Zectro wrote:

oh B OY

haven't modded in a long time so itll prob suck im sorry ill try my best :c


Cant really find anything in the beginning, seeing some cool patterns like 00:16:324 (1,2,3) - and 00:28:774 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - that I would like to have seen a bit more further into the map, since I felt like it gets pretty repetitive later on - i would but i don't really know where to fit them

01:07:024 (2,3) - These are a bit of an issue at the moment, I suggest thinking about a way to make the timing of those clearer to the player, but I can't come up with anything viable at the moment. - can't really do much about them... making them sliders wouldn't help at all with the upcoming scorev2 (and i probably won't be able to rank this before that) and snapping them to 1/2 is wrong snapping and my autism prevents me from doing that. i could add an NC to them if that helps the player but i'll listen to more opinions on this

Kinda getting tired of the x0,30 spaced streams at this point - this whole thing is pretty much constructed around them and just making random spacings for these would be inconsistent af

How about 01:14:224 (2) - to x141y230 and 01:15:424 (2) - to uhhh somewhere further away too. It makes the whole slow part a bit less anticlimactic - i spaced them a bit more but not really that much since this part feels so much more less intense to me

01:17:824 (2,3,1,2) - This is extremely confusing to time properly again

the x0,30 streams are getting pretty darn annoying to me again at this point, but whatever, personal opinion

01:32:224 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is very cool, nice to see it - i also like it very much

after this point i just really dont enjoy the x0,30 streams anymore, it's just been too much, and since you can't really do much with the spacing since it's so tiny, it gets repetitive - repetitive song = repetitive map i guess

02:10:174 (1) - you have a bit of a problem here since the guitar sound seems to be at around 02:10:436 - so the slidertail sounds offsync, even if you are druming again - yea the guitar sound seems to end in 1/6 but i'm following the drums ya. I'm taking suggestions for this too

02:47:355 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I felt like this stream should be more to the left, further away from 02:48:136 (2) - while playing - sure

02:51:730 (2) - this is very confusing lol, im pretty sure everyone would think it was shorter than it is, i think even something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5037078 this would work better, or make it a kickslider instead of a circle - did something else but should be better now

00:09:124 - 03:08:136 - just making sure that ur aware of this hitsound inconsistency - not inconsistent shit it was inconsistent lol

03:59:807 (1,1) - 03:37:080 (3,9) - 03:45:262 (1,1) - just making sure that ur aware of this nc inconsistency - i'll just nc every white tick

last kiai is fun lol nice job - SLIDERS

oh boy the x0,30 streams again - o baby

05:08:847 (2) - i recommend using the same position for this as you did for 05:07:647 (2) - again i just spaced stuff a bit further cause my autismo emphasis thing

Well that was quite a ride, very clean map, just personally dislike the x0,30 spacing streams, which is my biggest 'problem' with the map as they become rather boring quick. I hope I was at least somewhat helpful! gl! - thänks man!!

Strategas wrote:

aa

why the fuk do you have 2 mp3 files in there lol. delete this vektor_-_tetrastructural_minds-1tAbcWrrIQU_fmt43Dissonant Existence112BPM.mp3 - wat is dis wtf
delete normal-hitfinish66.wav - unused - ops

