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An - LittleGameStar [OsuMania]

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AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 Januari 2016 at 17:24:54

Artist: An
Title: LittleGameStar
Source: SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection-
Tags: SDVX bemani Konami Arcade Championship 2013 KAC2013 Original Song Contest ezioblackbird
BPM: 215
Filesize: 5096kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 4Key (2,93 stars, 781 notes)
  2. BASIC - 4Key (1,51 stars, 379 notes)
  3. EXHAUST - 4Key (4,09 stars, 1325 notes)
  4. NOVICE - 4Key (2,06 stars, 547 notes)
Download: An - LittleGameStar
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Official BM

Im using my brother's laptop to mod this map, my OSU! is error. Always stopped working ;w;
But not multi acc.

Last edited by AXII Inz , edited 12 times in total.
Kruzon
1,023 posts
Joined December 2013
Kruzon
hi, exhaust mod

00:09:933 (9933|2,10073|1,10212|0) - shift 1 time to the right
00:10:352 (10352|1) - move to 1
00:10:910 (10910|1,10910|0) - press ctrl + h, same sound as 00:10:631 (10631|2,10631|3) -
00:11:189 (11189|3,11189|2) - press ctrl + h, flow
00:16:352 (16352|1) - move to 3, same sound 00:16:073 (16073|2) -
00:16:491 (16491|2) - move to 2, flow
00:17:747 (17747|0) - move to 2
00:17:887 (17887|1) - move to 1

00:31:980 (31980|1) - move to 4, refer 00:32:538 (32538|3,32538|1,32538|0) -
00:32:119 (32119|3) - move to 2, flow
00:32:259 (32259|0) - move to 4, descending dual notes 00:32:259 (32259|3,32259|2,32398|2,32398|1,32538|1,32538|0) -
00:34:212 (34212|1,34352|2) - press ctrl + h
00:34:631 (34631|2,34631|3,34771|0,34771|1,34771|3,34910|3,34910|0,34910|2) - press ctrl + h, and 00:34:631 (34631|1,34771|2,34910|1) - press ctrl + h

00:49:003 (49003|2) - move to 2, ascending dual notes 00:49:003 (49003|1,49003|0,49143|1,49143|2,49282|2,49282|3) -
00:49:561 (49561|3) - move to 1
00:49:701 (49701|0) - move to 4
00:49:840 (49840|1) - move to 1, refer 00:50:398 (50398|3,50398|1,50398|0) -

00:56:259 (56259|0,56259|3,56259|1) - this is very loud, i would ask you to add 1 note to properly emphasis the loudness but this will break your pattern
there is a solution, that is by giving void at this row 00:56:398 (56398|2) - , delete this, allowing brief moment after impact

01:00:445 (60445|1,60584|2) - press ctrl +h
01:06:724 (66724|3) - move to 2
01:06:864 (66864|2) - move to 4
01:06:933 (66933|1) - move to 1
01:07:282 (67282|0) - add a note on column 3, same loudness as 01:07:422 (67422|1,67422|3) -
01:11:329 (71329|2) - move to 4
01:11:398 (71398|1) - move to 1
01:11:747 (71747|0) - add a note on column 3, same loudness as 01:11:887 (71887|1,71887|3) -

01:21:375 (81375|3) - move to 2, refer 01:21:096 (81096|0,81096|1,81375|1,81375|2,81654|3,81654|2) -
01:21:515 (81515|0) - move to 4, 01:21:515 (81515|3,81654|3,82073|3,82212|3) -

01:45:236 (105236|2) - move to 1
01:45:375 (105375|0) - move to 3
01:45:515 (105515|0) - move to 2
01:45:654 (105654|1) - move to 1
01:45:794 (105794|2) - move to 1, refer 01:46:212 (106212|3,106352|3) -

- mod ends -


good luck with your map c:
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

Kruzon wrote:

hi, exhaust mod

00:09:933 (9933|2,10073|1,10212|0) - shift 1 time to the right
00:10:352 (10352|1) - move to 1
00:10:910 (10910|1,10910|0) - press ctrl + h, same sound as 00:10:631 (10631|2,10631|3) -
00:11:189 (11189|3,11189|2) - press ctrl + h, flow
00:16:352 (16352|1) - move to 3, same sound 00:16:073 (16073|2) -
00:16:491 (16491|2) - move to 2, flow
00:17:747 (17747|0) - move to 2
00:17:887 (17887|1) - move to 1

00:31:980 (31980|1) - move to 4, refer 00:32:538 (32538|3,32538|1,32538|0) -
00:32:119 (32119|3) - move to 2, flow
00:32:259 (32259|0) - move to 4, descending dual notes 00:32:259 (32259|3,32259|2,32398|2,32398|1,32538|1,32538|0) -
00:34:212 (34212|1,34352|2) - press ctrl + h
00:34:631 (34631|2,34631|3,34771|0,34771|1,34771|3,34910|3,34910|0,34910|2) - press ctrl + h, and 00:34:631 (34631|1,34771|2,34910|1) - press ctrl + h

