victorica_db wrote:

几把图

shd
01:13:684 - 这段太垃圾，形状还丑 换成反键好
02:09:695 - 这里开是 放连续2连要比你后面那部份放到连点要好很多
02:29:496 (149496|1) - 这放到4
02:32:963 (152963|2) - 这放到1
02:35:055 (155055|0) - 放到4
02:36:055 (156055|3) - 2
02:36:198 (156198|1) - 1

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

this map is very good as my opinion, some small suggestions before we get started:

check

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[Normal]
01:02:784 (62784|3) - move this to 1, same pitch as 01:02:484 (62484|0) -
00:57:684 - this part all is same pitch: i suggest this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4035669
01:10:084 (70084|0) - move to 2, hard to catch 01:09:484 (69484|0,70084|0) -
01:36:084 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/lBBIl/61195288ea.jpg
01:43:084 (103084|0) - move to 3? - I think now is ok, and that follows the pitch.
01:48:884 (108884|1,109184|2) - same sugggestion as before - same but readjusted a little
the rest are good
i will give you some more suggestion for this diff if you insterested



[Hard]
perfect, nice job

[Insane]
00:28:884 (28884|0,28950|1,29017|2,29084|3,29150|1,29217|2,29284|0,29350|1,29417|2,29484|3,29550|1,29617|2,29684|0,29750|1,29817|2,29884|3,29950|1,30017|2,30084|0,30150|1,30217|2,30284|3,30350|1,30417|2) - they're 1/8 (as you're follow 1/8 on shd's diff) - change to 1/4
02:01:584 - add a note on here, still have bass
02:36:484 (156484|0,156550|1,156617|2,156684|3,156750|1,156817|2,156884|0,156950|1,157017|2,157084|3,157150|1,157217|2,157284|0,157350|1,157417|2,157484|3,157550|1,157617|2,157684|0,157750|1,157817|2,157884|3,157950|1,158017|2) - same reason
02:39:484 (159484|3) - move this to 2 to became jack, would be more nicemaybe too hard for this diff, players need a little rest after the burst. and also be different with SHD

[Extra]
00:29:684 (29684|0,29884|1,30084|2,30284|1) - 02:37:284 (157284|0,157484|1,157684|2,157884|1) - maybe just remove those, single 1/8 is more better in this part
00:55:384 (55384|3,55584|1) - swtich these column, for patterns would be more nice - no because: 1.00:55:484 - drum sound here, should be a bit different on pattern; 2.00:55:684 - this is only really high pitch, should be highlighted
00:57:684 (57684|1) - move to 4, avoid jacks - for this part: I also don't wanna see jacks, but 1/4jack in 150BPM is not really hard on SHD diff, and the pattern now fits music better, so I choose to keep the jack tho I didn't really want it
01:04:084 - how about this: http://puu.sh/lBCx4/803fca0a04.jpg
01:14:084 - seem you missing a long note in here and i suggest you short long notes only: would be nice http://puu.sh/lBCBH/98bb899b14.jpg
02:00:884 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/lBCH5/0922c23797.jpg nice suggestion, but Idk 02:01:634 - have sound here?
02:50:884 (170884|0,170884|2,170884|3,171084|1,171184|0,171184|2,171284|1,171284|3,171484|0,171484|2,171684|3,171684|2,171684|0,171884|1,171984|0,171984|2,172084|1,172084|3,172284|2,172284|0) - etou ... - fixed lol, It's really not a good choice to keep this

good map actually
but some patterns i don't quite understand lol
call me again after you done, good luck

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

well, it's up to you

it's my personal opinions:

[Normal]
00:12:884 (12884|1,13684|1) - move those to 1, for patterns: http://puu.sh/lNPwJ/d57a1b9d94.png
00:32:784 (32784|0) - move to 3, same pitch as 00:32:484 (32484|2) - , sound fun too
00:33:684 (33684|0) - move to 2, same pitch with 00:34:284 (34284|1) -
00:35:984 (35984|0,36884|0) -
00:39:184 (39184|0,40384|0) -
00:42:084 - i suggest this: http://puu.sh/lNPLO/b1740dd281.jpg
00:44:884 (44884|0) - move this to 3, if you follow clap in 1st column, 00:46:884 (46884|0,47384|0) -
00:48:084 (48084|0,48084|2) - remove the note on 1st column, you didn't add 2 notes at before: 00:44:884 -
01:12:684 (72684|0,73084|3) - pitch is wrong, but maybe just keep this, it may cause trouble for the rest of long notes
01:30:284 (90284|0) - move to 2 for balance
01:33:484 (93484|2) - move to 2, for balance, but maybe for pitch to, the distance of 01:33:484 (93484|2,93884|3) - is quite of a bit huge
01:34:484 (94484|1,94884|1,95284|1,95684|1) - for me, follow long note is enough, this one doesn't feel comfortable to play
01:36:084 - http://puu.sh/lNQ3K/57ba964d04.jpg
01:39:884 (99884|1) - 1st column, pitch of the lowest
01:39:884 - (only my opinion) pitch: http://puu.sh/lNQ7d/75589ad823.png
01:43:084 (103084|0) - move to 3
01:46:284 (106284|1) - move to 3
01:47:284 (107284|1,107684|1,108084|1,108484|1) -
01:48:884 - to 02:00:084 - try to do anything related with balance and pitch
02:32:261 - pitch: http://puu.sh/lNQeJ/b23453cf1f.jpg
02:34:225 - jack this, i guess so, same pitch http://puu.sh/lNQfP/767fbb19e0.jpg
02:50:884 - maybe: http://puu.sh/lNQhl/ecc909943a.jpg

well, that's all
remember, it's just my suggestion, feel free to reject all
call me when you done

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

everything are fine, map itself is already good, no more problems

Bubbled

Congratulations, good luck in qualification ~

Feerum wrote:

Hello paperlens!