00:34:624 (4) - make this face up, just like 00:34:924 (7) - faces down, it will look better with the blanket and the previous slider, you could also manually stack the tripp 00:34:774 (5,6,7) - so it would be the opposite of the autostacking thing at 00:34:474 (2,3,4) - syur
00:35:524 (1,2) - because of autostack the stream last note has broken spacing 00:35:074 (8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - it's all 1x spacing ant the last one is 0.9x, additionally I don't tlike it being stacked right under that stream even if you follow that patern - tried to fix but consistency sounds nice but playability sounds also nice aaaaaaaaa what am i gonna do
00:44:524 (2) - nc? - ye sure
00:46:624 (3) - ctrl g? I think it flows better atm 00:46:474 (2,3,4) - plays kinda ehh - ctrl+g'd
00:53:674 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this shape tho wot - it's good. you're supposed to like it.
00:57:274 (2) - ctrl g much more comfortable - k
00:58:324 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - do you expect people to sightread this lul, sliders would be more safe - i made it one slider. yea just one. don't question my logic
01:06:724 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is even more confusing, sliders would be better again, additionally since you change snapping - nc on 01:07:024 (2,2) - or 01:07:224 (3,3) - would be good to indicate it - sliders would kinda destroy the "idea" behind this. and scorev2 will fuck this up.
01:10:774 (3) - wut happened to this slider, it's no extended like 01:09:574 (6) - 01:11:974 (6) - "rythm choices" and it should be consistent... hopefully
01:14:374 - for me it feels more natural to click the guitar here instead of the drum at 01:14:524 (3) - I'd use the slider there instead, or atleast add a circle
01:15:724 (3) - same - that's also what i thought first but now my mind only pretty much detects the drums there pls send help!!! aka i'll try to figure something
01:16:624 (2,3) - 01:17:824 (2,3) - I'd say same as before, but this rhythm repeats from before now, so it can be more easy to guess
01:32:224 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - cool - i like this too weeeeeee
01:43:624 (7,8,9,10,1) - not cool XD 01:48:424 (7,8,9,10,1) - this one is ok tho, mb do it liek the later one - k tried to fix stuff asdf
02:05:224 (5,1) - flow dood, the transition into slider is poor, just put 02:05:224 (5) - on the other side like around 428,248 - well it doesn't feel weird to play at all so there shouldn't be any flow problems here... maybe it's just because of that slidershape and angle stuff asdfg
02:14:524 (1) - aaa don't overlap so much, 02:16:924 (1) - this is better, but still can be less overlapped - i tried
02:46:574 (1) - just move the whole patern 02:45:324 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - down so you wouldn't run out of space like that and it will avoid these zz overlaps - well i didn't really run out of space but moved it a bit down
02:59:542 (3) - autostacking fuks up your spacing again, it kinda happens too often, mb reduce the stack lienency setting - fixed and reduced the stack leniency
03:07:042 (4) - this slider seems out of place to me, considering you also use 3 curved ones 03:06:574 (1,2,3) - , can try making the 3 straigth too and changing the 4 position a bit - d
03:09:699 - fix green line sample, red and green both have different ones - yefix
05:18:447 (4) - nc - y
05:18:447 (4,5,6,7,8) - improve the curve yes - wot

screams

1. 00:58:324 (1) - I never ever expect repeat sliders to be more than 3 points. Id cut this to 3 and have 2 of them.
2. 01:04:024 (1,2,1) - Now I remember pointing out similar stuff in my mod of the first version and you denying them. But you're ignoring a 1/4 Tar stream here in favour for some weird drum stuff. Not sure about that. Theres one the exact same later on as well.
3. 03:28:497 (1,2,3,4,1) - Just for shits and giggles you can easily get away with this being more spaced. I think it deserves it anyways.
4. 04:26:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, previous mod PTSD, but following the drums here played a bit weird. Id stick with guitar IMO.
5. 05:00:897 (2) - You may wanna consider making this a slider just to make the transition easier.

The Fetish wrote:

Hey man. Sorry but I gotta be honest. I think this map is fine so I cant give it a mod. Take my star instead holy.

There are a couple quick opinions Ill throw at you though.

