1. Easy (1.36 stars, 178 notes)
2. Hard (3.01 stars, 418 notes)
3. Insane (3.87 stars, 633 notes)
4. Normal (1.82 stars, 264 notes)

GeorgeK wrote:

I really enjoyed these. Is the Hard and Insane not finished? Or did you intend only part of song?

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

from #modreqs

General

※bitrateって192kbps以上okなったんでしょうか？ - 特例でOK出てるみたいです！！
※曲がﾅｿﾞ過ぎてソースがわかりませんでした(´・ω・｀)お役に立てず - osuの公式から(cYsmixさん)発表されてます！

Easy

01:37:786 (5) - NC? - 同じようなところはNC入ってないと思うのでNo!

02:36:928 (2) - 同じような曲調ではほとんど湾曲であるのに対し、これだけ直角なのは意図があるんでしょうか？ - 確かにここだけカクカクしてるのも変なので変えました。

03:00:071 (5) - 大した事ではないですが微妙な被りが気になります。x124 y268辺りとかどうですか？ - 被りを修正しました！

Normal

あまり書く事ないのでワイドスクリーンだけ言っておきます。.osbあるので後日sbで使うのかしら？ - 多分消えたと思います。

00:13:786 (5) - 前の00:08:643 (1,2,3) - や00:10:357 (1,2,3) - の流れからNCいるかなと。採用なら00:14:643 (1) - NC removeの00:15:928 (2) - NCが良いと思います。- OK!

01:00:500 (2,3,4,5) - 少し流れに窮屈感を感じました。全体的に左へ移動しませんか？ - 確かにそうですねー少し移動しました。

SPOILER

Hard

np.というかここで眠気に襲われて流した感

Insane

00:57:928 (5,6) - 少し違和感を感じました。(5)を1/2sliderにして00:58:250 - にcircle入れませんか？ - ここは後ろの伸びているような音を取っているのでno change! ただスライダーの終端の音が気になったのでSoftに変えときました～

01:25:357 (5,6) - ^

02:20:214 (3,4) - ^

こういう曲のhitsoundがよくわからないので書きまs、、書けませんでした( ´,_ゝ`)
GL

1. 00:34:357 (3) - 音取りの提案
   
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1. 02:10:357 (4) - 音取りand配置の提案
   
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1. 00:42:928 - breakをEasyとNormalに合わせましょう
   
   
2. 02:18:928 (1) - remove finish?

1. 00:21:928 (3) - finishとclapどうですか？曲にあってると思います
   
   
2. 00:35:643 (3) - ^
   
   
3. 00:42:071 (3) - whistleいれてもいいと思います
   
   
4. 00:51:928 (2) - clap付け忘れ？
   
   
5. 00:56:000 - whistleないと違和感がある(気がした)
   
   
6. 02:11:643 (6) - NCとclap追加？
   
   
7. 03:00:071 (3) - スライダーの後ろwhistleいらないと思います

N a s y a wrote:

おはこんち

[Easy]

1. 00:34:357 (3) - 音取りの提案 - ここは同じような音取りをいくつか使用しているのでno chnageです
   
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[Nomal]

1. 02:10:357 (4) - 音取りand配置の提案 - ナイス提案！変えました
   
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[Hard]

1. 00:42:928 - breakをEasyとNormalに合わせましょう - 忘れてた・・・OK!
   
   
2. 02:18:928 (1) - remove finish? - ok

[Insane]

1. 00:21:928 (3) - finishとclapどうですか？曲にあってると思います - clapは無しでfinishだけ入れて強調させる感じにしました～
   
   
2. 00:35:643 (3) - ^ - ^
   
   
3. 00:42:071 (3) - whistleいれてもいいと思います - ok
   
   
4. 00:51:928 (2) - clap付け忘れ？ - 忘れてた
   
   
5. 00:56:000 - whistleないと違和感がある(気がした) - 追加しました
   
   
6. 02:11:643 (6) - NCとclap追加？- NCだけ入れました！
   
   
7. 03:00:071 (3) - スライダーの後ろwhistleいらないと思います - ここは全diff共通で入れてるのでnoで～

ヒットサウンドばっかになってしまった…
Inaneのhitsoundを直すのなら他のdiffも合わせて直したほうがいいかもしれないです。

KuranteMelodii wrote:

a, #modreqs, my mod is so shitty so feel free to ignore it

General

1. Is it just the prepacked osu file or you? i feel so confusing about combo color 4 and 5 because they looks so similar - yea you're right. changed!

