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Hilcrhyme - Ienai Ienai [OsuMania]

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Sky_Demon
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Sky_Demon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月17日 at 下午 10:25:21

Artist: Hilcrhyme
Title: Ienai Ienai
Source: 実は私は
Tags: i am ending Jitsu wa Watashi wa
BPM: 86
Filesize: 2709kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. HD - 4Key (2.27 stars, 620 notes)
  2. NM - 4Key (1.52 stars, 331 notes)
Download: Hilcrhyme - Ienai Ienai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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阿拉拉拉拉拉拉拉~


動畫:其實我是 Ending
Last edited by Sky_Demon , edited 19 times in total.
paperlens
505 posts
Joined August 2014
paperlens
水
[NM]
00:06:509 - delete one note, 单键for piano，same as 00:09:300 - (或者都双键)

00:27:090 (27090|3) - delete或者挪到3，这里没有鼓音了

00:34:067 - 如果在跟钢琴，这里也有音

00:37:904 (37904|1,37904|0,38079|0,38079|1,38427|2,38427|3) - 感觉不好，一是一直在跟钢琴突然换了鼓音；二是觉得鼓音不值双键
00:49:241 - 这里是一样的

00:44:358 (44358|1) - 没音

01:06:160 - 或许……add？

[HD]
00:09:648 (9648|1,9648|3,9997|2,9997|0,10346|3,10346|1) - 建议单键……这些音是单音，00:09:300 - 这里是两个音

00:14:532 (14532|1,14532|3,14881|2,14881|0,15230|2,15230|0,15579|1,15579|3,15927|0,15927|2) - 噫 我还是觉得清脆的钢琴单音用单键好 只是建议罢了

00:27:090 - 单键？没有鼓音

00:38:079 - 这里你在NM都放了双键
00:49:241 - ^

01:44:881 (104881|0,104881|3,105055|2,105230|1,105230|3,105404|0) - 双键和单键有点怪……

完
Sky_Demon
948 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Sky_Demon

paperlens wrote:

水
[NM]
00:06:509 - delete one note, 单键for piano，same as 00:09:300 - (或者都双键)

00:27:090 (27090|3) - delete或者挪到3，这里没有鼓音了

00:34:067 - 如果在跟钢琴，这里也有音

00:37:904 (37904|1,37904|0,38079|0,38079|1,38427|2,38427|3) - 感觉不好，一是一直在跟钢琴突然换了鼓音；二是觉得鼓音不值双键
00:49:241 - 这里是一样的

00:44:358 (44358|1) - 没音

01:06:160 - 或许……add？

[HD]
00:09:648 (9648|1,9648|3,9997|2,9997|0,10346|3,10346|1) - 建议单键……这些音是单音，00:09:300 - 这里是两个音

00:14:532 (14532|1,14532|3,14881|2,14881|0,15230|2,15230|0,15579|1,15579|3,15927|0,15927|2) - 噫 我还是觉得清脆的钢琴单音用单键好 只是建议罢了

00:27:090 - 单键？没有鼓音

00:38:079 - 这里你在NM都放了双键
00:49:241 - ^

01:44:881 (104881|0,104881|3,105055|2,105230|1,105230|3,105404|0) - 双键和单键有点怪……

完
大部分Fixed 謝摸 :)
diamdiam
64 posts
Joined June 2010
diamdiam
HD:
01:29:532 (89532|1,89532|3) - 刪掉一個
NM:
00:09:300 (9300|0) - 多加一個
00:33:544 (33544|1) - 移到00:33:893 -
00:38:427 (38427|2) - 移到00:38:602 -
總體:
音量
人聲>鼓聲>鋼琴
pop類型的還是要抓點人聲的
Sky_Demon
948 posts
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Topic Starter
Sky_Demon

diamdiam wrote:

HD:
01:29:532 (89532|1,89532|3) - 刪掉一個
NM:
00:09:300 (9300|0) - 多加一個
00:33:544 (33544|1) - 移到00:33:893 -
00:38:427 (38427|2) - 移到00:38:602 -
總體:
音量
人聲>鼓聲>鋼琴
pop類型的還是要抓點人聲的 我很少抓人聲鋼琴為重其實也是說得過的..大概吧
部分修改 感謝摸 :) :)
Deep Sea
1,947 posts
Joined June 2013
Deep Sea
Hiiii Sky :3
mod ready

[NM]
HP OD 7

turn off widescreen support

00:13:486 (13486|2) - move to 4
00:26:916 (26916|1) - move to 1
00:28:834 (28834|1) - move to 4
00:29:532 (29532|3) - move to 3
00:35:811 (35811|0) - move to 4
01:18:369 (78369|1) - move to 1
01:33:369 (93369|2) - move to 4

[HD]
OD 8

00:51:858 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3760686
00:57:875 - add note to 4
01:02:672 (62672|1) - move to 4
01:02:672 (62672|3) - move to 2
01:09:038 - add note to 2
01:09:125 (69125|1) - move to 3
01:09:212 (69212|2) - move to 1
01:17:672 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3760710
01:42:439 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3760718

Good luck :3 nice song ~
Sky_Demon
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Topic Starter
Sky_Demon

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hiiii Sky :3
mod ready

[NM]
HP OD 7

turn off widescreen support

00:13:486 (13486|2) - move to 4
00:26:916 (26916|1) - move to 1
00:28:834 (28834|1) - move to 4
00:29:532 (29532|3) - move to 3
00:35:811 (35811|0) - move to 4
01:18:369 (78369|1) - move to 1
01:33:369 (93369|2) - move to 4
all fix
[HD]
OD 8

00:51:858 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3760686
00:57:875 - add note to 4 fix
01:02:672 (62672|1) - move to 4 fix
01:02:672 (62672|3) - move to 2 fix
01:09:038 - add note to 2 fix
01:09:125 (69125|1) - move to 3 fix
01:09:212 (69212|2) - move to 1 fix
01:17:672 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3760710
01:42:439 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3760718 fix

Good luck :3 nice song ~
Thanks for mod :) :) update!
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
liaoxingyao
vocal好像不好听
bpm我觉得还是除以2好点
kiai其实到01:34:416就可以停了
[NM]
00:05:637 (5637|3,6160|1) - ctrl+G?
00:19:067 (19067|3) - 移到3?
00:47:672 你在抓琴音吧 这里不add?
01:17:323 (77323|3) - 移到1好像好点
[HD]
01:00:404 (60404|3) - 移到3?
这HD怎么塞的跟MX一样 高点BPM估计能上I icon
摸不出什么 水摸就这样了
good luck!
Sky_Demon
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Topic Starter
Sky_Demon

liaoxingyao wrote:

vocal好像不好听
bpm我觉得还是除以2好点 砍了
kiai其实到01:34:416就可以停了 改
[NM]
00:05:637 (5637|3,6160|1) - ctrl+G?
00:19:067 (19067|3) - 移到3?
00:47:672 你在抓琴音吧 这里不add?
01:17:323 (77323|3) - 移到1好像好点
[HD]
01:00:404 (60404|3) - 移到3?
这HD怎么塞的跟MX一样 高点BPM估计能上I icon 我倒覺得打起來很簡單..
摸不出什么 水摸就这样了
good luck!
摸圖不丟星 你這樣做對嗎 All Fix

Thank for mod! :)
pocket-Gao
275 posts
Joined August 2013
pocket-Gao
来咯0 0
黑历史get√
激情满满
HD
00:29:532 (29532|1,29532|2) - 有点看不懂这里的抓音 这里抓了两个 前后那些为啥只抓了一个 如 00:30:230 - 等
01:04:590 (64590|1) - |3|
01:15:927 (75927|1,76102|2) - 感觉不用太多变化 |3|→|2|就可以了