00:49:003 (49003|2) - move to 2, ascending dual notes 00:49:003 (49003|1,49003|0,49143|1,49143|2,49282|2,49282|3) -
00:49:561 (49561|3) - move to 1
00:49:701 (49701|0) - move to 4
00:49:840 (49840|1) - move to 1, refer 00:50:398 (50398|3,50398|1,50398|0) -

00:56:259 (56259|0,56259|3,56259|1) - this is very loud, i would ask you to add 1 note to properly emphasis the loudness but this will break your pattern
there is a solution, that is by giving void at this row 00:56:398 (56398|2) - , delete this, allowing brief moment after impact :arrow: :arrow: Nope that is right. That note should be 2 if no tshhhh sound :p

01:00:445 (60445|1,60584|2) - press ctrl +h
01:06:724 (66724|3) - move to 2
01:06:864 (66864|2) - move to 4
01:06:933 (66933|1) - move to 1
01:07:282 (67282|0) - add a note on column 3, same loudness as 01:07:422 (67422|1,67422|3) - :arrow: No :-O
01:11:329 (71329|2) - move to 4
01:11:398 (71398|1) - move to 1
01:11:747 (71747|0) - add a note on column 3, same loudness as 01:11:887 (71887|1,71887|3) - :arrow: ^

01:21:375 (81375|3) - move to 2, refer 01:21:096 (81096|0,81096|1,81375|1,81375|2,81654|3,81654|2) -
01:21:515 (81515|0) - move to 4, 01:21:515 (81515|3,81654|3,82073|3,82212|3) -

01:45:236 (105236|2) - move to 1
01:45:375 (105375|0) - move to 3
01:45:515 (105515|0) - move to 2
01:45:654 (105654|1) - move to 1
01:45:794 (105794|2) - move to 1, refer 01:46:212 (106212|3,106352|3) -

- mod ends -


good luck with your map c:
No reply mean OK ... Thanks :3
AlisceaSparku
704 posts
Joined August 2013
AlisceaSparku
scrap mod? lol

Consider lowering the difficulty of BASIC. Make it 1.49 stars or below.
I prefer about 1 star because the difficulty spread between BASIC and NOVICE are close...

[BASIC]
These are suggestions to help you lower the difficulty of this.
00:20:538 - 00:38:398 - make these notes resemble the other sound ( is it a violin? idk actually xD ) instead of the drums. Downside is it will become really uncomfortable to play because BASIC / EZ maps usually follow the drum sounds.

Throughout the map, don't follow the weaker drum beats like 01:29:189 (89189|1,89329|0) . Downside is it will become inconsistent and uncomfortable? to play because the sound can still be heard well.

00:22:491 (22491|2) - move this to 4
00:37:422 (37422|2) - ^
00:48:166 (48166|1) - move to 1
00:51:515 (51515|1,51654|3) - put these notes together, it emphasizes the beat
01:05:608 (65608|2) - move to 2, for variation. It also has a very little bit stronger sound than the first one, to also follow the variation at 01:09:654
01:07:840 (67840|1) - move to 1, ^
01:22:631 (82631|1) - move to 1
01:24:445 (84445|2) - move to 4
01:27:096 (87096|1,87794|0) - swap columns, more balanced
01:28:771 (88771|1) - move to 1
All the mods that doesn't have an explanation, those mods are for distribution of notes.
01:37:003 - these sliders are impressive. They follow the pitch really well.

It will be very hard to reduce it's star difficulty.But if you want to, try to remap some parts.
I think I have modded the other beatmaps...

Good luck! :D
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

AlisceaSparku wrote:

scrap mod? lol

Consider lowering the difficulty of BASIC. Make it 1.49 stars or below.
I prefer about 1 star because the difficulty spread between BASIC and NOVICE are close...

[BASIC]
These are suggestions to help you lower the difficulty of this.
00:20:538 - 00:38:398 - make these notes resemble the other sound ( is it a violin? idk actually xD ) :arrow: shyth or whatever is that... instead of the drums. Downside is it will become really uncomfortable to play because BASIC / EZ maps usually follow the drum sounds. :arrow: dunno why this diff cant be decrease =_=

Throughout the map, don't follow the weaker drum beats like 01:29:189 (89189|1,89329|0) . Downside is it will become inconsistent and uncomfortable? to play because the sound can still be heard well. :arrow: i'll decrease it by my way

00:22:491 (22491|2) - move this to 4 :arrow: do you like far note ? XD
00:37:422 (37422|2) - ^
00:48:166 (48166|1) - move to 1
00:51:515 (51515|1,51654|3) - put these notes together, it emphasizes the beat
01:05:608 (65608|2) - move to 2, for variation. It also has a very little bit stronger sound than the first one, to also follow the variation at 01:09:654
01:07:840 (67840|1) - move to 1, ^
01:22:631 (82631|1) - move to 1
01:24:445 (84445|2) - move to 4
01:27:096 (87096|1,87794|0) - swap columns, more balanced
01:28:771 (88771|1) - move to 1
All the mods that doesn't have an explanation, those mods are for distribution of notes.
01:37:003 - these sliders are impressive. They follow the pitch really well.

