hello there, I don't know if my suggestion can be useful here :3
00:19:924 (9,10,1,2) - I don't really like the flow in here. From (9) to (10) and from (10) to (1), the flow is quite awkward. I feel like you should do a CTRL+G on (10,1) and move (2) to x:436 y:152
Thank you for taking a look but I believe that sharp movement from (9) to (10) is much better here. Also the pic you suggested makes the spacing reeeeally huge and would make the part stand out too much.
As for why this isn't pushed forward yet, I kinda lost interest in this game and I'm really lazy when it comes to finding BNs.