 Rohit6: ha im on level 8
17:57 Rohit6: lol
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/134769 eveless & qinche - Deepsea Girl]
17:57 Lapoozza:
17:57 Lapoozza: check out lvl 20
17:57 Lapoozza: must be potlas lvl
17:59 Lapoozza: rohit can u plzl pot the log to the thread
17:59 Rohit6: ayy i finished some of lvl 11 as well
17:59 Lapoozza: *post
17:59 Rohit6: yep
17:59 Lapoozza: o.O
17:59 Lapoozza: lvl 11 jumper ehh
17:59 Lapoozza: i am a lvl 2 scrub
18:01 Rohit6: potla is 17 it seems
18:01 Lapoozza: nice
18:01 Lapoozza: can u play this with HR
18:01 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/19969 Silver Forest - Tsurupettan]
18:01 Rohit6: uh i can barely read ar10
18:01 Rohit6: lemme try
18:01 Lapoozza: i can gwt only 50%
18:01 Lapoozza: k
18:01 Rohit6: oh it ar6
18:02 Lapoozza: ar8.4
18:02 Lapoozza:
18:02 Rohit6: then it'll be easy
18:02 Lapoozza: with hr
18:02 Lapoozza: yeah
18:02 Lapoozza: try it
18:02 Lapoozza: u will love it
18:02 Lapoozza: oh oh today i broke a personal record
18:02 Lapoozza: i held a 150 bpm stream for 1000 combo
18:02 Lapoozza:
18:02 Rohit6: nice
18:03 Lapoozza: hoping to cross the 200 barrier soon
18:03 Rohit6: lemme warm up
18:03 Lapoozza: k
18:03 Rohit6: 200 is a long way
18:03 Rohit6: i can hold only 170
18:03 Lapoozza: nice...
18:03 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/151229 Hatsune Miku - Mythologia's End]
18:03 Rohit6: this is one of the hardest stream maps
18:03 Rohit6: but only od7
18:04 Lapoozza: than have to get
18:04 Lapoozza:
18:04 Lapoozza: ty
18:05 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/507728 Natsume Chiaki - Hanairo Biyori]
18:05 Rohit6: jumps
18:12 Rohit6: lemme see if i can reach level 15
18:12 Rohit6: with jumps
18:12 Lapoozza: u can easily
18:12 Lapoozza:
18:14 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646087 I See MONSTAS - Holdin' On (Skrillex and Nero Remix)]
18:14 Rohit6: potla almost fc'ed this
18:15 Lapoozza: damn this map is tough
18:16 Lapoozza: u got from that jump page?
18:16 Rohit6: no
18:16 Rohit6: which map
18:17 *Rohit6 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/652234 Alipio Martins - Piranha (Maffalda Reloaded Trap Mix) [BD's Gangsta]]
18:18 Rohit6: he also got 1x miss on this
18:19 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/594965 Zetsubou Shoujotachi - Zetsubou Restaurant (TV Size)]
18:19 Lapoozza: hahaha that song is so gay
18:19 Lapoozza: that piranha song
18:19 Lapoozza: i cant listen to ut
18:19 Lapoozza: *it
18:21 Rohit6: lol
18:21 Rohit6: zetsubou is 150 bpm airman
18:21 Lapoozza: haha....
18:21 Lapoozza: the singer sounds like he was forced to sing
18:21 Lapoozza: without payment
18:22 Lapoozza:
18:22 Rohit6: lol
18:22 Rohit6: if yo uwant to learn jumps
18:22 Rohit6: just pick up any anime tv size
18:22 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/667065 Kicco - Lucky Monster]
18:22 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/190045 DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Drum and Bass]
18:23 Rohit6: you also need to learn
18:23 Lapoozza: have em
18:23 Rohit6: how to read maps
18:23 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/381798 Nhato - Miss You]
18:23 Lapoozza: true..
