nano - Bull's Eye (TV Size) · forum

Osu FLagstar

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Osu FLagstar 2015-09-26T09:48:12+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 6. Dezember 2016 at 21:10:53

Artist: nano
Title: Bull's Eye (TV Size)
Source: 緋弾のアリア (Hidan No Aria)
Tags: Hidan No Aria AA Opening nano
BPM: 192
Filesize: 3091kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (2,74 stars, 241 notes)
Easy (1,17 stars, 67 notes)
Expert (5,61 stars, 417 notes)
Hyper (3,73 stars, 295 notes)
Marksman (6,13 stars, 404 notes)
Normal (1,94 stars, 137 notes)
SeaRasp's Insane (5,19 stars, 369 notes)
Soquire's Light Insane (4,31 stars, 349 notes)

Download: nano - Bull's Eye (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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New nano song <3
Enjoy!

Last edited by Osu FLagstar 2016-12-06T20:11:07+00:00, edited 105 times in total.

Zetera

Medal Hunter

1,019 posts

Joined November 2010

Zetera 2015-09-26T11:36:54+00:00

A quick German resumé of what we have talked about

2015-09-26 13:32 Osu FLagstar: ok, fassen wir dann nochmal alles zusammen:
2015-09-26 13:32 Osu FLagstar: 00:57:374 - kreisrunder slider
2015-09-26 13:32 Osu FLagstar: kleineres spacing bei streams
2015-09-26 13:33 Osu FLagstar: overlaps wegmachen
2015-09-26 13:33 Osu FLagstar: das wars dann eig, das mit dem wiggle slider sollte jetzt ok sein

Sadolution

73 posts

Joined December 2011

Sadolution 2015-09-26T13:06:26+00:00

Only Red Timingsections:

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
552,312.5,3,1,0,20,1,0
7114,334.261838440111,3,1,0,20,1,0
7448,299.25187032419,4,1,0,20,1,0
8046,304.568527918782,3,1,0,20,1,0
8655,304.568527918782,4,1,0,80,1,0

ukod

84 posts

Joined August 2013

ukod 2015-09-27T10:25:08+00:00

Timing

00:02:427 (1) - Mach hier 3 Circle raus
00:06:177 (1,2,3) - Mach die zu Circlen
00:11:993 (5,6) - Mach hier einen 1/2 slider raus
00:12:298 (7) - Soll lieber 2 1/2 Circle jumps sein
00:14:734 (7) - 1/2 slider
00:19:607 (7) - ^
00:22:044 (8) - 1/1 slider
00:24:480 (7) - ^
00:35:445 (1) - 1/1 slider + Circle auf den Punkt setzen, wo vorher der Sliderend war
00:36:054 (2) - ^
00:47:095 (6,10) - Die beiden müssen weg
00:59:810 (1,2,3) - Mach die zu Circlen
01:21:511 (12) - Entfern den
01:22:957 (7) - 1/2 slider
01:24:709 (2,2,2,2,2) - entfernen, mach hier lieber jumps hin

Hitsounds

Entfern die ganzen viel zu lauten hitsounds wie bei 00:46:942 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - , ich musste jetzt den Timing-Check bei 0% Effektlautstärke machen weil man teilweise nicht ausmachen kann, was zum Song gehört.
Benutz im Intro soft-sampleset.

NC's

00:09:861 (7) -
00:12:298 (7) -
00:14:734 (7) -
00:17:018 (6) -
00:19:607 (7) -
00:22:044 (8) -
00:27:069 (7) -
00:34:074 (4) -
00:41:384 (5) -
00:53:871 (6) -
01:05:749 (6) -
01:13:211 (7) -
01:22:957 (7) -

Metadata

AR 9.3
CS 4

Allgemeines zum spacing

Durch die ganze map hindurch gibt es komische Overlaps, wie z.B. 00:09:252 (4,7) -, 00:13:364 (1,4) -, 00:14:734 (7,8,10,12) -, 00:16:257 (2,4) - usw. Zusätzlich sind mehrfach unregelmäßigkeiten beim Spacing vorhanden, wie bei 00:12:602 (8,9,10,11) - oder 00:15:039 (8,10,12) -. Alle solche Fälle sollten in einer Beatmap nicht vorhanden sein und entfernt werden.
Allem in allem solltest du mal versuchen, mehr auf overlapping zu achten, mehr gleichmäßige Distanzen zu benutzen, was z.B. durch entfernen von Gridsnap und mehr Distancesnap erreicht werden kann.

Zeonive

53 posts

Joined March 2014

Zeonive 2015-09-27T10:36:05+00:00

[Expert]

00:01:489 (3,4,5) - Would look better as a triangle pattern (120° between the sliders)
00:05:239 (3,4,5) - ^
00:08:338 (5,1) - This jump was weird to play and the slider overlapping 00:08:186 (4) doesn't look good as well. Place the slider somewhere else or give it a curving that is nearly blanketing 00:08:186 (4).
00:09:252 (4,5) - This obtuse angle does neither fit the music nor the object placement before. I would suggest making the slider end above the starting point of the slider
00:14:125 (4) - This slider wasn't good to read because it gets overlapped by 00:13:364 (1)
00:15:800 (1) - Sliders like these don't really look good and it seems like the really old mapping style. Just use normal curved sliders instead.
00:16:562 (4,5,6,7) - Same thing with those obtuse angles, mentioned above. Make the angles sharper
00:23:871 (4,5) - ^
00:27:526 (11,12,13) - This jump doesn't play well because of the sudden change of angles (sharp - obtuse - sharp, doesn't play well). You can basically fix this by putting 00:27:678 (12) nearer to the bottom.
00:29:201 (3) - Same thing mentioned above with the "old style sliders". I guess you know which sliders look like that so I won't point that out again.
00:36:054 (2) - Not a good use of flow. Doing something like this: http://puu.sh/kpPHM/a1658a3053.jpg would give better flow that fits the music better.
00:36:663 (3) - Basically, more slider point emphasize the slider but this is an overuse of them. A normal wobbly slider like this: http://puu.sh/kpPNN/50adb76db4.jpg would have the same effect (but you might want to slow the slider velocity down for this)
00:38:947 (5) - Doing something like this would create a nice oval flow.
00:39:404 (6,7) - Obtuse angle again. Make it sharper.
00:43:211 (2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't look well.
00:44:277 (6,7,8,9,1) - Same with those obtuse angles. I won't point that out again, you should know what's the issue with them now.
00:46:638 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This spacing is probably too much for this difficulty but a normal accelerating stream that gets the same spacing at the end would fit
00:51:130 (5) - Not good to read because of the overlap.
00:53:567 (5) - ^
01:01:638 (1) - Yeah, mentioned above, just change it to a normal wobbly slider.
01:04:379 (12,1) - This jump doesn't play good because of the angles, make the angle sharper.
01:11:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too much spacing but a normal accelerating stream that gets the same spacing at the end would fit
01:16:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:16:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Make it so the sliders don't overlap that much, it was very confusing to read.
01:24:404 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Those sharp angles + this high spacing make the jumps between the streams difficult, choose either sharp angles or high spacing.
01:26:155 (4,5,6) - Harder jumps would be more appropriate for this ending

-Genesis

113 posts

Joined December 2012

-Genesis 2016-05-16T20:31:27+00:00

Hey, du hast mich nach einem Mod gefragt und da nano cool ist, mache ich das jetzt mal.

