Yo o/ Sorry for the late mod back, I was struggling with time and motivation haha, alright let's see :3
Suggestion
Highly reccommend changing
Visual/technical things that you missed
[Dissonant Existence]
Suggestion
Highly reccommend changing
Visual/technical things that you missed
[Dissonant Existence]
- 00:02:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - These jumps feel almost identical to 00:03:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - even though they follow a whole different part of the song, I'd recommend changing their position/pattern so it's easier to see that they are following different instruments, since the nc changes don't really say that much
- 01:16:324 (1,2,3) - Here this spacing kinda works.. but at 01:17:524 (1,2,3) - the spacing is just too confusing
- 01:32:149 (9) - You forgot to nc this one. Since you DID nc 01:27:349 (1) -
- 01:49:924 (1,2,3) - 01:51:124 (1,2,3) - 01:59:524 (1,2,3) - 02:00:724 (1,2,3) - For these goes the same as mentioned earlier, I get that you obviously have thought this out already and have reasoning for this but it really doesn't feel well at all. Not going to mention any future ones
- 02:15:349 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - Nc patterns are extremely inconsistent.. 02:20:149 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) -
- 02:52:824 (1) - This shape is kinda unexpected.. I'd suggest changing it a bit, so it's easier to follow from 02:52:667 (2) -
- 03:07:199 (5,6,7,8,9) - Could look better, specially the slider
- 03:28:929 (2,3,4) - Spacing here looks kinda meh, 03:28:929 (2,3) - could be a bit further away from eachother so it looks better
- 03:40:716 (4) - Eh I don't think this is rankable because it basically goes back into itself which is unrankable
- 03:45:262 (7) - I would recommend changing the direction or something here, ofcourse use NC if you decide to do so, since it fits the melody WAY better
- 03:46:171 (13) - And here you could like go back in the direction you were going with 03:44:353 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or something, just do something else again and NC if you decide to do so
- 03:56:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - You should do something crazy with the spacing here that fits the music
- 03:58:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Change directions again with nc's at 03:59:353 (4) - 03:59:807 (7) - 04:00:262 (10) - 04:00:716 (13) - 04:01:171 (16) - , just a little bit, but do SOMETHING at least
- 05:04:051 (8,10) - Noticed this overlap that you should avoid