18:23 Rohit6: this map
18:23 Rohit6: will do this
18:23 Lapoozza: i lack that skill quite a bit
18:23 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/178966 HujuniseikouyuuP - Talent Shredder]
18:26 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/181253 goreshit - o'er the flood]
18:26 Rohit6: will teach you how to tap
18:28 Rohit6: just play fycho,val0108 and Blue dragon's maps
18:28 Rohit6: to learn jumps
18:28 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/140897 Black Hole - Pluto]
18:28 Rohit6: learn to read
18:32 Lapoozza: was afk sry'
18:32 Lapoozza:
18:32 Lapoozza: had to go bake a cake
18:33 Rohit6: k
18:33 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/131564 Lily - Scarlet Rose]
18:33 Rohit6: if you can read this you're pretty much done with reading
18:33 Lapoozza: clack hole
18:33 Lapoozza: not availabe
18:33 Lapoozza: how come'
18:33 Rohit6: copyright
18:33 Lapoozza: nice
18:34 Rohit6: search on google and click on the osubeatmaps.com
18:34 Rohit6: link
18:34 Lapoozza: damn that song
18:34 Lapoozza: scarlet rose
18:34 Lapoozza: is not possible
18:34 Rohit6: lemme try
18:34 Rohit6: my luck
18:34 Lapoozza: k willg et from the site
18:34 Lapoozza: k
18:37 Rohit6: man
18:37 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/422328 Maffalda - pensamento tipico de esquerda caviar]
18:37 Rohit6: good jump map
18:37 Lapoozza: i hate maps like thise >.<
18:38 Lapoozza: oh oh play
18:38 Lapoozza: image material
18:38 Rohit6: lel
18:38 Rohit6: lets see
18:38 Lapoozza:
18:38 Lapoozza: i love that map
18:38 Lapoozza: a lot
18:41 Rohit6: man i cant play this
18:41 Rohit6: QQ
18:41 Lapoozza: haha
18:41 Rohit6: ill try one map
18:42 Lapoozza: this is a nice map ....simple to read but need speed and stamina
18:42 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/541990 Function Phantom - Neuronecia]
18:42 Lapoozza: i like these kind
18:42 Lapoozza: are ther any more like that
18:42 Lapoozza: image material
18:42 Rohit6: uh well
18:42 Rohit6: search dragonforce
18:42 Lapoozza: ok
18:42 Rohit6: they're 200 bpm rock songs
18:42 Rohit6: marathons
18:42 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646609 Camellia - dreamless wanderer]
18:42 Lapoozza: all these are speed reads basically right?
18:43 Rohit6: im gonna try this
18:43 Rohit6: they're read heavy as well
18:43 Rohit6: since they're ar8
18:43 Rohit6: mostly
18:43 Lapoozza: k
18:43 Lapoozza: i was able to fllow u play image material
18:43 Rohit6: dl this
18:43 *Rohit6 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646609 Camellia - dreamless wanderer [Ethereal]]
18:43 Lapoozza: as in my head didt start spinning
18:43 Rohit6: readmap
18:43 Lapoozza: yeah
18:43 Lapoozza: 10 sec
18:43 Lapoozza: ...
18:44 Lapoozza: err dl stopped.....stupid aircel....
18:44 Rohit6: aww
18:44 Lapoozza: u carry on...i will get it as soon as get some speed
18:44 Rohit6: the hitsounds in this
18:44 Lapoozza:
18:56 Rohit6: who's your fav mapper?
18:57 Lapoozza: the guy who made image material and United LAOS remix, ztrot and bluedragon sama
18:57 Rohit6: do you know skystar?
18:57 Lapoozza: i have heard of him...
18:57 Rohit6: lesjuh?
18:57 Lapoozza: and also 0108
18:58 Lapoozza: nah
18:58 Rohit6: shiirn?