00:01:489 (3,4,5,1) - Die sind ziemlich schwer zu readen, wenn die unter denen davor gestackt sind. Ich würde sie etwas nach unten bewegen.
00:05:552 (8) - lösch den, kopier 00:05:239 (7) - und drück STRG+H um den Perfekt zu spiegeln
00:08:338 (8) - der overlap ist nicht schön, also entweder etwas nach unten und links bewegen oder auf 00:08:034 (6) - stacken
00:07:881 (4) - neue combo
00:08:490 (6) - neue combo weg
00:08:947 (1) - neue combo
00:10:166 (7) - neue combo
00:10:927 (6) - neue combo weg
00:13:364 (1) - würde ich mehr nach rechts bewegen
00:15:039 (8) - neue combo
00:15:800 (1) - - keine neue combo und auch mehr nach rechts bewegen. (der Shape vom Slider sieht auch nicht so toll aus, benutz vielleicht nen roten Punkt in der Mitte
00:16:562 (1) - neue combo
00:19:912 (8) - neue combo
00:20:673 (1) - keine neue combo
00:21:130 (7) - neue combo
00:22:044 (1) - neue combo
00:22:044 (1) - keine neue combo
00:22:348 (8) - neue combo
00:23:110 (6) - keine neue combo
00:23:567 (7) - neue combo
00:24:785 (7) - neue combo
00:26:765 (6) - du solltest keinen slider auf dem großen weißen Tick enden lassen, so wäre besser: http://prntscr.com/b4upvf
00:34:836 (7,8) - verstehe nicht warum du hier wieder nach unten gehst, ansonsten ist der Part cool
00:40:013 (11) - wieder sehr unsauberer overlap. dann lieber ganz stacken

Joa eigentlich wiederholen sich von da an nur noch die selben Fehler wie inkonstante Combos (die eigentlich nie über 10 gehen sollten finde ich) und unsaubere Overlaps.
Du hast bestimmt jetzt so ungefähr rausgekriegt was ich mit den unsauberen Overlaps meine, dass das: http://prntscr.com/b4utxw einfach viel besser aussieht als http://prntscr.com/b4uu87
Allgemein von den Hitsounds sowie vom Rhythmus hast du das Lied recht gut getroffen.
Falls du noch Fragen zum Verlauf von NCs hast im Part für den ich jetzt zu faul war, weil sich die Fehler einfach weiderholen, kannst du mir ne PN in-game schicken

Ansonsten noch viel Glück mit der Map.

Neqoo

94 posts

Joined October 2014

Neqoo 2016-05-17T10:06:48+00:00

Mein kleiner Mod:

00:07:114 (3) - nach der Note bei dem roten Timingpunkt muss eine Note hin; man hört deutlich etwas
00:22:044 (1) - den Slider auf den roten Tick kürzen, das verwirrt beim Spielen
00:46:942 (1) - Wenn du es kannst, wäre ein Stream, der mit kleinem Spacing anfängt und dann jede Note bisschen weiter auseinander geht ideal, ist aber nur mein Geschmack
00:58:440 (5,6) - Beide Noten bisschen nach oben, damit man das etwas besser erkennen kann
00:58:744 (6) - Die Note dann minimal drüber oder drunter, ist aber nicht notwendig
01:20:521 (1) - Den Slider kannst du mit einem roten Punkt knicken, in welche Richtung kannst du entscheiden, falls es für dich auch besser aussieht
01:20:749 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Auch wieder den Stream wie vorhin beschrieben verändern, wieder nur Geschmackssache
01:11:688 (9) - evtl den Stream an den Slider anknüpfen und die Lücke mit einer Note noch füllen

Der Post ist nur eine Kopie vom Ingame Chat

edit:
00:19:455 (6) - Die Note minimal nach oben, damit man die beim Spielen besser sieht
00:21:892 (7) - Die Note ein bisschen runter und dann noch ein bisschen nach links, damit das wieder besser lesbar ist
00:29:658 (6) - Strg + G Damit das zu den vorherigen Slidern passt
00:32:323 (7,8) - Bisschen umpositionieren
00:33:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Mach die Slider Velocity bisschen größer bei den ersten, damit die bisschen länger sind und lass es bis zu dem letzten zu dem eigentlichen Wert sinken. Und dann die Slider so stufenweise lassen, aber die linken Slider solltest du dann um ein Kästchen(bei der feinsten Einstellung vom Gitter) nach oben setzen, damit das nicht so 100% gerade aussieht (meine Meinung) Ich erklär das gerne nochmal genauer, falls es unverständlich ist
00:57:221 (9) - bisschen weiter nach außen, damit das weniger verwirrt
00:57:374 (1) - Der Hitsound Übergang ist etwas zu heftig. Nimm für die Note noch einen lauteren Wert (60-70% ist meiner Meinung nach ok)

Und dann noch was für den Schluss: Ich weiß nicht wieso das so wirkt, aber es sieht so zufällig platziert aus. Evtl eine Struktur oder sowas entwickeln, aber ich habe dafür keinen genauen Vorschlag

Vert

424 posts

Joined October 2013

Vert 2016-05-17T13:00:32+00:00

nm from queue

rhythm of the whole song is ok for me but some patterns is not clear
just like
00:02:895 (3,6) - unnecessary overlap
00:24:328 (6,2) -
00:34:836 (7,8,1) -
00:41:841 (4,6) -
00:42:754 (1,2,3) -
01:08:034 (4,2) - maybe you can put some objects to the same distance in visual etc.01:08:034 (4) - you can put this note in the middle of
01:08:338 (1,) - this slider end & 01:08:643 (2) - this circle

that's only some example which made the whole map seems unclear,hope it helps

good luck

Rtyzen

511 posts

Joined March 2013

Rtyzen 2016-05-18T07:43:18+00:00

hey its me ur modder

[Expert]

00:06:177 (1,2,3) - These should not be so loud
00:08:947 (2,4) - Blanket
00:10:622 (5,1) - These touching looks slightly ugly
00:11:384 (2,5) - Stack
00:12:298 (1,4) - Blanket
00:17:018 (6) - NC
00:22:044 (1,4) - Blanket
00:22:805 (5,1) - Blanket
00:36:663 (5) - NC
00:36:663 (5) - Maybe you should increase the SV here
00:41:841 (4,5,6,7) - Why reverse the circular flow? Even if you dont want to go in a circle anymore such a sharp reverse is quite awkward to play
01:02:095 (2) - NC here. remove NC from 01:01:638 (1) -
01:14:734 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - There's nothing in the song which would give a reason to increase the distance here
01:20:978 (1,1) - No need for these NCs
01:23:186 (2) - Overmapped

wtf did you use storyboard to hitsound this map? why? ok I can't mod the hitsounds if I dont understand them

gl for rank anyways

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2016-05-18T12:24:02+00:00

dem so much german mods here. ~

00:00:552 (1,2) - Ändere das zu 2 triplets. Passt besser... allgemein mag ich diesen 1 reverse slider nicht.. er passt einfach fast nirgendwo rein. D:
00:08:490 (1) - Versuch' die Form ein wenig zu ändern. Der Slider sieht irgendwie doof aus in meinen Augen.
00:08:947 (2,3) - Die Circles kommen mir so.. offbeat vor. xwx
00:21:282 (3) - Underlap with the end of 00:20:673 (1) - pls