NM
00:10:346 (10346|1,10346|3) - |1|2|
00:29:968 (29968|1,30055|2) - 建议再考虑一下这种摆法 个人觉得有点失手感(尽管bpm很低)
00:30:927 (30927|2,30927|1,31102|0,31102|3) - 建议|1|2|→|3|4| 参考00:33:718 (33718|3,33718|2,33893|1,33893|0) - 这里的感觉
00:46:712 (46712|2,46800|1) - ^^
01:06:509 - add(?
01:09:212 (69212|0) - 额这里耳机不好 听不太出来1/8...
01:19:939 (79939|1,80114|2) - 位置换成|3|2|如何
01:42:047 - 好像有音

最近好忙...脱了好几天了抱歉QAQ
Sky_Demon
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Sky_Demon

pocket-Gao wrote:

来咯0 0
黑历史get√
激情满满
咦...被偷拍到了
HD
00:29:532 (29532|1,29532|2) - 有点看不懂这里的抓音 这里抓了两个 前后那些为啥只抓了一个 如 00:30:230 - 等
01:04:590 (64590|1) - |3|
01:15:927 (75927|1,76102|2) - 感觉不用太多变化 |3|→|2|就可以了
All fix


NM
00:10:346 (10346|1,10346|3) - |1|2|
00:29:968 (29968|1,30055|2) - 建议再考虑一下这种摆法 个人觉得有点失手感(尽管bpm很低)
00:30:927 (30927|2,30927|1,31102|0,31102|3) - 建议|1|2|→|3|4| 参考00:33:718 (33718|3,33718|2,33893|1,33893|0) - 这里的感觉
00:46:712 (46712|2,46800|1) - ^^
01:06:509 - add(?
01:09:212 (69212|0) - 额这里耳机不好 听不太出来1/8...
01:19:939 (79939|1,80114|2) - 位置换成|3|2|如何
01:42:047 - 好像有音
部分fix

最近好忙...脱了好几天了抱歉QAQ 沒問題的
感謝摸 更新! :)
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Sandalphon
一些小意见
[NM]
00:07:207 (7207|1,7904|2) - CTRL+H 然后右移1col，老是重复13的double不好看
00:17:672 (17672|2,18369|3) - CTRL+J 然后00:19:067 (19067|2) - 移到2，体现一下音高
我被抓去L4D2了，澳洲失联
回来补
Edit:
01:44:881 - 试试这个？img

[HD]
01:23:253 - 这么爽的音你不加、
水完
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Sky_Demon
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Sky_Demon
好 KD先給了
Taiwan-NAK
336 posts
Joined July 2013
Taiwan-NAK
我只是為了歌手而來聽歌 ;)

HD
RE

NM
RE

2kds plz
Sky_Demon
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Sky_Demon

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

我只是為了歌手而來聽歌 ;)

HD
RE

NM
RE

2kds plz
建議吃翔
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
liaoxingyao

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

我只是為了歌手而來聽歌 ;)

HD
RE

NM
RE

2kds plz
this mod is very diao
hokin1995
495 posts
Joined August 2008
hokin1995
前排射星支援 8-)
MeowPaz
499 posts
Joined March 2012
MeowPaz
Yahalo.Sky
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
来水
Open
[NM]
00:41:393 (41393|2) - 移到4
00:42:788 (42788|1) - 移到3
01:39:474 (99474|3,99474|0,99648|2,99648|1,99823|3,99823|0,99997|1,99997|2) - 换成1324？
01:42:788 (102788|1) - 移到1

[HD]
00:23:951 (23951|2,23951|1,24300|0,24648|1,24648|2,24648|3) - 这样也许会更好。http://puu.sh/kFwtZ/6c8da33b31.jpg
00:30:143 - 00:38:166 - 00:38:515 - 类似这些的漏音，不太明白是不是选择性抓的，看不太懂啦。
01:39:474 - 建议加1个
Sky_Demon
948 posts
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Topic Starter
Sky_Demon