18:58 Rohit6: play lesjuh and shiirn maps
18:59 Lapoozza: umm
18:59 Lapoozza: nope
18:59 Lapoozza:
18:59 Lapoozza: i just play the maps
18:59 Lapoozza: ok
18:59 Lapoozza: to iprove my reading
18:59 Lapoozza: shoudl I pay
18:59 Rohit6: lesjuh maps
18:59 Lapoozza: *play
18:59 Lapoozza: all maps
18:59 Lapoozza: that I have
18:59 Rohit6: are reading maps
18:59 Lapoozza: ok
18:59 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41646 Dragonforce - Fury Of The Storm]
18:59 Lapoozza: and how to improve accuracy
18:59 Lapoozza: sometime i can fc songs but with sad accuracy
19:00 Rohit6: yeah that means your aim is good
19:00 Lapoozza: but acc is so bad >.<
19:00 Rohit6: yeah you need to be more accurate
19:01 Rohit6: usually keep your acc above 86%
19:01 Rohit6: 96*
19:01 Lapoozza: o.O 96 is quite high
19:01 Lapoozza: i mean ofc i ca get close to 99 on maps <2.5 stars
19:02 Lapoozza: i will downlaod all of leshuj guys maps
19:02 Rohit6: hes a very good mapper
19:02 Rohit6: was*
19:02 Rohit6: he left the game like a year ago
19:02 Rohit6: RIP
19:03 Rohit6: play ktgster's maps if you want to learn streams
19:03 Lapoozza: haha
19:03 Lapoozza: dont worry I take his place soon
19:03 Lapoozza:
19:04 Rohit6: someone is already trying to
19:04 *Rohit6 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/420012 Yooh - snow storm -euphoria- [EXHAUST]]
19:04 Lapoozza: haha
19:04 Lapoozza: how to give kudos to you
19:04 Lapoozza: bcoz of ur help
19:04 Rohit6: ah lemme post
19:05 Lapoozza: ok
16:58 Lapoozza: i was waitng for u the whole day
16:58 Rohit6: yo
16:59 Lapoozza: yooo
16:59 Lapoozza: i submitted finally
16:59 Lapoozza: pls have a look
16:59 Rohit6: nice
16:59 Rohit6: alright
16:59 Lapoozza: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/363536
17:06 Lapoozza: how bad is it
17:06 Rohit6: 4/10
17:06 Lapoozza: give me some sugegstions plz
17:07 Rohit6: 00:29:632 (1) - dont use these types of sliders
17:07 Lapoozza: the long one?
17:07 Rohit6: yep
17:07 Lapoozza: ok...
17:07 Rohit6: it just looks bad
17:08 Lapoozza: i thought it went with the music
17:08 Lapoozza: ok
17:08 Rohit6: no the beat is okay
17:08 Rohit6: just the shape is bad
17:08 Lapoozza: aah ok
17:08 Lapoozza: if i make it nice shape
17:08 Lapoozza: then good?
17:08 Lapoozza: something like oval
17:09 Rohit6: 00:22:675 (1,2,3,4) - this and 00:19:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this are the same beats
17:09 Rohit6: yet mapped differentl
17:09 Rohit6: y
17:09 Rohit6: 00:24:415 - NEVER MISS A DOWNBEAT
17:09 Lapoozza: the same beat thing
17:10 Lapoozza: i
17:10 Lapoozza: cheked
17:10 Lapoozza: what u mean nby same beat
17:10 Rohit6: the same music
17:10 Lapoozza: aah ok
17:10 Lapoozza: and got ur downbeat thing too
17:11 Lapoozza: i shuld have mapped something there
17:11 Lapoozza: yeah
17:11 Rohit6: 00:23:762 (4) - slider starts on a weak sound and ends on a stronger sounds
17:11 Rohit6: sound*
17:11 Rohit6: you should always start sliders on strong and end on weak
17:11 Lapoozza: ok
17:12 Lapoozza: got it
17:12 Rohit6: 00:29:632 (1) - actually remove this slider
17:13 Rohit6: i would rather you map to the background
17:13 Lapoozza: ok
17:14 Lapoozza: done removed the slider
17:14 Rohit6: 00:45:284 (1,2,3) - you miss the really loud white tick here
17:15 Lapoozza: that was intended
17:15 Lapoozza: but sure
17:15 Lapoozza: i can cnge that
17:15 Lapoozza: *change
17:15 Rohit6: you generally dont want to map to the weak sounds
17:15 Rohit6: always map to the loudest instruments
17:15 Lapoozza: ok
17:16 Lapoozza: rohit at the end can you put all of this into the thread as well plz
17:16 Rohit6: 00:48:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - literally hell to read
17:16 Rohit6: ill post the log dw
17:16 Rohit6: 00:49:088 (2,3,4) - this looks like a triple
17:16 Rohit6: 00:49:632 (5,6,7,8) - these look like 1/2
17:16 Rohit6: while being 1/4
17:17 Rohit6: you should avoid doubles in a hard diff
17:17 Rohit6: use sliders
17:18 Rohit6: [http://puu.sh/kCLO5/cd113411c0.jpg try this]
17:18 Rohit6: 00:48:762 (1) - here
17:19 Rohit6: youve missed a lot of downbeats
17:19 Rohit6: just clarify all of those
17:19 Lapoozza: i had a feeling
17:19 Lapoozza: ok
17:19 Lapoozza: can i use sliders ending qith hit circles
17:19 Lapoozza: is that fine?