Hier is allgemein so viel overlap.. mach das doch zum underlap. ~

00:29:353 (5) - NC?
00:29:963 (7) - Mach das nonreversal und adde hier nen cirlce 00:30:267 (8) - und mach aus dem pattern 00:30:267 (8,9,1) - ein Dreieck. Also.. so http://puu.sh/oWiOb.jpg
00:32:323 (7) - Nicht wirklich nötig, und wenn dann fix die distance. ~
00:40:622 (2,3) - Distance
01:01:638 (4) - nc pls
01:21:587 (1) - meh.. sliderart fix http://puu.sh/oWiUg.jpg
01:26:612 - spinner vielleicht adden. >:

Das war mein erster deutscher Mod lol.
Denglisch confirmed. ~
Hoffe das war hilfreich. c:

nathaniel noble

91 posts

Joined March 2014

nathaniel noble 2016-05-19T13:33:47+00:00

Hiya! Here is my part of the M4M:

Since I'm new to modding i couldn't really find many issues. What I really suggest you doing is adding custom colours, maybe similar to the background colours, could be a nice touch but don't choose the same colours because the objects will blend in to the BG so try different shades.

The other thing would be that, this map has a really good flow most of the time but than you suddenly break it, like here for example:01:04:531 (1,2) - and here 01:22:196 (3,4) - etc. These seem a bit out of the place but maybe it's just me.

I'm sorry i could not help you much this way so I don't think it's worth a kudosu, but i'll shoot a star at this map to at least help you out somehow. I like this song and you mapped this pretty good too. ^_^

Good luck!~

Osu FLagstar

36 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Osu FLagstar 2016-05-19T14:24:51+00:00

Merhur wrote:
Hiya! Here is my part of the M4M:

Since I'm new to modding i couldn't really find many issues. What I really suggest you doing is adding custom colours, maybe similar to the background colours, could be a nice touch but don't choose the same colours because the objects will blend in to the BG so try different shades.

The other thing would be that, this map has a really good flow most of the time but than you suddenly break it, like here for example:01:04:531 (1,2) - and here 01:22:196 (3,4) - etc. These seem a bit out of the place but maybe it's just me.

I'm sorry i could not help you much this way so I don't think it's worth a kudosu, but i'll shoot a star at this map to at least help you out somehow. I like this song and you mapped this pretty good too. ^_^

Good luck!~

Yea about the flow issues: I was getting to the chorus today to revise it. Thanks for the star tho, appreciate it.

KarnageRage

3 posts

Joined May 2016

KarnageRage 2016-06-29T11:59:36+00:00

Maybe the Approach Rate on Hard should be increased to 8.