It will be very hard to reduce it's star difficulty.But if you want to, try to remap some parts.
I think I have modded the other beatmaps...

Good luck! :D :arrow: :D

no reply mean OK
Please read #1 post :D
Last edited by AXII Inz , edited 1 time in total.
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Hotaru-
hii bro :D This is your NM :3
Sorry If i doing some mistake

[ADVANCED]
00:00:584 - i just thinking that note is too fast
From here 00:38:677 - to Here 00:40:422 - i guess it feels like ichigaki 's map
00:45:096 (45096|2) - i think you should remove that one :3 if you agree.when i test it,it's soo anoying note For me XD
rest of the are soo great :3

[EXHAUST]
00:00:584 - just like advanced i think that note is too fast...
I think Rest of them are soo great and also there are many mods before me soo i can't give much mod :D




This map is awesome i wish it can be ranked
thanks before :D i still learning To mod :3
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

hii bro :D This is your NM :3
Sorry If i doing some mistake

[ADVANCED]
00:00:584 - i just thinking that note is too fast :arrow: Use playrate 25 headset and high volume :D
From here 00:38:677 - to Here 00:40:422 - i guess it feels like ichigaki 's map :arrow: so u want to say im just copying ichi's map ... :-|
00:45:096 (45096|2) - i think you should remove that one :3 if you agree.when i test it,it's soo anoying note For me XD :arrow: Maybe u just cant play it well XD
rest of the are soo great :3

[EXHAUST]
00:00:584 - just like advanced i think that note is too fast... :arrow: Same ^
I think Rest of them are soo great and also there are many mods before me soo i can't give much mod :D




This map is awesome i wish it can be ranked :arrow: Thanks
thanks before :D i still learning To mod :3 :arrow: Go go go ~~~ >_<
Thanks for mod ... "Maybe"
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Hotaru-

AXII Inz wrote:

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

hii bro :D This is your NM :3
Sorry If i doing some mistake

[ADVANCED]
00:00:584 - i just thinking that note is too fast :arrow: Use playrate 25 headset and high volume :D
From here 00:38:677 - to Here 00:40:422 - i guess it feels like ichigaki 's map :arrow: so u want to say im just copying ichi's map ... :-| :arrow: hmmm... nope it just like i having dejavu XD
00:45:096 (45096|2) - i think you should remove that one :3 if you agree.when i test it,it's soo anoying note For me XD :arrow: Maybe u just cant play it well XD
rest of the are soo great :3

[EXHAUST]
00:00:584 - just like advanced i think that note is too fast... :arrow: Same ^
I think Rest of them are soo great and also there are many mods before me soo i can't give much mod :D




This map is awesome i wish it can be ranked :arrow: Thanks
thanks before :D i still learning To mod :3 :arrow: Go go go ~~~ >_<
Thanks for mod ... "Maybe" :arrow: sorry if it's bad :|
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Hotaru-
okay i forgot about one think

[ADVANCED]
HP : 8
OD : 7

OD 8 is for EXH above :D (For me)
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

okay i forgot about one think

[ADVANCED]
HP : 8
OD : 7

OD 8 is for EXH above :D (For me)
Nope that was right.... From Fresh chicken
Kruzon
1,023 posts
Joined December 2013
Kruzon
ples holder
NlHIL
856 posts
Joined December 2013
NlHIL
[BASIC]
01:03:933 (63933|1,64073|0) - lol
[NOVICE]
01:23:329 (83329|1) - 01:32:259 (92259|3) - remove?
[ADVANCED]
00:24:654 - 00:33:584 - add as 00:29:119 (29119|1) - ?
[EXHAUST]
...
Nothing seems wrong
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

NlHIL wrote:

[BASIC]
01:03:933 (63933|1,64073|0) - lol :arrow: :"v re-map
[NOVICE]
01:23:329 (83329|1) - 01:32:259 (92259|3) - remove? :arrow: Nope
[ADVANCED]
00:24:654 - 00:33:584 - add as 00:29:119 (29119|1) - ? :arrow: Differ sound :D
[EXHAUST]
...
Nothing seems wrong :arrow: Heh ? Really ?
YatsuKaori
YatsuKaori
Hi From My Queue :)

Sorry for delay :)