1. 00:58:324 (1) - I never ever expect repeat sliders to be more than 3 points. Id cut this to 3 and have 2 of them. - since a few people wanted me to do this i did it
2. 01:04:024 (1,2,1) - Now I remember pointing out similar stuff in my mod of the first version and you denying them. But you're ignoring a 1/4 Tar stream here in favour for some weird drum stuff. Not sure about that. Theres one the exact same later on as well. - don't think i had this in my previous ver. Keeping this cause guitar is also doing 1/3 random stuff
3. 03:28:497 (1,2,3,4,1) - Just for shits and giggles you can easily get away with this being more spaced. I think it deserves it anyways. - lol sure
4. 04:26:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, previous mod PTSD, but following the drums here played a bit weird. Id stick with guitar IMO. - i'll stick with this for now. I want to make stuff come out in some ways so if the music changes = my mapping changes
5. 05:00:897 (2) - You may wanna consider making this a slider just to make the transition easier. - nah i definitely want to have that double for the snares

Jesus, if I make BN next round and this still isnt ranked. Expect this to be a minute 1 bubble on my watch. - OK

GL

havkz wrote:

shouldnt there be a kiai at 05:14:547? no kd

Maakkeli wrote:

an riktoi im not home atm so im just reviving it every few hours just for shits and giggles

1. 00:04:924 (1) - these could use the whistle these have 00:10:924 (1) -
2. 00:32:074 (4) - you can make the followpoints from and to this slider parallel
3. 00:49:174 (4,5) - I get that you focus on the snare drums after these, but at least make this a single click/stand out from the upcoming drum roll somehow, with a 1/4 slider instead of 3/4 like before I guess
4. 00:58:324 (1,2) - the notes are sooo individual there, they have super high pitch guitar and snare drums at the same time, I would definitely make those sliders circles, it's a 6.4* map, don't hesitate to use rhythms like that, players that play them won't have problems
5. 01:04:124 (2) - you can make this parallel with the follow point from the next combo
6. 01:13:774 (7) - missed a snare drum hitsound and it isn't differently mapped, could probably make a 1/4 slider and a jump to the next notes
7. 01:40:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this curve as sharp as 01:40:699 (6,7,8,9,10) - is
8. 01:57:124 (1,2) - 01:56:824 (5,6) - follow points could be parallel real easily by moving 01:57:124 (1) -
9. 02:02:974 (1) - custom hitsounds for the tick maybe?
10. 02:23:824 (5,6,7) - this curve kinda looks ugly I'd only curve it up twice like in the last stream with this few notes on such low spacing
11. 02:28:324 (1) - curves inconsistent on this one could look better
12. 02:33:124 (1) - on spacing like this I would just curve it once, it looks a bit messy right now happens a few more times like here 02:37:924 (1) - , looks good here 02:39:124 (2) -
13. 02:45:480 (2,3,4) - I'd move this away further from the slider, seems too close now, to like x244 y26 (absolute spacing)
14. 02:51:886 (4) - kinda weird that the last 2 reverse arrows are of bass drum and they're still only reverse arrows, could make a triple into a reverse slider that's 1/4 here then continue on the snare drums
15. 02:57:042 (2,3,4) - GET CYMBAL RAID OR WHATEVER HITSOUNDS YOU BITCH
16. 03:06:730 (2) - looks much better if placed at x479 y260 cause then follow points are parallel and absolute spacing
17. 03:20:420 (1) - this whole stream feels like it's supposed to be much more spaced compared to 03:18:112 (1) -
18. 03:27:487 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks better if it's CTRL+J'd
19. 03:30:227 (1) - all of these sound like they're the same pitch, I would probably use the spacing of 03:31:525 (1) - and onward for all of them and just make sharp angles every 6 notes
20. 05:18:447 (1,2,3,4,5) - space these out more for sure, snare drums, I would also increase spacing of everything after that, it seems so underwhelming right now

Mazzerin wrote:

