no comment = fixedsahuang wrote:
[General]
- Fix the tag inconsistency.
[Normal]
- 00:05:162 (4,5,1) - fix ds
- 00:09:564 (3,4) - maybe stack them?it's quite difficult like this and there's a circle 00:10:053 (5) - that follows. no. it is very hard to catch.
- 00:39:727 - no reason to change sv here....stick to 0.9x
- 00:42:825 (3,4,1,2) - ds
- 01:03:042 (5,1,2) - too confusing to read,change pattern.
You used 0.85 0.9 0.95 1.0x in Normal but you should try to avoid changing sv for so many times in lower difficulties..tbh you can map it with only 0.9x and 1.0x,idk why you use so many varieties,it's bit weird to me.
Overall a good set,my biggest concerns are sv/ds changes in Normal and some random jumps in the main diff. The flow also has some inconsistency.
I think you need more improvement on these 2 diffs, so maybe call me back after 2-3 mods.
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