MeowPaz wrote:

Yahalo.Sky
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
来水
Open
[NM]
00:41:393 (41393|2) - 移到4
00:42:788 (42788|1) - 移到3
01:39:474 (99474|3,99474|0,99648|2,99648|1,99823|3,99823|0,99997|1,99997|2) - 换成1324？
01:42:788 (102788|1) - 移到1

[HD]
00:23:951 (23951|2,23951|1,24300|0,24648|1,24648|2,24648|3) - 这样也许会更好。http://puu.sh/kFwtZ/6c8da33b31.jpg
00:30:143 - 00:38:166 - 00:38:515 - 类似这些的漏音，不太明白是不是选择性抓的，看不太懂啦。
01:39:474 - 建议加1个
感謝水摸 更新! :)
Sky_Demon
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Sky_Demon

hokin1995 wrote:

前排射星支援 8-)
感謝~ :) :)
Taiwan-NAK
336 posts
Joined July 2013
Taiwan-NAK
HD
重聽系麻婆 屎丐_爹夢

00:05:462 - 00:08:253 - 00:11:218 - add

00:11:393 (11393|1) - 這顆Ghost 如果是提琴 記得後面抓全

00:12:439 - add

00:16:276 - 這邊開始聽不出跟什麼音 都抓一半 建議重整

00:31:538 - add 因為你前面00:29:968 - 有抓
00:31:538 - ^
00:34:329 - ^
00:37:119 - ^
00:39:910 - ^
00:41:131 - 00:41:305 - 比較小聲 建議各放一顆
00:42:701 - ^ 之後的重新聽一次吧 不貼了

00:34:939 - 一個kick在這竟然沒note

00:38:079 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3801180

後面很多部分也是同上的漏音 重新聽幾次抓齊吧
No kd
Sky_Demon
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Topic Starter
Sky_Demon

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

HD
重聽系麻婆 屎丐_爹夢

00:05:462 - 00:08:253 - 00:11:218 - add 這一段跟的是鋼琴不過13加上 第2個沒音的

00:11:393 (11393|1) - 這顆Ghost 如果是提琴 記得後面抓全 刪

00:12:439 - add

00:16:276 - 這邊開始聽不出跟什麼音 都抓一半 建議重整 鋼琴 重音3

00:31:538 - add 因為你前面00:29:968 - 有抓fix
00:31:538 - ^fix
00:34:329 - ^fix
00:37:119 - ^fix
00:39:910 - ^ fix
00:41:131 - 00:41:305 - 比較小聲 建議各放一顆 小聲的就不加了
00:42:701 - ^ 之後的重新聽一次吧 不貼了fix

00:34:939 - 一個kick在這竟然沒notefix

00:38:079 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3801180fix

後面很多部分也是同上的漏音 重新聽幾次抓齊吧
No kd
:) :) :)
SpectorDG
1,167 posts
Joined June 2014
SpectorDG

Request from - ★ | ✊ #СПЕКТОР Mania Queue ✊ | ★


Demon-san >.<)/ Sorry mod for late ;w;

General
Offset : 5114
Offset : 5102
NM
5102 OFFSET MOD
#1 00:20:450 - Maybe you can follow this style actually people like this pattern :3

NM MOD END ... but wait i don't understand your style why you leave the strong beats ex : 01:37:904 and 01:38:079
it's NM xD
HD
5102 OFFSET MOD
#1 00:17:311 (17311|0,17311|2,17660|3,17660|1) - Why 2 notes ? delete 1 - 1 it's same for this 00:11:206 (11206|1) -
#2 00:25:683 (25683|3) - Delete same as reason
#3 00:27:078 (27078|0) - Move to 4
#4 00:27:253 (27253|1) - Move to 1 because some people don't understand this
00:29:956 (29956|1,30043|2,30131|1) - this understanding :3
#5 00:42:601 (42601|1) - Delete this it's not strong beat - strong beats is 00:43:474 (43474|1,43474|0) - this and 00:44:171 (44171|3,44171|0) - this
#6 00:48:357 (48357|2) - Move to 4
#7 00:51:846 (51846|3,51846|1,52020|0,52195|1,52195|3,52282|2,52369|3,52456|2,52543|1,52543|0) - This Part maybe follow this style

