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ZUN - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial [Taiko]

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Surono
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 Januari 2016 at 22:18:46

Artist: ZUN
Title: Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Touhou Sakuya Izayoi Theme TH 06 EoSD Embodiment of Scarlet Devil darkdunskin
BPM: 146
Filesize: 2772kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dunskin's Muzukashii (2,76 stars, 340 notes)
  2. Dunskin's Oni (3,71 stars, 437 notes)
  3. Futsuu (2,19 stars, 180 notes)
  4. Inner Oni (4,42 stars, 537 notes)
  5. Kantan (1,15 stars, 100 notes)
  6. Oni (3,54 stars, 429 notes)
Download: ZUN - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Nishizumi wrote:

lagu jaman mesir lagi....
Lagu Jaman Mesir Kuno :V
evil things
PatZar
wew
Topic Starter
Surono
Fuel
Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod
What happened to all the other diffs I swear there were more lol
This'll be short, I can mod it again later when new diffs are added.

General
2915 ms offset sounds a bit off, try 2900?

Futsuu
  1. 00:03:721 (2,3,4) - These notes sound a bit weird with the music, probably because you're stuck with 1/2 spacing. The note fits better at 00:03:619 like you did it in the Inner Oni but idk if that's allowed in a Futsuu. IMO it would sound better if you added a note at 00:03:310. Alternatively try this?
  2. 00:27:557 (26) - I think this note sounds better as a d, as you use the d with the lower-sounding drum.
  3. 00:54:680 - I think you should add a note here, probably a d.
Inner Oni
yay i can pass this diff lol
  1. 00:11:530 (59) - Stream starting here is long, maybe split it by removing 00:12:660 (70)? Wasn't too bad to play though (even for me lol).
  2. 00:18:721 (119,120) - Ctrl + G, the emphasis should be on 119 not 120 considering where you placed the k's in this pattern.
  3. 00:41:941 (55) - Consider changing this to k, to (sorta) lead into the next part of the song.
  4. 00:45:023 (15,16,17) - The ddk d d felt a bit repetitive (not that it didn't fit), maybe try kdk to match the music's pitch a little more and get a bit of variation?
This diff was fun ^_^

Hope it helps :D
DarkDunskin
Will you accept my Guest Diffs?

http://puu.sh/koPGs/2480bb1cf1.rar

Probably going to mod your diffs soon.

EDIT: Don't forget to add "darkdunskin" in your tags if you do :)
Topic Starter
Surono

DarkDunskin wrote:

Will you accept my Guest Diffs?

http://puu.sh/koPGs/2480bb1cf1.rar

Probably going to mod your diffs soon.

EDIT: Don't forget to add "darkdunskin" in your tags if you do :)
yuss, i need thiz :^) thx Majesty
Topic Starter
Surono

L1m3s wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod
What happened to all the other diffs I swear there were more lol
This'll be short, I can mod it again later when new diffs are added.

General
2915 ms offset sounds a bit off, try 2900? Yuuss Okhe

Futsuu
  1. 00:03:721 (2,3,4) - These notes sound a bit weird with the music, probably because you're stuck with 1/2 spacing. The note fits better at 00:03:619 like you did it in the Inner Oni but idk if that's allowed in a Futsuu. IMO it would sound better if you added a note at 00:03:310. Alternatively try this? make other think by self, thx
  2. 00:27:557 (26) - I think this note sounds better as a d, as you use the d with the lower-sounding drum. ups
  3. 00:54:680 - I think you should add a note here, probably a d. okhe
Inner Oni
yay i can pass this diff lol :^) wuw............
  1. 00:11:530 (59) - Stream starting here is long, maybe split it by removing 00:12:660 (70)? Wasn't too bad to play though (even for me lol). nice looking to deleting note
  2. 00:18:721 (119,120) - Ctrl + G, the emphasis should be on 119 not 120 considering where you placed the k's in this pattern. wuh nice dddkkk XD
  3. 00:41:941 (55) - Consider changing this to k, to (sorta) lead into the next part of the song. maybe keep this, is enough XD
  4. 00:45:023 (15,16,17) - The ddk d d felt a bit repetitive (not that it didn't fit), maybe try kdk to match the music's pitch a little more and get a bit of variation? keep.. i am not make confused to play.. on next length is have already kdk patterns XD
This diff was fun ^_^ yeeee

