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Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World

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Depths
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Depths
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, October 14, 2015 at 8:37:45 AM

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: Brand-new World
Source: 学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags: Gakusen Toshi Asterisk Kibbleru Crystal Sekai-nyan Sekai Meyrink pkk pkmnyab The Academy City on the water The Asterisk War opening tv size
BPM: 205
Filesize: 22014kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crystal's Hard (3.71 stars, 229 notes)
  2. Insane (4.98 stars, 322 notes)
  3. Kibboo's Normal (2.3 stars, 177 notes)
  4. pk's Insane (4.81 stars, 316 notes)
  5. Red Lotus (5.88 stars, 378 notes)
  6. Sekai's Easy (1.66 stars, 106 notes)
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - Brand-new World (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1
thanks for 300 favs!!!
thanks for 1mil plays!!!
thanks for 400 favs!!! 4/5/21
RIP Got YMCA'ed
Last edited by Depths , edited 211 times in total.
Nakano Itsuki
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Joined July 2014
Nakano Itsuki
First

xd
Meyrink
728 posts
Joined February 2014
Meyrink
MP3 Quality Edit request and timing

Download Link : http://puu.sh/kxc2n/60eec2aab1.mp3
Move Everything by -535ms and snap
then change 1st redline offset to 100ms
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths

Meyrink wrote:

MP3 Quality Edit request and timing

Download Link : http://puu.sh/kxc2n/60eec2aab1.mp3
Move Everything by -535ms and snap
then change 1st redline offset to 100ms
thanks again~ pls no use mp3
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
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Kibbleru
sekai, some suggestions with ur easy
00:06:099 (3) - it sounds better imo to start the slider here 00:05:953 -
00:15:904 (3) - 00:16:343 - this reapeat doesn't really land on anything. i dont see much of a reason for this to be a 3/2 slider
00:21:758 (2) - ^
00:45:758 (3) - ^
01:00:978 (1) - ^
00:43:709 (3,4) - this blanket
00:52:197 (2,3) - try ctrl g'ing this rhythm. it honestly sounds much better imo
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Star o3o
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths
thanks Ike~
pettankodayo
10 posts
Joined August 2014
pettankodayo
You’re a quick worker!! nice map!!
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths

pettankodayo wrote:

You’re a quick worker!! nice map!!
thanks~
[ Setsuna ]
422 posts
Joined October 2013
[ Setsuna ]
wtf so fast take my babies
Depths
681 posts
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Depths
ok~
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
ok~
Gaia
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Joined May 2013
Gaia

Kibbleru wrote:

bakai, some suggestions with ur easy
00:06:099 (3) - make this 1/1 and start 1/2 after on the white tick pls , emphasis on the snare sounds much better
00:15:904 (3) - i think this should be 3/2 repeat like 00:14:148 (1) - to be consistent
00:21:758 (2) - awkward rhythm
00:25:270 (2) - ^
00:36:685 (5) - this is REALLY off because the snare kicks in on the offbeat 1/2 earlier.. try maybe
00:45:758 (3) - maybe follow vocals on this one?
01:00:978 (1,2) - hmm awkward use of 3/2 imo
01:22:051 (4) - idk, very nazi but maybe change it so it blankets the curve =w= http://puu.sh/kxNMh/3d08200f78.jpg

tbh i just wanted to slap you =3=///

edit: i swear i didnt copy kibb's mod lmfao i finished it and i saw it and i was like wow we said like the exact same things ==/
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Fixed everything =3=/ thanks bakaia!
*slaps slaps slaps slaps Gaia*

moemoe~
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Brand-newEdit.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50734
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 4343,84246
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Brand-new World
TitleUnicode:Brand-new World
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Depths
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags:Gakusen Toshi Asterisk Kibbleru Crystal Depths Sekai-nyan Sekai Meyrink Academy Battle City The Asterisk War op opening
BeatmapID:795497
BeatmapSetID:361045

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2.5
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths
updated Sekai's diff xd
domSaur
1,263 posts
Joined December 2013
domSaur
wow so fast :o
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
can i make a extra diff? if i can, i'll finish it in about 1-2 days.
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths

Chloe wrote:

can i make a extra diff? if i can, i'll finish it in about 1-2 days.
dont want anymore GDs sorry ;w;
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru

Chloe wrote:

if i can.
you quit
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths
LOL
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
I cant map EZNM and i dont know how to mod them...really sorry>_<!!!

