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Verdisphena wrote:

No ;<
Seriously, if you don't like it, then at least you could try to give some good explanations on why, or say what would make it look better :I
PS: I now how hard is to get everyone to like your skin and how hard is to make one, I think the spinner is great :3 And if you want me to, I can help you ~
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I really liked the first one - the one with just the character.
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Charles445 wrote:

I really liked the first one - the one with just the character.
Me, too. Damnit.
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well. this picture of Celty should better be used as comboburst, imo

there's no point in making her spin D:
sorry for not explaining in my first post
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The picture in the spinner sucks.
Take:




And...
Nice song and sb
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Maybe use this ??
http://www.mediafire.com/?l975jm3ts85rat8
There are two spinner circles for you to choose also use your spinner BG for this
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Why the kodosu? ._.
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Because you put in your effort.
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Sorry for the late mod, I've had a lot of problems lately.

Please remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.

General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankable. You have to scale it down to 256kbps at most.
Moreover, storyboard pictures must be below 800x600px. This concerns:
- Oversharpened.png
- Blured.png
- Blackandwhite.png
- WhiteBEAT.png
(edit: forgot .png)
I'd recommend you to add a approachcircle.png


Storyboard:
00:16:514 - For a reason I don't understand, the Storyboard load goes above 10 right before this point. It might go down when you scale the pictures down, though.

Normal (Blow):
This feels more like a Easy to me. If you set the circle size to 1 (that is, the biggest) it will be a decent Easy.
01:14:669 (1) - I think it would be better moved 18 grids lvl 3 down - it would be symmetrical to (3) and wouldn't hidden by the spinner.

Hard (Out):
This whole diff feels bland at times in my humble opinion: too many times there are gaps between the notes. The low spacing makes it slow, too, which reinforces the bland feeling. Moreover, the beginning is the same pattern that repeats 6 times: here again, it reinforces the bland feeling. You should try to fill in the blanks between notes, based on the music.
00:16:514 (1) - This crescendo is great <3
00:26:541 - This is an example of a gap that should have had notes in it.
00:31:889 - ^
00:53:279 - here again - add a spinner here that ends at 00:53:947 - ? Or a slider
01:25:365 - same ? a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:26:033 - ? Or a slider

Insane (Louder):
The blandness strikes again )= though a lot less than on Hard
00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the crescendo with it are really good <3
00:26:541 - add circles somehow here ?
00:29:549 (1) - This note is too high and touches the HP bar, it looks bad to me
00:34:730 (4) - maybe... make a slider that starts here and leads to the next note ?
00:40:077 (4) - ^
01:04:977 (1) - the low slider speed and the low distance snapping starting here make this whole part confusingly overlapping, try to at least space the notes a bit more ?

This map is not bad ! it can be made pretty good relatively easily. Keep working on it ! Fix the unrankable stuff and I will give it a star (not the icon).
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Sorry for being late as hell, i couldn't mod these weeks xD but hey! Here i am o/
Queue response: Normal Mod

Info
Suggstions! You can ignore these.
Problems! You should take a look at these.
Errors! Please fix those.

<General & Timingl>
These timing sections have the same volume and BPM Multiplier (1x) in Blow and Out. Remove one of them?

<Blow>
• Nothing bothered me besides sliders like 00:51:274 (1). I would break them in 2 or something like that but you don't need to worry about it xD it's fine as is.

<Out>
00:23:701 (1) - Remove new combo? If 00:24:369 (1) - weren't so close i wouldn't point it out but that may confuse some players.
00:38:239 (2,4) - Maybe whistles here?

<Loud>
00:38:239 (2,4) - Refer to Out
00:53:279 (1) - Remove this combo? #1
00:53:948 (2) - A Finish sound's nice here #2
From 00:54:282 (1) - to 00:57:791 (6) - Did you forgot adding hitsounds here? It's the only time that this pattern have no sounds. If you did on purpose, sorry xD!
01:00:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:03:974 (1,1) - ^ Check #1 & #2 ^
01:11:661 (x) -I'm not sure about this, but i think a note would fit here.
01:25:365 (1,2) - Here comes that same section again (#1 & #2).
01:36:060 (1,2) - ^ And here too.

Final comment: It's a balanced mapset, some patterns could be flipped or moved but that's fine with me. Oh, and i loved your sb :O
Star!
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Odaril wrote:

Sorry for the late mod, I've had a lot of problems lately.

Please remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.

General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankable. You have to scale it down to 256kbps at most. Scaled down to 256kbps
Moreover, storyboard pictures must be below 800x600px. This concerns: Resized all. ;-;
- Oversharpened.png
- Blured.png
- Blackandwhite.png
- WhiteBEAT.png
(edit: forgot .png)
I'd recommend you to add a approachcircle.png Added
[attachment=0:17f09]approachcircle.png[/attachment:17f09]


Storyboard:
00:16:514 - For a reason I don't understand, the Storyboard load goes above 10 right before this point. It might go down when you scale the pictures down, though. It still happens. Oh well...

Normal (Blow):
This feels more like a Easy to me. If you set the circle size to 1 (that is, the biggest) it will be a decent Easy. Then it's an easy.
01:14:669 (1) - I think it would be better moved 18 grids lvl 3 down - it would be symmetrical to (3) and wouldn't hidden by the spinner. Fixed.