#8 01:39:288 - add note here strong beat :>

Awesome map Demon-san goodluck for Rank~ :3
Ayachi-
2,261 posts
Joined November 2013
Ayachi-
[NM]
00:55:172 (55172|1) - 移到3或四
01:05:462 - 之前都一個音而已
01:29:532 (89532|3) - 這LN 和01:28:834 - 一樣音但是這沒放

[HD[
跟之前同樣音加一個00:27:090 -
01:25:695 - 這裡要換一次LN
01:39:300 - +?
Sky_Demon
948 posts
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Topic Starter
Sky_Demon

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

[NM]
00:55:172 (55172|1) - 移到3或四 Fix
01:05:462 - 之前都一個音而已Fix
01:29:532 (89532|3) - 這LN 和01:28:834 - 一樣音但是這沒放

[HD[
跟之前同樣音加一個00:27:090 - Fix
01:25:695 - 這裡要換一次LNFix
01:39:300 - +?
感謝摸 更新!
Sky_Demon
948 posts
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Topic Starter
Sky_Demon

SpectorDG wrote:


Request from - ★ | ✊ #СПЕКТОР Mania Queue ✊ | ★


Demon-san >.<)/ Sorry mod for late ;w; ok ok xD

General
Offset : 5114 fix
Offset : 5102 fix
NM
5102 OFFSET MOD
#1 00:20:450 - Maybe you can follow this style actually people like this pattern :3

NM MOD END ... but wait i don't understand your style why you leave the strong beats ex : 01:37:904 and 01:38:079
it's NM xD all fix
HD
5102 OFFSET MOD
#1 00:17:311 (17311|0,17311|2,17660|3,17660|1) - Why 2 notes ? delete 1 - 1 it's same for this 00:11:206 (11206|1) -
#2 00:25:683 (25683|3) - Delete same as reason
#3 00:27:078 (27078|0) - Move to 4
#4 00:27:253 (27253|1) - Move to 1 because some people don't understand this
00:29:956 (29956|1,30043|2,30131|1) - this understanding :3
#5 00:42:601 (42601|1) - Delete this it's not strong beat - strong beats is 00:43:474 (43474|1,43474|0) - this and 00:44:171 (44171|3,44171|0) - this
#6 00:48:357 (48357|2) - Move to 4
#7 00:51:846 (51846|3,51846|1,52020|0,52195|1,52195|3,52282|2,52369|3,52456|2,52543|1,52543|0) - This Part maybe follow this style

#8 01:39:288 - add note here strong beat :>
all fix

Awesome map Demon-san goodluck for Rank~ :3
SpectorDG Thanks for mod>w<)/ :)
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce
BN Check. 最近好懒 抱歉啦

[NM]
钢琴音都不明显很容易不知所谓，这歌有点难做感觉
00:20:450 - 变成这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926954

00:31:264 (31264|2) - 钢琴音在两个蓝线上 可以选择加上或者不加 但是这个必须删掉

00:42:427 (42427|0) - 同上

01:16:090 (76090|1) - 移到白线或者删掉

01:22:020 - 这句Vocal很美我建议抓Vocal所以Add 1 Note

01:26:555 - 重复pattern 我的建议 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926976

