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Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend Much
[General]
Good luck with this! o/
Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
[General]
- HP6.1 ugh, just put it at 6 there's like no remarkable difference in gameplay at all.
- I'd recommend you look for a better bg. An anime girl caring a onigiri doesn't seem fitting to such an intense song... at all lol
- 00:01:695 (1,2,3) - 403|159 for neater-looking triangle
- 00:04:245 (1,2,1) - These are really far-spaced and cause unnecessarily high tension. Tone the spacing down.
- 00:14:745 (3) - 382|244 for equal visual distance. Makes the pattern look better.
- 00:16:095 (1) - You could curve the hook a bit to the left to catch the motion from the previous circle:
- 00:17:295 (4) - Closer to 3 and bit further away from 00:17:445 (1) - for better emphasis put on the next combo.
- 00:25:844 (1,2,3,4) - As a tip: Equal visual distance makes for a better presentation of the map in general, so you could try some things out:
- 00:26:745 (6,7) - Not that great to play because you're stopping flow on two really dominant beats. Sharp jumps would be better here:
Similar: 00:33:195 (2,3) - Could try a star formation here - 00:40:095 (7) - .204|252 would be a better place so vocals get better emphasis.
- 00:41:146 (3) - Push this more to the right.
- 00:41:445 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This could still be worked out better. Try the equal visual distance method.
- 00:44:445 (3) - Soft-end on slider since there's no strong beat on it.
Similar: 01:01:245 (4) - 02:10:845 (1) - 03:44:445 (1) - - 01:00:495 (7) - 395|93. Current flow is not the best since both kicksliders point into each others directions.
- 01:07:845 (1,2,3,4) - This looks and plays a bit bad. 2-3-4 is almost linear flow leaving little emphasis on the 4-beat. Try:
- 01:09:795 (4,5) - Melodic beats are almost equal in intensity, so try to represent that by equal spacing:
- 01:13:545 (6,1) - This anti-jumps feels pretty awkward since it comes so sudden for no apparent reason. Please space it out, here a recommendation:
- 01:15:045 (1,2,3) - 3 is the stronger emphasized beat (Finish), so the jump should be from 2->3
Similar emphasis issues: 02:30:495 (3,4,5) - - 01:19:770 (4,1) - A bit closer together.
- 01:30:345 (4) - Finish
- 01:36:045 (5,2) - Stack intended?
- 01:39:945 (5) - 1/2 slider instead, the gap feels a bit awkward considering the e-guitar is still playing on.
- Missing beats: 01:49:170 - 02:05:670 - 02:19:170 - 02:50:370 - 03:52:170 - 03:52:770 - 04:03:570 - 04:20:070 - 04:22:770 - 04:29:670 - 04:43:170 -
- 01:59:295 (3,4) - NC on 3 would be recommended here to read the 1/4 better as you chose smaller spacing before 01:58:845 (1,2) -
- 02:03:645 (1) - Neither follows vocals or drums well, so i'd rearrange the rhythm pattern here. Probably vocals will be the better decision for you.
- 02:05:145 (3,4) - Stack these instead of 4-5 for the violin.
- 02:06:045 (1,2,3) - I see the intention behind this spacing, but it's visually unappealing. You're better off using the same DS here.
- 02:35:670 - Feeös overmapped.
- 02:44:295 (6) - 128|290, angle is really sharp right now.
- 03:06:045 (1) - Don't make this a repeat slider, but set a circle at its current tail instead. There's a clear finisher on it.
- 03:12:045 (1) - Confused at least me at the start, why don't you stream this out with a bit lowert DS?
- 03:12:645 (5,6) - This causes really high tension at the start of the upcoming streaming season already, which is kind of a mood killer. I really recommend you starting of with a regular stream instead.
- 03:13:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Equal visual distance for better aesthetics would be great here:
- 03:14:745 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I would tone the spacing down a bit, this segment is a bit hard to catch due to complex rhythms.
Highly recommend to swap positions of 03:15:945 (5) - and 03:16:095 (6,7,8) - for better play. - 03:38:445 - Gap after this doesn't feel right, why are you leaving the drum beats out here when you mapped them in the previous combo, it's inconsistent
- 03:44:145 (2,1) - meh overlap :/
- 03:54:045 (1,2) - Two kicksliders here would make for a better build-up.
- 03:56:445 (1,2,3) - Meh pattern. Try to make an actual cross here already.
- 04:07:095 (1) - Nope this doesn't look really nice lol, Try to avoid that spin.
- 04:15:345 (4,5) - Kicksliders would be neat here as there are still drumbeats on the blue ticks
- 04:59:895 (5) - This isn't really 1/6 beats anymore
- 05:12:045 (1) - Needs to be flashier.
Good luck with this! o/