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几把图

shd
01:13:684 - 这段太垃圾,形状还丑 换成反键好
02:09:695 - 这里开是 放连续2连要比你后面那部份放到连点要好很多
02:29:496 (149496|1) - 这放到4
02:32:963 (152963|2) - 这放到1
02:35:055 (155055|0) - 放到4
02:36:055 (156055|3) - 2
02:36:198 (156198|1) - 1
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victorica_db wrote:

几把图

shd
01:13:684 - 这段太垃圾,形状还丑 换成反键好
02:09:695 - 这里开是 放连续2连要比你后面那部份放到连点要好很多
02:29:496 (149496|1) - 这放到4
02:32:963 (152963|2) - 这放到1
02:35:055 (155055|0) - 放到4
02:36:055 (156055|3) - 2
02:36:198 (156198|1) - 1


ALL FIXED 感谢db
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this map is very good as my opinion, some small suggestions before we get started:

check

1234

[Normal]
01:02:784 (62784|3) - move this to 1, same pitch as 01:02:484 (62484|0) -
00:57:684 - this part all is same pitch: i suggest this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4035669
01:10:084 (70084|0) - move to 2, hard to catch 01:09:484 (69484|0,70084|0) -
01:36:084 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/lBBIl/61195288ea.jpg
01:43:084 (103084|0) - move to 3?
01:48:884 (108884|1,109184|2) - same sugggestion as before
the rest are good
i will give you some more suggestion for this diff if you insterested

[Hard]
perfect, nice job

[Insane]
00:28:884 (28884|0,28950|1,29017|2,29084|3,29150|1,29217|2,29284|0,29350|1,29417|2,29484|3,29550|1,29617|2,29684|0,29750|1,29817|2,29884|3,29950|1,30017|2,30084|0,30150|1,30217|2,30284|3,30350|1,30417|2) - they're 1/8 (as you're follow 1/8 on shd's diff)
02:01:584 - add a note on here, still have bass
02:36:484 (156484|0,156550|1,156617|2,156684|3,156750|1,156817|2,156884|0,156950|1,157017|2,157084|3,157150|1,157217|2,157284|0,157350|1,157417|2,157484|3,157550|1,157617|2,157684|0,157750|1,157817|2,157884|3,157950|1,158017|2) - same reason
02:39:484 (159484|3) - move this to 2 to became jack, would be more nice

[Extra]
00:29:684 (29684|0,29884|1,30084|2,30284|1) - 02:37:284 (157284|0,157484|1,157684|2,157884|1) - maybe just remove those, single 1/8 is more better in this part
00:55:384 (55384|3,55584|1) - swtich these column, for patterns would be more nice
00:57:684 (57684|1) - move to 4, avoid jacks
01:04:084 - how about this: http://puu.sh/lBCx4/803fca0a04.jpg
01:14:084 - seem you missing a long note in here and i suggest you short long notes only: would be nice http://puu.sh/lBCBH/98bb899b14.jpg
02:00:884 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/lBCH5/0922c23797.jpg
02:50:884 (170884|0,170884|2,170884|3,171084|1,171184|0,171184|2,171284|1,171284|3,171484|0,171484|2,171684|3,171684|2,171684|0,171884|1,171984|0,171984|2,172084|1,172084|3,172284|2,172284|0) - etou ...

good map actually
but some patterns i don't quite understand lol
call me again after you done, good luck
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

this map is very good as my opinion, some small suggestions before we get started:

check

1234

[Normal]
01:02:784 (62784|3) - move this to 1, same pitch as 01:02:484 (62484|0) -
00:57:684 - this part all is same pitch: i suggest this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4035669
01:10:084 (70084|0) - move to 2, hard to catch 01:09:484 (69484|0,70084|0) -
01:36:084 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/lBBIl/61195288ea.jpg
01:43:084 (103084|0) - move to 3? - I think now is ok, and that follows the pitch.
01:48:884 (108884|1,109184|2) - same sugggestion as before - same but readjusted a little
the rest are good
i will give you some more suggestion for this diff if you insterested