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-07-06T16:44:11+00:00

irc xd

2016-07-07 00:04 Underdogs: hello my komarade
2016-07-07 00:04 Underdogs: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1021725 nano - Bull's Eye (TV Size)]
2016-07-07 00:04 Osu FLagstar: hi
2016-07-07 00:04 Underdogs: so i was hoping for a GD at this map
2016-07-07 00:04 Underdogs: but before that
2016-07-07 00:04 Underdogs: let's do IRC mod 
2016-07-07 00:05 Osu FLagstar: ok cool
2016-07-07 00:05 Underdogs: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1021725 nano - Bull's Eye (TV Size) [Normal]]
2016-07-07 00:06 Underdogs: 00:00:552 (1) - you can copy this and replace 00:02:427 (3) - 
2016-07-07 00:07 Underdogs: 00:03:364 (2) -  make it straight
2016-07-07 00:07 Underdogs: 00:06:177 (5) -  the sliding sound is loud, i suggest to silence the sliding part, but not the hitsound part
2016-07-07 00:08 Osu FLagstar: how do i do that?
2016-07-07 00:08 Underdogs: c00:17:780 (8) - i wouldn't recommend this kind of slider. For newcomers and DT addicts, they might have a hard time reading this
2016-07-07 00:08 Underdogs: oh for that
2016-07-07 00:09 Underdogs: [http://puu.sh/pSo2K/5321978f6a.jpg open this]
2016-07-07 00:09 Underdogs: NO WAIT, NOT THAT ONE LMAO
2016-07-07 00:09 Underdogs: [http://puu.sh/pSo4v/455273f859.jpg this one instead
2016-07-07 00:10 Underdogs: then go to Timing Setup Panel
2016-07-07 00:10 Underdogs: from offset 6255 until offset 6411 silence that part
2016-07-07 00:11 Underdogs: http://puu.sh/pSoa8/ba1c99621e.png
2016-07-07 00:12 Underdogs: then you add the sounds back at 6489
2016-07-07 00:12 Underdogs: oh wait, 
2016-07-07 00:12 Underdogs: there is an alternative
2016-07-07 00:12 Osu FLagstar: ok i get it
2016-07-07 00:12 Underdogs: yes my comrade
2016-07-07 00:13 Osu FLagstar: i thought you cant change volume inside of a slider
2016-07-07 00:13 Underdogs: 00:23:110 (1) -  this looks weird xD
2016-07-07 00:13 Underdogs: umm
2016-07-07 00:13 Underdogs: try it?
2016-07-07 00:13 Osu FLagstar: thats why i asked
2016-07-07 00:14 Underdogs: back to topic
2016-07-07 00:14 Osu FLagstar: ok good, you found my hidden "stupid" slider
2016-07-07 00:14 Osu FLagstar: hehe
2016-07-07 00:14 Underdogs: anyone can notice tho
2016-07-07 00:14 Underdogs: 00:27:374 (8) -  this one also considered 'hard to read'
2016-07-07 00:15 Underdogs: the fact that it's really close to 00:26:917 (7) - 
2016-07-07 00:15 Underdogs: and it's a 1/4 slider
2016-07-07 00:16 Underdogs: 00:46:485 until 00:47:551
2016-07-07 00:16 Underdogs: why no map ;-;
2016-07-07 00:17 Osu FLagstar: short break
2016-07-07 00:17 Underdogs: 00:57:374 (1) -  this spinner
2016-07-07 00:17 Underdogs: is too long
2016-07-07 00:17 Underdogs: and the gap for players to recover from the spinner (00:59:810 (1) - ) is too short
2016-07-07 00:17 Osu FLagstar: there are way longer spinners
2016-07-07 00:18 Underdogs: what i meant is to shorten the slider
2016-07-07 00:18 Underdogs: considering Normal (players trying to adapt hard) you should consider shorter slider
2016-07-07 00:18 Underdogs: spinner*
2016-07-07 00:19 Underdogs: 01:06:511 (8) - this one, i dont know if it's readable or not
2016-07-07 00:19 Osu FLagstar: shorter spinners are harder, you know?
2016-07-07 00:19 Underdogs: you can always reduce the Overall Diff to make the spinner short
2016-07-07 00:19 Underdogs: easier*
2016-07-07 00:20 Underdogs: even at DT,i dont know if i can recover within 150 milisecond 
2016-07-07 00:20 Underdogs: (apply math logic here)
2016-07-07 00:20 Osu FLagstar: its fine, i made it a little bit shorter
2016-07-07 00:21 Underdogs: 01:10:775 (8,9) - 
2016-07-07 00:21 Osu FLagstar: btw i dont see a problem with the sliders, and the problem is, if i change all the 1/4 sliders, i have to redo the whole map xd
2016-07-07 00:21 Underdogs: you can always make a 1/2 
2016-07-07 00:21 Underdogs: it's easier to read
2016-07-07 00:21 Osu FLagstar: since i cant change the distance
2016-07-07 00:21 Underdogs: undo your work
2016-07-07 00:21 Underdogs: let's demonstrate
2016-07-07 00:22 Underdogs: update to latest version
2016-07-07 00:22 Underdogs: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1021725 nano - Bull's Eye (TV Size) [Normal]] +HardRock +DoubleTime
2016-07-07 00:23 Underdogs: mate 
2016-07-07 00:23 Underdogs: watch me play and see if there's a point in what i say
2016-07-07 00:23 Osu FLagstar: what r u trying to do
2016-07-07 00:23 Underdogs: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1021725 nano - Bull's Eye (TV Size) [Normal]] +HardRock +DoubleTime
2016-07-07 00:23 Underdogs: testplay
2016-07-07 00:24 Osu FLagstar: i cant update, since i already changed some things
2016-07-07 00:24 Underdogs: how about undo the mods i mentioned
2016-07-07 00:24 Underdogs: then watch me play, who knows you can see the wrongs and flaws of the map
2016-07-07 00:25 Underdogs: that means to update the map to the latest version
2016-07-07 00:25 Underdogs: dont worry, i will mention the mods later
2016-07-07 00:25 Osu FLagstar: i know my map, just explain your point, i dont wanna watch someone playing my map when i can just look at it in the editor
2016-07-07 00:25 Underdogs: welp
2016-07-07 00:25 Underdogs: if you say sos
2016-07-07 00:26 Underdogs: mixing 1/2 and 1/4 in Normal is not a good idea
2016-07-07 00:26 Underdogs: also, do you want any hitsound mods?
2016-07-07 00:27 Osu FLagstar: not rly
2016-07-07 00:27 Osu FLagstar: i dont like the hitsounding of the other maps of this song
2016-07-07 00:27 Osu FLagstar: so i doubt you have something i would like
2016-07-07 00:28 Underdogs: ohh
2016-07-07 00:28 Underdogs: cant help it
2016-07-07 00:28 Underdogs: moving onto the next diff
2016-07-07 00:28 Underdogs: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/983558 nano - Bull's Eye (TV Size) [Hard]]
2016-07-07 00:28 Osu FLagstar: wait
2016-07-07 00:28 Osu FLagstar: were still at the normal diff
2016-07-07 00:28 Osu FLagstar: i understand why u dont want mixed sliders in a normal
2016-07-07 00:29 Underdogs: im actually done with Normal tbh
2016-07-07 00:29 Underdogs: the summary has been mentioned
2016-07-07 00:29 Underdogs: 1/2 and 1/4 sliders are not to be mixed
2016-07-07 00:29 Osu FLagstar: ok w/e
2016-07-07 00:29 Underdogs: but im not the one mapping your normal so who am i to force you to change it
2016-07-07 00:29 Osu FLagstar: i try to change it
2016-07-07 00:29 Underdogs: your call xd
2016-07-07 00:30 Osu FLagstar: no, u might be right in what ure saying
2016-07-07 00:30 Osu FLagstar: i usually dont map this kind of difficulty
2016-07-07 00:30 Underdogs: same tbh
2016-07-07 00:30 Underdogs: jks, i can map Normal
2016-07-07 00:31 Underdogs: putting that aside
2016-07-07 00:31 Underdogs: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/983558 nano - Bull's Eye (TV Size) [Hard]]
2016-07-07 00:31 Osu FLagstar: what now
2016-07-07 00:31 Underdogs: 00:08:490 (1,2) -  these two i cant see a proper blanket
2016-07-07 00:32 Underdogs: [http://puu.sh/pSpha/1100a532e1.jpg i dunno about this blanket, but it should suffice]
2016-07-07 00:32 Osu FLagstar: ?
2016-07-07 00:32 Osu FLagstar: oh
2016-07-07 00:33 Osu FLagstar: i forgot to fix this
2016-07-07 00:33 Underdogs: dont worry
2016-07-07 00:33 Underdogs: more reason for me to mod xd
2016-07-07 00:33 Underdogs: 00:09:556 (4,6,7) -  these looks bad of a flow
2016-07-07 00:34 Underdogs: 00:09:861 (5) -  looks ok, but the other two is meh
2016-07-07 00:35 Osu FLagstar: yeah, was too lazy to fix this too ^^
2016-07-07 00:35 Underdogs: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5551292 i suggest this, 00:10:318 (6) - stack on 00:09:556 (4) -  slider end, and 00:10:470 (7) -  as you can see]
2016-07-07 00:36 Underdogs: 00:22:957 (8) -  stack with 00:23:871 (3) - 
2016-07-07 00:37 Underdogs: 00:46:409 (1,2,3,4,5) -  is this readable?
2016-07-07 00:38 Osu FLagstar: i mean, i can play it
2016-07-07 00:38 Osu FLagstar: ^^
2016-07-07 00:38 Osu FLagstar: but i can change it
2016-07-07 00:38 Underdogs: it's true in the ranking criteria stated that 'at least one person can play this map'
2016-07-07 00:39 Underdogs: but i dont want #modhelp roasting you nor the BNs to DQ your map should your map gets bubbled
2016-07-07 00:39 Underdogs: this is why a testplay is necessary
2016-07-07 00:39 Underdogs: moving on
2016-07-07 00:40 Underdogs: oh, there's nothing to mod on the kiai part and after 
2016-07-07 00:41 Osu FLagstar: chorus is fine?
2016-07-07 00:41 Underdogs: the kiai is ok
2016-07-07 00:41 Underdogs: although there are a lot of mistakes i wanna point
2016-07-07 00:41 Osu FLagstar: oh
2016-07-07 00:41 Underdogs: starting from the map beginning
2016-07-07 00:41 Underdogs: but let's forget about that
2016-07-07 00:42 Underdogs: oh boy
2016-07-07 00:42 Underdogs: expert
2016-07-07 00:43 Underdogs: nvm about expert, im no good kek
2016-07-07 00:43 Underdogs: posting on the forum, ttyl :D

Shoga

232 posts

Joined January 2015

Shoga 2016-07-09T00:13:59+00:00

M4M

Expert

00:08:490 (1) - could be blanket to something like 00:07:881 (1,2,3) or 00:09:100 (3)
00:50:673 (4) - should ctrl+g this
01:11:079 (3,4) - overspaced for a 1/4

SeaRasp's Insane

01:15:648 (7) - NC
00:46:409 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should reconstruct the stream like 01:10:927 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6)

the ar for hard should be riased to 8.3 or 8.5 becuz the SV is pretty fast.
same for normal should be raised to 5
the combo colour for combo colour four is kinda dark for those who are using bg dimmed should change it.