[Crystal's Hard]
00:40:489 (3,4,1) - 结尾-4-1的曲线有点折不是很好看00:40:928 (4) - x20 y202 00:41:075 (1) - x70y129这样差不多
01:01:563 (3) - 感觉好像有什么用意但是playing肯定是看不出来的……而且还有点难看了，还是对成三角？
00:56:295 (1) - 稍微往左上调整角度，和00:56:002 (3) - 整体看起来不是很好
可以啊（倒地

[Insane]
00:05:221 (5,6,3) - 00:04:343 (1) - stack..
00:25:417 (5) - ^
00:54:246 (5) - ^
01:23:514 (1) - ^
00:10:343 (6) - blanket
00:14:148 (2) - x290 y154
00:45:758 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767841
01:03:904 (1,2) - use ctrl+C/V plz QAQ
01:16:929 (2) - x207 y171 and 01:17:368 (1,4) - x291 y140
just little problem~

[Red Lotus]
01:03:173 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767858 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767863
01:05:368 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i dont know how to make you understand..
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767876 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767882 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767890 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767895
00:06:099 - add note
00:08:880 - ^ really not good now
00:25:124 (2) - blanket to 00:24:099 (3) -
01:13:270 (4) - stack
01:09:173 (3) - stream start here

and..why i do this again↓
sth
01:13:270 (4) - NC
00:05:953 (8) - ^
00:07:124 (5) - ^
00:09:465 (2) - ^
00:08:295 (3) - ^
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00:32:880 (6) -
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01:04:490 (2) -
01:05:660 (7) -
01:16:197 (2) -
01:19:563 (6) -
01:23:221 (5) -
00:05:221 (1) - remove NC
00:07:709 (1,1) - ^
00:06:831 (1) - ^
00:09:173 (1) - ^
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00:46:343 (1) -
00:52:490 (1) -
00:55:417 (1) -
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01:02:441 (1) -
01:03:904 (1) -
01:04:343 (1) -
01:05:807 (1,1,1) -
01:11:807 (1) -
01:15:904 (1) -
01:16:490 (1) -
01:23:514 (1) -

good luck~!!
Hakurei Yoru
688 posts
Joined September 2013
Hakurei Yoru
Just NC on long white line is enough!!!
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

I cant map EZNM and i dont know how to mod them...really sorry>_<!!!

[Insane]
00:05:221 (5,6,3) - 00:04:343 (1) - stack..
00:25:417 (5) - ^
00:54:246 (5) - ^
01:23:514 (1) - ^
00:10:343 (6) - blanket
00:14:148 (2) - x290 y154
00:45:758 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767841
01:03:904 (1,2) - use ctrl+C/V plz QAQ
01:16:929 (2) - x207 y171 and 01:17:368 (1,4) - x291 y140
just little problem~

[Red Lotus]
01:03:173 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767858 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767863
01:05:368 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i dont know how to make you understand..
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767876 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767882 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767890 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3767895
00:06:099 - add note
00:08:880 - ^ really not good now
00:25:124 (2) - blanket to 00:24:099 (3) -
01:13:270 (4) - stack
01:09:173 (3) - stream start here