Insane

1. 00:15:928 (2) - I feel something lost because i also heard a sound at 00:16:036 - maybe something like this? (move finish to 3) - but that sound is so small, it would be better to use 1/1 slider i guess.
   
   
   And maybe make the slider faster a little bit so it sounds cooler with wub sounds? (add whistle if you want to)
2. 00:17:643 (3) - ^ - ^
   
   
3. 00:19:357 (3) - ^ - ^
   There's so many things like that so i won't mention here

I am so lazy to mod other diff, so meh

Bearizm wrote:

Hi Guy Just wanna try to help out if I could.

Insane

00:15:071 (7,8) - there's nothing wrong with this but, consider putting (7) at x329y111 and (8) at x224y48. I think it suits the song better! - changed!

00:55:786 (3) - consider making this 2 1/4 sliders due to the change of pitch in the red tick at 00:56:000 - keep it

01:16:786 (4,1,2,3) - highlight these objects and move them to x140y264 to prevent 01:17:643 (2) - from almost hitting with 01:17:000 (5) - nice!

01:33:714 - you skipped a beat here! please put something there, even a slider end will do it. - changed~

02:24:286 - you skipped this one as well! - okk

03:00:071 (3) - ctrl+g, I think the downwards motion would be more comfortable to play. - i prefer the current one.

00:13:357 (9) - make this a 1/4 slider? there's a 1/8 rhythm in 00:13:464 - so I think it would fit better. - keep it~

00:36:500 (2) - and 00:38:321 (4) - make these a 3/4 slider for consistency? you did it at 00:29:643 (2) - 00:31:357 (4) - 00:33:071 (3) - and 00:39:928 (3) - yea but also i want to use 1/1

02:16:357 (3) - make this a stream instead? you did it at multiple times previously, this is the only one that uses a repeat slider. - keep it!

02:52:357 (5) - make this 2 circles? the slider end has a sound there, i think it's worth clicking. - okay

Hard

00:59:428 - 01:18:286 - 01:11:428 - 01:26:857 - 02:33:714 - 02:37:143 - 02:37:571 - 02:40:571 - 02:42:286 - 02:55:143 - I don't think these red ticks are worth skipping (unless you have a strong reason to skip these because some of these are inconsistent). there are very strong beats in these areas. - it would be bored if i add 1/2 in all place i guess.

01:13:786 (1,2) - consider placing these somewhere else to prevent any possibilities of mistakes in reading. I'm sorry I couldn't provide any examples but I think a change should be made here. - Try to test play. Previous notes will completely disappear. so It should be fine!

02:56:214 (3,1) - i think these are too far apart. People hate missing at the end so consider reducing the distance by a bit. 02:57:071 (3,1) - this too - keep it

Normal

00:18:928 (1,2,3) - maybe the 2 circles should go first, and then the slider? for better tapping rhythm - keep it!

01:44:643 (1) - end the spinner at 01:50:214 - to prevent an awkward break. The beats in 01:50:643 - and 01:51:071 - will help players get a sense of when to click. it's like 1 2 3! haha - good idea xd

Easy

00:09:928 (2,4) - the stack is a bit concerning since this is easy. p/4363855 - changed!

01:44:643 (1) - end spinner at 01:49:786 - okk

02:04:357 - i don't think you should skip this! - no changed!

02:51:500 (1) - this spinner doesn't give enough recovery time for easy! minimal 1500ms i think. - fixed!

That's it! I hope I helped! If you need some mods for something, let me know! I'll try to help !

Good luck!