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

[Crz]Makii 2016-07-11T06:20:32+00:00

m4m back
[Expert]

00:06:177 (1,2,3) - how to use a anti-jump here?it's jumping bigger than every notes before there,though it's a light rhythm.
00:17:018 (1) - ctrl+G work better.
00:23:110 (1) - it's outscreen,unrankable.
00:45:648 (2) - ^
01:26:155 (4) - NC suggested.

[SeaRasp]

00:10:927 (1) - ctrl+J is better to keep flow.
00:15:800 (1,2) - overlap looks bad,try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5583414
00:19:303 (5,6) - better to stack,because you stacked in 00:18:998 - ,keep patterns be same is better
00:26:765 (1) - it's outscreen,unrankable.
00:27:831 (6) - 00:40:775 (3) - 00:41:384 (1) - 00:44:277 (2) - 01:08:643 (3) - ^
00:28:135 (1,2) - same,overlap is not good
01:04:531 (1,2) - 01:24:023 (1,2) - ^
01:01:638 (2) - better to NC here
01:16:181 (9) - ^

good luck on your map

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2016-11-15T13:48:32+00:00

M4M from #modreqs. I focused on bigger issues rather than nitpicking on things. I hope these points help you!

Easy

00:10:927 (3) – Might wanna start new combos on all the red ticks to keep it readable.
00:28:135 (1) – Should end on 00:29:963 – tbh.
00:33:008 (3) - ^ same, should end at 00:34:836 -
00:42:754 (1,2) – Blanket ;w; - this isn’t the only one, so go through and check them. I already spotted a lot.

Overall the rhythm feels very… complicated for an Easy. Could you try to simplify it even further? I know it’s probably difficult, but I feel that it really is too hard for a beginner.

Normal

00:28:135 – Aaaa slider velocity change, and it’s pretty noticeable.
00:36:663 (7) – This slider is noticeably faster than the others in the combo. Slider velocity changes (as mentioned above) are discouraged in Normal difficulties.
00:52:348 (1) – Honestly I feel you can remove this note. It plays better without it imo
01:11:384 (9,1) – Could you overlap this less? Maybe like: https://puu.sh/sj13I/49557e7d83.png
01:16:257 (6,1) – Spacing! Keep it consistent. Check AIMod too, this isn’t the only instance. (Ctrl+Shift+A)

Hard

00:10:318 (6,7) – This could be really confusing for this level of difficulty. I suggest moving away the 6.
00:22:957 (8,3) – Stack?
01:16:866 (1,1) – I don’t get these combos, why are these NC but nowhere else in the map this is so?
01:25:394 (5) – Remove NC for consistency.

Other than that, blanketing issues are prevalent throughout the difficulty. Check them.~ Like 01:25:394 (5) – holy what is this? ;w; Could you blanket these with each other? It would look nicer. Etc etc.

HoochieMama’s Insane

Insane

00:07:881 (2,7) – Could move this higher up above 00:08:186 (5) – because it’s a stronger sound and deserves more emphasis.
00:24:785 (7,8) – Intentional spacing difference?
00:26:765 (5) – NC for consistency.
00:35:445 (1,1) – I’m not following a pattern for these new combos to be honest…
01:09:861 (2,3,4) – Wow these linear jumps flow is a literal middle-finger to the rest of the map as you’ve never used it before for emphasis, and using it now I feel isn’t justified because there’s nothing particularly important in the song to emphasize.
01:19:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – I feel like there should be a NC somewhere in here since you did it so often before, but idk what your “plan” for new combos are so… I’ll just point this out.

SeaRasp’s Insane

Insane

00:17:323 (1,5,6,7) – I feel like these should be Ctrl+G for better flow. It kinda feels weird to play this as it is atm.
01:15:952 (8,1) – Would probably be better not to start a stream on a blue tick. The NC on it will throw people off because you’ve been putting a NC on every downbeat, so some people might misread this stream. I suggest remove 01:16:181 (1) – and have the stream start from 01:16:257 (2) – instead.

Expert

00:46:638 (2) – Stream might play weirdly if it started on a blue tick. You could start the stream from the beginning of 00:46:257 (5,1) – but I don’t think you wanna do that. You could also make 00:46:638 (2,3,4) – a reverse slider and start the stream on a red which would play slightly better.
00:50:216 (2,3) – Spacing is really small compared to the rest of the immediate area.
01:11:079 (3,4) – Again with starting streams on blues. In my opinion they play super weird, so I guess it’s preference? Either way you could shorten 01:11:079 (3) – into a ¼ kickslider and add a circle afterwards so the stream starts on a red tick instead.
01:13:211 (1,2) – No need for an extended slider here because you never use it anywhere else. I suggest removing the circle after and extending the slider to the white tick where the circle was.
01:17:780 (5,6,1) – Holy spacing. I honestly think it would sound and play better if you removed 01:18:008 (6) – altogether. It would give the pattern you’re going for a better overall feeling, because that 6 feels very out of place.
01:20:521 (5,1) – Again stream on a blue tick. I get that you want vocals before the stream but honestly it plays too weird. I’d just be repeating myself, so I’ll let you decide what you wanna do here. :3
01:21:282 (8,9,10) – If you want vocals, this could be one slider from 8 to 10 since you seem to prefer vocals.
01:22:044 (2,6) – Stack?
01:23:414 (3,1) - ^ With slider end.

Thats all, good luck.~

Spayyce

693 posts

Joined December 2013

Spayyce 2016-11-19T23:56:45+00:00

hey from #modreqs , my end of the m4m :3

[General]
Some green lines are redundant in some diffs (taking example of your easy here: http://puu.sh/snTvD/4a1971f2db.jpg) removing any unused green lines in diffs that don't utilise them would be nice

[Easy]

Some parts are quite dynamic in the way you map the vocals, a lot of changes in note consistency happen which will throw of newbie players, since they're used to consistent note hits akin to a metronome. I would make sure some parts have a longer consistency so they know what to click to. 00:37:729 (1,2,3,4,1) this is a good example of how many changes happen in note clicking and timing between each note.

00:06:177 (4) - I would consider a new combo from the guitar emphasis that's put on, will suit it nicely

00:13:364 (1) - I think bringing this slider down and making a curve on the first part of it to blanket the previous slider would look nice.

[Normal]

00:06:177 (7) - Same suggestion as the easy for the NC.

00:10:927 (5) - Move the middle anchor out a bit more so the blanket is more pronounced. Also NC here :3

00:14:125 (2) - Move the end anchor out to that the end of the slider isn't 'digging' into the previous slider (that's the best I can explain it lol)

00:15:800 (1) - NC here, you added a finish so an NC would work nice here too

00:20:673 (5) - Bring the end anchor down for a consistent gradient with the start of this slider.

00:20:673 (5) - ^^

00:25:546 (5) - ^

00:30:572 (5) - ^

00:35:445 (5) - ^ (sorry for sudden NC mod lol)

00:35:445 (5,6,7) - Make sure you spacing is consistent it looks better if you keep all the spacing the same.

00:40:318 (5) - ^^ (you get the idea of where my NC suggestions are gonna be now hopefully so I will skip any others if they arise)

00:52:805 (9) - (had to call of this one) NC here because you can see the combo length is getting really high and that means that you can't get a HP burst from completing a combo.

01:06:663 (8) - Spacing isn't right here, check the distance snap to see where it should be and change accordingly.