and..why i do this again↓
sth
01:13:270 (4) - NC
00:05:953 (8) - ^
00:07:124 (5) - ^
00:09:465 (2) - ^
00:08:295 (3) - ^
00:10:636 (3) -
00:17:660 (3) -
00:24:685 (5) -
00:32:880 (6) -
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01:04:490 (2) -
01:05:660 (7) -
01:16:197 (2) -
01:19:563 (6) -
01:23:221 (5) -
00:05:221 (1) - remove NC
00:07:709 (1,1) - ^
00:06:831 (1) - ^
00:09:173 (1) - ^
00:10:343 (1) -
00:11:368 (1) -
00:17:368 (1) -
00:24:978 (1) -
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00:46:343 (1) -
00:52:490 (1) -
00:55:417 (1) -
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00:53:660 (1) -
01:01:709 (1) -
01:02:441 (1) -
01:03:904 (1) -
01:04:343 (1) -
01:05:807 (1,1,1) -
01:11:807 (1) -
01:15:904 (1) -
01:16:490 (1) -
01:23:514 (1) -

good luck~!!
thank you for the mod, all fixed
Rumia-
2,513 posts
Joined July 2012
Rumia-
fancy modding for the first time xdxd
General
Diff gap between each difficulty , tho i do feel the diff serves the purpose of its diff but the jump between normal to hard is really big imo , but Crystal hard is really nice

Easy > 0.65 > Normal > 1.40 > Hard > 1.28 > Insane > 0.80 > Red Lotus
-------|good|-------------|omg|---------|fairly but|-----------|dun|
------------------------------------------|questionable|--------|care|

Sekai
00:11:807 (1,2) - imo you can change this to 2 1/1 slider ,i think more accurately emphasis the instrument here
00:12:978 (3) - also the movement of the slider is a bit off , the first red slider tik should be at 00:13:417 - and the other one is at 00:13:563 - , also i feel ending this on white tick is better imo , red tick felt like missing something
00:15:904 (3,4) - suggest beat snap
1
00:18:831 (2) - end at 00:19:270 - better
00:28:563 - wut is this greenline for , and the next green line also on blu tick
00:38:734 (7) - nc ? combo here look so long than overall combo
00:43:709 (3,4) - lol blanket plz
idk but some of your reverse slider felt weird for me , 01:00:978 (1) - the correct beat to emphasis this is something like
2
01:20:880 (3) - this one too , its like you can do it like
3
imo more accurate , also dont really kill easy diff

Kiblueluelueluerooo
00:05:666 - add a circle ? should be consistent with the other beat on next section imo (also have a clap here )
00:38:880 (1,2) - i wonder why you stop following the vocal here , the transition is kinda a bit weird for me
00:39:904 (1,2,3,1) - idk xd i feel like it should be like this
1
00:54:978 (1) - remove finish on the head ? didnt hear any bassdrum ther
01:16:197 (5) - nc ?

xiaoxingxing > < > < > < > <
00:34:050 (1,2) - try this beat might be better
1
00:38:733 (1,2) - ^
01:20:441 (3,4) - also reverse this two beat
01:22:929 (5) - this slider reverse sounds wrong , since it should start at 01:23:075 - , but i suggest change this to a single circle at 01:22:929 - and start the spinner at 01:23:075 - would work better imo

Insane
00:06:685 (5) - how about putting this somewhere around x:208 y:152 , i think the transition is nicer
00:08:002 (4) - didnt actually get the use of 3/4 here though
00:09:465 (3) - shouldve nc this instead of 00:08:734 (1) - imo is more consistent , also to indicate the gap between 00:09:173 (2,3) -
00:20:002 (4,5) - same angle ?
00:21:173 (1,2,3) - i think its nicer if you lower some volume on these sliders tail imo would sound great , since the hihat sound felt off pace on the ends
00:36:099 (2,3) - maybe stack these , for aesthetics , since i dont see overlaps anywhere xd
00:37:856 - oo u still skipped this
00:48:978 (3) - move this to 1/2 beat earlier to emphasis the vocal ? which imo is more fitting since you've been following them over this part
00:51:026 (2) - just a personal suggestion . but i think its nicer to play if this is stacked to 00:51:173 (3) - , the current one is fine as well xD
00:59:221 (7,1,2) - this imo will play nice if you exchange the beat like
1
01:01:856 (5,6) - this one as well http://puu.sh/kyoYh.jpg , since here is the snare , i think circle fits here nicely and 01:02:002 - and 01:02:295 - are 2 seperate vocals which imo 2 1/2 slider works nicely
01:08:441 (3,4) - try something like
2
01:09:465 (3) - why dont you start the 1/4 here ?
01:17:953 - its fit to the rhythm if its like
3
01:19:563 (4,1,1) - ;w; y skip the nice beats

