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EYEMEDIA - HOLY KNIGHT

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snowsign7
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snowsign7

Satellite wrote:

[General]
  1. Easy AR4 OD3 HP3 - Normal AR5 OD4 HP4 - Hard AR7 HP5 OD6 に合わせたほうがよりいいです
[Normal]
  1. 00:49:361 (3) - slider end に add whistle?
  2. 01:35:039 (4,5) - 音の取り方はこことにてるので同じにしてもいいかもしれません 00:43:942 (4,5) -
  3. 01:58:071 - 以前のmodにも書きましたが add note 申し訳ないです、見落としてました :o
  4. 01:58:845 - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:426 (4) - 前後を見てもここはds 1.3でいいと思います
  2. 00:33:297 (1) - 新しいncは不要だと思います
  3. 00:33:684 (3,1) - ジャンプが入るような音でもないと思います
  4. 00:46:845 (3) - add whistle & できればスタックさせないパターンのほうがいいです
  5. 00:48:974 (3) - hitsoundつけ忘れ？
  6. 00:53:039 (2,3,4) - 純粋にこっちの音取りのほうが自然だと思います
  7. 00:56:329 (3) - 1/2 repeatのほうがいいかも？
  8. 01:09:297 (4,1) - ちょっと広すぎるかも、01:09:491 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ここも重なってると見づらいから違ったパターンのほうがいいと思います、配置案思い浮かばなければ次のチェックで提案します
  9. 01:30:974 (1) - slider endは 01:31:555 - ここのほうがフィットします
  10. 01:38:910 (1) - headにwhistle? 01:39:297 (2) - add whistle?
  11. 01:39:297 (2,3) - ちょっとジャンプの入れ方が不自然です
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:007 (1,2) - 使い方としては、ここに似せたほうがいいです 00:02:910 (1,2) -
  2. 00:08:523 (4) - 重ね方はここに似せたほうがいいかもしれません 00:05:426 (4) - たとえばこんな感じ
    img
  3. 00:09:878 (4,5,6,7) - この重なりは好ましくないです。あと音取り 00:09:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - も少し奇妙なので手前の指摘とあわせて調整してみるのもいいかもしれません。
  4. 00:10:845 (2,4) - ここのwhistleは耳障りなので消したほうがいいかもしれません
  5. 00:12:974 (4,5) - insaneでこの配置の仕方はHardとのdiff spreadが問題になってきます。00:13:361 (5) - これを ctrl+gすればまだ許容範囲内になります
  6. 00:19:071 (4,5) - insaneではストリームの途中にobjectを離すのは今回の場合だと避けたほうがいいです
  7. 00:26:136 (1,2,3) - dsが不自然
  8. 00:27:491 (6,7,1) - 全てにwhistle? sliderはheadへ
  9. 00:50:523 (3,4) - もう少し近いほうがいいです。たとえばこんな感じ
    img
  10. 01:10:652 (1) - ncいらないかも
  11. 01:31:749 (4) - headとendにwhistle?
  12. 01:34:265 (2,3) - 音が小さいのに対してジャンプが不自然です
  13. 01:35:039 (4,5,6,7,8) - ちょっと音の広い杉だと思います。気合タイムならまだわかりますがこの静かなパートにはあいません。
  14. 01:39:297 - 意図的に距離を開けて配置していると思いますがここの音を抜くのは不自然です。 add noteして前後の配置パターンを整えたほうがいいです
  15. 01:40:458 (1,2) - 00:12:974 (4,5) - と同様で距離が離れすぎです。
  16. 01:41:716 (7) - 音は存在しますが、insaneという難易度ではここを remove noteして3+3の連打パターンにしたほうが曲調にもあいますし、diff spread的にもバランスがよくなります
  17. 01:52:071 (5) - 重ね方が変わるのでここには add Ncしたほうがいいです
  18. 01:55:168 - ここから5連打全てに whistleをいれてもいいかもnice!すごくいいと思ったのでHoly Warにも入れときます！
  19. 02:01:265 (4,5) - 前回と同様
Holy Warについてはまた次で
all fixです！！
何度も見てもらう羽目になってしまい申し訳ない気持ちでいっぱいです :(
それと同じくらい感謝の気持ちでいっぱいです！
ありがとうございます！！ :)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
[Easy]
  1. 01:39:878 (2) - add whistle
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:974 (6) - 終点にadd whistle
  2. 00:29:232 (1) - 現状 00:27:684 (3) - これに重なってるからこんな形にしてもいいかも
    img
  3. 00:29:813 (2) - 頭にadd whistle
  4. 00:47:039 (5) - 頭の sampleset : N はミス？おそらくwhistleのみ？
  5. 00:56:329 (5) - 1/2slider+circleパターンにしたほうがいいかも、diff spread的にも
  6. 01:10:071 - 01:10:845 - add note
  7. 01:34:071 (3,4) - missing ds
  8. 01:44:136 (5) - 最後の気合なのでもう少し複雑化してもいいかも
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:781 (4) - add Ncかな
  2. 00:50:329 (2,3,4) - stack leniencyの影響でスタックされてるのって左上に重なるので綺麗なblanketになりません詳しくは画像1、なのでこんな感じにしてあげるといいかもしれません画像2
    img1
    img2
  3. 00:56:329 (3) - Hardだからもう少し音増やしてもいいかも
  4. 01:44:329 (3) - ３連打へ
  5. 02:03:297 (5,6) - できるならスタックさせないパターンのほうがいいです
[Insane]
  1. 00:49:749 (2,4) - ここにwhistleを入れるとリズムが読みやすくなります
  2. 01:41:426 (4,7) - add whistle?
  3. 02:00:974 (1) - Ncいらないと思います
[Holy War]
  1. 00:16:458 (1) - Ncいらないと思います
  2. 00:18:007 (1) - ^
  3. 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音が４個ずつ分かれてるので一度見直してみてください。たとえば、00:20:329 (5) - ここにNcが入ります。Nc２個張るので見比べてみてください
    元々の形 : 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

