Verdisphena wrote:

No ;<

Charles445 wrote:

I really liked the first one - the one with just the character.

Odaril wrote:

Sorry for the late mod, I've had a lot of problems lately.

Please remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.

General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankable. You have to scale it down to 256kbps at most. Scaled down to 256kbps
Moreover, storyboard pictures must be below 800x600px. This concerns: Resized all. ;-;
- Oversharpened.png
- Blured.png
- Blackandwhite.png
- WhiteBEAT.png (edit: forgot .png)
I'd recommend you to add a approachcircle.png Added

approach circle

[attachment=0:17f09]approachcircle.png[/attachment:17f09]

Storyboard:
00:16:514 - For a reason I don't understand, the Storyboard load goes above 10 right before this point. It might go down when you scale the pictures down, though. It still happens. Oh well...

Normal (Blow):
This feels more like a Easy to me. If you set the circle size to 1 (that is, the biggest) it will be a decent Easy. Then it's an easy.
01:14:669 (1) - I think it would be better moved 18 grids lvl 3 down - it would be symmetrical to (3) and wouldn't hidden by the spinner. Fixed.

Hard (Out):
This whole diff feels bland at times in my humble opinion: too many times there are gaps between the notes. The low spacing makes it slow, too, which reinforces the bland feeling. Moreover, the beginning is the same pattern that repeats 6 times: here again, it reinforces the bland feeling. You should try to fill in the blanks between notes, based on the music.
00:16:514 (1) - This crescendo is great <3
00:26:541 - This is an example of a gap that should have had notes in it. Added notes.
00:31:889 - ^ No music, no notes.
00:53:279 - here again - add a spinner here that ends at 00:53:947 - ? Or a slider Added
01:25:365 - same ? a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:26:033 - ? Or a slider Added

Insane (Louder):
The blandness strikes again )= though a lot less than on Hard
00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the crescendo with it are really good <3
00:26:541 - add circles somehow here ? fixed
00:29:549 (1) - This note is too high and touches the HP bar, it looks bad to mefixed
00:34:730 (4) - maybe... make a slider that starts here and leads to the next note ? Won't fit.
00:40:077 (4) - ^ Won't fit.
01:04:977 (1) - the low slider speed and the low distance snapping starting here make this whole part confusingly overlapping, try to at least space the notes a bit more ? no.

This map is not bad ! it can be made pretty good relatively easily. Keep working on it ! Fix the unrankable stuff and I will give it a star (not the icon).

noneed wrote:

Hi!


Blow:
✓ CS one more to large?
✓ 01:14:669 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j would look better imo

Out:
✓ 00:11:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+j
✓ 00:37:069 (6) - dat jump ;_;
✓ 01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j

Louder:
X 00:37:905 (1) - delete that and make a spinner from 00:37:236 to 00:37:905
✓ 01:15:672 - ctrl+h and ctr+j

yeah that's it
Starrr!!!

Disoy wrote:

[Blow]
X 00:33:560 (1) - remove this circle?
X 00:38:908 (1) - ^
X 00:51:274 (1) - these slider change spinner?
X 01:23:359 (1) - ^

[Out]
✔ CS+1
✔ 00:27:042 (1) - add a hitclap?
✔ 00:27:209 (2) - add a hitfinish?
X 00:29:549 (1) - these slider is long..
X 00:35:231 (5) - add a note?
X 00:38:907 (4) - remove this circle?
X 00:49:603 (7) - add a note?
✔ 01:14:001 (1) - add a new combo?

[Louder]
X 00:19:857 (11) - add a note and spinner move to 00:20:024?
✔ 00:26:708 (3) - add a note?
X 00:33:560 (3) - remove this circle?
X 00:33:894 (4) - add a note?
X 00:38:908 (4) - remove this circle?

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
mp3@320kbps, compress it to 128~192

[Louder]
✔ 0:31:220 (6,7) (6) left 1 grid, (7) left 2 grid?
✔ 1:02:303 (3,4,5) left 1 grid
✔ 1:34:723 (5) right 1 grid
nice diff~

[Out]
✔ 0:34:228 (1,2,3,4) this looks weird, (4) right down 1 grid?
removed bookmarks 0:35:398 *this is not important, but why there's so many bookmark 0.0
✔ 0:48:266 (1~6) uneven spacing, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39392 ?
✔ 1:20:351 (1~6) ^
✔ 1:30:879 (1~6) ^

[Blow]
no problem

star~

ErufenRito wrote:

Sighs, i thought i posted my mod? I guess i never did, Anyways, here's a quick remod

First thoughts: The combo numbers could be bigger, they are almost invisible in the yellow combo colour. But this is just me.

Louder:

I used a slider in this point. 01:11:661 - Consider adding a circle here

Out:

✔ 00:43:586 (1,2,3) - Im really against positioning them at the center. The combo hits of 00:42:250 (3,4) and the spinner's hits are still visible, making them hard to see, besides... They are yellow, and the combo numbers are so small, and the spacing is so small, making them even harder to see. So ill suggest to move them away from the center
x 01:11:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hard to see
Anyways, as a general recommendation for your maps in the future, is to not use such small spacing, i personally thinks that it makes it harder cause its harder to see, and it doesn't look so good anyways.

Blow:

Found nothing wrong

galvenize wrote:

Here it is =).

Awesome song btw.

