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RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-09-12T19:10:06+00:00

General
Lighting is hadly visible. Try this?

Easy
01:27:387 - get rid of this break, it's pointless as the drain you get in it is tiny.

Natteke
00:57:387 (1,2) - The silenced sliderends make the random jump even more confusing
01:37:080 (3,4,1) (And all the other similar parts) - stacked sliderends are hard enough to read with the beats the same distance apart, and that last beat is hidden by the hitbursts. Move the (1) out of the way.

La Cataline

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La Cataline 2010-09-12T19:33:51+00:00

RandomJibberish wrote:
General
Lighting is hadly visible. Try this?
nope.thanks

Easy
01:27:387 - get rid of this break, it's pointless as the drain you get in it is tiny.
fixed

thanks (:

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-09-13T08:38:17+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Easy]
01:16:541 (4,5) - change this to a slider? it's a bit hard for beginners to read.
01:32:464 (1,2,3) - i prefer not to stack these notes...
01:58:310 (1) - add whistle at the first reverse?
02:11:695 (3,4) - spacing

[Normal]
00:51:849 (1,2) - too close, i think they should be as far as the notes before...
01:16:772 (5) - add whistle at the beginning?
01:25:080 (1) - move it up a bit so the triangle could be better...?
01:28:772 (1) - add whistle at the second reverse?
01:39:849 (1,2) - feel the shape could be better..

[Natteke]
01:11:464 (3) - new combo this since here's a spacing change.
01:23:926 (2,3) - not perfect stacked. don't know if you made it this.
01:31:887 & 01:32:003 - add notes?
01:57:849 (4) - whistle?
02:03:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - prefer to make notes like that... since 1-3 should be a group and 4-6 should be another imo. your choice.

nice done. have my star+kud star.

La Cataline

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La Cataline 2010-09-13T12:48:23+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Easy]
01:16:541 (4,5) - change this to a slider? it's a bit hard for beginners to read.
done
01:32:464 (1,2,3) - i prefer not to stack these notes...
wont change
01:58:310 (1) - add whistle at the first reverse?
nope
02:11:695 (3,4) - spacing
fixed

[Normal]
00:51:849 (1,2) - too close, i think they should be as far as the notes before...
the previous notes are now closer to each other
01:16:772 (5) - add whistle at the beginning?
nope
01:25:080 (1) - move it up a bit so the triangle could be better...?
nope
01:28:772 (1) - add whistle at the second reverse?
nope
01:39:849 (1,2) - feel the shape could be better..
changed a bit

Thanks.

James2250

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James2250 2010-09-13T17:08:41+00:00

Easy:
Last timing section isn't needed
AR -1 ?
01:28:772 (1,2,3) - doesn't really suit this map as everything before it was so calm, make it a slider or something

Normal:
Last timing section isn't needed

Natteke:
I don't think the really hard jumps fit this song but oh well~
00:56:926 (4,5) - odd jump
00:57:387 (1,2) - don't like this jump while playing, I would decrease distance
01:13:541 (4) - add note
01:23:926 (2,3) - could be stacked better
01:25:080 (1,2) - stack these?
01:31:541 (6) - sounds very odd, extend by 1/4
01:41:695 (1,2) - stack?
01:43:310 (4,3,1) - ^
01:55:310 (2,3) - stack endpoints
02:23:003 (2) - extend by 1/4

*star*

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-09-13T17:23:58+00:00

Evil Star~

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-09-13T19:37:06+00:00

ROFL at mod posts.

LanaDark

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LanaDark 2010-09-14T15:24:24+00:00

La Cataline+Natteke=win!

LanaDark

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LanaDark 2010-09-14T15:26:11+00:00

звездочка

LanaDark

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LanaDark 2010-09-14T15:28:02+00:00

хотя кружочки мне не нравятся..

La Cataline

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La Cataline 2010-09-14T15:41:26+00:00

LOL ELEN XD
stop multiposting in my maps' threads

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-09-15T10:58:48+00:00

tiny changes

Download: Aural Planet - Costa Del Nymphos (La Cataline) [Natteke].osu

Garven

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Garven 2010-09-17T18:58:11+00:00

Wow, you actually found someone to make an easy AND a normal for this beast, Natteke? I applaud you, La_Cataline. I'll take a look later on.

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-09-17T23:43:45+00:00

She's awesome as she is

batman1284

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batman1284 2010-09-18T16:24:00+00:00

good)

morphina

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morphina 2010-09-18T17:45:44+00:00

звезда

Garven

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Garven 2010-09-20T13:00:36+00:00

Alrighty then.

[General]
To edit the slider border color, open the individual .osu files and under the [Colours] section, type in SliderBorder: 0,0,0. The numbers are the RGB values of what color you want. 0,0,0 is black, 255,255,255 is white.

[Easy]
01:51:618 (2,5) - These may a bit bit confusing to newer players to read since earlier you had used 1/1 stacks compared to the 1/.5 rhythms used here.
01:58:310 (1) - Also may be confusing as to when these sliders will end for newer players. Perhaps make it a three hit slider facing away from the long slider?
02:02:003 (1) - ^
02:16:310 (4) - Same thing as earlier.
02:20:003 (4) - ^

[Normal]
02:10:080 (2) - The rhythm on this didn't sound good to me for some reason.