    変更後形 : 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
  4. 00:28:845 (5,6,1,2) - Extra難易度だとしても2+2 patternでこれは飛びすぎだと思います
  5. 00:34:652 (3,1) - この3/4の使い方は読めないのでできれば違う形にしてください、あとNc不要です
  6. 00:47:039 (4,1) - こっちはokです、あとNc不要です
  7. 00:49:749 (5,7) - ここにwhistleを入れるとリズムが読みやすくなります
  8. 00:53:039 (2) - これは1/4sliderより circleのほうがよりいいです
  9. 01:06:007 (1) - Nc不要だと思います
  10. 01:11:426 (5) - Ncいれてもいいかも、パターン的に、ちなみにここは、00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -こことNcパターンあわせるようにしてください
  11. 01:38:426 (1) - Nc不要です
  12. 01:40:845 (5,7) - ここにwhistleを入れるとリズムが読みやすくなります
  13. 01:46:652 (5) - add Nc
  14. 01:49:749 (4) - 01:52:071 (5) - ^
  15. 01:56:232 (1) - remove Nc
  16. 02:04:071 (5,6,7,8) - ds崩してるのは意図的？
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7

Satellite wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:39:878 (2) - add whistle
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:974 (6) - 終点にadd whistle
  2. 00:29:232 (1) - 現状 00:27:684 (3) - これに重なってるからこんな形にしてもいいかも
    img
  3. 00:29:813 (2) - 頭にadd whistle
  4. 00:47:039 (5) - 頭の sampleset : N はミス？おそらくwhistleのみ？
  5. 00:56:329 (5) - 1/2slider+circleパターンにしたほうがいいかも、diff spread的にも
  6. 01:10:071 - 01:10:845 - add note
  7. 01:34:071 (3,4) - missing ds
  8. 01:44:136 (5) - 最後の気合なのでもう少し複雑化してもいいかも
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:781 (4) - add Ncかな
  2. 00:50:329 (2,3,4) - stack leniencyの影響でスタックされてるのって左上に重なるので綺麗なblanketになりません詳しくは画像1、なのでこんな感じにしてあげるといいかもしれません画像2
    img1
    img2
  3. 00:56:329 (3) - Hardだからもう少し音増やしてもいいかも
  4. 01:44:329 (3) - ３連打へ
  5. 02:03:297 (5,6) - できるならスタックさせないパターンのほうがいいです
[Insane]
  1. 00:49:749 (2,4) - ここにwhistleを入れるとリズムが読みやすくなります
  2. 01:41:426 (4,7) - add whistle?
  3. 02:00:974 (1) - Ncいらないと思います
[Holy War]
  1. 00:16:458 (1) - Ncいらないと思います
  2. 00:18:007 (1) - ^
  3. 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音が４個ずつ分かれてるので一度見直してみてください。たとえば、00:20:329 (5) - ここにNcが入ります。Nc２個張るので見比べてみてください
    元々の形 : 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

    変更後形 : 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
  4. 00:28:845 (5,6,1,2) - Extra難易度だとしても2+2 patternでこれは飛びすぎだと思います
  5. 00:34:652 (3,1) - この3/4の使い方は読めないのでできれば違う形にしてください、あとNc不要です
  6. 00:47:039 (4,1) - こっちはokです、あとNc不要です
  7. 00:49:749 (5,7) - ここにwhistleを入れるとリズムが読みやすくなります
  8. 00:53:039 (2) - これは1/4sliderより circleのほうがよりいいです
  9. 01:06:007 (1) - Nc不要だと思います
  10. 01:11:426 (5) - Ncいれてもいいかも、パターン的に、ちなみにここは、00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -こことNcパターンあわせるようにしてください
  11. 01:38:426 (1) - Nc不要です
  12. 01:40:845 (5,7) - ここにwhistleを入れるとリズムが読みやすくなります
  13. 01:46:652 (5) - add Nc
  14. 01:49:749 (4) - 01:52:071 (5) - ^
  15. 01:56:232 (1) - remove Nc
  16. 02:04:071 (5,6,7,8) - ds崩してるのは意図的？意図的でしたがそんなにあってる気しないので直します！
all fixです！ :)
指摘していただけるところはどれも納得のいくmodでした！！
本当にありがとうございます！！
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
[Hard]
  1. 01:29:620 (1) - 頭finish
  2. 01:41:232 (3) - 後ろwhistle
  3. 01:41:620 (5) - ^
[Holy War]
  1. 00:22:265 (5) - add Nc
  2. 01:38:716 (1) - remo Nc 01:38:910 (3) - add Nc こことあわせるために 00:47:620 (6,7) -
  3. 01:56:716 (1) - 頭whistle抜け
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7

Satellite wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 01:29:620 (1) - 頭finish
  2. 01:41:232 (3) - 後ろwhistle
  3. 01:41:620 (5) - ^
[Holy War]
  1. 00:22:265 (5) - add Nc
  2. 01:38:716 (1) - remo Nc 01:38:910 (3) - add Nc こことあわせるために 00:47:620 (6,7) -
  3. 01:56:716 (1) - 頭whistle抜け
all fix :)
modありがとうございます！
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Changed log

  1. Artist : EYEMEDIA
  2. Title : HOLY KNIGHT
  3. add sliderslide
  4. remove BG


Link

1st mod : p/5361990
2nd mod : p/5371024
3rd mod : p/5377629
4th mod : p/5384711
5th mod : p/5384943

Edit : Recheck and seems fine to me. so Bubbled!