Hope it helps :D
Kyouren
Not need kantan diff? I want make too xD
Topic Starter
Surono

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Not need kantan diff? I want make too xD
;_; i just tired with that diff... and why i make futsuu 2.0 ↓ bcus is difficult to make ketan. *so, u can make that diff if u not confused* ~Footshoes gw anchurss~
Nishizumi
lagu jaman mesir lagi....
Topic Starter
Surono

Nishizumi wrote:

lagu jaman mesir lagi....
:^) :^) :^) : ^): ^) :^) : ) ^:) : ^) :^) : ^) ^: ^) ^: ^) ^: ^) ^: ^ :^)^ ^ ^^
EdamaMe411
M4M~ ;)

Inner Oni
00:22:024 (141) - change d. Considering sound pitch and consistency with00:18:839 (116,117,118,119) - (but this point swap color haha)

00:48:531 (36,37,38,39) - why you use 1/6? I heard 1/4 kkd :D (If you want to use 1/6 you can use this in kiai time ;) but the other part,1/6 is not match well)
00:55:106 (79,80,81,82) - ^ kdd or kkd

01:13:291 (94) - d,,,sound pitch is low



lol
good map!High Quality~ :D

Oni
The first part,I don't like pattern....

please see this pattern! I think above pattern is fine :D

00:25:928 - add note. This point hear sound clearly
00:26:134 (8) - k? if you accept ^'s modding :D

00:29:421 - d? sound Drum clearly

00:30:038 (11) - Why big note?i think k... ;)

00:53:462 (52,53,54,55) - and 00:46:887 (19,20,21,22) - is same sound. you should do same color pattern :)

ok temporarily finish!

I' ll come this forum to see this map :D
And take my star :)
Topic Starter
Surono
will reply mod, dem.. why just my diff ;w; (rip my low diff and GDs, spread...)
LigerZero
cuman nggak ada "koumakyou" doang di Tag....

Sukses selalu dengan mapnya ya Surono
Topic Starter
Surono

EdamaMe411 wrote:

M4M~ ;) w8... I get something on my head its make confused, patient for Horrorrssssss

Inner Oni
00:22:024 (141) - change d. Considering sound pitch and consistency with00:18:839 (116,117,118,119) - (but this point swap color haha)HAHAHA yes, I Changed this.. is randomly drum pitch too. so, why not

00:48:531 (36,37,38,39) - why you use 1/6? I heard 1/4 kkd :D (If you want to use 1/6 you can use this in kiai time ;) but the other part,1/6 is not match well) yes, kiai is fit but over.. but in non-kiai is have support to be as 1/6 patterns too imo
00:55:106 (79,80,81,82) - ^ kdd or kkd ^

01:13:291 (94) - d,,,sound pitch is low no, is variety pattern. some patterns already have ddkdkkd



lol
good map!High Quality~ :D :lol:

Oni
The first part,I don't like pattern....

please see this pattern! I think above pattern is fine :D no imo.. My Pattern is based following important pitch

00:25:928 - add note. This point hear sound clearly I no have idea, same above.. and is rest for Oni
00:26:134 (8) - k? if you accept ^'s modding :D oh I see... ^ Added! but idk again, is spreading..

00:29:421 - d? sound Drum clearly ^

00:30:038 (11) - Why big note?i think k... ;) for power flow

00:53:462 (52,53,54,55) - and 00:46:887 (19,20,21,22) - is same sound. you should do same color pattern :) yes this

ok temporarily finish!