01:34:404 - ~之后不太清楚双键的原因 我觉得单键也很好了

[HD]
我觉得开头你也可以再抓一轨小提琴 本来想跳过但是看了看你的LN段我决定还是仔细看一看

01:04:404 - 这里交接

01:14:171 - ~ 01:14:695 - 也是有短LN音的

01:15:741 (75741|2) - 1/8 Note 或者将01:15:392 (75392|1) - end at 01:15:915 -

01:16:962 - 这边结束以及+一个短LN

01:19:753 - 这边结束以及+一个短LN

01:22:892 (82892|0,83067|1) - 变成一个

01:28:125 - 这边结束以及+一个短LN

01:33:706 - 无论是Vocal还是小提琴都应该是这样子的 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926996

Kiai结束后的部分检查一下，所有小提琴在的地方都应该Double,你漏了一些

01:45:218 - 根据你前后都双键了那么应该是鼓+钢琴 所以这边漏了Note

这歌确实比较难做，加油
Sky_Demon
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Sky_Demon

Bruce wrote:

BN Check. 最近好懒 抱歉啦 沒關係的 甜雨被放鳥一個多月我都沒說啥了 lol

[NM]
钢琴音都不明显很容易不知所谓，这歌有点难做感觉 是挺難做的
00:20:450 - 变成这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926954 好滴

00:31:264 (31264|2) - 钢琴音在两个蓝线上 可以选择加上或者不加 但是这个必须删掉
^我聽這地方藍線沒鋼琴音呢... 這個請在Check一次

00:42:427 (42427|0) - 同上 ^同上

01:16:090 (76090|1) - 移到白线或者删掉 手感會變 先保留

01:22:020 - 这句Vocal很美我建议抓Vocal所以Add 1 Note 加上了 我也很愛這個Vocal >w<

01:26:555 - 重复pattern 我的建议 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926976 好滴

01:34:404 - ~之后不太清楚双键的原因 我觉得单键也很好了 改單鍵

[HD]
我觉得开头你也可以再抓一轨小提琴 本来想跳过但是看了看你的LN段我决定还是仔细看一看
琴音我抓了 部分note用來體現鋼琴 雙鍵是高音

01:04:404 - 这里交接 好滴

01:14:171 - ~ 01:14:695 - 也是有短LN音的 好滴

01:15:741 (75741|2) - 1/8 Note 或者将01:15:392 (75392|1) - end at 01:15:915 - 後者

01:16:962 - 这边结束以及+一个短LN好滴

01:19:753 - 这边结束以及+一个短LN好滴

01:22:892 (82892|0,83067|1) - 变成一个 這裡保持 感覺用兩個更能體現那個高音琴音

01:28:125 - 这边结束以及+一个短LN好滴

01:33:706 - 无论是Vocal还是小提琴都应该是这样子的 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926996好滴

Kiai结束后的部分检查一下，所有小提琴在的地方都应该Double,你漏了一些本來是鼓音雙鍵的 不過我全改琴了

01:45:218 - 根据你前后都双键了那么应该是鼓+钢琴 所以这边漏了Note 好滴

这歌确实比较难做，加油
感謝星姊抽空check 大部分採用 辛苦了

kd發射~ :) :) :)
Bruce
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Bruce
泡
Ayachi-
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Ayachi-
Dio
MeowPaz
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MeowPaz

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Dio
Sky_Demon
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Sky_Demon

Bruce wrote:

泡
感恩 :) :)
Deep Sea
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Deep Sea
Hi Sky_Demonyan
BN Check

[General]

add in tags : Jitsu wa Watashi wa

[NM]

01:05:450 (65450|3) - move to 2
01:17:136 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975941
01:39:462 (99462|2) - move to 1

[HD]

00:09:985 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975947
00:22:543 (22543|3,23241|0) - ctrl + h
00:24:288 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975952
00:26:381 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975964
00:28:735 - add note to 2
00:29:869 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975976
00:31:264 - add note to 3
00:46:090 - add note to 2
00:48:532 - add note to 1
00:52:195 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975972
01:10:683 - add note to 3
01:34:404 (94404|1) - move to 3
01:45:218 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975989

it's all

call me after update ~
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