[Hard]
perfect, nice job

[Insane]
00:28:884 (28884|0,28950|1,29017|2,29084|3,29150|1,29217|2,29284|0,29350|1,29417|2,29484|3,29550|1,29617|2,29684|0,29750|1,29817|2,29884|3,29950|1,30017|2,30084|0,30150|1,30217|2,30284|3,30350|1,30417|2) - they're 1/8 (as you're follow 1/8 on shd's diff) - change to 1/4
02:01:584 - add a note on here, still have bass
02:36:484 (156484|0,156550|1,156617|2,156684|3,156750|1,156817|2,156884|0,156950|1,157017|2,157084|3,157150|1,157217|2,157284|0,157350|1,157417|2,157484|3,157550|1,157617|2,157684|0,157750|1,157817|2,157884|3,157950|1,158017|2) - same reason
02:39:484 (159484|3) - move this to 2 to became jack, would be more nicemaybe too hard for this diff, players need a little rest after the burst. and also be different with SHD

[Extra]
00:29:684 (29684|0,29884|1,30084|2,30284|1) - 02:37:284 (157284|0,157484|1,157684|2,157884|1) - maybe just remove those, single 1/8 is more better in this part
00:55:384 (55384|3,55584|1) - swtich these column, for patterns would be more nice - no because: 1.00:55:484 - drum sound here, should be a bit different on pattern; 2.00:55:684 - this is only really high pitch, should be highlighted
00:57:684 (57684|1) - move to 4, avoid jacks - for this part: I also don't wanna see jacks, but 1/4jack in 150BPM is not really hard on SHD diff, and the pattern now fits music better, so I choose to keep the jack tho I didn't really want it
01:04:084 - how about this: http://puu.sh/lBCx4/803fca0a04.jpg
01:14:084 - seem you missing a long note in here and i suggest you short long notes only: would be nice http://puu.sh/lBCBH/98bb899b14.jpg
02:00:884 - suggestion: http://puu.sh/lBCH5/0922c23797.jpg nice suggestion, but Idk 02:01:634 - have sound here?
02:50:884 (170884|0,170884|2,170884|3,171084|1,171184|0,171184|2,171284|1,171284|3,171484|0,171484|2,171684|3,171684|2,171684|0,171884|1,171984|0,171984|2,172084|1,172084|3,172284|2,172284|0) - etou ... - fixed lol, It's really not a good choice to keep this

good map actually
but some patterns i don't quite understand lol
call me again after you done, good luck

no reply == all fixed
and also readjusted some other pattern


thank you KK XD
updated
tell me any suggestions you have on NM pls!

some big changes, but I can't upload any shits in africa fuckuploaded
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well, it's up to you

it's my personal opinions:

[Normal]
00:12:884 (12884|1,13684|1) - move those to 1, for patterns: http://puu.sh/lNPwJ/d57a1b9d94.png
00:32:784 (32784|0) - move to 3, same pitch as 00:32:484 (32484|2) - , sound fun too
00:33:684 (33684|0) - move to 2, same pitch with 00:34:284 (34284|1) -
00:35:984 (35984|0,36884|0) -
00:39:184 (39184|0,40384|0) -
00:42:084 - i suggest this: http://puu.sh/lNPLO/b1740dd281.jpg
00:44:884 (44884|0) - move this to 3, if you follow clap in 1st column, 00:46:884 (46884|0,47384|0) -
00:48:084 (48084|0,48084|2) - remove the note on 1st column, you didn't add 2 notes at before: 00:44:884 -
01:12:684 (72684|0,73084|3) - pitch is wrong, but maybe just keep this, it may cause trouble for the rest of long notes
01:30:284 (90284|0) - move to 2 for balance
01:33:484 (93484|2) - move to 2, for balance, but maybe for pitch to, the distance of 01:33:484 (93484|2,93884|3) - is quite of a bit huge
01:34:484 (94484|1,94884|1,95284|1,95684|1) - for me, follow long note is enough, this one doesn't feel comfortable to play
01:36:084 - http://puu.sh/lNQ3K/57ba964d04.jpg
01:39:884 (99884|1) - 1st column, pitch of the lowest
01:39:884 - (only my opinion) pitch: http://puu.sh/lNQ7d/75589ad823.png
01:43:084 (103084|0) - move to 3
01:46:284 (106284|1) - move to 3
01:47:284 (107284|1,107684|1,108084|1,108484|1) -
01:48:884 - to 02:00:084 - try to do anything related with balance and pitch
02:32:261 - pitch: http://puu.sh/lNQeJ/b23453cf1f.jpg
02:34:225 - jack this, i guess so, same pitch http://puu.sh/lNQfP/767fbb19e0.jpg
02:50:884 - maybe: http://puu.sh/lNQhl/ecc909943a.jpg