GL on 1st ranked ~ o/

Edit : 2016/08/11 recheck'd Nanaka's mod, and looks fine to me. so Rebubbled!
Last edited by Satellite , edited 1 time in total.
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
別にサテライト氏に喧嘩売ってるわけではありません

Holy War

  1. 00:18:394 (1) - 00:19:168 (1) - addition softにしてwhistle
  2. 00:18:781 (1) - 00:19:555 (1) - whistle
  3. 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - こういうのは大体2コ置きにwhistle置いてやるといい感じになる
    00:19:942 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3) -
  4. 00:21:491 (1,3,3) - いきなりここだけNormal whistleはおかしい全部Softでいい
  5. 00:22:652 - whistle
  6. 00:22:265 - Soft whistle
  7. 00:23:620 (7) - Normal whistle
  8. 01:07:942 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここらへん最初と同じ
  9. 01:32:136 (4,6) - どう考えてもSample Normalだと思うんだけど
  10. 01:35:620 - これも普通にNormalにして01:35:813 - にFinish
  11. 01:38:716 (6) - ^
  12. 01:41:813 (5) - sample drum
  13. 01:44:329 - ここClapじゃなくてNormalじゃないの
  14. 01:48:007 (7) - whistleうつなら01:47:620 (5) - こっちだと思うの
  15. 01:49:942 (2) - pattern的にここはwhistleで01:50:136 - にClapのみ
  16. 01:50:620 (5) - Clapいらない01:50:523 - 01:50:716 - にwhistle
  17. 01:52:071 (1) - Normal Finishにしたほうが自然
  18. 01:54:394 (1,1) - 音的には同じわけだし01:54:684 - ここはNomalでAdd whistleのが合ってると思うんだけど
  19. 01:56:232 (2,3) - 同じ
  20. 01:54:394 (1,1,1) - なんでこっちにNC打って01:56:232 (2,3) - にはないのか謎
  21. 01:58:265 (6) - わいならここNC打つしNormal合ってもいいと思う
  22. 01:59:039 (1) - これなんでSoftなの
  23. 02:05:426 (1) - Normal入れると終わり方いいとおも

Insane

  1. 00:09:103 (1,2) - どっちも終点のwhistleいらんでしょ
  2. 00:46:845 (3) - whistle
  3. 01:00:394 - 01:00:781 - 01:01:168 - にwhistle入れるといい感じになると思うよ
  4. 01:03:297 (1) - ここはFinishでしょ
  5. 01:29:426 (4) - こんなJumpさせる音じゃないし曲調的にも230/312でpatternのがいい
  6. 01:30:007 - whistle
  7. 01:32:136 (5,7) - なんでExと音違うん
  8. 01:45:878 - Normal抜け

Hard

  1. 00:33:491 (4) - Clap
  2. 00:38:136 (3) - ^
  3. 00:41:039 (4) - ここはNormalだけでいい
  4. 01:02:523 (2,3) - めっちゃDrumなってるわけだし両方始点にNormal追加、この場合01:03:297 (1) - をFinishに
  5. 01:28:845 (1,2,3,4) - Hardのここはスタックbetterだと思う
    SPOILER
  6. 01:53:232 - ここ他DiffではFinishなわけなんだが
  7. 01:53:620 (3,4) - 視点にNormal
  8. 01:57:491 (2,4) - これcircleに変えるべきだと思う、01:59:039 (1,3) - 難易度的にも次のこれと混同して読みにくいし

同じようなとこは指摘してないから上の見ながら全Diff調整してみて
個人的にはまだ作業量必要だと思うけど自分が良いと思うなら終わった後サテライト氏にRebubbleもらえばいいとおも
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7

-Nanaka- wrote:

別にサテライト氏に喧嘩売ってるわけではありません

Holy War

  1. 00:18:394 (1) - 00:19:168 (1) - addition softにしてwhistle
  2. 00:18:781 (1) - 00:19:555 (1) - whistle
  3. 00:19:942 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - こういうのは大体2コ置きにwhistle置いてやるといい感じになる
    00:19:942 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3) -
  4. 00:21:491 (1,3,3) - いきなりここだけNormal whistleはおかしい全部Softでいい
  5. 00:22:652 - whistle
  6. 00:22:265 - Soft whistle
  7. 00:23:620 (7) - Normal whistle
  8. 01:07:942 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここらへん最初と同じ
  9. 01:32:136 (4,6) - どう考えてもSample Normalだと思うんだけどNormalはわかるんですけどfinishは置いといて良いと思ったのでfinish置いてます
  10. 01:35:620 - これも普通にNormalにして01:35:813 - にFinish
  11. 01:38:716 (6) - ^
  12. 01:41:813 (5) - sample drum
  13. 01:44:329 - ここClapじゃなくてNormalじゃないの
  14. 01:48:007 (7) - whistleうつなら01:47:620 (5) - こっちだと思うの両方あってもいいと思いました
  15. 01:49:942 (2) - pattern的にここはwhistleで01:50:136 - にClapのみ
  16. 01:50:620 (5) - Clapいらない01:50:523 - 01:50:716 - にwhistle
  17. 01:52:071 (1) - Normal Finishにしたほうが自然
  18. 01:54:394 (1,1) - 音的には同じわけだし01:54:684 - ここはNomalでAdd whistleのが合ってると思うんだけど
  19. 01:56:232 (2,3) - 同じ
  20. 01:54:394 (1,1,1) - なんでこっちにNC打って01:56:232 (2,3) - にはないのか謎指摘がなかったので良いのかなと思って放置してました。念のため外しておきます
  21. 01:58:265 (6) - わいならここNC打つしNormal合ってもいいと思う
  22. 01:59:039 (1) - これなんでSoftなの
  23. 02:05:426 (1) - Normal入れると終わり方いいとおも好き

Insane

  1. 00:09:103 (1,2) - どっちも終点のwhistleいらんでしょ
  2. 00:46:845 (3) - whistle
  3. 01:00:394 - 01:00:781 - 01:01:168 - にwhistle入れるといい感じになると思うよ
  4. 01:03:297 (1) - ここはFinishでしょ
  5. 01:29:426 (4) - こんなJumpさせる音じゃないし曲調的にも230/312でpatternのがいい
  6. 01:30:007 - whistle
  7. 01:32:136 (5,7) - なんでExと音違うん
  8. 01:45:878 - Normal抜け