My 4K Keys ; |1|2|3|4|
okay so uh you requested major mod is BASIC and EXHAUST, so I Post here for major only :)
NOPICE
00:18:584 (18584|1) - move to 1
00:25:282 (25282|1) - move to 3
00:25:701 (25701|2,25840|1) - ctrl+J
00:48:584 (48584|1,48724|2) - ^
00:51:794 (51794|1,52073|0) - ^
00:58:491 (58491|2,58631|1) - move one column on left and ctrl+J
EXHAUSTED whups ~~
00:29:468 (29468|3) - move upper on 00:29:608 -

uh this is perfect diff

GL~~
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

Lina Sintyadewi wrote:

Hi From My Queue :)

Sorry for delay :)

My 4K Keys ; |1|2|3|4|
okay so uh you requested major mod is BASIC and EXHAUST, so I Post here for major only :) :arrow: so why u post novice :"v
NOPICE
00:18:584 (18584|1) - move to 1
00:25:282 (25282|1) - move to 3
00:25:701 (25701|2,25840|1) - ctrl+J
00:48:584 (48584|1,48724|2) - ^
00:51:794 (51794|1,52073|0) - ^
00:58:491 (58491|2,58631|1) - move one column on left and ctrl+J
:arrow: :arrow: :arrow: I cant apply this mod ... u mod BASIC or NOVICE ? Select the note first and copy it ... i cant use CTRL + J
EXHAUSTED whups ~~
00:29:468 (29468|3) - move upper on 00:29:608 - :arrow: No that right

uh this is perfect diff :arrow: Really ? :|

GL~~
:D
YatsuKaori
YatsuKaori

AXII Inz wrote:

Lina Sintyadewi wrote:

Hi From My Queue :)

Sorry for delay :)

My 4K Keys ; |1|2|3|4|
okay so uh you requested major mod is BASIC and EXHAUST, so I Post here for major only :) :arrow: so why u post novice :"v
NOPICE
00:18:584 (18584|1) - move to 1
00:25:282 (25282|1) - move to 3
00:25:701 (25701|2,25840|1) - ctrl+J
00:48:584 (48584|1,48724|2) - ^
00:51:794 (51794|1,52073|0) - ^
00:58:491 (58491|2,58631|1) - move one column on left and ctrl+J
:arrow: :arrow: :arrow: I cant apply this mod ... u mod BASIC or NOVICE ? Select the note first and copy it ... i cant use CTRL + J
EXHAUSTED whups ~~
00:29:468 (29468|3) - move upper on 00:29:608 - :arrow: No that right