Red Lotus
00:21:612 - add a circle here would be nice imo
00:22:197 - ^
00:25:856 (5) - nc for consistency xd
00:40:343 (2,2) - these 2 feels so ghost , understand you want to make a jump here but this part is important to follow the dnbs since the dnb here is the best thing on this part
00:44:441 (2) - remove this felt better imo
00:48:978 (2) - same as i mention in insane , move it 1/2 beat earlier for vocal is better imo
00:52:636 (8,1) -
1
too tired to explain i just hope you understand what im saying ;w; , or poke me tomorrow if you want explaination on this suggestion
01:10:051 (9) - im sure u can spam more of those 1/4 sliders until 01:10:197 - since its highest diff xd
01:17:514 (4) - idk why u use slider here xd , if want to make it consistent , change 01:17:221 (1,2) - these to slider as well would be nice
01:24:246 (7) - make it as a slider as well like 01:23:807 (5) - ? nice imo xd
ok done watering mod xd xd glgl
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths

Rumia- wrote:

fancy modding for the first time xdxd
General
Diff gap between each difficulty , tho i do feel the diff serves the purpose of its diff but the jump between normal to hard is really big imo , but Crystal hard is really nice

Easy > 0.65 > Normal > 1.40 > Hard > 1.28 > Insane > 0.80 > Red Lotus
-------|good|-------------|omg|---------|fairly but|-----------|dun|
------------------------------------------|questionable|--------|care|

gonna talk with kibb about the normal and have crystal nerf somethings

xiaoxingxing > < > < > < > <
00:34:050 (1,2) - try this beat might be better the head and the circle are a double and this is fine imo
1
00:38:733 (1,2) - ^ same
01:20:441 (3,4) - also reverse this two beat done
01:22:929 (5) - this slider reverse sounds wrong , since it should start at 01:23:075 - , but i suggest change this to a single circle at 01:22:929 - and start the spinner at 01:23:075 - would work better imo
where this repeat starts is fine imo


Insane
00:06:685 (5) - how about putting this somewhere around x:208 y:152 , i think the transition is nicer ok
00:08:002 (4) - didnt actually get the use of 3/4 here though feels fine imo
00:09:465 (3) - shouldve nc this instead of 00:08:734 (1) - imo is more consistent , also to indicate the gap between 00:09:173 (2,3) - fixed
00:20:002 (4,5) - same angle ? fixed
00:21:173 (1,2,3) - i think its nicer if you lower some volume on these sliders tail imo would sound great , since the hihat sound felt off pace on the ends ok
00:36:099 (2,3) - maybe stack these , for aesthetics , since i dont see overlaps anywhere xd xd ok
00:37:856 - oo u still skipped this yea
00:48:978 (3) - move this to 1/2 beat earlier to emphasis the vocal ? which imo is more fitting since you've been following them over this part ok dad
00:51:026 (2) - just a personal suggestion . but i think its nicer to play if this is stacked to 00:51:173 (3) - , the current one is fine as well xD I like this ok dad
00:59:221 (7,1,2) - this imo will play nice if you exchange the beat like fixed
1
01:01:856 (5,6) - this one as well http://puu.sh/kyoYh.jpg , since here is the snare , i think circle fits here nicely and 01:02:002 - and 01:02:295 - are 2 seperate vocals which imo 2 1/2 slider works nicely =w=
01:08:441 (3,4) - try something like ok =w=
2
01:09:465 (3) - why dont you start the 1/4 here ? fixed
01:17:953 - its fit to the rhythm if its like fixed
3
01:19:563 (4,1,1) - ;w; y skip the nice beats
for hitsounding