Before this get's maybe Qualified by the next Beatmap Nominator i would like to discuss about some Pattern in the SHD

[SHD]

1st one its about these LN's here
00:54:484 (54484|0,54584|1,54684|2,54784|3,54884|1,54984|2,55084|3,55184|0,55284|2,55384|3,55484|0,55584|1,55684|3,55784|2,55884|1,55984|0) -
When i 1st time played this Map these LN's had absolute no sense for me. Also after 2nd and 3rd Time. Even when i check this now in the Editor these LN's still has really no sense. A LN had to follow a Sound to be played right but these LN's don't have and clear sound. - sorry I don't really know how you feels, but those LNs are absolutely good for me. I asked some of my friends, we found that the pattern now may be not really good, and I actually agree with that, so I changed it into another pattern which is my favourite. thank you for gentle advice, I really appreciated it.
I can clearly hear a Jacksound here but i think Jacks wouldn't fit here too. I tried something and i think something like this fit's here best:

Screen

sorry but I won't use this kind of pattern, first this pattern doesn't fit the music in my opinion, and I'll always use LN at this part.
I also asked other, they also told me the LN's doesn't fit here well, they suggest you should jack here like this:

Screen 2

I don't mean to be rude, but Using jackhammer in this part will be an absolutely wrong mapping
I really highly recommend to change these Pattern.

01:13:684 - These LN's had a really nice flow because we can really hear how to play them. They follow nice the Rhythm and plays smoothly - thank you for that, I didn't really expect a good response to this to be honest xD

02:00:884 (120884|2,120934|1,120984|0,121034|3,121084|0,121084|2,121134|1,121184|3,121234|2,121284|0,121334|1,121384|2,121434|3,121484|0,121484|1,121534|2,121584|3) - You have a missing note in this Stream. I clearly can hear the stream should end at 02:01:634 - so you should ad one more 1/8 note. - yes you get it there is a 1/8. but I did't really want to add it. the pattern now is not catching that sound. though, the pattern now is indeed not good, I'll consider a new pattern and try to catch that 1/8. Thank you for your opinion.


Yeah thats all i want to mention. I would really like to hear you opinion to this.
I really like this Map and would like to see this Qualified & Ranked as soon as possible!
Part 2 is my fav part of these songs :3

Feerum wrote:

Qualify Check


Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello paperlens
I did wait so long for your PM.
Part 2 is the best Part of all these Songs and i'm more than happy to help to move this into Qualify!
Let's begin!

General

Artist: Right!
Title: Right!
Source: Right!
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right!
Background: I found the same background in a higher resolution. (1024x768). Get it here: click
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

NM

Actually nothing to say <3

HD

01:29:384 (89384|1) - Missing drum hitsound. - done

Nothing more to complain :3

MX

01:47:584 - Do you have here a note missing? I think so, according to how you mapped here. - done
Loud melody sound o:

02:23:384 (143384|1,143584|1,143784|1,143984|1,144184|1,144384|1,144584|1,144784|1,144984|1,145184|1,145384|1,145584|1,145784|1,145984|1,146184|1,146384|1) - i really think you overused the column 2 here too much, please try to arrange your notes a little bit.
- done
That's also all here. I really really like this diff

SHD

01:57:884 - Missing note? In MX you have this mapped also loud melody. - I followed different sound in MX and SHD: MX mainly drum double, and SHD=1/1double+melody double.
02:46:484 (166484|3) - This LN should be 1/4 shorter and end 02:46:584 - .
I know it might look like it should be 1/2 but the other 1/2 LNs here have an 1/2 long sound, this one not. - you are right, also slightly changed the pattern here.

02:49:684 (169684|0) - same with this one. They are both 1/4 beat too long. - done

I have nothing more to complain.

I totally in love with this map. It follows so awesome the music and is so well mapped
Apply everything asap and call me back!

Also no kds please, i got already two with my last mod (:

Feerum wrote:

Alright!
Finally!!

Qualified

I really love this map. Really fun pattern!

IamKwaN wrote:

Why isn't the title Identity part 2? if you have something official using Identity Part II as the title, please let me know.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwkpJfpycJY
https://soundcloud.com/soundholick/shk-identity-part-2

IamKwaN wrote:

I don't think that wiki is official?

Ranked maps can be wrong, don't quote them.

Soul Evans wrote:

people these days and their qualified maps getting Kwan'd, makes me a little nervous about my meta-data

or else i will get kwan'd

Soul Evans wrote:

people these days and their qualified maps getting Kwan'd, makes me a little nervous about my meta-data

or else i will get kwan'd

IamKwaN wrote:

i am okay with everything listed above, leave him to choose probably

paperlens wrote:

so which one is right

Soul Evans wrote:

people these days and their qualified maps getting Kwan'd, makes me a little nervous about my meta-data

or else i will get kwan'd

btw I love your avatar Soul Evans