01:21:587 (1,2) - The way it's stacked can be confusing for some players to read.

[Hard]

Overall, I think there are many places in which sliders aren't done too well and don't look too nice, some examples I will put here:

1

2

The point I try to make in showing these is the fact they don't look professionally made due to how jagged they look in places and that one end is larger than the other, it doesn't fit well with how the music is portrayed as it doesn't warrant something like that.

However, remember that is just my opinion and you're welcome to reject and leave it as it is, but I would check the map and polish anything you see and take example of recently ranked maps and see how they form sliders and note structures.

[HoochieMama's Insane]

Similar reasons to above, things such as inconsistent spacing make it look like the map is mostly unpolished and not done to a degree of rankability. Taking a look at how astringent the rank criteria is and how the quality of maps must be you need to make sure everything is done perfectly, I saw a star jump at the beginning with inconsistent spacing between each of them and overall it doesn't look nice and feels awkward to play due to the inconsistency in the spacing.

star

I don't want to dissect your map and find everything so I will show you this as an example and as I said above I would check ranked maps and see how they're made along with how notes are placed with certain elements to them.

[SeaRasp's Insane]

00:22:805 (1) - I wouldn't have a new combo it feels done prematurely and the music isn't changing to warrant this.

00:30:572 (1) - I would curve the first part more to allow a better flow of the cursor between this slider and also to pronounce the upcoming blanket more.

00:46:409 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This diff spike is really questionable since it alone accounts for 0.1 of the whole star rating in just a couple seconds, I would condense the spacing and try to use 1/4 to offset the spike in difficulty that comes with it.

I can't effective mod the upper two difficulties well due to skill restrictions, I apologise for that. Overall I think the overall quality of your map needs to be assessed and more mods are needed to get this to rank quality. Other than that I wish the best for your map and good luck.

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Lulu- 2016-11-20T20:54:00+00:00

Hey there, M4M!

[Expert+]
00:05:239 (3,4) - I'd recommend you to place them similar to this, as this pattern is more pleasant to play due to the momentum that's being built up
00:10:166 (6,8,10) - Fix these overlaps, they're a mess. Either make the triangle cleaner and more obvious, or make them overlap in a straight line
00:13:820 (2) - Stack this with 00:13:059 (9) ?
00:18:694 (2,3) - You should stay consistent with your slider shapes, 3 is also pretty ugly imo
00:24:937 (7,9,1) - Make these overlap in a straight line and rotate 1, so it still stacks with 9
00:26:003 (2) - Blanket with 1
00:37:729 (1) - Why not curve it like this?
00:56:688 (8,9) - Nerf this
00:57:221 (12,1,2,3) - Try slightly overlapping instead of stacking these
01:16:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what the actual fuck. At least NC when the stream splits and nerf this

This diff is mostly fine except for some design mistakes

[Expert]
00:04:458 (2) - Stack with 00:03:677 (6) -
00:04:770 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - How about this?
00:20:673 (1) - The wave is overdone, try something like this
00:21:130 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - The song is building up tension, while this pattern completely ignores it and stays the same difficulty
00:28:135 (1) - 00:35:140 (8) This part is really bland, try coming up with something more creative
00:38:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Avoid repeating your patterns like this
00:42:298 (5,6,7) - ^
00:44:582 (5,6,7) - This is fine tho
00:44:886 (7,1) - Overkill jump for no reason at all
00:45:191 (1) - Make this curve smoother
00:47:628 (1) - Overdone wave shape again
00:55:546 (5) - This slider is too curvy
00:58:744 (6,7) - Rotate and space these similar to this
01:04:531 (1) - Start this behind 5 for more momentum
01:10:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You could improve the flow in this part

Same like Expert+ pretty much except for some repetetive and boring patterns

[SeaRasp's Insane]
00:22:501 (1,1) - Unnecessary NCs
00:27:831 (6) - This barely is onscreen, move a bit closer to 5
00:30:572 (1) - Clean up the curves
00:30:572 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:57:374 (1) - 01:00:724 (1) Mute the sliderends to emphasize the sounds better
01:02:551 (2) - Bad overlap
01:15:952 (2) - ^
01:18:541 (2) - Blanket with 1?
01:20:902 (1,1) - Stack these

This needs more polishing but is pretty ok

[HoochieMama's Insane]
00:00:552 (1,2,3,4) - Polish
00:05:083 (6,1) - Stack these to 1 and 2
00:05:552 (2,3) - Don't make these overlap with the star
00:08:490 (7) - I'd suggest you to make this into a slider, the map's flow is just entirely gone with a break this big when the song kicks off
00:08:795 (1) - Don't make sliders end on white ticks, it's destroying the rhythm in 95% of cases.
00:13:211 (6,7,8) - Overmapped

I'm really sorry, but this is too much for me to mod. It's really unpolished and would need a lot more work and experience in order to become rankable. Consider removing this diff from the set and put it in again once it either got remapped and has reached a certain degree of quality, or scrap it entirely.

[Light Insa- Hard]
00:05:864 (5) - Move this down by a bit
00:12:907 (7,8,1) - Bad flow
00:17:628 (8) - As already mentioned
00:20:673 (1) - ^
00:25:089 (7,8,1) - Bad flow again
00:26:003 (2) - Blanket with 1
00:26:917 (6) - Stack with 2?
00:27:374 (8) -
00:28:135 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fix these distances and make them parallel, some of these aren't
00:35:445 (1) - This curve is too long
00:36:054 (3) - ^
00:41:992 - Missed beat
00:42:754 (1) -
00:45:648 (2) - Ugly slider
00:46:409 (4,5,6,7) - Line these up or something
00:50:369 (2) - Stack with 8
01:01:638 (4) - NC
01:02:095 (1) - Too curvy
01:13:211 (1) -
01:14:277 (1) - Stack with 2
01:22:957 (5) -
01:24:480 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please add more variation to this

This diff's star rating is well above what a Hard should have. Consider renaming this to Hyper or something and adding an Advanced diff to even the spread out.

Good luck with your map!

Gerar14x

95 posts

Joined May 2014

Gerar14x 2016-12-01T20:53:49+00:00

Hi~ from m4m

Expert+

You can choose a better name for this diff :/
00:18:998 (3) - I think you should use the same shape in the curved slider in that section, this one is curved more than others
00:32:095 (6,7,8) - the 1/4 gap between 6-7 is too far and not intuitive imo, being that part passive (compare it with 00:56:460 (7,8,9) - the spacing is almost the same, but here is a intense part of the song, so here is fine)
01:09:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - that linear pattern fells weird, since its the only time you use it
01:13:211 (7,8) - a 1/2 gap would be better imo

Expert

00:15:800 (1,3) - blanket~
00:16:562 (4,1) - You can space them a little more, they almost touching each other
00:27:374 (3,4,5,7) - id make a blanket here, would be better imo
00:32:095 (6,7,8) - same thing about the 1/4 gap i mentioned in expert+

SeaRasp's Insane

00:20:521 (4) - I feel that placement a little weird, without the overlap would look clearer
00:33:465 (2,3) - two 1/2 sliders could be better there imo

Hyper

00:00:552 (1,3,4) - You could work a bit more the spacing there, some of them are almost touching each other
00:59:810 (1,2,3) - They should have same spacing imo
01:19:607 (2,3,4) - you can space them just a little
01:25:089 (4,5) - weird change of direction, breaks the flow there

Hope this helps~

-NeBu-

435 posts

Joined March 2014

-NeBu- 2016-12-02T15:12:26+00:00

hey, from m4m:

Easy:

00:04:302 (3) - Keep the same shape as the slider before.
00:06:177 (1) - Overlap.
00:25:546 (3) - ^
00:33:008 (3) - This one is kinda ugly, add some points between: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6708834
00:40:318 (3) - This shape here actually is too strong, put the last point on x:96 and y:135 and move middle one slightly up.
00:48:237 (1,2,3) - Avoid overlaps on easy, really.
00:53:110 (1,2,3) - ^ - Can understand 00:52:805 (5,1) - these two, but rest no.
01:14:277 (3) - Overlap + ugly slider. (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6708868 [?]) + 01:14:277 (3,4,5) - I feel like end of slider and the next two circles should have been triangle?
01:21:130 (6,1) - You clearly see the change in distance snap.