Red Lotus
00:21:612 - add a circle here would be nice imo
00:22:197 - ^
00:25:856 (5) - nc for consistency xd
00:40:343 (2,2) - these 2 feels so ghost , understand you want to make a jump here but this part is important to follow the dnbs since the dnb here is the best thing on this part
00:44:441 (2) - remove this felt better imo
00:48:978 (2) - same as i mention in insane , move it 1/2 beat earlier for vocal is better imo
00:52:636 (8,1) -
1
too tired to explain i just hope you understand what im saying ;w; , or poke me tomorrow if you want explaination on this suggestion
01:10:051 (9) - im sure u can spam more of those 1/4 sliders until 01:10:197 - since its highest diff xd
01:17:514 (4) - idk why u use slider here xd , if want to make it consistent , change 01:17:221 (1,2) - these to slider as well would be nice
01:24:246 (7) - make it as a slider as well like 01:23:807 (5) - ? nice imo xd
ok done watering mod xd xd glgl
fixed most of the things on Red Lotus, and fixed Crystal's diff at his request

thanks for mod
Last edited by Depths , edited 1 time in total.
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
moop

[spoilerbox]osu file format v14

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72,88,57904,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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428,260,65660,5,4,0:0:0:0:
368,324,65953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,212,66831,5,4,0:0:0:0:
196,164,67124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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36,216,67709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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280,204,69173,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
translation request lol

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

I cant map EZNM and i dont know how to mod them...really sorry>_<!!!

[Crystal's Hard]
00:40:489 (3,4,1) - the edge on 4-1 doesnt look very good 00:40:928 (4) - x20 y202 00:41:075 (1) - x70y129 this looks better
01:01:563 (3) - feels like there's some purpose but playing feels the same……and it looks kinda bad.. just make a triangle?
00:56:295 (1) - move up and left a bit，stacking with 00:56:002 (3) - together doesnt look so good
good a (falls on the ground

good luck~!!
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths
Thanks Gaia
fixed all except
01:01:563 (3) - feels like there's some purpose but playing feels the same……and it looks kinda bad.. just make a triangle?
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
Placeholder!
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths
fixed the missing tags and unsnapped objects in Crystal's diff..
and waiting on Sekai to respond to Rumia's mod
MikasaSerket
520 posts
Joined December 2014
MikasaSerket
Hello friend, I shall mod your map~
Red lotus
00:07:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps just do not flow nicely. I would suggest maybe switching the six and seven 00:08:002 (6,7) - or just make an eiterly different jump
00:23:221 (1,1) - Although I am personally fine with this part. Other people might not be. Try not to overlap sliders like that. (You probably do not have to change it since it is in fact playable)
00:19:270 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Boring sliders and hitcircles. I understand that, that part of the song is a bit soft and slow but you can do more than that by maybe adding small jumps?
00:05:953 (1,2) - Make these two hit circles small jumps so that they would be more fun to play
00:08:880 (3,4) - Same goes for here
00:10:051 (3,4,5,6) - Combos five and six are not symmetrical to combos 3 and 4
00:24:392 (4,1,2) - I would suggest to try and blanket these sliders and hit circle
00:30:246 (3,4) - Those two just seem out of place
00:35:953 (2,3,4) - Change these hit circles to a slider to emphasis the part where she goes "waaaaah"
00:39:319 (1) - Get rid of this hit circle so that it matches the other jumps
01:03:173 (1) - This part is playable but the design of the slider just looks weird.
01:07:417 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - I just don't like these jumps because they do not match to the music and they just seem as if they were randomly placed, they also stay near the left side of the map. I would advise using the whole grid for these jumps
01:16:490 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You stayed towards the top of the map. Spread the hit circles and sliders through out the grid more
00:11:221 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps are confusing. Mostly combo four. Spread them out more
00:11:807 (1,1,1,1) - Instead of simple sliders like that. Spread them out more and turn those simple sliders into slider art if you want to.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3770661 Similar to what I did maybe
00:13:563 (5,6) - Turn these into 1/8 streams but that is optional
00:12:978 (1,2,3,4) - Increase the jumps so for more emphasis on the music
Here is what I did http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3770672http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3770673
00:16:490 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Spread these out
Insane
00:21:758 (2) - New combo
Lower the OD to 7 and the AR 8.5
00:26:880 (4,5,6,7,1) - What are these jumps, they are confusing to play
00:29:075 (2,3) - Too far
00:33:026 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These stacked jumps are just annoying to play
00:35:221 (1,2) - Switch 1 and 2
00:39:612 (3,1,2) - These are confusing
00:56:002 (3,4) - Start a new combo or make a different jump
01:07:709 (7) - Get rid of this
01:07:417 (6) - Turn to a reverse arrow
01:08:002 - 01:08:148 - Make a slider
01:09:173 (1,2) - Fix these because they are overlapping the stream
01:09:173 (1,2) - End the stream when she is talking
01:15:319 (4,5) - wut
01:16:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Confusing jumps
01:22:636 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Bad flow
I was lazy to mod the other difficulties I am sorry >_<
Hopefully I helped you in any way ^_^
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Depths