1. 00:04:924 (1) - these could use the whistle these have 00:10:924 (1) - ok
2. 00:32:074 (4) - you can make the followpoints from and to this slider parallel - ok
3. 00:49:174 (4,5) - I get that you focus on the snare drums after these, but at least make this a single click/stand out from the upcoming drum roll somehow, with a 1/4 slider instead of 3/4 like before I guess - tbh i think this current thing works better cause you can kinda hear the song already changing in that part. And also I feel like it's a cooler way to introduce those snares
4. 00:58:324 (1,2) - the notes are sooo individual there, they have super high pitch guitar and snare drums at the same time, I would definitely make those sliders circles, it's a 6.4* map, don't hesitate to use rhythms like that, players that play them won't have problems - https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5139460 ok
5. 01:04:124 (2) - you can make this parallel with the follow point from the next combo - did something but no one will notice it lol
6. 01:13:774 (7) - missed a snare drum hitsound and it isn't differently mapped, could probably make a 1/4 slider and a jump to the next notes - ok. didn't do a big jump but w/e
7. 01:40:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this curve as sharp as 01:40:699 (6,7,8,9,10) - is - made 6,7,8,9,10 less sharp and spaced 01:41:224 (2,3,4) - more
8. 01:57:124 (1,2) - 01:56:824 (5,6) - follow points could be parallel real easily by moving 01:57:124 (1) - ok
9. 02:02:974 (1) - custom hitsounds for the tick maybe? - ok
10. 02:23:824 (5,6,7) - this curve kinda looks ugly I'd only curve it up twice like in the last stream with this few notes on such low spacing - ok
11. 02:28:324 (1) - curves inconsistent on this one could look better -it's still a bit inconsistent but i don't give a shit anymore
12. 02:33:124 (1) - on spacing like this I would just curve it once, it looks a bit messy right now happens a few more times like here 02:37:924 (1) - , looks good here 02:39:124 (2) - i think i fixed them
13. 02:45:480 (2,3,4) - I'd move this away further from the slider, seems too close now, to like x244 y26 (absolute spacing) - ok
14. 02:51:886 (4) - kinda weird that the last 2 reverse arrows are of bass drum and they're still only reverse arrows, could make a triple into a reverse slider that's 1/4 here then continue on the snare drums - 1/6 triples
15. 02:57:042 (2,3,4) - GET CYMBAL RAID OR WHATEVER HITSOUNDS YOU BITCH - fuck you ok
16. 03:06:730 (2) - looks much better if placed at x479 y260 cause then follow points are parallel and absolute spacing - ok
17. 03:20:420 (1) - this whole stream feels like it's supposed to be much more spaced compared to 03:18:112 (1) - ctrl+s
18. 03:27:487 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks better if it's CTRL+J'd - i like this more
19. 03:30:227 (1) - all of these sound like they're the same pitch, I would probably use the spacing of 03:31:525 (1) - and onward for all of them and just make sharp angles every 6 notes - sr 6.37 > 6.44
20. 05:18:447 (1,2,3,4,5) - space these out more for sure, snare drums, I would also increase spacing of everything after that, it seems so underwhelming right now - ok

DaniilLillifag wrote:

okay perhaps I will write a few pleb suggestions, hopefully it wil be helped you with map