uh this is perfect diff :arrow: Really ? :|

GL~~
:D
It's basic sorry im typo
Kruzon
1,023 posts
Joined December 2013
Kruzon
i love darling (and kudosu)
20:27 *Kruzon is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/789226 An - LittleGameStar [EXHAUST]]
20:28 Kruzon: mann
20:28 Kruzon: one day you gotta teach me sb
20:28 Kruzon: wew
20:29 AXII Inz: that is very standart SB
20:29 AXII Inz: >.>a
20:31 Kruzon: 00:07:980 (7980|2) -  move to 1, mirror this 00:07:561 (7561|3,7701|3) - 
20:32 AXII Inz: OK
20:33 Kruzon: 00:11:189 (11189|0,11189|1,11468|2,11468|3) -  not fitting if mirrored, should align same column due to repeat sound like 00:10:631 (10631|3,10631|2,10910|2,10910|3) - 
20:33 Kruzon: so, i suggest 00:11:468 (11468|3,11468|2,11608|1,11608|3,11608|0,11747|1) -  ctrl + h
20:34 AXII Inz: OK
20:34 AXII Inz: 00:11:608 (11608|3,11608|2,11747|2,11887|2) -
20:34 AXII Inz: Like that XD
20:34 Kruzon: not yet
20:34 Kruzon: still need to reppatern the upcoming notes
20:34 Kruzon: im thinking
20:35 Kruzon: this 00:11:747 (11747|2,11887|2,12026|0) -  1 note intentional right? you dont follow drum for this stream
20:35 Kruzon: so it should be in form or stairs instead to match the flow not jacks
20:36 AXII Inz: right stair
20:36 Kruzon: i will send you my idea after this
20:36 Kruzon: in form of picture
20:36 AXII Inz: OK
20:38 Kruzon: starting at this time, 00:11:608 (11608|2) - 
20:38 AXII Inz: ok
20:38 Kruzon: check this out
20:38 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913129
20:38 Kruzon: see if match with rhythm
20:40 AXII Inz: its OK for me
20:40 Kruzon: alright
20:41 AXII Inz: are u sure my SB isnt heavy load ? :/
20:42 Kruzon: oh? im not sure
20:42 Kruzon: because i dont know at all about sb
20:42 Kruzon: lol
20:42 Kruzon: all i know is it looks cool
20:42 Kruzon: ww
20:42 AXII Inz: >.>a
20:43 Kruzon: wait im still constructing pattern
20:44 AXII Inz: my pattern is bad =_=a
20:46 Kruzon: no its good
20:47 Kruzon: i will skip this part
20:47 Kruzon: i move along
20:47 AXII Inz: well i'll deploy my kantaii
20:47 AXII Inz: Ok
20:49 Kruzon: starting at this time, 00:18:864 (18864|2) -  i suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913157
20:50 Kruzon: im trying to make both of this on same line as they have identical sound 00:19:561 (19561|1,19840|1) - 
20:51 AXII Inz: im not hear any sound :/
20:51 AXII Inz: owhhh yeah
20:51 AXII Inz: teng teng :o
20:52 Kruzon: oh i just rearranging your pattern
20:52 Kruzon: didnt add any at that part
20:53 AXII Inz: i know :o
20:53 Kruzon: starting at this time 00:35:608 (35608|2) - 
20:53 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913167
20:54 Kruzon: you may move this 00:36:305 (36305|3) -  to 3 for better flow
20:55 AXII Inz: ok
20:55 Kruzon: starting here, 00:36:724 (36724|1) -  
20:55 AXII Inz: 00:37:701 -  u think weird ?
20:55 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913171
20:55 Kruzon: but
20:55 Kruzon: 00:37:701 (37701|0) -  is on correct pitch
20:56 AXII Inz: i can meke it LN but meghh
20:56 AXII Inz: no
20:56 AXII Inz: go on then
20:57 Kruzon: if make ln will lose stars rating quite much
20:57 Kruzon: i go on
20:58 Kruzon: wait
20:58 Kruzon: i try repattern that place
20:58 AXII Inz: Nnnnnoooooo ;w
20:59 Kruzon: how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913182
20:59 Kruzon: haha
20:59 Kruzon: ok move along lol
20:59 Kruzon: as for reasoning, 00:37:840 (37840|0,38050|0) -  both have same sound 
21:00 AXII Inz: i follow drum
21:00 Kruzon: ah i see
21:02 Kruzon: starting here 00:53:468 (53468|1) - 
21:02 AXII Inz: go go
21:02 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913191
21:03 Kruzon: if you agree this there's second part 
21:03 Kruzon: if not i skip this section
21:03 AXII Inz: Ok
21:04 Kruzon: aight, so here's the second part:
21:04 Kruzon: starting here 00:54:026 (54026|2) - 
21:04 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913198
21:04 Kruzon: i really think this is perfect
21:05 Kruzon: if you compare to upcoming pattern its fitting repeat 
21:05 AXII Inz: kanpeki-desu
21:05 Kruzon: okay moving along
21:08 Kruzon: ok
21:08 Kruzon: starting here, 00:59:050 (59050|2) - 
21:08 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913206
21:10 AXII Inz: 00:59:608 (59608|3,59747|3,59747|2,59887|2,59887|3,59887|1) -  XD
21:10 Kruzon: yeaa
21:10 Kruzon: haha
21:10 Kruzon: pattenr wise it looks cute but it depends on you
21:10 Kruzon: lol
21:11 AXII Inz: 1st time i see pattern like that
21:11 Kruzon: well for the reason, i cant find the best place for 00:59:747 (59747|3,59747|2) - 
21:11 Kruzon: the pitch flow suggesting all to the right
21:11 Kruzon: so i thought could emphasis with this pattern
21:12 AXII Inz: ok
21:12 Kruzon: starting here
21:12 Kruzon: 01:00:305 (60305|0) - 
21:12 Kruzon: dont be startled this pattern might be even weirder
21:12 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913219
21:13 AXII Inz: the problem is confort or not ?
21:13 Kruzon: how about you test it
21:14 AXII Inz: sure
21:14 Kruzon: i arrange based on beautifulness, kawaiiness, and pitch relevancy
21:14 AXII Inz: i cant >.>a
21:14 Kruzon: comfortability not sure
21:14 Kruzon: oh 
21:14 Kruzon: then can skip this
21:15 AXII Inz: 01:00:305 (60305|1,60305|0,60445|2,60445|3,60584|1,60584|0,60724|2,60724|3) -  Hmmm applied
21:15 Kruzon: ookie
21:20 Kruzon: waa
21:20 Kruzon: 3 parts
21:21 Kruzon: lol
21:21 Kruzon: a r e  y o u   r e a d y   
21:21 Kruzon: haha
21:21 AXII Inz: hoammmmm
21:21 AXII Inz: OK
21:22 Kruzon: part 1, starting here 01:04:491 (64491|0) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913256
21:23 Kruzon: part 2, starting here 01:05:608 (65608|0) -  : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913262
21:23 AXII Inz: u wanna make a joke kru-sama =_= ?
21:24 Kruzon: no its not joking
21:24 Kruzon: i even think hard at this
21:24 Kruzon: but, ofc if it doesnt suit to your preference you can ignore it
21:24 AXII Inz: 01:04:352 -
21:24 AXII Inz: u mean start here >?
21:25 AXII Inz: 01:04:491 -  no different of mine
21:25 Kruzon: yes, some of them are same to your pattern
21:25 Kruzon: there's a bit changes but you need to notice what notes i changed
21:25 AXII Inz: 01:04:491 (64491|0,64631|2,64771|1,64910|0,65050|1,65189|0,65189|2,65329|1,65468|2) -
21:25 AXII Inz: What change ?
21:25 AXII Inz: :/
21:26 Kruzon: if nothing changed i might be forgotten
21:26 Kruzon: you check part 2
21:26 AXII Inz: dne'
21:27 AXII Inz: part 1 may be wrong
21:27 Kruzon: here is part 3: starting at this time 01:06:305 (66305|3) - 
21:27 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913280
21:28 Kruzon: starting point doesnt could be a bit random, i didnt remember specifically where i start changing so if the notes are same as old notes ignore it
21:28 Kruzon: i suggest you testplay first see comfortable or not
21:28 AXII Inz: OK
21:29 AXII Inz: i cant
21:29 AXII Inz: play by yourself :>
21:29 AXII Inz: just go on
21:29 Kruzon: haha
21:29 Kruzon: sure
21:30 Kruzon: starting heer 01:07:840 (67840|1) - 
21:30 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913295
21:33 AXII Inz: Ok
21:33 Kruzon: oh, if what i linked are the same notes, ignore it
21:33 Kruzon: starting here, 01:09:654 (69654|0) - 
21:34 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913308
21:34 Kruzon: part 2, starting here 01:10:771 (70771|0) - 
21:35 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913315
21:36 AXII Inz: OK
21:36 Kruzon: you sure? if you dont like dont need take 
21:36 Kruzon: just in case i will tell my reasoning
21:37 Kruzon: 01:10:771 (70771|0,70840|3) -  mirrored with 01:11:329 (71329|3,71398|0) - 
21:37 Kruzon: sound contrast, the notes around vicinity just follow flow
21:38 AXII Inz: i dont really know about modding just applied that i think good especially pattern
21:39 Kruzon: alright
21:41 Kruzon: hmm around the long note section is quite dangerous
21:42 Kruzon: i wont touch on this part
21:42 AXII Inz: just leave it then
21:43 AXII Inz: 01:36:864 -  start here i dont really that good
21:45 Kruzon: hmm
21:45 Kruzon: mah, for now try fix here
21:45 Kruzon: start here 01:45:236 (105236|0) -  how about:
21:46 Kruzon: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3913362
21:47 AXII Inz: OK
21:49 Kruzon: 01:47:189 (107189|2) -  how about move to 4? the pattern is actually like 01:46:771 (106771|0,107050|0,107189|3,107329|0,107468|3,107747|3) -  3 notes per col consistency
Xenophilius
456 posts
Joined August 2014
Xenophilius
From Findus' Modding Queue

