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[General]
I suggest you to find some more mods in Electrolization diff as well, to make sure the flow in this works well
- (Captured from Standard diff)
- If I remembered correctly bitrate above 192 is acceptable for this song?
- Unnecessary Green Lines: 00:01:786
- 00:09:928 (3) - I don't really see this slider match with the song, the downbeat 00:10:357 should be clickable in order to emphasize it
Something like this make more sense in my opinion - 00:36:928 (2) - A denser rhythm in 1/1 fit with the song more, like what you did in 00:39:500 (1,2)
- 00:54:928 (1,2) - The flow built up here is pretty hard to play in lower diffs, try placing like this to provide a more smoother flow
Probably you need to adjust the spacing of those previous objects - 01:00:071 (5) - NC for consistency
- 01:00:928 (6) - It is better to place it higher for a better overlapping between two sliders
- 01:00:071 (5,6) - 01:06:928 (5,6) - I don't really suggest you end sliders in red ticks, especially you didn't do it in the kiai parts
1/2 rhythm provided a denser rhythm compared with kiai parts, which is not recommended - 01:34:357 (5) - NC
- 01:37:786 (1) - Lower the volume of the spinner end?
- 02:42:928 (5) - NC
- 00:05:214 (1) - The jump is too large when compared with the intro of the music
- 01:51:500 (1) -
Please blanket with the osu! logo properly
- 00:05:214 (6) - NC
- 00:13:786 - Break is not needed here thus you didn't add it in Standard and Advanced diffs
- 00:27:500 (6) - NC
- 00:09:500 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think the spacing in 00:11:214 (3,4,5,6,7) should be larger when the music is in a higher pitch
- 00:20:643 (1,2) - The music is soft here so I don't suggest a large jump here
- 00:33:286 (3) - Placing this at the right hand side of 00:33:071 (2) plays more better
- 00:21:500 (4,5,6) - This pattern works fine but I don't think it is suitable to use as it is too difficult for an Insane diff (Those patterns are fine in the kiai parts, tho.), try this one:
- 01:07:571 (4,5) - Well still the spacing is not necessary to be that large, placing around x:268|y:228 will be fine
- 01:10:786 (3,4,5) - Same as 00:21:500 (4,5,6)
- 01:37:357 (2) - It looks weird imo lol
- 01:59:857 (6,1) - It is kinda hard to read when the slider end is pointing to the next reverse head, try this:
- 02:11:214 (6,7,8) - Same as 00:21:500 (4,5,6)
- 00:53:214 (1) - Using a straight slider should be fine when the points in this slider is not necessary at all
- 00:57:286 (4,5) - For me I will suggest you to use an anti jump, as to provide a better flow after another anti jump in 00:57:071 (3,4)
- 00:57:714 (6,7,8) - The flow don't really works well here, try this?:
- 00:57:714 (6,7) - The spacing here is way too far, which is really hard to hit
- 01:37:786 - I think using a note is bettet that slider like what you did in other diffs
- 01:57:071 (3,4) - RIP spacing, it contradicts with the loudness of the music, try placing it around x:512|y:158
- 02:03:928 (3) - Place this more to the right, a more circular flow should work better than this when 02:03:714 (2) is curving to the left, adjust the placement of sliders behind once you have fixed it
- 02:33:500 (5) - Another slider which points to the right after 02:33:286 (4) will provide better flow between
- 02:46:357 (1) - Same as 01:37:786
I suggest you to find some more mods in Electrolization diff as well, to make sure the flow in this works well
Feel free to call me back once you are ready :3