Normal:

00:22:044 (3) - Add point at the middle with shape down.
00:27:221 (4) - Reverse it two more times up to next big white tick?
01:16:257 (6) - End of slider should go down.

Much better than Easy.

Advanced:

00:04:302 (5) - Normal blanket slider would fit better.
00:48:694 (5) - Feel like NC for me.

Hyper:

00:27:374 (8) - You can end this on red tick and on blue add circle.

Good one, actually I don't know what happened on Easy since next diffs are way better.

SeaRasp's Insane:

00:32:551 (3) - I feel like adding circle on x:212, y:224 ~~
00:33:465 (2) - Shape to the right.
00:41:384 (1) - Make this slider blanket to 00:41:079 (4) -
01:04:988 (2) - Incomplete overlap or...?
01:13:820 (5,1) - Blanket, you can clearly see it when you move 01:14:277 (1) - in the place of 01:14:125 (6) -

Awesome diff, so fun to play.

Expert:

00:38:643 (4,1) - Swap rhythm.

Nothing I can see to be honest.

Marksman:

Nah, I can't find anything, it's okay.
Overall mapset is okay, song is awesome. Easy was actually bad in my opinion and maybe Normal, but the rest is fun to play so good luck.

-Zeraora

654 posts

Joined November 2014

-Zeraora 2016-12-02T15:14:45+00:00

M4M here!

[General]

Disable "Widescreen Support" on all difficulties.
AIMod seems to disagree with the stack leniencies of some difficulty. I suggest having a constant StkLen.
You may want to put in another Insane difficulty here. One with the range between 4.2 - 4.8, or something. The difference between Hyper and SeaRasp's Insane is just too large, which is a bad spread.

[Easy]

Are the SV changes necessary? I mean, they're not really needed, especially on easier difficulties like this one.
00:23:110 (1,3) - The overlap of these two is a bit unsettling for me. The hit icon (300, etc) from 00:23:110 (1) - is still on when 00:25:546 (3) - is drawn.
00:33:008 (3) - Based from previous NC pattern, this should be left with a NC.
00:35:445 (4) - This is fine, but I highly suggest breaking this down to two sliders.
00:52:805 (5) - Put this on the slider body of 00:50:369 (3) - for cleanliness purposes.
00:57:374 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time from the spinner here. You may delete 01:00:267 (1) - and just extend the spinner to 01:00:724 - .
While, yes, it can be considered as "Easy" because of star rating, in my opinion, the rhythm of the objects here is too complex (pattern-less) for beginners to follow. I don't think following just the vocals will do. I'm guessing a style just like your Normal will be good... Just with less 1/1 sliders and circles, and simpler rhythm.

[Normal]

00:02:427 (3,5) - NC's are needed here imo.
00:11:688 (2) - DS error. This should be stack on to the 00:09:861 (3) - slider end.
00:14:734 (3,1) - Blanket should be fixed. I guess.
00:22:653 (4) - This would seem better, imo, if the white anchor were to be removed.
00:57:374 (1,1,2,3) - Not enough recovery time, it's still too short for a normal difficulty.
01:05:902 (3,4) - Huh... A bit awkward pause here. The pause is just the weird one out here, for the other parts were pretty much continuous.
01:16:257 (6) - I'd point this a bit downward to avoid overlaps.
01:19:607 (2,6,1) - For this part, I suggest stacking 01:21:130 (6) - on to 01:19:607 (2) - and just continue onwards. Another thing you could do is fix 01:21:130 (6) - so that 01:21:587 (1) - would stack on 01:19:912 (3) - .
01:25:394 (4,5) - Changing these into a slider seems nice.

[Advanced]

00:17:932 (6,2,3) - Looks like a bad overlap to me.
00:21:130 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wouldn't these be complicated to read for some players?
00:28:135 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think they're fine, but I just find it off to see these just clumped at the left side of the playfield.
00:52:501 - The "-ch" sound seems to go here. I guess you should put something here.
01:12:602 (3,4,5,6) - Since the slider theme goes 3/4 on 01:13:211 (5,6) - , I suggest putting those in a different-ish placement to make the difference between 1/2 and 3/4 clearer.
01:24:480 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Too much for a 1/2 spam, I guess? Changing 01:25:394 (7,8) - into a single slider and putting an NC there are what I recommend.

[Hyper]

00:08:034 (3) - A reverse slider seems to be a good idea. Also it'd be useful for emphasizing 00:08:490 (1) - .
00:11:688 (3) - Way too high up. I mean, that's not much of a problem, but it kinda touches the default scorebar now soooo...
00:25:546 (1,8) - Are on pretty much same rhythm. With that, I'm thinking that 00:27:374 (8) - should be emphasized for consistency.
00:52:957 (3,7) - Fix stack.
00:48:998 (6,1) - Stack (1)'s slider end on (6) to avoid off-looking further overlaps.

[SeaRasp's Insane]

00:46:409 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Whoa what's with this stream? No wonder this is 5.19*. As for the seemingly only insane difficulty, this should be simplified in a way that it uses smaller DS and 1/4 sliders.
It's really good! Despite being, imo, too insane for an insane considering the bpm.

[Marksman]

There's really nothing I can say about this, except that (some) NC patterns should be changed, especially on the kiai; where combo reaches 12+ (01:02:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - , etc) which is too long.

Good luck!

Kotori-Chan

496 posts

Joined February 2014

Kotori-Chan 2016-12-02T17:23:34+00:00

late m4m ~

Easy

fix those ds errors,easy and normal need to have consistent ds,rn unrankable issue~

00:02:427 (2,3) - could be a better blanket,looks kinda meh

00:23:110 (1,2) - why not make these two the same shape ?

00:37:729 (1,2) - ^^

00:30:267 - this is a strong beat/vocal imo,players want to be able to click something here

00:35:140 - a circle here would suit pretty nicely,vocals~

00:47:932 - vocals actually start here,so why is there nothing ?