Layouts:

4k: |0|1|2|3|


HEXAUST
  1. 00:19:980 (19980|3,20050|2,20119|0,20189|1,20259|2,20329|3,20398|2,20468|0,20538|2,20538|3,20538|1) - I suggest:
    00:20:398 (20398|2) - to |1| to mirror 00:19:980 (19980|3,20050|2) -
    00:29:468 - Add a note? Since this is louder than 00:29:747 -
  2. 00:33:236 - I suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3917981
  3. 00:35:468 - add a note here. As loud as 00:35:608 (35608|3,35608|2,35747|1,35747|2) -
  4. 01:14:817 (74817|1,75096|1) - Why not move on |0| to jack like 01:14:119 (74119|3,74259|3,74398|3,74538|3) - ?
  5. 01:28:352 (88352|3,88352|2,88352|1,88491|2,88491|3) - These are equal loud. remove/add a note.
  6. 01:37:561 - Add note, You missed a kick
DeletedUser_259972
DeletedUser_259972
SORRY FOR DELAY p/4634164

Hi, AXII Inz! Requested from my queue :)

Nice song and nice SB :D

1|2|3|4


[Overall]

Storyboard is overloaded (it should be under 5x I believe). Not sure how but this should be fixed.\
Not sure though. Be sure to ask BN for this ranking criteria because the SB is sooo beautiful :P


[EXHAUST]

00:03:794 (3794|1) - Move to 1
00:03:933 (3933|0) - Move to 4

00:11:608 - ~ 00:19:422 - How about adding one more note every time when bass drum kicks?
So such as 00:11:887 - 00:12:584 - 00:13:003 - 00:13:701 - so on.