well, that's all
remember, it's just my suggestion, feel free to reject all
call me when you done
posted

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

well, it's up to you

it's my personal opinions:

[Normal]
00:12:884 (12884|1,13684|1) - move those to 1, for patterns: http://puu.sh/lNPwJ/d57a1b9d94.png
00:32:784 (32784|0) - move to 3, same pitch as 00:32:484 (32484|2) - , sound fun too
00:33:684 (33684|0) - move to 2, same pitch with 00:34:284 (34284|1) -
00:35:984 (35984|0,36884|0) -
00:39:184 (39184|0,40384|0) -
00:42:084 - i suggest this: http://puu.sh/lNPLO/b1740dd281.jpg
00:44:884 (44884|0) - move this to 3, if you follow clap in 1st column, 00:46:884 (46884|0,47384|0) -
00:48:084 (48084|0,48084|2) - remove the note on 1st column, you didn't add 2 notes at before: 00:44:884 -
01:12:684 (72684|0,73084|3) - pitch is wrong, but maybe just keep this, it may cause trouble for the rest of long notes
01:30:284 (90284|0) - move to 2 for balance
01:33:484 (93484|2) - move to 2, for balance, but maybe for pitch to, the distance of 01:33:484 (93484|2,93884|3) - is quite of a bit huge
01:34:484 (94484|1,94884|1,95284|1,95684|1) - for me, follow long note is enough, this one doesn't feel comfortable to play
01:36:084 - http://puu.sh/lNQ3K/57ba964d04.jpg
01:39:884 (99884|1) - 1st column, pitch of the lowest
01:39:884 - (only my opinion) pitch: http://puu.sh/lNQ7d/75589ad823.png
01:43:084 (103084|0) - move to 3
01:46:284 (106284|1) - move to 3
01:47:284 (107284|1,107684|1,108084|1,108484|1) -
01:48:884 - to 02:00:084 - try to do anything related with balance and pitch
02:32:261 - pitch: http://puu.sh/lNQeJ/b23453cf1f.jpg
02:34:225 - jack this, i guess so, same pitch http://puu.sh/lNQfP/767fbb19e0.jpg
02:50:884 - maybe: http://puu.sh/lNQhl/ecc909943a.jpg

well, that's all
remember, it's just my suggestion, feel free to reject all
call me when you done
except from 1:30 to 2:00, that part I feel is good, I almost accepted everything though maybe repatterned in my own way
thank you very much kk!
updated
posted
everything are fine, map itself is already good, no more problems

Bubbled

Congratulations, good luck in qualification ~
posted

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

everything are fine, map itself is already good, no more problems

Bubbled

Congratulations, good luck in qualification ~
thank you kk! :D
posted
Hello paperlens!