Hard (Out):
This whole diff feels bland at times in my humble opinion: too many times there are gaps between the notes. The low spacing makes it slow, too, which reinforces the bland feeling. Moreover, the beginning is the same pattern that repeats 6 times: here again, it reinforces the bland feeling. You should try to fill in the blanks between notes, based on the music.
00:16:514 (1) - This crescendo is great <3
00:26:541 - This is an example of a gap that should have had notes in it. Added notes.
00:31:889 - ^ No music, no notes.
00:53:279 - here again - add a spinner here that ends at 00:53:947 - ? Or a slider Added
01:25:365 - same ? a spinner that starts here and ends at 01:26:033 - ? Or a slider Added

Insane (Louder):
The blandness strikes again )= though a lot less than on Hard
00:16:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This stream and the crescendo with it are really good <3
00:26:541 - add circles somehow here ? fixed
00:29:549 (1) - This note is too high and touches the HP bar, it looks bad to mefixed
00:34:730 (4) - maybe... make a slider that starts here and leads to the next note ? Won't fit.
00:40:077 (4) - ^ Won't fit.
01:04:977 (1) - the low slider speed and the low distance snapping starting here make this whole part confusingly overlapping, try to at least space the notes a bit more ? no.

This map is not bad ! it can be made pretty good relatively easily. Keep working on it ! Fix the unrankable stuff and I will give it a star (not the icon).
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Hi!


Blow:
CS one more to large?
01:14:669 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j would look better imo

Out:
00:11:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+j
00:37:069 (6) - dat jump ;_;
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j

Louder:
00:37:905 (1) - delete that and make a spinner from 00:37:236 to 00:37:905
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2) -
ctrl+h and ctr+j

yeah that's it
Starrr!!!
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noneed wrote:

Hi!


Blow:
CS one more to large?
01:14:669 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j would look better imo

Out:
00:11:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+j
00:37:069 (6) - dat jump ;_;
01:15:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ctrl+h and ctrl+j

Louder:
X 00:37:905 (1) - delete that and make a spinner from 00:37:236 to 00:37:905
01:15:672 - ctrl+h and ctr+j

yeah that's it
Starrr!!!
Thanks for the mod!
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[Blow]
00:33:560 (1) - remove this circle?
00:38:908 (1) - ^
00:51:274 (1) - these slider change spinner?
01:23:359 (1) - ^

[Out]
CS+1
00:27:042 (1) - add a hitclap?
00:27:209 (2) - add a hitfinish?
00:29:549 (1) - these slider is long..
00:35:231 (5) - add a note?
00:38:907 (4) - remove this circle?
00:49:603 (7) - add a note?
01:14:001 (1) - add a new combo?

[Louder]
00:19:857 (11) - add a note and spinner move to 00:20:024?
00:26:708 (3) - add a note?
00:33:560 (3) - remove this circle?
00:33:894 (4) - add a note?
00:38:908 (4) - remove this circle?
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Disoy wrote:

[Blow]
X 00:33:560 (1) - remove this circle?
X 00:38:908 (1) - ^
X 00:51:274 (1) - these slider change spinner?
X 01:23:359 (1) - ^

[Out]
CS+1
00:27:042 (1) - add a hitclap?
00:27:209 (2) - add a hitfinish?
X 00:29:549 (1) - these slider is long..
X 00:35:231 (5) - add a note?
X 00:38:907 (4) - remove this circle?
X 00:49:603 (7) - add a note?
01:14:001 (1) - add a new combo?

[Louder]
X 00:19:857 (11) - add a note and spinner move to 00:20:024?
00:26:708 (3) - add a note?
X 00:33:560 (3) - remove this circle?
X 00:33:894 (4) - add a note?
X 00:38:908 (4) - remove this circle?
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One-day only reopening vacation/weekend fuk year.
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Hi! Great song out there! =)

Can I make a guest diff? *_*
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[general]
mp3@320kbps, compress it to 128~192

[Louder]
0:31:220 (6,7) (6) left 1 grid, (7) left 2 grid?
1:02:303 (3,4,5) left 1 grid
1:34:723 (5) right 1 grid
nice diff~

[Out]
0:34:228 (1,2,3,4) this looks weird, (4) right down 1 grid?
0:35:398 *this is not important, but why there's so many bookmark 0.0
0:48:266 (1~6) uneven spacing, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39392 ?
1:20:351 (1~6) ^
1:30:879 (1~6) ^

[Blow]
no problem

star~
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Sighs, i thought i posted my mod? I guess i never did, Anyways, here's a quick remod :(

First thoughts: The combo numbers could be bigger, they are almost invisible in the yellow combo colour. But this is just me.

Louder:

01:11:661 - Consider adding a circle here

Out:

00:43:586 (1,2,3) - Im really against positioning them at the center. The combo hits of 00:42:250 (3,4) and the spinner's hits are still visible, making them hard to see, besides... They are yellow, and the combo numbers are so small, and the spacing is so small, making them even harder to see. So ill suggest to move them away from the center
01:11:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Hard to see :(
Anyways, as a general recommendation for your maps in the future, is to not use such small spacing, i personally thinks that it makes it harder cause its harder to see, and it doesn't look so good anyways.

Blow:

Found nothing wrong

Also, i could see that in your 3 difficulties you are using some random new combos, you should just avoid them
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