Hard

  1. 00:33:491 (4) - Clap
  2. 00:38:136 (3) - ^
  3. 00:41:039 (4) - ここはNormalだけでいい
  4. 01:02:523 (2,3) - めっちゃDrumなってるわけだし両方始点にNormal追加、この場合01:03:297 (1) - をFinishに
  5. 01:28:845 (1,2,3,4) - Hardのここはスタックbetterだと思う
    SPOILER
  6. 01:53:232 - ここ他DiffではFinishなわけなんだが
  7. 01:53:620 (3,4) - 視点にNormal
  8. 01:57:491 (2,4) - これcircleに変えるべきだと思う、01:59:039 (1,3) - 難易度的にも次のこれと混同して読みにくいし

同じようなとこは指摘してないから上の見ながら全Diff調整してみて
個人的にはまだ作業量必要だと思うけど自分が良いと思うなら終わった後サテライト氏にRebubbleもらえばいいとおも
書いてないところはall fix! :D
疲れて寝てたので返信遅れました sorry :o
修正してたら疲れてきて寝そうになって無限ループになるトコでしたｗ
modありがとうございます！！ :)
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
Nokd
SPOILER
2016-08-09 05:52 -Nanaka-: 01:59:039 (3) - これreverseのがいいとおもうんだけど
2016-08-09 05:52 snowsign7: tasikani
2016-08-09 05:53 -Nanaka-: 01:28:845 (1,4) - これ終点のFinishNormalじゃないの
2016-08-09 05:53 snowsign7: tasikani
2016-08-09 05:54 -Nanaka-: 01:48:974 (2) - これ単発に変えたがpattern的にもいいと思う
2016-08-09 05:56 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 05:56 -Nanaka-: 終わったら教えて
2016-08-09 05:56 snowsign7: hai
2016-08-09 05:57 snowsign7: おわりました
2016-08-09 05:58 -Nanaka-: 00:11:232 (2) - これ
2016-08-09 05:58 -Nanaka-: 00:12:007 - こっちに置いたがよくない？
2016-08-09 05:58 -Nanaka-: 同意しない場合単純に2にwhistle
2016-08-09 05:59 snowsign7: whistle入れる方向で
2016-08-09 06:00 -Nanaka-: 00:30:781 - whistle
2016-08-09 06:00 -Nanaka-: 00:36:974 - ここも
2016-08-09 06:01 snowsign7: kk
2016-08-09 06:02 -Nanaka-: 00:40:652 (4,5,1,2,3) - ここ汚いから　http://puu.sh/qumim/26fd67b852.jpg　http://puu.sh/qumks/39ed99121f.jpg
2016-08-09 06:02 -Nanaka-: こんな感じに広く置いたがいいとおも
2016-08-09 06:02 snowsign7: 了解です
2016-08-09 06:04 -Nanaka-: 終わった？
2016-08-09 06:05 snowsign7: ちょい待ってください
2016-08-09 06:05 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:06 -Nanaka-: 01:00:781 (2,4) - whistle
2016-08-09 06:06 snowsign7: kk
2016-08-09 06:06 -Nanaka-: 01:10:071 (2) - この単発いらない　01:08:523 - こっちに置くべき
2016-08-09 06:06 -Nanaka-: 置いた後whistle
2016-08-09 06:07 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:07 -Nanaka-: 01:29:620 (1) - Finish
2016-08-09 06:07 -Nanaka-: 01:32:716 - Normal
2016-08-09 06:08 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:09 -Nanaka-: 01:40:458 - これバランスもあるからお好みでwhistle
2016-08-09 06:09 -Nanaka-: 終点には絶対いる
2016-08-09 06:09 snowsign7: 了解っす
2016-08-09 06:10 -Nanaka-: 01:58:071 (2,4) - 同じ
2016-08-09 06:11 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:11 -Nanaka-: 　02:03:297 - whistle
2016-08-09 06:11 snowsign7: okです
2016-08-09 06:12 -Nanaka-: Hard
2016-08-09 06:12 snowsign7: ｋ
2016-08-09 06:12 -Nanaka-: 00:13:749 (1) - これNormalFinish
2016-08-09 06:12 snowsign7: hai
2016-08-09 06:13 -Nanaka-: 00:30:200 - わいならaddSoftにしてwhistleいれる
2016-08-09 06:14 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:14 snowsign7: 00:36:394 (2) - ^ ?
2016-08-09 06:15 -Nanaka-: 　そこは00:37:361 - こっちのが欲しい
2016-08-09 06:15 snowsign7: 了解っす
2016-08-09 06:15 -Nanaka-: 00:53:232 (3,4,5) - 細かいけどスタックさせないの？
2016-08-09 06:16 snowsign7: しときます
2016-08-09 06:17 -Nanaka-: 00:56:716 - whistleあってもよさげ
2016-08-09 06:17 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:17 -Nanaka-: 01:11:039 (1,2) - 両方頭に
2016-08-09 06:18 snowsign7: hai
2016-08-09 06:18 -Nanaka-: 01:38:716 (6) - これNormal上に付けないと意味ない
2016-08-09 06:19 snowsign7: oh ミスってました
2016-08-09 06:19 -Nanaka-: 01:40:458 (1,2,3,4,5) - これ全体指定で上に上げといたがいい
2016-08-09 06:19 -Nanaka-: 01:41:523 (4,5) - これきわどすぎる
2016-08-09 06:20 snowsign7: 了解です
2016-08-09 06:20 snowsign7: 01:39:878 (4,1) -
2016-08-09 06:21 snowsign7: ここと重ならないよう気をつけたほうが良いですか？
2016-08-09 06:21 -Nanaka-: 単純に　http://puu.sh/qunAK/04975fd029.jpg
2016-08-09 06:21 -Nanaka-: こんなもんでいいよ
2016-08-09 06:21 snowsign7: okです
2016-08-09 06:22 -Nanaka-: 01:53:620 (3,4) - 赤線にwhistle
2016-08-09 06:22 -Nanaka-: 01:54:007 - ここNormal+Softwhistle
2016-08-09 06:23 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:23 -Nanaka-: これわいの好みなんだけど01:54:394 (1,3) - これ始点whistleよりNormalFinishのがいいと思う
