http://puu.sh/mbT ..... are you serious? That's really HUGE for an .osz file with an HD video. Anyways, the objects listed will be mixed with both errors and suggestions. Edit to what you see fit.
[llkey's lamp]00:55:463 (3) - New combo here?
00:59:122 (4) - Start a new combo here?
01:34:487 (6) - New combo here?
02:31:317 (3,1) - Its REALLY hard to hear these notes. The hitsound gets lost in the music at this point.
03:00:118 (1) - Could remove the new combo here -or- 03:04:020 (6) - New combo here and at 03:07:922 (5).
[Did you call for me?]01:04:975 (3,4) - Sounds kinda off. Try ending (3) at 01:05:463 then (4) 1/4 later.
01:09:366 (4) - New combo here?
01:13:268 (5) - ^
01:16:927 (2) - ^
01:19:609 (9) - ^
01:20:829 (1) - Remove new combo here?
01:22:048 (6) - New combo here?
01:26:683 (8) - ^
01:30:585 (11) - ^
01:40:585 (6) - New combo for here as well?
01:48:390 (8) - ^
02:07:414 (3,4) - Sounds off between these two notes as well. Try doing the same like for 01:04:975 (3,4).
03:15:727 (4) - New combo here?
03:18:166 (8) - ^
[Tell me your wish]00:40:097 (5) - New combo here?
01:42:780 (3,4,5) - Intentional increased spacing jump?
01:48:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Is the spacing supposed to be like this?
01:50:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:48:410 (7) - New combo?
03:01:337 (1,2) - Switch the new combo with (2).
03:05:240 (1,2) - The combo placement for this part is very odd, but to acually fix this would mean doing some changes with the hitnote and slider.
03:05:483 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jump like some of the others, appears in the middle of a combo which makes it look more weird and doesn't go with the flow as much.
May need to look into redoing the jumps on this map. It doesn't look neatly setup.
OverallThe map seems decent so far, but there is still room for improvement to consider before trying to get the map ranked. But, the bubble would have to be popped for using silent/near silent notes that cannot be heard while playing the map.