17:19 Lapoozza: nnice
17:19 Lapoozza: ok
17:19 Lapoozza: i wil put that there
17:19 Rohit6: 00:52:241 (1,2,3,4) - why map so leniently here
17:20 Rohit6: there are equal beats
17:20 Rohit6: you can use 1/2 sliders
17:20 Rohit6: brb
17:20 Lapoozza: i was kind of giving a break to the playre
17:20 Lapoozza: k
17:32 Rohit6: 01:06:154 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is off
17:32 Rohit6: 01:10:502 (8,9) - this is kinda unrankable
17:32 Rohit6: for a hard diff
17:32 Rohit6: 01:16:588 (1,2) - same for this
17:33 Rohit6: 01:38:762 (7,1,2) - nc patterning is bad
17:33 Rohit6: you should have a pattern
17:33 Rohit6: like every downbeat or every two downbeats
17:34 Rohit6: 01:38:980 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is off
17:34 Lapoozza: ohh
17:34 Lapoozza: i can use reverse sliders?
17:34 Lapoozza: will that do?
17:34 Rohit6: where
17:34 Lapoozza: in the parts
17:34 Rohit6: 02:00:067 (5,6) - overlap sliders are very hard to read
17:35 Lapoozza: yeah
17:35 Rohit6: you can copy the objects
17:35 Lapoozza: can i use reverse
17:35 Rohit6: and then paste the link here
17:35 Rohit6: select>copy>paste
17:35 Lapoozza: k
17:35 Lapoozza: 01:16:588 (1) -
17:35 Lapoozza: here
17:36 Lapoozza: can i use revrse slider
17:36 Lapoozza: instead of overlap
17:36 Lapoozza: slider
17:36 Rohit6: http://puu.sh/kCMwD/3636854bbc.jpg
17:36 Rohit6: do this but without overlap
17:36 Lapoozza: ok
17:37 Rohit6: 01:17:458 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - feels undermapped
17:37 Rohit6: 02:15:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing is off
17:37 Lapoozza: k
17:37 Rohit6: use more lenient ds
17:38 Lapoozza: ok
17:38 Rohit6: 02:22:675 (1) - not snapped correctly
17:38 Rohit6: press ctrl+shift+a for aimod
17:38 Lapoozza: what does that mean
17:38 Rohit6: it'll show you the unsnapped notes
17:39 Rohit6: it shows you general things that are wrong
17:39 Lapoozza: says end is not snapped
17:39 Rohit6: yea
17:39 Lapoozza: how to snap end
17:39 Rohit6: you just dragged it all the way
17:39 Rohit6: make it end on a beat
17:39 Lapoozza: ok done
that was easy17:40 Rohit6: you need to work on patterns more
17:40 Rohit6: and play more please
17:40 Rohit6: oh you already have a 7k playcount
17:40 Rohit6: learn to play insanes and then you can easily map hard diffs
17:40 Lapoozza: ok
17:40 Lapoozza: yeah
17:40 Lapoozza:
17:40 Lapoozza: i do play u see
17:41 Lapoozza: k
17:41 Lapoozza: thsese days I am taking time off from ranked maps
17:41 Lapoozza: for like the past 10 days
17:41 Rohit6: play ranked maps
17:41 Lapoozza: i was wrokign on my streams jumps and accuracy
17:41 Rohit6: but play good ranked maps
17:41 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/533622 U1 overground - Dopamine]
17:41 Rohit6: this is a good one
17:41 Lapoozza: have it
17:42 Rohit6: ill recommend you some good 4* maps
17:42 Rohit6: if you want
17:42 Lapoozza: yeah yeah plz do
17:42 Rohit6: the way you have mapped
17:42 Lapoozza: I am tired of my recomended diifculty maps
17:42 Rohit6: is a very old style
17:42 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/50719 Groove Coverage - 21st Century Digital Girl Remix (Nightcore Ver.)]