00:04:474 (8,1) - located too close, move stream up (found something to complain about huh) - ok
00:08:974 (3,4) - 00:11:974 (3,4) - maybe make here kicksliders to emphasize drums? also will be a bright contrast: two streams without kickslider (00:04:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 00:13:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ) and two streams with kickslider (00:07:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 00:10:924 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ) - nah i want that to be full out on guitar
00:30:424 (1,6) - stack it as you did in the 00:26:524 (1,5) - not even the same thing?
00:39:424 (5,6) - make here kicksliders to emphasize strong guitar sounds - i don't use kicksliders in this part at all. Notice that all guitar sounds are just circles
00:42:274 (4,3) - stack - ok
00:49:024 (3,3,4) - bad overlap imo, maybe ctrl+j on 00:49:174 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? - i don't think this is that big of a deal
00:58:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - put here claps - lol i forgot
01:09:124 (1) - make here kickslider: 1) contrasted with 01:08:674 (1,2,3) - 2) emphasize vocal (i hear vocal piece in 01:09:199 - ) - i don't think i added kicksliders in similar places so no. Also i don't really care about vocals so
01:15:574 - i hear guitar sound here, starting slider 01:15:724 (3) - here
01:14:374 - ^ - wanted to map the drums only in this part so the intensity change is clear
01:26:674 (2,5) - wrong stack - how did you even see that
03:10:792 (3,4) - make here kickslider - same reason as stated before
03:48:444 (5,3) - too close, fix it kinda demanding that "fix it" lol. yea did it
04:01:625 - 04:22:791 - in this part i hear some triples, maybe mapped it? - hmm those are not really prominent enough for me to map them
04:06:958 (1,3) - fix blanket - i don't like blankets
04:10:291 (3) - more curve end of slider (move point left) to blanket was definitely right - no
04:20:291 (1,3) - fix blanket - same as above
04:26:395 (1) - move this slider right, to blanket with 04:26:864 (3) - didn't do that but i did something other that part was bugging me lol
04:37:489 (8,9,10) - make this triple direct, to contrsted with previous direct burst - nah this is good. and this flows nicely too
04:44:788 (5,1) - make here blanket
04:46:253 (7,4,5) - ^
04:48:723 (1,5) - ^ - no
04:51:747 (1,2) - add finishes here - ok
05:01:047 (3) - here i hear stronger drum than in 05:01:122 (4,5,6,1) - , maybe emphasize it as in 05:00:822 (1,2) - ? - looks ugly doe
05:06:947 (4) - ctrl+g - nah i like this way more

end of mod~

good luck

1. Why HP 6? The map isn't super hard, its just fairly streamy, a higher HP like 6.5 or 7 would probably be more proper I'd think.
2. 00:03:124 (1,2) - I think it'd be a good idea to buff these to about 3.0 DS like you have 00:06:124 (1,2) - here to better separate them (momentum-wise and visually) from the guitar part after.
3. 00:09:874 (4,5) - The 5 needs to be nerfed since the spacing here is more reminiscent of the drum hits.
4. 00:10:474 (8,9,1,2) - Change the general positioning of this triplet so that 1>2 can get more DS. Currently this is the same size as 00:06:124 (1,2) - though this one is stronger. Make it around 3.25 or you can use the previous approx DS of 3.16
5. 00:12:124 (1,2) - Buff.
6. 00:12:874 (4,5) - Nerf.
7. 00:13:474 (8,9,1,2) - Buff.
8. 00:20:074 (10,1,2) - The flow here is a bit clunky, moving the 2 so that it 10>1>2 is more of a zig-zag pattern (by moving it to the right and up a bit) will help with these. You'll probably need to move 00:20:524 (3,4,5) - to the right a bit to compensate as well.