2016-08-09 06:24 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:24 -Nanaka-: 01:55:942 (4,6) - こっちもね
2016-08-09 06:24 snowsign7: ha-i
2016-08-09 06:24 -Nanaka-: 01:57:587 (3,7) - これはOvermap
2016-08-09 06:25 -Nanaka-: Hardでは明確な音意外の３連はいらない
2016-08-09 06:25 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:26 -Nanaka-: 02:00:781 (2,5) - これwhistleいらないと思う
2016-08-09 06:27 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:27 -Nanaka-: まあ
2016-08-09 06:27 -Nanaka-: 02:00:684 - 02:01:458 - にNoteいれるならあってもいい
2016-08-09 06:28 snowsign7: naruhodo
2016-08-09 06:28 -Nanaka-: 02:01:749 (8,1,2) - 全部終点にwhistle
2016-08-09 06:28 -Nanaka-: 02:01:168 - こいつも
2016-08-09 06:29 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:30 -Nanaka-: Insane
2016-08-09 06:30 -Nanaka-: 00:13:361 (5,1) - ちょっと近いから00:13:361 (5) - を132/88あたりに
2016-08-09 06:30 snowsign7: kk
2016-08-09 06:31 -Nanaka-: 00:13:749 (1) - 終点のみ　00:14:136 (2) - どっちもwhistle
2016-08-09 06:31 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:32 -Nanaka-: 00:14:910 (7) - これも
2016-08-09 06:32 -Nanaka-: どっちにも追加
2016-08-09 06:32 snowsign7: hai
2016-08-09 06:32 -Nanaka-: 00:15:297 (1,2) - 終点のみ
2016-08-09 06:33 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:33 -Nanaka-: 00:16:265 (5,7) - 赤線のとこ追加
2016-08-09 06:34 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:34 -Nanaka-: 00:16:845 (1,2,5,7,3,3) - これも
2016-08-09 06:34 snowsign7: hai
2016-08-09 06:34 -Nanaka-: 00:19:168 (5,6) - も
2016-08-09 06:35 snowsign7: hai
2016-08-09 06:35 -Nanaka-: 00:24:587 (1) - Finishわすれてる
2016-08-09 06:36 snowsign7: oh ok
2016-08-09 06:36 -Nanaka-: 00:36:974 (1) - whistle
2016-08-09 06:36 snowsign7: kk
2016-08-09 06:36 -Nanaka-: お好み
2016-08-09 06:36 -Nanaka-: 00:40:652 (4) - わいならNCうつ
2016-08-09 06:37 snowsign7: じゃあ僕も打ちます
2016-08-09 06:37 -Nanaka-: の場合00:41:039 (4) - もあってもいいかもね
2016-08-09 06:37 -Nanaka-: 3.3.3ですこ
2016-08-09 06:37 snowsign7: なるほど
2016-08-09 06:38 snowsign7: 4のNCだけ無しで
2016-08-09 06:38 -Nanaka-: おｋ
2016-08-09 06:38 -Nanaka-: 00:50:716 - これDrumFinishかDrumのみでもいいからなんか欲しい
2016-08-09 06:39 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:39 -Nanaka-: 00:52:071 - わいならwhistle
2016-08-09 06:39 -Nanaka-: 00:53:039 (2) - こっちはいる
2016-08-09 06:40 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:40 -Nanaka-: 00:54:587 (2,3,4) - 全部赤にwhistle
2016-08-09 06:40 snowsign7: hai
2016-08-09 06:41 -Nanaka-: 　01:02:523 (4,5) - も
2016-08-09 06:42 snowsign7: kk
2016-08-09 06:43 -Nanaka-: 01:05:039 (2,4,5,7) - これ全部赤にいれてもいいけどうるさいとおもうならcircleだけ
2016-08-09 06:44 snowsign7: 全部あっていいと思いました
2016-08-09 06:44 -Nanaka-: せやろ
2016-08-09 06:44 -Nanaka-: 01:07:168 (3,5) - これは終点だけでいいと思う
2016-08-09 06:44 snowsign7: はい
2016-08-09 06:45 -Nanaka-: 01:09:103 (7) - なりが悪いから終点に入れるとすっきりするとおも
2016-08-09 06:45 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:46 -Nanaka-: 01:31:361 - whistle
2016-08-09 06:46 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:47 -Nanaka-: 　01:37:555 - ^
2016-08-09 06:47 snowsign7: okk
2016-08-09 06:47 -Nanaka-: 01:46:845 - 01:47:232 - もあっていい
2016-08-09 06:48 -Nanaka-: 01:50:813 - これは謎whistle
2016-08-09 06:48 snowsign7: oo~ naruhodo
2016-08-09 06:48 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:49 -Nanaka-: 01:53:620 (3,4) - 赤　　01:54:394 (1,3) - の場合Hardと同じFにすればいい
2016-08-09 06:50 snowsign7: okdesu
2016-08-09 06:51 -Nanaka-: 01:55:942 (1,3) - これも変えといてね
2016-08-09 06:51 snowsign7: ha-i
2016-08-09 06:52 -Nanaka-: 01:57:491 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - これ全赤あっていい
2016-08-09 06:52 snowsign7: 了解です
2016-08-09 06:52 -Nanaka-: 　02:03:491 (8) - ちなみにこれ７と角度そろえたがすこ　
2016-08-09 06:52 -Nanaka-: http://puu.sh/qupHF/61dd3b1155.jpg
2016-08-09 06:53 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:53 -Nanaka-: おわったらおしえて
2016-08-09 06:53 snowsign7: ha-i
2016-08-09 06:54 snowsign7: おわりました
2016-08-09 06:59 -Nanaka-: 00:39:491 (4) - 視点にSoftwhistle
2016-08-09 06:59 -Nanaka-: 00:42:587 (4) - これも