Before this get's maybe Qualified by the next Beatmap Nominator i would like to discuss about some Pattern in the SHD

[SHD]

1st one its about these LN's here
00:54:484 (54484|0,54584|1,54684|2,54784|3,54884|1,54984|2,55084|3,55184|0,55284|2,55384|3,55484|0,55584|1,55684|3,55784|2,55884|1,55984|0) -
When i 1st time played this Map these LN's had absolute no sense for me. Also after 2nd and 3rd Time. Even when i check this now in the Editor these LN's still has really no sense. A LN had to follow a Sound to be played right but these LN's don't have and clear sound.
I can clearly hear a Jacksound here but i think Jacks wouldn't fit here too. I tried something and i think something like this fit's here best:


I also asked other, they also told me the LN's doesn't fit here well, they suggest you should jack here like this:


I really highly recommend to change these Pattern.

01:13:684 - These LN's had a really nice flow because we can really hear how to play them. They follow nice the Rhythm and plays smoothly

02:00:884 (120884|2,120934|1,120984|0,121034|3,121084|0,121084|2,121134|1,121184|3,121234|2,121284|0,121334|1,121384|2,121434|3,121484|0,121484|1,121534|2,121584|3) - You have a missing note in this Stream. I clearly can hear the stream should end at 02:01:634 - so you should ad one more 1/8 note.


Yeah thats all i want to mention. I would really like to hear you opinion to this. :)
I really like this Map and would like to see this Qualified & Ranked as soon as possible!
Part 2 is my fav part of these songs :3
posted

Feerum wrote:

Hello paperlens!

Before this get's maybe Qualified by the next Beatmap Nominator i would like to discuss about some Pattern in the SHD

[SHD]

1st one its about these LN's here
00:54:484 (54484|0,54584|1,54684|2,54784|3,54884|1,54984|2,55084|3,55184|0,55284|2,55384|3,55484|0,55584|1,55684|3,55784|2,55884|1,55984|0) -
When i 1st time played this Map these LN's had absolute no sense for me. Also after 2nd and 3rd Time. Even when i check this now in the Editor these LN's still has really no sense. A LN had to follow a Sound to be played right but these LN's don't have and clear sound. - sorry I don't really know how you feels, but those LNs are absolutely good for me. I asked some of my friends, we found that the pattern now may be not really good, and I actually agree with that, so I changed it into another pattern which is my favourite. thank you for gentle advice, I really appreciated it.
I can clearly hear a Jacksound here but i think Jacks wouldn't fit here too. I tried something and i think something like this fit's here best:

sorry but I won't use this kind of pattern, first this pattern doesn't fit the music in my opinion, and I'll always use LN at this part.
I also asked other, they also told me the LN's doesn't fit here well, they suggest you should jack here like this:

I don't mean to be rude, but Using jackhammer in this part will be an absolutely wrong mapping
I really highly recommend to change these Pattern.

01:13:684 - These LN's had a really nice flow because we can really hear how to play them. They follow nice the Rhythm and plays smoothly - thank you for that, I didn't really expect a good response to this to be honest xD

02:00:884 (120884|2,120934|1,120984|0,121034|3,121084|0,121084|2,121134|1,121184|3,121234|2,121284|0,121334|1,121384|2,121434|3,121484|0,121484|1,121534|2,121584|3) - You have a missing note in this Stream. I clearly can hear the stream should end at 02:01:634 - so you should ad one more 1/8 note. - yes you get it there is a 1/8. but I did't really want to add it. the pattern now is not catching that sound. though, the pattern now is indeed not good, I'll consider a new pattern and try to catch that 1/8. Thank you for your opinion.


Yeah thats all i want to mention. I would really like to hear you opinion to this. :)
I really like this Map and would like to see this Qualified & Ranked as soon as possible!
Part 2 is my fav part of these songs :3
thank you for your mod
I'm kind of busy these days, may update later
posted
looking forward for this!!!
good luck paperlens for rank!!!
posted
pm me in forum should you still want to rank this.
I'm willing to check this but only if you really want rank this :)
posted
Qualify Check



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello paperlens
I did wait so long for your PM.
Part 2 is the best Part of all these Songs and i'm more than happy to help to move this into Qualify!
Let's begin!

General



Artist: Right!
Title: Right!
Source: Right!
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right!
Background: I found the same background in a higher resolution. (1024x768). Get it here: click
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

NM


Actually nothing to say <3

HD


01:29:384 (89384|1) - Missing drum hitsound.