17:42 Rohit6: like this
17:43 Lapoozza: yeah have this too
17:43 Lapoozza: i use it for jump training
17:43 Lapoozza: very good song
17:43 Lapoozza:
17:44 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/145366 Yousei Teikoku - The Creator]
17:44 Rohit6: ar9+streams
17:44 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/250577 Wotamin - Gigantic O.T.N]
17:44 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/291430 FujuniseikouyuuP - FREEDMAN]
17:44 Rohit6: good for learning alt tap
17:44 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/178643 3L - Three Magic]
17:44 Rohit6: good to learn triples
17:45 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/267978 The Pretty Reckless - Kill Me]
17:45 Rohit6: good to learn reading
17:45 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258335 An - Encryption]
17:45 Rohit6: streams
17:45 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/266925 MitiS - Open Window (feat. Anna Yvette)]
17:45 Rohit6: insanely good map
17:46 Lapoozza: plz give me some advice on jumps
17:46 Lapoozza: I can stream pretty well now but it always the jumps that kill me
17:46 Lapoozza: tbh i wanted to make this a streamy map
17:46 Lapoozza: too
17:46 Lapoozza: have both
17:46 Lapoozza: k
17:46 Lapoozza: jumps plz
17:46 Lapoozza: plz giff advice
17:46 Lapoozza: streams no probs
17:46 Lapoozza: thats the only thing I can do
17:46 Lapoozza: which diff btw
17:46 Rohit6: alright
17:46 Rohit6: i think i lagged out
17:47 Rohit6: for jumps
17:47 Lapoozza: haha
17:47 Rohit6: dont focus too much on where to click
17:47 Rohit6: just clear your head
17:47 Lapoozza: yeah yeah thats the part where i get stuck
17:47 Lapoozza: i mean hat exact thing u mentioned
17:47 Lapoozza: i keep zooming my eyes too much at the spots
17:48 Rohit6: thats exactly what you shouldnt do
17:48 Rohit6: just keep a distance
17:48 Rohit6: and dont freeze
17:48 Lapoozza: how u know where to land
17:48 Rohit6: just look at the approach circles
17:49 Rohit6: you'll learn a lot if you learn to play hidden
17:49 Lapoozza: ok
17:49 Lapoozza: one last question
17:49 Lapoozza: are there any maps I mean hards one that rewards streamy styles
17:49 Lapoozza: hidden
17:49 Lapoozza: ok
17:49 Lapoozza: right now what i do is I mmake OD 10 copies of my songs
17:50 Lapoozza: and ake circle small
17:50 Lapoozza: and play them
17:50 Rohit6: lol
17:50 Rohit6: dont do that
17:50 Rohit6: try to play od7-8
17:50 Lapoozza: ohh
17:50 Rohit6: and max cs5
17:50 Lapoozza: i thought OD 10 made u listen to the music more carefullly
17:50 Rohit6: you just need to learn hidden atm
17:50 Lapoozza: muh bad
17:50 Lapoozza: ok
17:51 Rohit6: od10 is kinda unplayable sometimes
17:51 Rohit6: if its badly mapped
17:51 Lapoozza: haha true....I get your point....
17:52 Rohit6: you only need to be able to play insanes and low extras to know how this game works
17:52 Lapoozza: tbh I can play a few insanes
17:52 Lapoozza: like dear yous 4.5* diff
17:52 Lapoozza: and that pretendre song
17:52 Lapoozza: and also can play a bot of the airman 5 * song
17:52 Lapoozza: i men abt 80% acc
17:53 Rohit6: yeah
17:53 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/404823 Pendulum - Watercolour (Radio Edit)]
17:54 Rohit6: good map to learn jumps and stream
17:54 Lapoozza: k...
17:54 Lapoozza: lastly what do u sugegst
17:54 Lapoozza: i mean should i take comeple time off
17:54 Lapoozza: from ranks
17:54 Lapoozza: to practice
17:55 Lapoozza: bcoz I dont really care abt my PP u see
17:55 Rohit6: its a curve
17:55 Rohit6: you should play both
17:55 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/772983 yak_won - Sewing Machine]
17:55 Lapoozza: k
17:55 Rohit6: perfect map to learn streams
17:55 Lapoozza: nice
17:56 Lapoozza: can u tell me if this is good
17:56 Lapoozza: viewtopic.php?t=77719
17:56 Lapoozza: i am folowing this
17:56 Lapoozza: currenty
17:56 Lapoozza: i am mi nlvl 2
17:56 Lapoozza: right now
17:56 Lapoozza: and also this thing called James Training
17:56 Lapoozza: with the Be4U maps
17:56 Rohit6: lets see the maps
17:56 Lapoozza: ok i link it
17:56 Lapoozza: hld on
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/75074 Commercial Club Crew vs Clubmaster - Sakura Girl]
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/73494 capsule - JUMPER]
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/52946 Nightcore - Festa!]
