Red Night
00:15:045 (1,2,3) - reduce this spacing to be more like the section it is in
00:24:645 (1,2,3) - this flow isn't so ideal because 00:24:945 (3) flows in the exact opposite direction as where you were heading, and it is in a curved semi-circle motion, shift the circle to be something like:
00:24:645 (1,4) - not stacked
00:29:445 (1,2,3) - ?.? odd spacing
00:44:745 (4) - have it more to the right of the slider or directly in line with its shape
00:51:045 (1) - this section sounds like it slows down the pace slightly, could use a slowdown as well in sv
01:03:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - the way 01:03:195 (2,3,4) is directed, or is positioned, these patterns don't really match, this part looks random
01:06:495 (6,1,2) - why the decrease in spacing
01:36:645 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - honestly, this part doesn't sound like a place to keep repeating the same pattern....you could use sliders of the same shape, but they shouldn't keep facing the exact same way...
01:57:045 (3) - please blanket
02:24:045 (1,2,3,1,2) - I don't really see this spacing and repeating pattern working out well here
04:05:145 - 04:11:895 - rhythm/pattern feels unnatural
04:47:895 (1,2,3,4,1) - the basis of this spacing?
Spacing is weird, that affects the patterns too. Also do not really know why you use certain patterns like the repeating left right sections, or why triplets are spaced in a certain and facing some direction and how it relates to what comes before and after it. I think this map could still work on polishing things up.
Good Luck
00:15:045 (1,2,3) - reduce this spacing to be more like the section it is in
00:24:645 (1,2,3) - this flow isn't so ideal because 00:24:945 (3) flows in the exact opposite direction as where you were heading, and it is in a curved semi-circle motion, shift the circle to be something like:
00:24:645 (1,4) - not stacked
00:29:445 (1,2,3) - ?.? odd spacing
00:44:745 (4) - have it more to the right of the slider or directly in line with its shape
00:51:045 (1) - this section sounds like it slows down the pace slightly, could use a slowdown as well in sv
01:03:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - the way 01:03:195 (2,3,4) is directed, or is positioned, these patterns don't really match, this part looks random
01:06:495 (6,1,2) - why the decrease in spacing
01:36:645 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - honestly, this part doesn't sound like a place to keep repeating the same pattern....you could use sliders of the same shape, but they shouldn't keep facing the exact same way...
01:57:045 (3) - please blanket
02:24:045 (1,2,3,1,2) - I don't really see this spacing and repeating pattern working out well here
04:05:145 - 04:11:895 - rhythm/pattern feels unnatural
04:47:895 (1,2,3,4,1) - the basis of this spacing?
Spacing is weird, that affects the patterns too. Also do not really know why you use certain patterns like the repeating left right sections, or why triplets are spaced in a certain and facing some direction and how it relates to what comes before and after it. I think this map could still work on polishing things up.
Good Luck