I' ll come this forum to see this map :D
And take my star :)

thanks Mod!! I will Mod your Spooky song :'D

LigerZero wrote:

cuman nggak ada "koumakyou" doang di Tag....

Sukses selalu dengan mapnya ya Surono
makasih mas!
snz
From My Queue

Oni
00:15:654 (66) - Snap To 00:15:757
00:20:791 (93) - Add Finish
00:37:024 (18,19,20) - Ctrl+G
00:46:476 (18) - Change This To k
00:56:750 (71,72,73) - Ctrl+G
00:59:832 (2,3) - ^
01:04:764 - ddkkd
01:15:038 (56) - Change This To k
01:21:202 (95,96,97) - Ctrl+G

Good luck with... rank :P
Topic Starter
Surono
sorry.. no change at all, mostly of your mod is (broken my consistent pattern/hitsound) wrong emphasize with pattern

but thanks for you suggestion, take this starfruit
wasonz
[Kantan]

01:14:832 - add k

[Futsuu]

01:15:038 - add k

nothing else, i can't really mod.
+2 star well mapped
Topic Starter
Surono
thanks sir!1!!
Elfie
Hi, M4M please

Inner Oni

  1. 00:03:428 - k, sound is similar to 00:04:045 - for example
  2. 00:03:634 - d if you want to follow drums, sound is similar to previous 00:03:531 - , and melody pitch isn't higher
  3. 00:05:688 - k, differs audibly from sounds surrounding this
  4. 00:06:716 - k, the same as 00:03:428 -
  5. 00:15:449 - 00:16:065 - you may cut this pattern to emphasise drums, example:
  6. 00:17:093 - 00:17:709 - possible variations:



    00:17:195 - this sound is more similar to 00:17:298 - , so d
    00:17:401 - this sound may be considered as a little higher than previous, so k is possible
  7. 00:18:942 - k, sound the same as 00:18:839 -
  8. 00:19:147 - d, sound the same as 00:18:428 - for example
  9. 00:20:688 - k, high pitch
  10. 00:22:024 - k, sound is similar to ones that surround it
  11. 00:24:182 -;00:24:182 - ;00:29:113 - ;00:30:346 - you may add d, there's a quiet cymbal. Diff is inner oni so it is possible to consider this.
  12. 00:47:298 - k? higher pitch, and consistency with 00:53:873 -
  13. 01:00:243 -;01:13:394 - d, sound differs

Dunskin's Oni

  1. 00:07:230 - 00:07:846 - this rythm seems odd, the melody is very quiet somewhere in background and delayed (?) Like it occures 00:07:332 - here for example but note is 00:07:230 - ...
    Think of some change maybe? 00:03:942 - 00:04:558 - the part consistent to this also, even though it feels more natural to play
  2. 00:13:599 - 00:14:216 -

    00:13:908 - this sound is higher
    00:14:216 - k drum hit similar to 00:13:394 - , although music may seem lower
  3. 00:17:093 - 00:17:504 -; 00:20:380 - 00:20:791 - dkkkd? followed music pitch

Oni

  1. 00:20:791 - add d to be consistent in pattern length with next part
    besides that diff seems ok

Futsuu

  1. 00:03:531 - 00:04:353 - this sounds very very odd but I have no idea how to place this notes here to make it better
    Maybe dd ddd as next? Still weird.

Other diffs seem okay :)
Volta
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Topic Starter
Surono
auhhhhhh.. pada ke sini ;_; marathon gw kek huee

tolong bantuin pak dunskin. thx
Volta
asked by sur.

currently the spread is quite imbalance. gap between Futsuu and Muzu is too wide, especially starting at 00:22:641 - . suggesting to add more notes in futsuu and remove some notes in muzu

[Dunskins's Muzukashii]
00:22:641 ~ 00:32:504 - can delete some notes such as 00:23:462 - , 00:28:394 - for spread's sake

00:42:367 ~ 00:55:415 - you may remove the triplets at 00:43:497 - , 00:45:141 - , etc. it will helps to make better spread with futsuu, and this section is calmer than 00:55:517 ~ 01:08:668 - so using less notes will be more appropriate imo.

may as well remove the triplet at 00:17:195 - , 00:18:839 - , 00:20:483 -

how about make a rest moment in the kiai by deleting 01:14:216 - currently no break in the kiai and this shouldn't happen in muzu.