00:20:398 (20398|2) - Move to 2

00:59:887 (59887|1,59887|3,59887|2,60026|0,60096|1,60166|2) - Ctrl+H

01:01:980 (61980|3) - Move to 2 (Too many jack at 4)

01:13:840 (73840|1,73980|0) - Move to left by 1 column

01:16:491 (76491|3) - Move to 3

01:18:096 (78096|2,78166|3,78236|2,78375|2,78445|3,78515|2) - Too many trills at right hand, consider rearranging those.


ADD LN MODS
(There is melody in this timing, consider adding LN here)

01:19:701 -
01:19:980 -
01:20:957 -
01:21:375 -
01:23:050 -
01:23:189 -
01:25:003 -
01:25:422 -
01:25:840 -
01:28:631 -
01:28:910 -
01:29:887 -
01:30:305 -
01:31:980 -
01:32:119 -
01:33:933 -
01:34:352 -
01:34:771 -

That's all! GL!!
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

Xenophilius wrote:

From Findus' Modding Queue

Layouts:

4k: |0|1|2|3|


HEXAUST
  1. 00:19:980 (19980|3,20050|2,20119|0,20189|1,20259|2,20329|3,20398|2,20468|0,20538|2,20538|3,20538|1) - I suggest:
    00:20:398 (20398|2) - to |1| to mirror 00:19:980 (19980|3,20050|2) - :arrow: OK
    00:29:468 - Add a note? Since this is louder than 00:29:747 - :arrow: No thanks ... cess thing
  2. 00:33:236 - I suggest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3917981 :arrow: No way .. i have to remap all that same .... No sound too :/
  3. 00:35:468 - add a note here. As loud as 00:35:608 (35608|3,35608|2,35747|1,35747|2) - :arrow: Heh ?? No that syth sound
  4. 01:14:817 (74817|1,75096|1) - Why not move on |0| to jack like 01:14:119 (74119|3,74259|3,74398|3,74538|3) - ? :arrow: Owhhh OK
  5. 01:28:352 (88352|3,88352|2,88352|1,88491|2,88491|3) - These are equal loud. remove/add a note. :arrow: LB is counted XD
  6. 01:37:561 - Add note, You missed a kick :arrow: No kick sound ..
Applied :3

Thanks :D
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

jakads wrote:

SORRY FOR DELAY p/4634164

Hi, AXII Inz! Requested from my queue :)

Nice song and nice SB :D

1|2|3|4


[Overall]

Storyboard is overloaded (it should be under 5x I believe). Not sure how but this should be fixed.\
Not sure though. Be sure to ask BN for this ranking criteria because the SB is sooo beautiful :P :arrow: i dont know why it so heavy =_=a


[EXHAUST]

00:03:794 (3794|1) - Move to 1
00:03:933 (3933|0) - Move to 4

00:11:608 - ~ 00:19:422 - How about adding one more note every time when bass drum kicks? :arrow: ahhh not for this :D
So such as 00:11:887 - 00:12:584 - 00:13:003 - 00:13:701 - so on.

00:20:398 (20398|2) - Move to 2

00:59:887 (59887|1,59887|3,59887|2,60026|0,60096|1,60166|2) - Ctrl+H :arrow: Esper ;w;

01:01:980 (61980|3) - Move to 2 (Too many jack at 4)

01:13:840 (73840|1,73980|0) - Move to left by 1 column

01:16:491 (76491|3) - Move to 3

01:18:096 (78096|2,78166|3,78236|2,78375|2,78445|3,78515|2) - Too many trills at right hand, consider rearranging those. :arrow: Ok


ADD LN MODS
(There is melody in this timing, consider adding LN here) :arrow: emmm no ... too minor may be

01:19:701 -
01:19:980 -
01:20:957 -
01:21:375 -
01:23:050 -
01:23:189 -
01:25:003 -
01:25:422 -
01:25:840 -
01:28:631 -
01:28:910 -
01:29:887 -
01:30:305 -
01:31:980 -
01:32:119 -
01:33:933 -
01:34:352 -
01:34:771 -

That's all! GL!! :arrow: Thanks >w<
Applied ..
Thanks
sherrysina
540 posts
Joined December 2014
sherrysina
hi, req via Kuhaku Mania MODHOUSE!

[BASIC]
00:44:817 - why stop here? you can continue until 00:45:096 -
01:04:771 (64771|3) - awkward start @@ LN should start here 01:04:491 - and delete this 01:04:491 (64491|2) -
01:05:189 (65189|2) - and 01:05:608 (65608|2) - has a different pitch. it's kinda awkward to place them in the same collumn. same like 01:07:422 (67422|1,67840|1) -
01:23:329 (83329|1,83747|0) - swap collumn, then 01:23:329 (83329|1,83747|0) - move to 4

[NOVICE]
00:29:608 (29608|3) - what sound did you follow?
01:04:771 (64771|2,64771|0) - why two notes?
01:05:189 (65189|2,65189|1,65608|2,65608|1) - same reason like the previous diff

bagiku, kedua diff diatas masih butuh banyak improve. diff lain sudah bagus kok
good luck~
AXII Inz
52 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
AXII Inz

sherrysina wrote:

hi, req via Kuhaku Mania MODHOUSE!

