And Then Were There None? Do you mean "And Then There Were None?"
- 00:19:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suddenly super fast stream. I like this to be short slider with some reverse. http://puu.sh/lkPUt/852679aa74.jpg
- 01:05:983 (2,3) - Unintended overlap
- 01:16:377 (4) - I like having emphasis on end of this slider, so two circles will be nice. One on (01:16:377) and other one on (01:16:613)
- 01:19:684 (1) - You can also stack this under 01:19:447 (4) - for easier play.
- 01:39:290 (6) - Move the slider for easier reading http://puu.sh/lkQg3/4b9881529f.jpg
- 04:34:004 (6) - ^
- 02:05:453 (3) - This shape can be more polished. looks bit. Looks bit uneven. You did better one here: 02:34:642 (1) -
- 02:09:021 (2) - Emphasis on end of slider. Shorten slider and put a circle at end of slider. http://puu.sh/lkQrj/a73c8f1e26.jpg
- 02:09:994 (2) - Make this into "filler" slider http://puu.sh/lkQwc/6a8ef3ba3c.jpg
- 02:10:967 (3) - ^ filler slider http://puu.sh/lkQxQ/14ff7be8f1.jpg
- 02:11:940 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/lkQz1/9cc0f8b5f6.jpg
- 02:23:940 (1,2) - rui's '?" slider™ http://puu.sh/lkQEG/77a5de6abd.jpg
- 02:28:804 (1) - stack OR half-stack on 02:29:129 (3) -
- 02:29:777 (1,2,3) - Remove slider. / AND / put circle on (02:29:777), another circle at (02:29:940) and put 02:29:777 (5) - on 02:30:102 (7) - just like ^
So... 02:28:804 (1,2,3) - and 02:29:777 (5,6,7) - is same http://puu.sh/lkQPu/0f93f74821.jpg. (better for consistency) - 03:03:930 (4) - Personally I would put this at (x:358, y:80), but rui-chan's version is also good
- 03:08:729 (5,1) - You should stack this same as 03:06:839 (5,1) - because I think stacking is better solution and it's more consistent if you follow the previous one.
- 03:35:658 (1,2,3,4) - Only 03:35:658 (1) - sounds different from 03:35:894 (2,3,4) - because it has piano.
Slider 1 & 2: http://puu.sh/lkR6q/f59e0879b9.jpg
Slider 3 & 4: http://puu.sh/lkR94/8d08017d93.jpg - 03:52:666 (1) - I would put emphasis on end of slider. Probably with circle.
- 03:56:445 (1,2,3) - Same rhythm so you should so similar as 03:52:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
- 04:18:177 (3) - Emphasis on end of slider? http://puu.sh/lkRhp/21d7e89ab0.jpg
- 04:25:736 (3) - Missing emphasis but you do have one right next rhythm 04:27:626 (3,4) -
- 04:51:012 (1) - Re-position slider? http://puu.sh/lkRr0/3cc607ad8c.jpg