9. 00:23:674 (6,7,8) - Why are these not connected to the slider compared to the rest?
10. 00:36:724 (1,2,3,4) - 00:37:624 (1,2,3,4) - Both of these have increasing pitches compared to the original (00:35:824 (1,2,3,4) - ) so that should be emphasized by slightly larger DS on at least the 3,4.
11. 00:40:624 (1,2) - The location of this in respect to the previous patterns is kind of random. Perhaps move it to the left a bit (since you'll probably be buffing the next jumsp anyway).
12. 00:40:924 (1,2,3,4) - 00:41:824 (1,2,3,4) - Buff 3,4.
13. 00:59:124 (5) - Not a huge fan of the lack of DS here. The guitar here is at a constant pitch when means the jumps should have relatively consistent pitch. Reworking the entire pattern to suit that isn't really necessary, though, just this jump that needs to be buffed.
14. 01:04:024 (1,2) - Just curious as to the design choice here. I think it works NC wise but the spacing seems kind of bland. What made you settle on this and not something larger/more movement?
15. 02:59:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - It may be worth it to buff the DS on these even more to emphasize the huge change in guitar. Maybe another .1 like you did here 03:04:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - .
16. 03:07:824 - For the small musical call-back section that starts here, if you accepted the previous changes from the other section make sure to apply them here as well.
17. 03:18:977 (3,4,5) - Not really getting the stack here musically. If you listen to the guitar its kind of a constant increase with no weird shenanigans so I'd try to reflect that in your jump pattern with just a standard expanding pattern.
18. 03:37:989 (1,2,3,1) - Theres no real difference between this and 03:37:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these though there is a clear gap here, musically. I'd do something similar to what you did here 03:45:716 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - .
19. 04:05:958 (3,4) - 04:11:291 (3,4) - These are a lot more spaced than 04:16:624 (3,4) - 04:21:958 (3,4) - . I'd lean towards nerfing the first two I listed instead of buffing the second two. Overall, though, I'd look at the jumps in this general musical section and consider nerfing a few, because if you look at the next section 04:22:958 - you'll see that the guitar is more intense yet the spacing is kind of similar. The BPM change won't factor in that much either.
20. 04:36:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This pattern gives me cancer, visually. Is there a better alternative you can come up with?
21. 04:42:958 - Can you explain the spacing patterns and changes to me in this kiai? Personally, I think it needs a bit of a rework to better reflect the guitar's building intensity. It kind of sounds like Bum Bum Bum BUM to me, where the 4th part is always emphasized heavily compared to the previous 3. In some places you kind of captured it, but in others like 04:50:212 (4,5,6,7) - here it seems really underwhelming. I'll wait to actually suggest changed, though, as I'd like to know your concept here first since it isn't immediately evident to me.
22. 04:57:447 (5,6,7,8,1) - I think this is meant to be a blanket around 04:56:997 (3) - and it should probably be tidied up a bit because its lopsided at the moment.
23. 05:06:747 (3,4) - I get that the drum is really quiet on these slider ends, but it sounds pretty bad at this volume, raise it to like 40% or something so that the second his is a lot more prevalent during a play-through.
24. Yeah thats about it for this round, call me back.