2016-08-09 06:59 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 06:59 -Nanaka-: 00:45:103 (2) - これ手前減速からのこれ距離足りなくない
2016-08-09 07:00 -Nanaka-: sliderならわかるけどcircleは100でそう
2016-08-09 07:00 snowsign7: なるほど
2016-08-09 07:00 snowsign7: ちょっと離してみます
2016-08-09 07:00 -Nanaka-: いや近づけるんだよなぁ...
2016-08-09 07:01 snowsign7: えー
2016-08-09 07:01 snowsign7: この高い音にあわせてちょっと離したくないですか？
2016-08-09 07:02 -Nanaka-: じゃあ手前加速じゃないの
2016-08-09 07:02 snowsign7: わかりました
2016-08-09 07:02 -Nanaka-: 加速するならもうちょい離していいよ
2016-08-09 07:03 -Nanaka-: 00:45:103 (2,5) - whistle
2016-08-09 07:03 -Nanaka-: 00:45:684 - 始点
2016-08-09 07:03 snowsign7: やっぱり減速で近づけます...
2016-08-09 07:04 -Nanaka-: まあ気持ちでいいよ
2016-08-09 07:04 -Nanaka-: 個人的だし
2016-08-09 07:04 -Nanaka-: 00:46:265 (1) - これ終点
2016-08-09 07:05 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 07:05 -Nanaka-: 00:47:620 (6) - と00:47:813 (1) - 始点
2016-08-09 07:05 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 07:05 -Nanaka-: 00:53:620 (6) - これ手前の流れからして　http://puu.sh/quqxZ/9f8b4b4776.jpg
2016-08-09 07:05 -Nanaka-: こうじゃないの
2016-08-09 07:06 snowsign7: iya
2016-08-09 07:06 snowsign7: こう置きたいです
2016-08-09 07:06 -Nanaka-: そっすか
2016-08-09 07:07 snowsign7: ^-^
2016-08-09 07:08 -Nanaka-: 01:02:716 (3,5,7) - これsoundおかしくね
2016-08-09 07:08 -Nanaka-: Clap音なんてないと思うんだけど
2016-08-09 07:08 -Nanaka-: 単純に
2016-08-09 07:09 -Nanaka-: 01:02:716 (3,7) - whistleのみ01:03:024 - Normal+whistle
2016-08-09 07:09 -Nanaka-: 試してみて
2016-08-09 07:09 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 07:09 snowsign7: 01:02:910 (5) - のまほいっするここですか？
2016-08-09 07:10 -Nanaka-: いや
2016-08-09 07:10 -Nanaka-: そふと
2016-08-09 07:10 -Nanaka-: 上はNormal
2016-08-09 07:10 snowsign7: okok
2016-08-09 07:10 -Nanaka-: 01:03:297 (1) - の場合ここにも
2016-08-09 07:10 snowsign7: こっちのほうがいいですねえ
2016-08-09 07:10 -Nanaka-: せやろ
2016-08-09 07:10 snowsign7: はい
2016-08-09 07:11 -Nanaka-: 01:05:813 (3,7) - whistle
2016-08-09 07:11 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 07:11 -Nanaka-: 01:06:394 (1,2) - 終点
2016-08-09 07:11 -Nanaka-: 01:07:749 (7) - whistle
2016-08-09 07:12 snowsign7: kk
2016-08-09 07:12 -Nanaka-: 01:32:136 (4,6) - どう考えてもFinish耳障り
2016-08-09 07:13 snowsign7: ha-i
2016-08-09 07:13 -Nanaka-: 01:31:942 (3) - こいつもいらん
2016-08-09 07:13 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 07:13 -Nanaka-: かわりに01:31:942 (3) - そふとwhistle
2016-08-09 07:13 snowsign7: 代わりにwhitsle?
2016-08-09 07:13 -Nanaka-: せやね
2016-08-09 07:13 snowsign7: kk
2016-08-09 07:14 -Nanaka-: 01:35:620 (6,1) - ここの提案拒否でおｋなの
2016-08-09 07:14 -Nanaka-: ？
2016-08-09 07:14 snowsign7: ちょっと確認してきます
2016-08-09 07:14 -Nanaka-: 01:35:813 - Finishこっちに移動ってやつ
2016-08-09 07:15 snowsign7: あー
2016-08-09 07:15 snowsign7: いやokです移動します
2016-08-09 07:16 -Nanaka-: 01:39:878 (1,2,3) - これもうちょいJumpしてよくない？
2016-08-09 07:16 -Nanaka-: 01:40:265 (3,1) - 近いし
2016-08-09 07:16 snowsign7: ３ならもうちょっと飛ばせそうですね
2016-08-09 07:17 -Nanaka-: 01:46:845 - whistle
2016-08-09 07:17 -Nanaka-: 01:49:942 (2) - whistle
2016-08-09 07:17 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 07:18 -Nanaka-: 01:53:813 (4,8,1,3,1,3) - 他と一緒
2016-08-09 07:19 snowsign7: ４と８ってなんでしたっけ whistle?
2016-08-09 07:19 -Nanaka-: うｎ
2016-08-09 07:19 snowsign7: kk
2016-08-09 07:20 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 07:20 -Nanaka-: 02:02:329 (3,3,3,3) - whistle01:57:684 (3,3,3,7) - ^ 
2016-08-09 07:20 -Nanaka-: 01:57:878 (5,5) - 終点
2016-08-09 07:20 snowsign7: ok
2016-08-09 07:21 -Nanaka-: こんなもんだとおもうけどとりあえずサテライト氏くるまで自分で他Diffと比べながら確認しとくといいと思う
2016-08-09 07:21 snowsign7: ha-i
2016-08-09 07:22 snowsign7: ありがとうございました！
2016-08-09 07:22 -Nanaka-: まじめっちゃ貢献してるんだけど
2016-08-09 07:22 snowsign7: MVP勲章差し上げます
2016-08-09 07:22 -Nanaka-: まじ今度Mod断んなよ~
2016-08-09 07:22 snowsign7: はいｗ
2016-08-09 07:23 -Nanaka-: がんばれ～じゃあの！
2016-08-09 07:23 snowsign7: はい！ありがとうございました！
2016-08-09 07:23 -Nanaka-: いえいえー
返信はいりません～
GL :)
sionKotori
648 posts
Joined September 2011
sionKotori
hypeeeeee
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7
8-) 8-) 8-)