[Futsuu]
make at least 1 rest moment in kiai (probably at 01:14:832 - )

00:22:435 ~ 00:32:504 - add some more notes?
00:23:668 - add k to follow drum
00:28:599 - ^
00:31:682 - ^, a build up sounds good

00:33:120 - move to 00:33:325 - to give longer break?
00:35:997 - change to d and move to 00:36:202 - ? you follow the instrument at 00:35:586 - but unfinished and suddenly turn tu drom
00:39:901 ~ 00:42:367 - can add some more notes. up to you

00:45:243 - add something
00:51:819 - ^

Surono wrote:

~Footshoes gw anchurss~
nice map. good luck!
Topic Starter
Surono

Elfie wrote:

Hi, M4M please

Inner Oni

  1. 00:03:428 - k, sound is similar to 00:04:045 - for example
  2. 00:03:634 - d if you want to follow drums, sound is similar to previous 00:03:531 - , and melody pitch isn't higher ^ I dont understand it and above.. is fine
  3. 00:05:688 - k, differs audibly from sounds surrounding this I like this be a monotone
  4. 00:06:716 - k, the same as 00:03:428 -
  5. 00:15:449 - 00:16:065 - you may cut this pattern to emphasise drums, example:
    no
  6. 00:17:093 - 00:17:709 - possible variations:


    not all, I keep with mine
    00:17:195 - this sound is more similar to 00:17:298 - , so d
    00:17:401 - this sound may be considered as a little higher than previous, so k is possible
  7. 00:18:942 - k, sound the same as 00:18:839 -
  8. 00:19:147 - d, sound the same as 00:18:428 - for example
  9. 00:20:688 - k, high pitch
  10. 00:22:024 - k, sound is similar to ones that surround it
  11. 00:24:182 -;00:24:182 - ;00:29:113 - ;00:30:346 - you may add d, there's a quiet cymbal. Diff is inner oni so it is possible to consider this.
  12. 00:47:298 - k? higher pitch, and consistency with 00:53:873 - different flow
  13. 01:00:243 -;01:13:394 - d, sound differs

Some point you took is mostly complex.. I no have idea with that, sorry

Oni

  1. 00:20:791 - add d to be consistent in pattern length with next part
    besides that diff seems ok

Futsuu

  1. 00:03:531 - 00:04:353 - this sounds very very odd but I have no idea how to place this notes here to make it better
    Maybe dd ddd as next? Still weird. this cuz Music, how ez do it? lol

Other diffs seem okay :)
thanks!

Volta wrote:

asked by sur.

currently the spread is quite imbalance. gap between Futsuu and Muzu is too wide, especially starting at 00:22:641 - . suggesting to add more notes in futsuu and remove some notes in muzu

[Futsuu]
make at least 1 rest moment in kiai (probably at 01:14:832 - ) yes delete it

00:22:435 ~ 00:32:504 - add some more notes? some added like xx pattern, dd
00:23:668 - add k to follow drum no, some pattern at here is get improve from above * dd d k *
00:28:599 - ^ ^
00:31:682 - ^, a build up sounds good b. just follow main pitch

00:33:120 - move to 00:33:325 - to give longer break? yes, except 00:35:586 - this one
00:35:997 - change to d and move to 00:36:202 - ? you follow the instrument at 00:35:586 - but unfinished and suddenly turn tu drom okay, I see
00:39:901 ~ 00:42:367 - can add some more notes. up to you I keep this now, just follow main

00:45:243 - add something
00:51:819 - ^ ^

Surono wrote:

~Footshoes gw anchurss~
nice map. good luck!
Terima Kasih!
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