00:52:805 (5,2) - avoid stacks in easy diffs

00:59:810 - after a spinner there has to be atleast 3-4 white ticks in an easy diff till the next object

Normal

same like in easy diff,fix ds errors

00:09:861 (3,2) - if you want to stack them,pls do it correctly

00:27:221 (4) - this slider pointing in a different position than where the next object is,that too weird for a normal

00:37:272 - could be a slider instead,represents that guitar sounds better

00:38:947 - strong downbeat imo,make it clickable,having it on a slider end isnt really good....is just meh

00:43:820 - ^^^^^

00:59:201 - in normal there have to be atleast 2-3 white ticks before the next note after a spinner~

01:10:166 (2,4,5) - this looks kinda messy imo

Advanced

00:27:069 (4,5,6) - pls consistent ds lol

01:02:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - pls make this cleaner,rn it looks so tight and meh

01:05:597 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same goes for all this,you have plenty of space,so why making it so tight and everything~

Hyper

seems fine~

Searasp insane

00:33:008 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - could be one combo

Expert

00:06:177 (1,2,3) - even for a 5.6 that spacing...ok ?

00:59:810 (1,2,3) - ^^^^ again,sigh~

00:38:947 - that circles doesnt really suit well to the vocals,slider pls

00:41:841 (4) - overlap with hpbar

00:54:328 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - okay,these jumps really make no sense at all... you could delete those 00:54:937 (1,2,3,4) - and replace with sliders,that makes more sense

Marksman

am not really good at modding some pp 6* tv size thing,so meh

and just btw how this mapset is rn,its sadly unrankable because the range between hyper and searasp insane is WAY too big,this definitely needs some 4* diff if you're really trying to rank

good luck tho~

niyuji

529 posts

Joined November 2014

niyuji 2016-12-02T20:18:01+00:00

Hi. o/

I'm back from my m4m queue.

Marksman

00:05:552 (5,6) - move to the right (348 276) so 00:05:239 (3,4,5) - creates straight line
00:09:252 (3,4) - 00:13:820 (2,3) - strange flow
00:18:237 (1) - move to the left so 00:17:475 (7) - is somewhere inside that slider (like 228 336)
00:18:998 (3,5) - fix blanket
00:20:673 (11) - ctrl+j would help
00:38:643 (4,5,6) - so weird to play
00:51:739 (7,10) - move to 304 92 (looks better)
01:07:120 (1,3) - end stack with 01:06:359 (11) - end

Expert

00:21:587 (5) - stack with 00:22:653 (4) -
01:20:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you can make this shape look better
00:47:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same ^

SeaRasp's Insane

00:09:252 (3) - stack with 00:08:490 (1) - end
00:30:267 (4) - 00:30:419 - should add a circle here; so i think you should replace this slider with 2 circles; don't ignore the sound
00:32:704 (4) - ^
00:57:298 (8) - doesn't fit here; overmapped
01:03:465 (1) - i would add a circle at the end like here 01:13:820 (5,6) -

Good luck.

Soquire

41 posts

Joined November 2013

Soquire 2016-12-02T20:24:23+00:00

Hey, taiko gd

GD

osu file format v14

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I can also make a std gd kinda "light insane" or something. Interested?

AllieBork

83 posts

Joined August 2010

AllieBork 2016-12-03T13:39:12+00:00

Hi, for the M4M.

Easy

00:09:861 (2) - can blanket this better
00:13:364 (1,2) - I think these would work better as curved sliders, just like before. Then you can blanket with the note before (1), too.
00:24:480 (2) - can blanket this better
00:43:973 (2,3) - it'd look better if the latter slider would go in the same direction as the previous slider end.
00:46:409 (4) - You could blanket the end of this for the next note
00:50:369 (3) - Would look better blanketed IMO
00:52:501 (5,1) - These are very close together though the 1 comes deceptively late, increase its distance
00:55:242 (3) - could blanket this if you want
01:04:531 (3) - same here
01:24:023 (3) - you could change this so the previous slider flows into it better

Overall: I like the way the map plays out, all slider starts and ends are justified, and it plays well, I like the overall design.

Normal

00:06:177 (1) - In my opinion this would be better if you kept the slider, but took off the repeat, then placed a note instead for the final hit.
00:12:907 (4,1) - tilt (4) slightly better so it flows into the next slider
00:45:191 (1,2) - could perhaps change this to blanket closer, so that it can be blanketed up until the end, rather than awkwardly curving in.
01:06:511 (4) - make this start one 1/4 later so it doesnt start before the singing
01:11:841 (1) - put this closer to the previous note, the DS equality is off and the pattern from before makes it seem like it'll come on the white tick.

Overall: it's got less aesthetic issues and it plays well.

Advanced

00:21:739 (4,5,6,7) - in my opinion you should move it so that they become parallel sliders, rather than going over the same track. I like the idea, but I don't think it's appropriate at this difficulty.
00:25:089 (7,1) - these two seem slightly incorrected lined up
01:16:257 (7) - make this end earlier just like this one does 01:20:673 (6)
01:18:998 (8) - make this slider end on the red tick (up to preference though, IMO, both work but I prefer end on red tick to sustain the pattern from before)

from 01:02:095 (1) up to 01:21:587 (1) - from this point and onwards the spacing should get higher because it's kiai time. In the next section there's a lot of overlaps and it's all very densely put together and it's very hard to read and play. There's some stacked circles too that are quite annoying.

Overall: the mapping style has too low spacing and is too dense and becomes annoying, otherwise there's not many individual issues.

Hyper

00:28:135 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - In my opinion it'd be better to remap this with single notes instead of sliders
00:46:714 (5,6,7) - could replace with triplets and change the positions, these are a nuisance to play through
01:03:465 (1) - would in my opinion better end on the red tick
01:05:597 (5,1) - timing of these sliders does not match with the vocals. There's a strong vocal on the end of (5), should be an active hit, and there's no vocal on the start of (1). There is however a vocal in the red tick right before the end of the (1) slider.
You could fix this by replacing the two sliders with a hitcircle, then a slider starting where (5) now ends, and ending on the red tick before (1) ends now.
01:06:815 (4) - would be better as two hitcircles because of the singing
01:10:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - replace the first slider with a hit, then have a triplet minislider instead of this slider-circle-slider thing. Then add one extra circle before what is now (4), to lead up to the final repeat slider and still follow the drums. It doesn't fit well with the difficulty IMO to have this slider note slider twice in a row.
01:13:211 (1) - consider ending on the red tick again
01:16:257 (7) - consider making this end slightly earlier to make it easier to play

Overall: I like the increased spacing in this difficulty, but it's a bit of a jump up from Advanced in that sense. This'd be fixed by slightly upping the spacing in that one. The density fits and I like the pacing, but there's more individual bits that could use work, as I mentioned above.

Map has potential, the higher diffs are great, I think, so work on the issues here and you'll have a great overall map. (modded right before you updated, hopefully you can still work out what I meant in each case and it didn't affect too much)

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-12-03T23:47:08+00:00

just sth u should know to avoid DQ

this 00:46:790 (2) - this 00:47:095 (2) - and this 00:47:399 (2) - are overmapped

no kudos and good luck

Soquire

41 posts

Joined November 2013

Soquire 2016-12-04T18:40:37+00:00

done

4.29 light insane

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taiko fix

osu file format v14

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Title:Bull's Eye (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Bull's Eye (TV Size)
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:ナノ
Creator:Osu FLagstar
Version:Soquire's Oni
Source:緋弾のアリア (Hidan No Aria)
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