Nothing more to complain :3

MX


01:47:584 - Do you have here a note missing? I think so, according to how you mapped here.
Loud melody sound o:

02:23:384 (143384|1,143584|1,143784|1,143984|1,144184|1,144384|1,144584|1,144784|1,144984|1,145184|1,145384|1,145584|1,145784|1,145984|1,146184|1,146384|1) - i really think you overused the column 2 here too much, please try to arrange your notes a little bit.

That's also all here. I really really like this diff

SHD


01:57:884 - Missing note? In MX you have this mapped also loud melody.
02:46:484 (166484|3) - This LN should be 1/4 shorter and end 02:46:584 - .
I know it might look like it should be 1/2 but the other 1/2 LNs here have an 1/2 long sound, this one not.

02:49:684 (169684|0) - same with this one. They are both 1/4 beat too long.

I have nothing more to complain.

I totally in love with this map. It follows so awesome the music and is so well mapped
Apply everything asap and call me back!

Also no kds please, i got already two with my last mod (:
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Feerum wrote:

Qualify Check



Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello paperlens
I did wait so long for your PM.
Part 2 is the best Part of all these Songs and i'm more than happy to help to move this into Qualify!
Let's begin!

General



Artist: Right!
Title: Right!
Source: Right!
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right!
Background: I found the same background in a higher resolution. (1024x768). Get it here: click
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

NM


Actually nothing to say <3

HD


01:29:384 (89384|1) - Missing drum hitsound. - done

Nothing more to complain :3

MX


01:47:584 - Do you have here a note missing? I think so, according to how you mapped here. - done
Loud melody sound o:

02:23:384 (143384|1,143584|1,143784|1,143984|1,144184|1,144384|1,144584|1,144784|1,144984|1,145184|1,145384|1,145584|1,145784|1,145984|1,146184|1,146384|1) - i really think you overused the column 2 here too much, please try to arrange your notes a little bit.
- done
That's also all here. I really really like this diff

SHD


01:57:884 - Missing note? In MX you have this mapped also loud melody. - I followed different sound in MX and SHD: MX mainly drum double, and SHD=1/1double+melody double.
02:46:484 (166484|3) - This LN should be 1/4 shorter and end 02:46:584 - .
I know it might look like it should be 1/2 but the other 1/2 LNs here have an 1/2 long sound, this one not. - you are right, also slightly changed the pattern here.

02:49:684 (169684|0) - same with this one. They are both 1/4 beat too long. - done

I have nothing more to complain.

I totally in love with this map. It follows so awesome the music and is so well mapped
Apply everything asap and call me back!

Also no kds please, i got already two with my last mod (:
thank you feerum XD
also recheck this part in SHD pls : 02:00:884 - ;
this part in MX : 02:08:884 - ;
these pattern are scaring, so I remapped

updated
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Alright!
Finally!!

Qualified

I really love this map. Really fun pattern!
posted

Feerum wrote:

Alright!
Finally!!

Qualified

I really love this map. Really fun pattern!
thank you feerum! :D
posted
Finally congrats
posted
Why isn't the title Identity part 2? if you have something official using Identity Part II as the title, please let me know.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwkpJfpycJY
https://soundcloud.com/soundholick/shk-identity-part-2
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IamKwaN wrote:

Why isn't the title Identity part 2? if you have something official using Identity Part II as the title, please let me know.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwkpJfpycJY
https://soundcloud.com/soundholick/shk-identity-part-2
http://o2jam.wikia.com/wiki/Identity_part_II please
both are ok
so I just follow https://osu.ppy.sh/s/304831 as I II III IV V
btw https://osu.ppy.sh/s/8911
and also http://www.o2mania.com/4_Download/6_O2j ... 000408.htm though not really offical
posted
I don't think that wiki is official?

Ranked maps can be wrong, don't quote them.

The wiki shows Identity part II ..
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