sionKotori wrote:

hypeeeeee
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
！！
Rank it pls :)
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7

sahuang wrote:

！！
Rank it pls :)
mod plz ;)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
when
ShiraKai
534 posts
Joined September 2010
ShiraKai

Satellite wrote:

when
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Easy.
01:30:007 - Why is the volume setted so low?

Normal.
00:35:426 (1,2) - Consider starting the combo from (2). The music feels pretty detached, and having them in one combo didn't felt nice.
01:30:200 (3,4) - The slider ends overlapping didn't felt visually appealing. Might make them not touching each will work better.

Hard.
01:09:297 (4,1) - Containing both jumps and a stream felt too intensed in this diff. Also, having a less consistent rhythm with 02:00:200 (4,1) kinda hurt the structure.

Insane.
01:14:136 (1) - The second part of the curve feels less balanced. Mind making it more balanced in visual?
01:31:265 (2) - According to the music, I can't hear any 1/4 rhythm here. Please remove this artificial rhythm.


Holy War.
00:01:464 - There is no beat here in the song. Making this timeline clickable feels highly inadequate along the song. You'll want to make this just a 1/1 slider.
00:55:749 (2,3) - You may want to set the spacing as 2.4x to indicate its rhythm more consistently.
01:36:200 (2,3) - I think you've setted 1/4 spacings closer than these when it comes to this kind of usage.
01:42:007 (1) - Poor designed extended slider. There is a clear beat at 01:42:200 and ignoring that didn't felt to representing the song nicely. The 1/4 spacing is the same with other 1/2 ones, and it is really hard to tell the rhythms properly. Also considering there were no other similar usage, I highly doubt if this is ever intended.
02:04:071 (5) - 02:04:845 (5) - These have an inconsistent combo setting with 01:12:974 (1) - 01:13:749 (1). It felt weak in structure.

Nice map. Popping over bold issues. Let me know if everything gets addressed.
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy.
01:30:007 - Why is the volume setted so low?

Normal.
00:35:426 (1,2) - Consider starting the combo from (2). The music feels pretty detached, and having them in one combo didn't felt nice.
01:30:200 (3,4) - The slider ends overlapping didn't felt visually appealing. Might make them not touching each will work better.

Hard.
01:09:297 (4,1) - Containing both jumps and a stream felt too intensed in this diff. Also, having a less consistent rhythm with keep
02:00:200 (4,1) kinda hurt the structure.

Insane.
01:14:136 (1) - The second part of the curve feels less balanced. Mind making it more balanced in visual?
01:31:265 (2) - According to the music, I can't hear any 1/4 rhythm here. Please remove this artificial rhythm.


Holy War.
00:01:464 - There is no beat here in the song. Making this timeline clickable feels highly inadequate along the song. You'll want to make this just a 1/1 slider.
00:55:749 (2,3) - You may want to set the spacing as 2.4x to indicate its rhythm more consistently.
01:36:200 (2,3) - I think you've setted 1/4 spacings closer than these when it comes to this kind of usage.keep
01:42:007 (1) - Poor designed extended slider. There is a clear beat at 01:42:200 and ignoring that didn't felt to representing the song nicely. The 1/4 spacing is the same with other 1/2 ones, and it is really hard to tell the rhythms properly. Also considering there were no other similar usage, I highly doubt if this is ever intended.
02:04:071 (5) - 02:04:845 (5) - These have an inconsistent combo setting with 01:12:974 (1) - 01:13:749 (1). It felt weak in structure.

Nice map. Popping over bold issues. Let me know if everything gets addressed.
thanks modding!! fixed except wrote keep ;)
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Holy war.
00:55:555 (1,2,3) - I think the point here was delivered somewhat as an unintended way. The concept I suggested is to make the spacing of each objects 'visually' consistent'. Something like http://puu.sh/s0rXk/cf86f4844a.jpg for example.
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7

Sonnyc wrote:

Holy war.
00:55:555 (1,2,3) - I think the point here was delivered somewhat as an unintended way. The concept I suggested is to make the spacing of each objects 'visually' consistent'. Something like http://puu.sh/s0rXk/cf86f4844a.jpg for example. fix
thank you~
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Nominated.
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7
thank you!! :)
Lasse
Beatmap Nominator
3,596 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
pop for the unsnapped object in highest diff

general
bg looks really poorly upscaled and low quality, just replace it with this please, it will look much nicer:
http://puu.sh/s0v1w/ca517772aa.jpg (resolution is rankable since a few days)

02:05:426 - why not start this 1/4 earlier on the higher diffs (imaybe nsane+extra? makes it feel more connected to the sound before

holy war
00:01:367 - slider is unsnapped by 5ms, should be on 00:01:362 - //the new timing point like on all other diffs, but somehow got snapped to the old timing section
just go left of it on the timeline and drag it a little to the left until it snaps and aimod doesn't show it as unsnapped anymore