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41561 Nakahara Mai - Anemone]
17:57 Rohit6: ha im on level 8
17:57 Rohit6: lol
17:57 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/134769 eveless & qinche - Deepsea Girl]
17:57 Lapoozza:
17:57 Lapoozza: check out lvl 20
17:57 Lapoozza: must be potlas lvl
17:59 Lapoozza: rohit can u plzl pot the log to the thread
17:59 Rohit6: ayy i finished some of lvl 11 as well
17:59 Lapoozza: *post
17:59 Rohit6: yep
17:59 Lapoozza: o.O
17:59 Lapoozza: lvl 11 jumper ehh
17:59 Lapoozza: i am a lvl 2 scrub
18:01 Rohit6: potla is 17 it seems
18:01 Lapoozza: nice
18:01 Lapoozza: can u play this with HR
18:01 *Lapoozza is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/19969 Silver Forest - Tsurupettan]
18:01 Rohit6: uh i can barely read ar10
18:01 Rohit6: lemme try
18:01 Lapoozza: i can gwt only 50%
18:01 Lapoozza: k
18:01 Rohit6: oh it ar6
18:02 Lapoozza: ar8.4
18:02 Lapoozza:
18:02 Rohit6: then it'll be easy
18:02 Lapoozza: with hr
18:02 Lapoozza: yeah
18:02 Lapoozza: try it
18:02 Lapoozza: u will love it
18:02 Lapoozza: oh oh today i broke a personal record
18:02 Lapoozza: i held a 150 bpm stream for 1000 combo
18:02 Lapoozza:
18:02 Rohit6: nice
18:03 Lapoozza: hoping to cross the 200 barrier soon
18:03 Rohit6: lemme warm up
18:03 Lapoozza: k
18:03 Rohit6: 200 is a long way
18:03 Rohit6: i can hold only 170
18:03 Lapoozza: nice...
18:03 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/151229 Hatsune Miku - Mythologia's End]
18:03 Rohit6: this is one of the hardest stream maps
18:03 Rohit6: but only od7
18:04 Lapoozza: than have to get
18:04 Lapoozza:
18:04 Lapoozza: ty
18:05 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/507728 Natsume Chiaki - Hanairo Biyori]
18:05 Rohit6: jumps
18:12 Rohit6: lemme see if i can reach level 15
18:12 Rohit6: with jumps
18:12 Lapoozza: u can easily
18:12 Lapoozza:
18:14 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646087 I See MONSTAS - Holdin' On (Skrillex and Nero Remix)]
18:14 Rohit6: potla almost fc'ed this
18:15 Lapoozza: damn this map is tough
18:16 Lapoozza: u got from that jump page?
18:16 Rohit6: no
18:16 Rohit6: which map
18:17 *Rohit6 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/652234 Alipio Martins - Piranha (Maffalda Reloaded Trap Mix) [BD's Gangsta]]
18:18 Rohit6: he also got 1x miss on this
18:19 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/594965 Zetsubou Shoujotachi - Zetsubou Restaurant (TV Size)]
18:19 Lapoozza: hahaha that song is so gay
18:19 Lapoozza: that piranha song
18:19 Lapoozza: i cant listen to ut
18:19 Lapoozza: *it
18:21 Rohit6: lol
18:21 Rohit6: zetsubou is 150 bpm airman
18:21 Lapoozza: haha....
18:21 Lapoozza: the singer sounds like he was forced to sing
18:21 Lapoozza: without payment
18:22 Lapoozza:
18:22 Rohit6: lol
18:22 Rohit6: if yo uwant to learn jumps
18:22 Rohit6: just pick up any anime tv size
18:22 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/667065 Kicco - Lucky Monster]
18:22 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/190045 DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Drum and Bass]
18:23 Rohit6: you also need to learn
18:23 Lapoozza: have em
18:23 Rohit6: how to read maps
18:23 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/381798 Nhato - Miss You]
18:23 Lapoozza: true..