1. 00:04:786 (5) - 00:05:214 - ここの音がかなり強いのとまとめるような大きい音が無いので1/1で音を取ったほうがプレイしていて自然でした！
2. 00:20:643 (3) - ちょっと00:34:357 (3) - こんな感じのデザインにしたいわね
3. 00:53:214 (1) - whistle?
   CS 2.7 or 2.8くらいはどうかな・・・ちょっとぱっとみ密度が狭い気がした！

1. 00:41:214 (5,7) - 始点whistleどうでしょう！
2. 01:44:643 (1) - これの終点ちょっと違和感あったから01:48:071 - or 01:49:786 - or 01:50:643 - このあたりどうでしょう？
3. 02:06:928 (1) - new combo入らない気がする
4. 02:17:214 (4) - 始点、折り返しにwhistle？

1. 02:03:928 (4,5) - この間の青線に音があるからスタックさせてるとちょっと早めに叩く恐れが出てくると思うので、普通に配置したほうがよさそうです！
2. 02:17:214 (1,3,5) - whistleどうでしょう！
3. 02:46:678 - ^

1. 00:21:178 (3) - 始点whistle?
2. 00:40:786 (7) - カクカクスライダー使ってみるのはどう？
   
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3. 00:58:143 (6) - 始点whistle?

alacat wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:04:786 (5) - 00:05:214 - ここの音がかなり強いのとまとめるような大きい音が無いので1/1で音を取ったほうがプレイしていて自然でした！
2. 00:20:643 (3) - ちょっと00:34:357 (3) - こんな感じのデザインにしたいわね
3. 00:53:214 (1) - whistle?
   CS 2.7 or 2.8くらいはどうかな・・・ちょっとぱっとみ密度が狭い気がした！

[Normal]

1. 00:41:214 (5,7) - 始点whistleどうでしょう！
2. 01:44:643 (1) - これの終点ちょっと違和感あったから01:48:071 - or 01:49:786 - or 01:50:643 - このあたりどうでしょう？
3. 02:06:928 (1) - new combo入らない気がする
4. 02:17:214 (4) - 始点、折り返しにwhistle？

[Hard]

1. 02:03:928 (4,5) - この間の青線に音があるからスタックさせてるとちょっと早めに叩く恐れが出てくると思うので、普通に配置したほうがよさそうです！
2. 02:17:214 (1,3,5) - whistleどうでしょう！ - ちょい違うけど全diffにwhistle付けました
3. 02:46:678 - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:21:178 (3) - 始点whistle?
2. 00:40:786 (7) - カクカクスライダー使ってみるのはどう？
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:58:143 (6) - 始点whistle?

whistle modでした T-T 気合タイムでいくつかwhistle追加してもよさそう！がんばって！

1. 02:39:928 (1) - I'd personally think you can think of a better pattern to completely remove the overlap with the hp bar.

1. 00:21:928 - 00:35:643 - 02:11:643 - Inconsistent sv setting.
2. 00:38:107 - A missing object feels confusing in rhythm.

1. 01:18:286 (4,5) - In most cases, your 1/4 slider usage only appeared right before a new stanza. This slider was breaking consistency, nor feels fitting well. Rather replacing to a circle will work better in your pattern.
2. 01:37:571 (6) - Consider NC for a more natural start of a break.

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]

1. 02:39:928 (1) - I'd personally think you can think of a better pattern to completely remove the overlap with the hp bar. - I think it's fine!

[Hard]

1. 00:21:928 - 00:35:643 - 02:11:643 - Inconsistent sv setting. - wow, i forgot this!
2. 00:38:107 - A missing object feels confusing in rhythm. - yea, but i want to keep this one.

[Insane]

1. 01:18:286 (4,5) - In most cases, your 1/4 slider usage only appeared right before a new stanza. This slider was breaking consistency, nor feels fitting well. Rather replacing to a circle will work better in your pattern. - changed
2. 01:37:571 (6) - Consider NC for a more natural start of a break. - okay

Since there is a condition not to map the 8bit outro, I guess you should remove after 02:54:071 - .

Nice work.

HabiHolic wrote:

Champion!

[General]

Please add tag "beatmapping contest" and Source is maybe "osu!" better. you can check this map. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/360680

[Normal]

02:51:500 (1) - Change normal whistle? Your use in Easy diff is Normal whistle.

Call me.