Cryptic wrote:

[Dissonant Existence]

1. Why HP 6? The map isn't super hard, its just fairly streamy, a higher HP like 6.5 or 7 would probably be more proper I'd think. - hp6.5
2. 00:03:124 (1,2) - I think it'd be a good idea to buff these to about 3.0 DS like you have 00:06:124 (1,2) - here to better separate them (momentum-wise and visually) from the guitar part after. - ok
3. 00:09:874 (4,5) - The 5 needs to be nerfed since the spacing here is more reminiscent of the drum hits. - ok
4. 00:10:474 (8,9,1,2) - Change the general positioning of this triplet so that 1>2 can get more DS. Currently this is the same size as 00:06:124 (1,2) - though this one is stronger. Make it around 3.25 or you can use the previous approx DS of 3.16 - d, triple*
5. 00:12:124 (1,2) - Buff. - d
6. 00:12:874 (4,5) - Nerf. - only a bit
7. 00:13:474 (8,9,1,2) - Buff. dunno how this even happened
8. 00:20:074 (10,1,2) - The flow here is a bit clunky, moving the 2 so that it 10>1>2 is more of a zig-zag pattern (by moving it to the right and up a bit) will help with these. You'll probably need to move 00:20:524 (3,4,5) - to the right a bit to compensate as well. - maaan i tesplayed this part like 10 times and it felt fine every time.
9. 00:23:674 (6,7,8) - Why are these not connected to the slider compared to the rest? - idk
10. 00:36:724 (1,2,3,4) - 00:37:624 (1,2,3,4) - Both of these have increasing pitches compared to the original (00:35:824 (1,2,3,4) - ) so that should be emphasized by slightly larger DS on at least the 3,4. - i was just emphasizing the snare hits on (4) by spacing that the furthest (had to fix one spacing tho cause shit fucked up
11. 00:40:624 (1,2) - The location of this in respect to the previous patterns is kind of random. Perhaps move it to the left a bit (since you'll probably be buffing the next jumsp anyway). - it's not random. Cause the song does a pretty drastic change when coming from (4)... but i moved it a bit left to give (1) more emphasis
12. 00:40:924 (1,2,3,4) - 00:41:824 (1,2,3,4) - Buff 3,4.
13. 00:59:124 (5) - Not a huge fan of the lack of DS here. The guitar here is at a constant pitch when means the jumps should have relatively consistent pitch. Reworking the entire pattern to suit that isn't really necessary, though, just this jump that needs to be buffed. - stacked to stream
14. 01:04:024 (1,2) - Just curious as to the design choice here. I think it works NC wise but the spacing seems kind of bland. What made you settle on this and not something larger/more movement? - no idea. I tried a bunch of other variations and this worked best for the drums. And making this some spaced triplet thingy would be pretty random imo lol
15. 02:59:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - It may be worth it to buff the DS on these even more to emphasize the huge change in guitar. Maybe another .1 like you did here 03:04:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - . - good inconsistency
16. 03:07:824 - For the small musical call-back section that starts here, if you accepted the previous changes from the other section make sure to apply them here as well. - hm looks like i did somewhat other spacing here but it should be pretty consistent now
17. 03:18:977 (3,4,5) - Not really getting the stack here musically. If you listen to the guitar its kind of a constant increase with no weird shenanigans so I'd try to reflect that in your jump pattern with just a standard expanding pattern. - hmm after listening to this a couple times i feel like doing more stacks would fit so i did that lmao
18. 03:37:989 (1,2,3,1) - Theres no real difference between this and 03:37:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these though there is a clear gap here, musically. I'd do something similar to what you did here 03:45:716 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - . - slider
19. 04:05:958 (3,4) - 04:11:291 (3,4) - These are a lot more spaced than 04:16:624 (3,4) - 04:21:958 (3,4) - . I'd lean towards nerfing the first two I listed instead of buffing the second two. Overall, though, I'd look at the jumps in this general musical section and consider nerfing a few, because if you look at the next section 04:22:958 - you'll see that the guitar is more intense yet the spacing is kind of similar. The BPM change won't factor in that much either. - k i tried to nerf this part idk how much of it's actually noticeable
20. 04:36:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This pattern gives me cancer, visually. Is there a better alternative you can come up with? - imo this is one of the less cancerous visuals in the map pls
21. 04:42:958 - Can you explain the spacing patterns and changes to me in this kiai? Personally, I think it needs a bit of a rework to better reflect the guitar's building intensity. It kind of sounds like Bum Bum Bum BUM to me, where the 4th part is always emphasized heavily compared to the previous 3. In some places you kind of captured it, but in others like 04:50:212 (4,5,6,7) - here it seems really underwhelming. I'll wait to actually suggest changed, though, as I'd like to know your concept here first since it isn't immediately evident to me. - to me these always sounded pretty much equal, only every bpm reset being the most powerful. I change spacings a bit so that the bpm reset places are more emphasized.
22. 04:57:447 (5,6,7,8,1) - I think this is meant to be a blanket around 04:56:997 (3) - and it should probably be tidied up a bit because its lopsided at the moment. - something done
23. 05:06:747 (3,4) - I get that the drum is really quiet on these slider ends, but it sounds pretty bad at this volume, raise it to like 40% or something so that the second his is a lot more prevalent during a play-through. - let's call it 35% and we have a deal
24. Yeah thats about it for this round, call me back.

Maakkeli wrote:

thanks Yuii-

1. 00:39:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why continue the finish spam here when its not here 00:42:874 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - at all? I recommend removing the whistles.
2. 00:45:124 (1) - Shouldn't this be N:C7? The whistle-like sound should be represented on this slider somehow.
3. 01:41:374 (4) - Fix HS
4. 02:57:745 (5) - Uh?
5. 03:09:699 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 03:12:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These had the whistle in the opening section on the beginning of the NC's, why not here?
6. Overall I recommend spamming that whistle-like hitsound a bit less, or find a substitution for it in some places, because its honestly a bit overused and loses some of it's impact.
7. 04:43:881 (7,8,1) - Transition here is a bit awkward and kind of large for the beginning of this buildup.
8. 04:49:505 (7,8,1) - Large, needs a nerf on the 8,1