18:23 Rohit6: this map
18:23 Rohit6: will do this
18:23 Lapoozza: i lack that skill quite a bit
18:23 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/178966 HujuniseikouyuuP - Talent Shredder]
18:26 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/181253 goreshit - o'er the flood]
18:26 Rohit6: will teach you how to tap
18:28 Rohit6: just play fycho,val0108 and Blue dragon's maps
18:28 Rohit6: to learn jumps
18:28 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/140897 Black Hole - Pluto]
18:28 Rohit6: learn to read
18:32 Lapoozza: was afk sry'
18:32 Lapoozza:
18:32 Lapoozza: had to go bake a cake
18:33 Rohit6: k
18:33 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/131564 Lily - Scarlet Rose]
18:33 Rohit6: if you can read this you're pretty much done with reading
18:33 Lapoozza: clack hole
18:33 Lapoozza: not availabe
18:33 Lapoozza: how come'
18:33 Rohit6: copyright
18:33 Lapoozza: nice
18:34 Rohit6: search on google and click on the osubeatmaps.com
18:34 Rohit6: link
18:34 Lapoozza: damn that song
18:34 Lapoozza: scarlet rose
18:34 Lapoozza: is not possible
18:34 Rohit6: lemme try
18:34 Rohit6: my luck
18:34 Lapoozza: k willg et from the site
18:34 Lapoozza: k
18:37 Rohit6: man
18:37 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/422328 Maffalda - pensamento tipico de esquerda caviar]
18:37 Rohit6: good jump map
18:37 Lapoozza: i hate maps like thise >.<
18:38 Lapoozza: oh oh play
18:38 Lapoozza: image material
18:38 Rohit6: lel
18:38 Rohit6: lets see
18:38 Lapoozza:
18:38 Lapoozza: i love that map
18:38 Lapoozza: a lot
18:41 Rohit6: man i cant play this
18:41 Rohit6: QQ
18:41 Lapoozza: haha
18:41 Rohit6: ill try one map
18:42 Lapoozza: this is a nice map ....simple to read but need speed and stamina
18:42 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/541990 Function Phantom - Neuronecia]
18:42 Lapoozza: i like these kind
18:42 Lapoozza: are ther any more like that
18:42 Lapoozza: image material
18:42 Rohit6: uh well
18:42 Rohit6: search dragonforce
18:42 Lapoozza: ok
18:42 Rohit6: they're 200 bpm rock songs
18:42 Rohit6: marathons
18:42 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646609 Camellia - dreamless wanderer]
18:42 Lapoozza: all these are speed reads basically right?
18:43 Rohit6: im gonna try this
18:43 Rohit6: they're read heavy as well
18:43 Rohit6: since they're ar8
18:43 Rohit6: mostly
18:43 Lapoozza: k
18:43 Lapoozza: i was able to fllow u play image material
18:43 Rohit6: dl this
18:43 *Rohit6 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646609 Camellia - dreamless wanderer [Ethereal]]
18:43 Lapoozza: as in my head didt start spinning
18:43 Rohit6: readmap
18:43 Lapoozza: yeah
18:43 Lapoozza: 10 sec
18:43 Lapoozza: ...
18:44 Lapoozza: err dl stopped.....stupid aircel....
18:44 Rohit6: aww
18:44 Lapoozza: u carry on...i will get it as soon as get some speed
18:44 Rohit6: the hitsounds in this
18:44 Lapoozza:
18:56 Rohit6: who's your fav mapper?
18:57 Lapoozza: the guy who made image material and United LAOS remix, ztrot and bluedragon sama
18:57 Rohit6: do you know skystar?
18:57 Lapoozza: i have heard of him...
18:57 Rohit6: lesjuh?
18:57 Lapoozza: and also 0108
18:58 Lapoozza: nah
18:58 Rohit6: shiirn?
18:58 Rohit6: play lesjuh and shiirn maps
18:59 Lapoozza: umm
18:59 Lapoozza: nope
18:59 Lapoozza:
18:59 Lapoozza: i just play the maps
18:59 Lapoozza: ok
18:59 Lapoozza: to iprove my reading
18:59 Lapoozza: shoudl I pay
18:59 Rohit6: lesjuh maps
18:59 Lapoozza: *play
18:59 Lapoozza: all maps
18:59 Lapoozza: that I have
18:59 Rohit6: are reading maps
18:59 Lapoozza: ok
18:59 *Rohit6 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41646 Dragonforce - Fury Of The Storm]
18:59 Lapoozza: and how to improve accuracy
18:59 Lapoozza: sometime i can fc songs but with sad accuracy
19:00 Rohit6: yeah that means your aim is good
19:00 Lapoozza: but acc is so bad >.<
19:00 Rohit6: yeah you need to be more accurate
19:01 Rohit6: usually keep your acc above 86%
19:01 Rohit6: 96*
19:01 Lapoozza: o.O 96 is quite high
19:01 Lapoozza: i mean ofc i ca get close to 99 on maps <2.5 stars
19:02 Lapoozza: i will downlaod all of leshuj guys maps
19:02 Rohit6: hes a very good mapper
19:02 Rohit6: was*
19:02 Rohit6: he left the game like a year ago
19:02 Rohit6: RIP
19:03 Rohit6: play ktgster's maps if you want to learn streams
19:03 Lapoozza: haha
19:03 Lapoozza: dont worry I take his place soon
19:03 Lapoozza:
19:04 Rohit6: someone is already trying to
19:04 *Rohit6 is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/420012 Yooh - snow storm -euphoria- [EXHAUST]]
19:04 Lapoozza: haha
19:04 Lapoozza: how to give kudos to you
19:04 Lapoozza: bcoz of ur help
19:04 Rohit6: ah lemme post
19:05 Lapoozza: ok
TrueLucifer asked me to mod this for you.