00:16:458 (9,10,11,12,1) - why do you decrease spacing so much here? I think small change like you did for the same sounds on 00:17:620 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - works better
00:55:749 (2) - missing normal whistle, you have one there on other diffs
01:11:426 (1,2,3,4,1) - how about something more like http://i.imgur.com/iVYKFln.jpg => making 4-1 more similar to the others before
01:53:232 (1) - bit edgy, the points in the middle make it so weird with how it nearly goes back into itself http://i.imgur.com/1C4zziL.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/7mxRC5t.jpg would work

insane
01:30:587 (3,1) - looks kinda messy with the different overlap on both sliderparts, why not http://i.imgur.com/VBYmpuk.jpg
01:53:620 (3) - mind spacing this the same as 01:52:845 (1,2) - ? would make more sense I think and looks more organized

hard
01:35:620 (4,1) - you always had normal spacing/jumps on similar things, so having stack here instead doesn't really make sense

normal
fine

easy
00:21:491 (3,4,1) - pretty bad readability for beginners, slider points towards 1, which also appear really eary, making it easy to misread.
could do something more like http://i.imgur.com/XryyC2X.jpg
01:03:684 (1) - similar here, blanket might looks nice but placement makes reading harder than it has to be. could move to 149-343
01:27:491 - why is the break end snapped so weirdly o: it's normal on all other diffs
01:50:523 (5,6,1) - this stacking pattern is not necessary at all and you only introduce it so late into the map just try to use a more usualy pattern here

I can rebubble after you fixed the unsnapped thing and at least that last pattern on easy + new bg
snowsign7
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Topic Starter
snowsign7

Lasse wrote:

pop for the unsnapped object in highest diff

general
bg looks really poorly upscaled and low quality, just replace it with this please, it will look much nicer:
http://puu.sh/s0v1w/ca517772aa.jpg (resolution is rankable since a few days)　thanks :)

02:05:426 - why not start this 1/4 earlier on the higher diffs (imaybe nsane+extra? makes it feel more connected to the sound beforekeep

holy war
00:01:367 - slider is unsnapped by 5ms, should be on 00:01:362 - //the new timing point like on all other diffs, but somehow got snapped to the old timing section
just go left of it on the timeline and drag it a little to the left until it snaps and aimod doesn't show it as unsnapped anymore

00:16:458 (9,10,11,12,1) - why do you decrease spacing so much here? I think small change like you did for the same sounds on 00:17:620 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - works better
00:55:749 (2) - missing normal whistle, you have one there on other diffs
01:11:426 (1,2,3,4,1) - how about something more like http://i.imgur.com/iVYKFln.jpg => making 4-1 more similar to the others before
01:53:232 (1) - bit edgy, the points in the middle make it so weird with how it nearly goes back into itself http://i.imgur.com/1C4zziL.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/7mxRC5t.jpg would work

insane
01:30:587 (3,1) - looks kinda messy with the different overlap on both sliderparts, why not http://i.imgur.com/VBYmpuk.jpgslider remove
01:53:620 (3) - mind spacing this the same as 01:52:845 (1,2) - ? would make more sense I think and looks more organized keep

hard
01:35:620 (4,1) - you always had normal spacing/jumps on similar things, so having stack here instead doesn't really make sense

normal
fine

easy
00:21:491 (3,4,1) - pretty bad readability for beginners, slider points towards 1, which also appear really eary, making it easy to misread.
could do something more like http://i.imgur.com/XryyC2X.jpg
01:03:684 (1) - similar here, blanket might looks nice but placement makes reading harder than it has to be. could move to 149-343
01:27:491 - why is the break end snapped so weirdly o: it's normal on all other diffs
01:50:523 (5,6,1) - this stacking pattern is not necessary at all and you only introduce it so late into the map just try to use a more usualy pattern here

I can rebubble after you fixed the unsnapped thing and at least that last pattern on easy + new bg
thanks modding!! fixed except wrote keep ;)
Lasse
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Lasse
easy
00:23:044 (1) - offscreen


everything else is fine now
some of the 1/4 circle jumps in the highest diff might seem a bit huge, but they play fine for me and work well enough with the song so I'll give them a chance
snowsign7
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Topic Starter
snowsign7

Lasse wrote:

easy
00:23:044 (1) - offscreen
fix

everything else is fine now
some of the 1/4 circle jumps in the highest diff might seem a bit huge, but they play fine for me and work well enough with the song so I'll give them a chance
thank you~~
Lasse
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Lasse
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snowsign7
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snowsign7
thank you~!! :)
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Holy War.
01:06:302 (8,1) - Well this 1/4 jump was way too much compared to the song. I really want to see this closer.
01:11:721 (4,1) - This 1/4 was way too far. Considering how 02:02:818 (4,1) was spaced, I recommend you to space this 1/4 more closer. This doesn't play that well enough.
01:49:173 (3) - oo the second part of the curve could've been more balanced.

I actually don't recall those massive 1/4 jumps at my last check owo
Maybe something significant changed, or I just didn't saw those at my previous check..?

Fix those please since I actually don't approve those.

Other spaced 1/4 such as 00:18:302 (11,1) - 01:07:850 (8,1) - worked out nice enough but the bolded ones are just way too excessive.
snowsign7
102 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
snowsign7

Sonnyc wrote:

Holy War.
01:06:302 (8,1) - Well this 1/4 jump was way too much compared to the song. I really want to see this closer.
01:11:721 (4,1) - This 1/4 was way too far. Considering how 02:02:818 (4,1) was spaced, I recommend you to space this 1/4 more closer. This doesn't play that well enough.
01:49:173 (3) - oo the second part of the curve could've been more balanced.

I actually don't recall those massive 1/4 jumps at my last check owo
Maybe something significant changed, or I just didn't saw those at my previous check..?

Fix those please since I actually don't approve those.

Other spaced 1/4 such as 00:18:302 (11,1) - 01:07:850 (8,1) - worked out nice enough but the bolded ones are just way too excessive.
all fix ;)
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Nominated.
Kagetsu
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Kagetsu
holy war? more like bubble war

ok you can kill me now
Satellite
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Satellite
HOLY WAR

WHERE IS KNIGHT ? (QF)
Lasse
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Lasse
you somehow never messaged me after sonnyc popped/bubbled again...

just let me know when you're ready so I can qualify
Satellite
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Satellite
!!!!!!!!!!!!! hype
Lasse
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Lasse
gl
snowsign7
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snowsign7
thank you~~~(^^)/
Satellite
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Satellite
congrats!

おめでとうございます！
sahuang
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sahuang
grats!!!! finally
iyasine
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iyasine
1st ranked おめでとう！
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Yohanes
Grats snowsign! :D
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