[Natteke]
01:25:772 (2) - Hrm, maybe scoot this left and up a couple grids? Looks better to me that way.

Kudos on making the easy/normal, La_Cataline. Great set!

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-09-20T16:49:54+00:00

k, and the slider tick rate is now 0.5

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Magicphoenix

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Magicphoenix 2010-09-27T16:17:39+00:00

[Easy]

didn't find any mistakes....

[Normal]

01:01:080 (5) - new combo?
01:39:387 (7) - ^
01:39:849 (1) - remove nc
02:07:541 (4) - new combo

[Natteke]
00:57:387 (1) - this slide is a bit strange imo...shorten this on blue tick maybe?
some notes aren't well stacked btw. = =

GREAT map!!
STAR~

La Cataline

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La Cataline 2010-09-27T17:48:17+00:00

Magicphoenix wrote:
[Easy]

didn't find any mistakes....

[Normal]

01:01:080 (5) - new combo?
01:39:387 (7) - ^
01:39:849 (1) - remove nc
02:07:541 (4) - new combo

[Natteke]
00:57:387 (1) - this slide is a bit strange imo...shorten this on blue tick maybe?
some notes aren't well stacked btw. = =

GREAT map!!
STAR~

sry, but I didnt change a thing.

[eifersucht]

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[eifersucht] 2010-09-28T17:43:04+00:00

увидела еще у кого-то дома... х)
звезда ну всяко, что ж еще ставить в ранкед, как не это? >3<
сб. он крут и своевременно проявляется. очень-очень нравится ☉◡☉

Alace

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Alace 2010-10-06T16:56:22+00:00

offset +10ms

<Natteke>
00:57:387 (1,2) - this part is not really fit the song, the slider feels too slow to me XD

well done

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-10-08T15:42:47+00:00

.

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Derekku

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Derekku 2010-10-17T20:42:43+00:00

Sorry that it took me so long to get to this. =x

[General]
*Ending on each of the maps is a bit awkward. I expected a spinner or something (not to mention that only one of the difficulties actually uses a spinner).

[Easy]
01:32:474 (1,2,3) - I suggest avoiding stacks like this. Notice the gap between the notes and approach circles? That will be confusing to players, so try moving (1) like this instead.
02:05:013 (4,1) - overlay might be slightly confusing.
02:11:705 (3,4) - Try to avoid kick sliders like these in easy difficulties as well. They can be a bit too fast-paced and unpredictable as to when it's time to click the next slider.
02:20:474 (1,2,1) - Found it odd that you stacked two of these but not the third.

[Normal]
*OD/Drain could possibly be raised one tick each.
*Maybe lower the approach rate one tick?
01:15:397 (3,4) - overlap is a bit confusing/hard to read
01:26:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - much too hard to read for a Normal diff.

[Natteke]
*Spacing and overlaps were a bit confusing in this diff. I was able to sightread them fine, but I'm a bit concerned since this is otherwise a very easy "Hard" difficulty.
01:17:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I see that it's a pattern, but it's still tricky to read.
01:20:243 (2,3,1,2,3) - overlaps make some of the sliders hard to see.
01:31:320 (4,5,6) - try to avoid stuff like this, since it's hard to tell that 6 is a slider.
01:37:090 (3) - a bit hard to tell it's a slider
01:56:013 (3) - you can tell it's a slider since you didn't stack them 100%, but it actually looks a bit ugly like this. Could you rotate this slider or something?

This map is definitely on the right track, so here's a star icon for you. :p

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-10-18T16:14:10+00:00

Derekku wrote:
[Natteke]
*Spacing and overlaps were a bit confusing in this diff. I was able to sightread them fine, but I'm a bit concerned since this is otherwise a very easy "Hard" difficulty.

Look, here's my difficulty. Everything is easy to read:

SPOILER

La Cataline

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La Cataline 2010-10-18T16:40:32+00:00

Derekku wrote:
[Easy]
01:32:474 (1,2,3) - I suggest avoiding stacks like this. Notice the gap between the notes and approach circles? That will be confusing to players, so try moving (1) like this instead. nope
02:05:013 (4,1) - overlay might be slightly confusing. slightly, yes
02:11:705 (3,4) - Try to avoid kick sliders like these in easy difficulties as well. They can be a bit too fast-paced and unpredictable as to when it's time to click the next slider. I thought they were easy to read - the song is slow
02:20:474 (1,2,1) - Found it odd that you stacked two of these but not the third. ...

[Normal]
01:15:397 (3,4) - overlap is a bit confusing/hard to read I guess it can be left alone, nothing unrankable, right?
01:26:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - much too hard to read for a Normal diff. that's a pattern, okay?

[Natteke]
*Spacing and overlaps were a bit confusing in this diff. I was able to sightread them fine, but I'm a bit concerned since this is otherwise a very easy "Hard" difficulty.
these are MY FAVORITE moments in this diff, so I wont ever let them be changed [see previous post]