MikasaSerket wrote:

Hello friend, I shall mod your map~
Red lotus
00:07:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps just do not flow nicely. I would suggest maybe switching the six and seven 00:08:002 (6,7) - or just make an eiterly different jump I'll make a new pattern
00:23:221 (1,1) - Although I am personally fine with this part. Other people might not be. Try not to overlap sliders like that. (You probably do not have to change it since it is in fact playable) this is fine it plays the way I intended it to
00:19:270 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Boring sliders and hitcircles. I understand that, that part of the song is a bit soft and slow but you can do more than that by maybe adding small jumps? nope that would ruin what I wanted here
00:05:953 (1,2) - Make these two hit circles small jumps so that they would be more fun to play maybe
00:08:880 (3,4) - Same goes for here same as above
00:10:051 (3,4,5,6) - Combos five and six are not symmetrical to combos 3 and 4 intended
00:24:392 (4,1,2) - I would suggest to try and blanket these sliders and hit circle they are blanketed lol
00:30:246 (3,4) - Those two just seem out of place not really imo
00:35:953 (2,3,4) - Change these hit circles to a slider to emphasis the part where she goes "waaaaah" more drum focused here
00:39:319 (1) - Get rid of this hit circle so that it matches the other jumps meant to be consistent with 00:34:636 (1,2,3,4) -
01:03:173 (1) - This part is playable but the design of the slider just looks weird. leaving it as is for now
01:07:417 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - I just don't like these jumps because they do not match to the music and they just seem as if they were randomly placed, they also stay near the left side of the map. I would advise using the whole grid for these jumps following drums
01:16:490 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You stayed towards the top of the map. Spread the hit circles and sliders through out the grid more spaced a little more
00:11:221 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps are confusing. Mostly combo four. Spread them out more fine imo
00:11:807 (1,1,1,1) - Instead of simple sliders like that. Spread them out more and turn those simple sliders into slider art if you want to. I like this personally
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3770661 Similar to what I did maybe
00:13:563 (5,6) - Turn these into 1/8 streams but that is optional nop
00:12:978 (1,2,3,4) - Increase the jumps so for more emphasis on the music spaced a little more
Here is what I did http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3770672http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3770673
00:16:490 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Spread these out
not what I want here
Insane
00:21:758 (2) - New combo no reason to NC here
Lower the OD to 7 and the AR 8.5 that would ruin this
00:26:880 (4,5,6,7,1) - What are these jumps, they are confusing to play fixed a little
00:29:075 (2,3) - Too far for vocal emphasis
00:33:026 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These stacked jumps are just annoying to play following drums
00:35:221 (1,2) - Switch 1 and 2 why?
00:39:612 (3,1,2) - These are confusing not really NC is used to show what Im doing
00:56:002 (3,4) - Start a new combo or make a different jump its just like 00:54:831 (1,2,3) -
01:07:709 (7) - Get rid of this no reason to
01:07:417 (6) - Turn to a reverse arrow nope
01:08:002 - 01:08:148 - Make a slider drums lol
01:09:173 (1,2) - Fix these because they are overlapping the stream its stack so its fine
01:09:173 (1,2) - End the stream when she is talking what Im mapping the stream to doesn't end there though
01:15:319 (4,5) - wut xd
01:16:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Confusing jumps nope, they can be read clearly
01:22:636 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Bad flow
fixed a little
I was lazy to mod the other difficulties I am sorry >_<
Hopefully I helped you in any way ^_^
thanks for the mod
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
Here I am

