BoberOfDarkness wrote:

change artist to "xi"

1. 00:01:745 (2) - No beat here - You could use a slider from 1 to 2 tho
2. 00:06:395 (3,4) - Either remove (3) or add another note on the red tick after (4)
3. 00:07:445 (6,7,8,1) - Idk about thios part you skipo so much in the music ~ Try this
4. 00:09:245 (17) - this one is curved too much (I messed up thecombo there in my version upps :^) )
5. 00:10:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream doesnt look appealing try the slider to stream convert to make it look more smooth
6. 00:14:945 (4,5) - The DS is too close it doesnt flow nice (if you want to keep it fix the blanket)
7. 00:15:845 (3,4) - ^
8. 00:16:895 (1,2,3) - I would use 4 notes + 1/2 slider
9. 00:17:495 (4) - Use a double and then the slider from white to red tick
10. 00:18:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Those have to be 5 notes starting on the white tick each
11. 00:19:145 () - and 00:19:220 () - Add notes
12. 00:28:445 (5) - end this on the white tick and place a note on the red tick, where the slider used to end
13. 00:29:345 (1,2,3) - this is 1/3rd Snap Devisor and I would prefer 4 singles then
14. 00:30:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try to place more fitting jumps in here to get a better flow and look where the r. sliders end
15. 00:34:482 (12,13) - Overlap with the stream
16. 00:35:345 (2,4,5) - ^
17. 00:37:895 (4,5) - Strong beat on sliderend - You should make it clickable (1/2 Slidere here 00:37:895 (4) - and 00:38:195 (4) - here
18. 00:38:645 (1) - Shorten it to the red tick and place a note where it used to end on
19. 00:40:295 (1,2) - Either use 2 1/2 slider here or make (2) a reversed slider
20. 00:43:370 (7) - Overmapped
21. 00:44:120 (2) - ^
22. 00:45:245 (9) - Skiüüing too much in the song
23. 00:45:695 (10,11,12,13) - Timing
24. 00:55:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - This doesnt look good tbh make the curve better
25. 00:56:345 (9) - NC
26. 01:02:645 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Not fitting for an Insane; You're skipping way too mucha nd its too easy
27. 01:17:945 (5,6) - Overlap
28. 01:19:595 (1,2,3,4) - eh -> http://puu.sh/kxyMc.jpg ?
29. ^ ongoing too much skipping again
30. 01:22:745 (1) - too long
31. 01:24:845 (2) - no need for a slider here
32. 01:30:695 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - Needs more curving
33. 01:30:395 (11) - NC
34. 01:32:345 (9,1) - DS
35. 01:33:245 (11) - NC
36. 01:35:345 (7) - Shorten this to white >red> white
37. 01:35:795 (8) - Add stuff here
38. 01:39:695 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 2x 5 notes here
39. 01:40:745 (4,5,1) - Triple here
40. 01:42:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Notes are not even placed on the ticks.. Its 1/6 btw
41. 01:47:345 (4,6) - Remove
42. 01:50:945 (1,2) - 1/3 Divisor
43. 01:51:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Doesnt look good Make more curves and make it more idk smoother
44. 01:53:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Too close to each other
45. 01:55:745 (1) - Whats with the sound after that slider?
46. 01:56:645 (1) - Make it a spinner

1. You skipped way too much of the song by using wrong sliders.
2. Try to figure out the strong beats of the song and get a nice rythm for it.
3. If you have to place a note off a tick, you probably mistimed something
4. Check the volume in the timing panel again Im sure you wanted 65% all over the map
5. Try varying with the SV (Slider Velocity) a bit more depening on the song and not always for entire parts of the map
6. Keep an eye on the DS and get a feel for sliderjumps, they feel really ... eh.. crowded? i dont get a better word atm Im tired xD
7. You should use the slider to stream converter for the shorter streams
8. Make sure to make the longer streams appealing (So with a good pattern and if you make a line make sure its fitting to the music and you might decrase the DS and make it convert into a stack instead, imo lines alwaysd play bad in streams)
9. Try to avoid bad overlaps

