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3R2 and Dj Mashiro - Sweetness Overload!!!

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sammish
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Syrus
hey o/

General


  1. Offset looks a bit too early for me, try changing it to somewhere between 3400 -3405

Herbayse


  1. 00:06:968 (1,2) - Face these two towards each other
  2. 00:07:265 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is really awkward to read - try moving the triples or the sliders
  3. 00:11:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  4. 00:21:819 (4,5) - Make these two symmetrical
  5. 00:44:097 (9,1) - Placing of these two notes seem strange since it overlaps with the sliders before
  6. 00:44:097 (9) - Start new combo here instead of 00:44:245 (1)
  7. 00:50:019 (8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't split this stream up
  8. 00:52:989 (6,7,8) - These 1/8 sliders just feel strange to play, they look really messy as well, try changing it to a single repeating slider
  9. 00:54:772 (1,2,3) - ^
  10. 01:10:069 (1,2) -- 01:18:384 (1,2,3) - Try adding some fillers to keep the flow up
  11. 01:28:782 (1,2) - Feels strange to play this, especially with the triple afterwards
  12. 01:38:435 (1,2) - Maybe face these two towards each other?
  13. 01:47:643 (4,5) - make both of these 1/4 sliders - it fit the song better IMO
  14. 02:16:455 (1,2,3,4) -- 02:31:900 (1,2,3,4) - Change it, it's too repetitive especially since it was copied and pasted from the beginning as well. The rhythm is fine though


Insane



  • 00:16:457 (1,2,3,4) - Make these closer to each other, the increase in spacing is too big especially since it is still the intro of the song
    00:19:057 (2,3) - Space these two notes evenly
    00:41:413 (1) - This note seems a little far away, and jumping to it after the kick sliders feels strange, move it a little closer
    00:55:376 (2) - Snap the end of slider
    01:10:676 (3,4) - Move these two notes somewhere else
    01:19:143 (6,7) - Swap these two around? It seems to flow better that way
    01:25:085 (1) - Re do the slider, the curve looks a bit lopsided, also don't end it on a blue tick.
    01:25:382 (2,3,4,5) - Remove 2 and replace with the end of the slider. Change the flow of 3,4 and 5 it is very hard to read and do correctly.
    02:01:256 (1,2) - Space these two evenly
    02:06:084 (1,2) - Switch the positioning of these two to keep the flow from the slider
    02:06:381 (3,4) - ^
    02:06:678 (5,6) - ^
    02:13:511 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too spaced out - and too sudden of a timing change, bring it closer together
    02:31:633 (4) - Repeating slider should be faster
    02:33:218 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too spaced out again.
Underforest
Hello! Just advicing you that I will get your GD this weekend. sorry for delaying Done, I've already sent you in-game PM
Topic Starter
sammish

Syrus wrote:

hey o/

General


  1. Offset looks a bit too early for me, try changing it to somewhere between 3400 -3405
BPMs fixed, offset changed to 3398

Herbayse


Herbayse said he updated accordingly


Insane



  • 00:16:457 (1,2,3,4) - Make these closer to each other, the increase in spacing is too big especially since it is still the intro of the song
    Agreed
    00:19:057 (2,3) - Space these two notes evenly
    Oops
    00:41:413 (1) - This note seems a little far away, and jumping to it after the kick sliders feels strange, move it a little closer
    Ahh, agreed
    00:55:376 (2) - Snap the end of slider
    Oops
    01:10:676 (3,4) - Move these two notes somewhere else
    Agreed
    01:19:143 (6,7) - Swap these two around? It seems to flow better that way
    Agreed
    01:25:085 (1) - Re do the slider, the curve looks a bit lopsided, also don't end it on a blue tick.
    Changed to a triple
    01:25:382 (2,3,4,5) - Remove 2 and replace with the end of the slider. Change the flow of 3,4 and 5 it is very hard to read and do correctly.
    Pattern edited
    02:01:256 (1,2) - Space these two evenly
    Oops
    02:06:084 (1,2) - Switch the positioning of these two to keep the flow from the slider
    02:06:381 (3,4) - ^
    02:06:678 (5,6) - ^
    Didn't really get what you meant, but redid pattern
    02:13:511 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too spaced out - and too sudden of a timing change, bring it closer together
    Agreed
    02:31:633 (4) - Repeating slider should be faster
    Yup
    02:33:218 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too spaced out again.
    I wanted it to be a hard ending... eh, agreed.
Thanks for the mod!
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