Hi ~
General;
- Meh, uhhm, border of the slider would look better with black, add this down the last combo color
http://www.mediafire.com/?adg43b11vypm442
Skin;
- Spinner-BG and spinner approach circle ... red ... ?? Why ?? I don't see any red on the BG, doesn't fit imo
- Your hitcircle is so dark, that it makes the colors of the circle on the game all ... dark when in the BG they are very bright
- Probably a good idea to add a spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin
Blow;
- 01:04:977 >> remove whistle, add finish
- 01:08:152 (1,3) >> add whistle
- 01:10:324 >> add finish
- You can probably create a pattern with claps
- 1st kiai time ends here: 01:04:643
- 2nd kiai time ends here: 01:36:728
Out;
- I strongly believe those custom hitsounds don't fit at all, for me they sound horrible :<
- Better get a hitsound expert for this orz
- Wooops ~ Check kiai time, make it start and end on a note :<
Louder;
- Still get someone to check your hitsounds
- Uhmm, well paced notes on the timeline :>
- Curve some sliders better
- 00:26:541 >> unrankable spinner, auto must be able to do a bonus of 2000
* Star !! :3
General;
- Meh, uhhm, border of the slider would look better with black, add this down the last combo color
SliderBorder : 0,0,0- Your mp3 is of 320, you need a 256 or 128 mp3 or something that is not 320, here, take this one but remember offset might change
http://www.mediafire.com/?adg43b11vypm442
Skin;
- Spinner-BG and spinner approach circle ... red ... ?? Why ?? I don't see any red on the BG, doesn't fit imo
- Your hitcircle is so dark, that it makes the colors of the circle on the game all ... dark when in the BG they are very bright
- Probably a good idea to add a spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin
Blow;
- 01:04:977 >> remove whistle, add finish
- 01:08:152 (1,3) >> add whistle
- 01:10:324 >> add finish
- You can probably create a pattern with claps
- 1st kiai time ends here: 01:04:643
- 2nd kiai time ends here: 01:36:728
Out;
- I strongly believe those custom hitsounds don't fit at all, for me they sound horrible :<
- Better get a hitsound expert for this orz
- Wooops ~ Check kiai time, make it start and end on a note :<
Louder;
- Still get someone to check your hitsounds
- Uhmm, well paced notes on the timeline :>
- Curve some sliders better
- 00:26:541 >> unrankable spinner, auto must be able to do a bonus of 2000
* Star !! :3