[Sekai's Easy]
  1. 00:37:563 - For me, skipping this beat isn't really nice idea here . You mostly follow the vocals in this map, so there's a reason to have this beat being audible . Shorten this slider 00:37:124 (1) - and make it end here is the easiest way to catch the beat . I guess it's fine to have 3/2 gap here, for the sake of nice rhythm playability
  2. 01:07:709 (4) - I found this circle here is not really intuitive to follow, as 01:06:831 (3) - indicates the lower placement for it . Make it like this will nice for the movement, to match it with the indication of 01:06:831 (3) - . I moved 01:07:709 (4) - to 252|256 in the image below
    SPOILER
  3. 01:22:051 (1) - Spinner please . Scoreboard with many of same scores is boring
[Kibboo's Normal]
  1. 00:04:636 (2) - This slider deserve to have new combo, because of that cymbal sound
  2. 00:23:221 (2,1) - I'm a little afraid for this, since you stacked 1/2 notes before with the same like this (It's really subjective though)
  3. 00:41:953 (3) - How about adding a reverse to this slider? 00:42:246 - seems needs a filling . If you do, it will create 2/1 gap and would be more easier to read
  4. 00:50:295 - I think this beat still holds the rhythm from 00:49:270 (1) - (the long sound), so I feel leaving it empty like this, makes a bad sense to me . I would like to see this beat being mapped, so it will make a nice stop momentum and catch the rhythm entirely
[Crystal's Hard]
  1. Nice
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:636 (3) - Same with Normal, new combo will suits nicely
  2. 00:36:539 (1,2) - Maybe, enlarge the spacing here a bit? 00:36:831 (2,3) - this sudden 1/2 might surprise players, so that more further away the 1/1, players might ready to catch large 1/2 here
  3. 00:48:978 (1) - I think this spinner started too early from what I heard . It must be 1/2 apart to cover the vocals, and 1/1 apart to cover the strong beat that appears later than the vocals here 00:49:270 -
  4. 00:53:660 (1,3) - Maybe swap new combo? (3) has the cymbal sound on it, at it's placed on downbeat too, so that (3) have more support to have the respective new combo than the currently on (1)
  5. 00:56:148 (4) - Why is the spacing to this circle is more larger than to 00:56:295 (1) - ? I don't see any reason for this, because all of the emphasis lands on 00:56:295 (1) - , not at (4)
  6. 00:56:587 (1) - Why there is a new combo?
  7. 00:56:587 (1,2) - Would like to having this vocal 00:56:734 - gets the emphasis, so switching the rhythm between these two will work for it
  8. 00:57:758 (1) - See the question of new combo above | Continuing this question, it would be nice to put the new combo here 00:58:636 (4) - instead
  9. 01:03:904 (1) - Again?
  10. 01:24:099 (1) - I would like to transform this slider into 2 circles . This allow you to catch the emphasis on each of its beat with more precise than by using a slider like this
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  11. Check your combo again . There are few errors around the section before the song ends
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Sorry I didn't mod " Red Lotus " . I feel it needs more improvements on it, so I'd like to touch it later if it's pretty decent and looks awesome . Try out to find out more mods to this diff
Good Luck!
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