Leorda wrote:

galvenize's Another
00:24:201 (5,1) - These jumps are surprising. Not really.
00:44:923 (7,8) - ^
00:46:427 (4) - New combo, since it's jumps, mkay.
00:57:457 (4,5) - These jumps are surprising[/color] Not really.
01:04:141 (2) - This 0,5x BPM slider are sudden!. Fits the song imo.
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The pattern are feels random for me, maybe? :/
01:11:327 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These pattern are messy Got to agree with you on this one, remapped.

Durarara remix are awesome <3

Leorda wrote:

Yo

General
✔1) Your MP3 Bit Rate is 320kbps, and it's unrankable. Please re-encode it to 128kbps or 192kbps
✔ 2) Remove "Techno" and "anime", since that words it's in the Genre when BAT ranked this map
Too much work.3) BPM : 179,50?
Roar out louder.4) The hitsound volume is too loud, please reduce it, otherwise, player's ear will be hurt

Easy
00:27:209 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try something neat pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42485
✔ 01:15:338 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid up to make diamond pattern?

Hard
00:00:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ugh, you copy paste this pattern too much >.<
✔ 00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:08:988 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
01:12:998 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These pattern are strange for me, maybe?
✔ 01:14:001 (1) - Remove new combo?

Insane
✔ 00:22:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 00:48:767 (1) - ^
✔ 00:53:279 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
✔ 00:59:462 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:03:974 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You should remap this, because when I test this, it's kinda overlapping. Please make it spread it out OR set the BPM Multiplier to 0.75x
✔ 01:20:853 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:25:365 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music
✔ 01:31:548 (1) - Remove new combo?
✔ 01:36:060 (1) - Change the 1/4 repeating slider to 1/8 repeating slider, because it's according the music


Durarara remix are awesome <3

Mustaash wrote:

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *W*
sorry for the 3 weeks late

[General]

1. Offset: 470ms

[galvenize's]

✔ 00:00:472 - Down the volume 3 ticks
✔ 00:10:498 (8) - Whistle? *w*
✔ 00:10:832 - Same as 00:00:472
✔ 00:10:832 (9) - At the finish of slider, finish? *w*
✔ 00:25:037 (1) - Remove new combo
✔ 00:28:713 (1) - ^
✔ 00:38:573 (1) - ^
✔ 00:58:794 (1) - ^
✔ 01:26:367 (x) - Add a note
✔ 01:26:451 (x) - ^
✔ 01:26:534 (1) - Remove New Combo

Fine , Good Diff

[Insane]

Why 1/8 ; That unrankable. What 'chu talkin' 'bout, Willis?

✔ 01:08:152 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:16:842 (7) - Made this slider like : http://puu.sh/AQS
✔ 01:25:365 (3) - make longer 1 1/8 tick.
✔ 01:36:060 (3) - ^

Good Work

[Hard]
It isn't like a Hard, rename to [Normal+]?
or make harder the start of the song, because the kiai is a lot hardest compaired to the start.

Already , Nice diff.

[Easy]

Sorry i'm really bad to modding Easys xD ( because i'm bad on easy mapping )

00:41:582 (1) - Remove new combo

Well

+STAR *0*

Antu Villegas wrote:

Hi

General:

The HQ audio hasn't the same offset than the original. O: I'll fix this.

I liked the skin

Easy:

✔ 01:14:669 (1): Remove New combo. ✔

Hard:

✔ 00:58:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Correct the spacing, it can be confusing and it isn't too much work to fix it
✔ 01:20:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6): ^

• Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  So, Source: DuRaRaRa!!
  
  Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...)
  
  Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
  
  Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.

• 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
  00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
  00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
  00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
  01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^

• 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
  01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?

• 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
  01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
  01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)

• 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Source shouldn't be the album title...(viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  So, Source: DuRaRaRa!! But the dong itsn't from Durarara, 'tis a remix. Oh well...
  
  Tags: drrr! remix Cyclick(you missed a k) C78 (Release during C78?...) The album is called Cyclic. And I don't think the comiket matters.
  
  Though the map needs countdown, a 2s is enough imo.
  
  Adjust normal-hitclap if you could...The sound comes from right sound channel is much weaker than left.

Fixed. it's a mono track now.

[Easy]

• ✔ 00:32:557 (1,1,1,1) - huh, I prefer using only one combo here, also you'd better have a new combo at 00:34:228 (2)
  ✔ 00:37:905 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^ also 00:40:913 (3) - new combo instead of 00:41:582 (1)? o.o
  ✔ 00:57:289 (1) - Remove new combo
  ✔ 00:58:626 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:59:963 (1)
  ✔ 01:18:679 (1,2,3) - ^
  ✔ 01:29:374 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]

✔ AR+1~2 to reduce stacking issues like 01:11:996 (9,10,1) ... Also higher AR would make stream looks nicer.

• 00:47:096 (6) - Finish end instead of slience?
  ✔ 01:11:996 (9,10,1) - kinda hard to read, change the ending position?

[Insane]

• 00:19:857 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
  ✔ 01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - No hitsounds? (Copy from second kiai?)
  ✔ 01:11:661 (T) - add a note here? (Just follow vocal here...? I don't know why you left a blank)

[galvenize's Another]

• ✔ 00:30:217 (1) - Remove new combo?

Nice~

lol, SB is pretty nice!~Take my star~