SPOILER
[General]
*Add Kiai phases to the map.
*Timing is wrong. Timing should also be on the first beat of the song, which it currently isnt. (1835 timing)
*You map prior to any timing point, ^this fixes that aswell.
*What is the purpose of the inheriting marker here ? 00:05:393 - It does absolutely nothing atm.
*Look over your hitsounding, its nonsensical at the moment (whistles on random stuff with no coherency). Use the hitsounds to match certain sounds in the song.
[Hard]
Won't go into anything specific.
Most of the things I mention here can be applied to several places in the map, I will only mention them once and maybe give an example.
*Circle Size 5/4.5 would fit better tbh.
*You map alot to 1/1, it's boring to play, especially for a hard difficulty. Try listening to other prevalent parts in the music (for example the bass line???) and map to that ASWELL as the 1/1 beat.
*Try to use more interesting shapes of the sliders, make them bend, anything but 1/1 long straight sliders.
*You've skipped mapped some parts, such as 00:24:415 - where there is no difference in the music to justify it.
*00:29:632 - Spinner would fit better than long slider.
*00:34:849 (1,1,1) - This section is just weird, map it out fully.
*Stuff like this is weird to play 00:48:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for example 2,3,4 is equally close to eachother. Separate out 4.
*00:52:241 (1,2,3,4) - Theres alot more to the music here than 1/1 sliders, use it. (for example 1/2 kick and a synth)
*01:10:502 (8,9) - This is hard to read (especially at AR8). Move them around.
*Theres hardly any coherency to the pattern usage, don't feel the need to put squares triangles etc in, use them if there is are appropriate sound(s) in the music that matches.
*There is a SEVERE lack of flow in the map which fits with this song.
[Final words]
Take a look at other maps around your skill level, play through them (nomod) and get a feel for how they play. Also go into the editor on these maps and look at how they are built up with beatsnaps and slider usage, look at how they map sliders and circles to the music so it fits together.
*Add Kiai phases to the map.
*Timing is wrong. Timing should also be on the first beat of the song, which it currently isnt. (1835 timing)
*You map prior to any timing point, ^this fixes that aswell.
*What is the purpose of the inheriting marker here ? 00:05:393 - It does absolutely nothing atm.
*Look over your hitsounding, its nonsensical at the moment (whistles on random stuff with no coherency). Use the hitsounds to match certain sounds in the song.
[Hard]
Won't go into anything specific.
Most of the things I mention here can be applied to several places in the map, I will only mention them once and maybe give an example.
*Circle Size 5/4.5 would fit better tbh.
*You map alot to 1/1, it's boring to play, especially for a hard difficulty. Try listening to other prevalent parts in the music (for example the bass line???) and map to that ASWELL as the 1/1 beat.
*Try to use more interesting shapes of the sliders, make them bend, anything but 1/1 long straight sliders.
*You've skipped mapped some parts, such as 00:24:415 - where there is no difference in the music to justify it.
*00:29:632 - Spinner would fit better than long slider.
*00:34:849 (1,1,1) - This section is just weird, map it out fully.
*Stuff like this is weird to play 00:48:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for example 2,3,4 is equally close to eachother. Separate out 4.
*00:52:241 (1,2,3,4) - Theres alot more to the music here than 1/1 sliders, use it. (for example 1/2 kick and a synth)
*01:10:502 (8,9) - This is hard to read (especially at AR8). Move them around.
*Theres hardly any coherency to the pattern usage, don't feel the need to put squares triangles etc in, use them if there is are appropriate sound(s) in the music that matches.
*There is a SEVERE lack of flow in the map which fits with this song.
[Final words]
Take a look at other maps around your skill level, play through them (nomod) and get a feel for how they play. Also go into the editor on these maps and look at how they are built up with beatsnaps and slider usage, look at how they map sliders and circles to the music so it fits together.