Kami-senpai wrote:M4M pwease! I'm kinda new at modding so if anything I say is vague or whatever, I apologize in advance.
Here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/366026
00:37:395 (4) - Note here seems a bit unnecessary when listening to the music. Probably better to be removed, then moving the slider a bit farther away. oh, nice catch, fixed
00:42:345 (8) - Very odd placement of circle. Was unpredictable when I played for the first time. fixed
00:52:395 (2,3) - These circles are a little superfluous. The song only has one note, both for vocals and instrumental, so maybe a slider would work better here. nope, i hear 2 circles
00:57:195 (3,3) - Pattern is also kind of weird. I might just be
OCD as crapa neat freak, but I feel that these should be equally spaced as a triangle. i like this pattern tho D:
01:08:145 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The back and forth pattern seems kind of weird with a triple stream in the middle. stacked
01:17:295 (4) - Again, might be better with consistent distance snap 4<-5 snaping emphasised, no fixed
01:24:495 (2) - Might be better with a small slider that ends where the spinner begins right now. The vocal note starts right on the spinner, so the circle right before it seems out of place. em, no?
01:30:570 (5,1,2,3) - Mini streams don't go along with music here. i hear it pretty good dood
02:01:095 (4,5,1) - Might be better with replacing these with another short slider and then the new combo circle at the end. no need to imo
02:01:545 (2) - Should be an upbeat circle here to go along with the music. i think not
02:51:045 (1,2) - These sliders also are a bit out of place as they don't go along with music or instrumental. i hear it !
03:20:445 (1) - Feels as if this slider should be two separate circles instead of one slider. if i'll do, it'll be really awful to play
05:00:195 (2,3,4) - The music here is a long note, so either a long slider or just multiple jump circles would work better here. prefer current pattern
05:10:920 (1) - Maybe make spinner a little shorter so you can add one more circle in right before end slider to reflect ending cadence (the BA in the BA DUMMMM) no need to xD and spinner end on red sounds weird buddy
Very good map! The song was great and the style of your map matches it well. However, one suggestion that I would make would be to map a little more closely to the music. It seems that there a lot of extra circles and sliders that are there just to increase difficulty. Also, many jumps are very unpredictable and overlapped (which might not be a bad thing since it's an extra map). The shapes of sliders and stream patterns were fine with me and the kiai times seemed on point. Overall, this is a great map and although I'm still a little ways off from being able to fully play it, I would definitely love to see the finished product. Thanks for mod~~ I'll mod tomorrow. :3