Domi200 wrote:

Hey this is from my modding queue
Will comment on the stuff I didnt fix etc.
[Insane]
[list]
00:28:445 (5) - end this on the white tick and place a note on the red tick, where the slider used to end | Made the two notes longer DS but kept the slider at the same place, want to keep the intensity down at that point as it is before high intensity part.
00:34:482 (12,13) - Overlap with the stream | Don't see how this would matter while playing, it's AR9, and nothing is blocking it while in play.
00:45:245 (9) - Skiüüing too much in the song | Changed to repeating slider, less empty space.
01:17:945 (5,6) - Overlap | Intended
01:22:745 (1) - too long | Intended for buildup
01:24:845 (2) - no need for a slider here | Same as above ^
01:39:695 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 2x 5 notes here | Keeping as is, want the slider to represent the kick.

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  00:15:095-00:15:395 Try to make a reversearrow or something. I can clearly hear 1/8 beat here.
  00:17:420 Drums start here. Try to add note.
  00:18:095-00:18:770 This part looks and plays strange. Try to make a stream or two with notes or sliders here 00:18:320 and here 00:18:470
  00:29:045-00:29:345 Maybe slider here will look better?
  00:39:245 Try to add note here.
  01:10:745 2 objects in the same time. Try to start spinner a bit later.
  01:28:595; 01:28:670; 01:29:045; 01:29:120 Try to put notes or sliders here. This undermapped part looks a bit strange.
  01:33:545-01:33:845 Try to make a slider here and note here: 01:33:995.
  01:40:745-01:41:120 I can hear drums in this part. Stream of 6 notes or reversearrow would be great.
  01:56:645 Strong beat here. Try to put note here and start spinner later.
  01:56:645-01:59:045 Try to make longer spinner.
  

WinSpirit wrote:

Hi!
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  00:15:095-00:15:395 Try to make a reversearrow or something. I can clearly hear 1/8 beat here.Want to have focus on the piano here, but made the slider reverse once.
  00:17:420 Drums start here. Try to add note. Fairly sure they start on the red tick, atleast I can't hear anything on the blue tick.
  01:28:595; 01:28:670; 01:29:045; 01:29:120 Try to put notes or sliders here. This undermapped part looks a bit strange. Added circle and extended the already existing sliders
  

Like this song very much. Hope to see it ranked!

Lasse wrote:

m4m reply

Normal

In general spacing and sliders on this diff need some work. You should keep consistent ds for a 2* Normal Weird DS probably from laziness fixed, thanks!

For the single grey anchor/simple sliders, try to keep the grey anchor centered to make the sliders look better Top tier advice, remade alot of sliders.

All points accepted and implemented, good stuff.

Hard

You might want to add a diff inbetween, but again as a non BN/Qat I can't tell for sure This will probably happen, ty
00:05:045 (1) - doesnt go well with the music, split into multiple or change the shape or sth Shortened and added repeating slider.

00:11:945 (1) - rhythm feels off here, try Implemented

00:12:695 (4,5,6,7,8) - you change from tapping thiw ticks to tapping and therefor emphasizing red ticks for no reason, plays weird Changed, plays better now.

Implemented and took in mind all points you raised here, (even if I didnt comment on everything). Redid 1/2 slider sections with CTRL+V sliders to make them identical. Also removed all triplets (remapped or replaced with repeat slider). Went with a uniform DS across the whole map, fits nicely. This post helped a TON (never could figure out what caused it to feel weird to play).

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Accepted all suggestions here aswell.
00:58:145 (1,2,3) - spacing doesnt make much sense It does, emphasized it more now though.

Super

After writing so much already I'm getting to lazy to mod more diffs, just a suggestion:
01:55:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sth. like this would fit way better if you made it a 1/8 sldierstream, plays nearly the same and goes better with the piano Done

hope I could help