[BASIC]
00:44:817 - why stop here? you can continue until 00:45:096 - :arrow: too hard for Basic player its too short they'll not ready
01:04:771 (64771|3) - awkward start @@ LN should start here 01:04:491 - and delete this 01:04:491 (64491|2) - :arrow: i didnt follow that sound O_O
01:05:189 (65189|2) - and 01:05:608 (65608|2) - has a different pitch. it's kinda awkward to place them in the same collumn. same like 01:07:422 (67422|1,67840|1) - :arrow: Maybe basic player want little jack '_') b
01:23:329 (83329|1,83747|0) - swap collumn, then 01:23:329 (83329|1,83747|0) - move to 4 :arrow: Heh ? O_Oa

[NOVICE]
00:29:608 (29608|3) - what sound did you follow? :arrow: Dat minor syth :v
01:04:771 (64771|2,64771|0) - why two notes? :arrow: pull sound and dat major sound
01:05:189 (65189|2,65189|1,65608|2,65608|1) - same reason like the previous diff :arrow: >.>a

bagiku, kedua diff diatas masih butuh banyak improve. diff lain sudah bagus kok
good luck~
Kok hampir semua ku tolak yah XD

tp thanks for mod
Daikyi
190 posts
Joined April 2011
Daikyi
NM req from t/390864 incoming

1|2|3|4

A+ song choice

EXHAUST
00:09:375 (9375|1,9375|0) - should be single note, don't think jump is warranted here
00:10:352 (10352|0) - move to 3 for PR
00:11:608 - i kinda disagree with your layering choice here, given that the background synth is pretty faint, and you're ignoring the continued piano part and the kick drum entirely. I think, it'd be neat to have like, a broken up pattern that follows snare, kick and piano. However, either way is justified I think, although I do think that there should be some sort of extra layering in this section of some sort rather than the only big hits being the triples
00:19:980 (19980|3) - patterns should probably be revised as a roll going to the right, to keep PR
00:20:677 (20677|3) - i believe this is just an extension of the previous note and should be removed
00:21:654 - note for synth
00:22:073 - note for synth
00:23:189 (23189|1) - definitely go through this section and try to be more consistent on whether you're stepping the synth or not (here you have a single note for the synth, but are missing a lot of other spots)
00:24:305 - (you stepped it 00:33:236 (33236|1) but not here? lol)
00:25:143 -
00:25:561 -
00:28:910 (28910|1) - remove this note
00:29:608 (29608|2) - remove (extension again)
00:30:584 - note again (go through and see if you want to step these, i'll stop pointing them out)
00:37:840 (37840|1) - remove note
00:42:724 - note
00:44:957 - note
00:45:096 (45096|2,46840|2) - in general, ending a hold and having a note right after forces a pretty weird release pattern, and this pattern probably works better as like (starting from the single notes at the hold end) 4|3|2|[34] or something
00:47:329 - this whole section, definitely consider stepping the extra 16th blips that happen (00:51:096 (51096|0,51166|1,51236|2) is one spot where you actually did step them) because I think they would add a little flavor into the chart, and are pretty distinct, so not too hard to pick out and step accurately.

apply notes from kiai section 1 to kiai section 2 in general

I'm going to assume that your holds are going to the main synth, if i'm wrong, whoop
01:18:864 (78864|2) - hold goes to nothing
01:19:701 - hold
01:19:980 - hold (watch out when the synth dips down in pitch, but still exists, i guess you may not be listening for those)
01:20:957 - again
01:21:375 - again
01:21:515 (81515|1) - you may consider not even having this as a hold, because the length of the actual synth is really short and staccato
01:22:491 - transition into the jumptrill feels weird with your layering as it shifts back and forth between stepping some of the synth then none of it then back to some of it
again, going to not address the rest of the holds that were erroneous in the second kiai since it'll be just you going back and listening for where the melody actually happens
01:36:026 - jumptrilling at 215 bpm for a map of this difficulty is pretty bad, should probably make this more friendly, especially with the hands causing the hidden minijack at the beginning and ending of it (with holds there too for more questionable reading)
01:44:259 (104259|0) - you're still going to have to go back through all the sections where you use straight 8th notes, because notes like these (01:45:515 (105515|0) 01:48:724 (108724|2) and these and many more) don't go to anything, and make the file messy and wrong

cute storyboard

there's a lot of repeated comments about missed notes, ghost notes, ghost holds, etc. that i left out, so do make sure to go through the lot
FrenziedComet
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FrenziedComet
Love this beatmap. Good Job. :)
AXII Inz
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Topic Starter
AXII Inz

FrenziedComet wrote:

Love this beatmap. Good Job. :)
Thanks '_')b
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