Hey, Random and kinda small NM.
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Bold = Must change/strong suggestion
[ General]
I'll be the metadata guy now lol
Add source: デジタル・デビル物語 女神転生II
Add tags: Digital Devil Story Megami Tensei II Daedalus
It's a remix of the song "Daedalus" of that game ( https://youtu.be/tJ4zvfpcI1M?t=12m45s here's some sauce)
You also should add the name of the album in the tags if you can find it if possible, since I don't know lol
Also idk if the song itself it's called Daedalus because I found this too https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKee_9NxdJg (and we all know youtube isn't a good source)
[ Kantan]Add source: デジタル・デビル物語 女神転生II
Add tags: Digital Devil Story Megami Tensei II Daedalus
It's a remix of the song "Daedalus" of that game ( https://youtu.be/tJ4zvfpcI1M?t=12m45s here's some sauce)
You also should add the name of the album in the tags if you can find it if possible, since I don't know lol
Also idk if the song itself it's called Daedalus because I found this too https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKee_9NxdJg (and we all know youtube isn't a good source)
00:40:702 - Remove finish? The cymbal is really faint to hear it
00:42:369 - // Change to d, so the pattern is a bit simpler for beginner players lol
01:06:813 - I highly recommend to delete this note, because this 2/1 pattern is really long and it should have a little break inbetween imo
[ Futsuu]00:42:369 - // Change to d, so the pattern is a bit simpler for beginner players lol
01:06:813 - I highly recommend to delete this note, because this 2/1 pattern is really long and it should have a little break inbetween imo
00:40:424 - Change to k, flows better and there's a snare sound
01:25:702 - Change to k, guitar has the same pitch there
01:38:202 - Delete for consistency with 01:33:757 -
01:49:313 - I'd delete this note to emphasize the next section which is more intense
[ Muzukashii]01:25:702 - Change to k, guitar has the same pitch there
01:38:202 - Delete for consistency with 01:33:757 -
01:49:313 - I'd delete this note to emphasize the next section which is more intense
00:17:507 - 00:17:924 - // Delete these notes? it's just the start of the map and it's one of the longest patterns there lol
00:38:341 - Delete? I know the guitar starts there but it really plays weird lol
01:00:702 - 01:02:091 - // Change colors? I think it sounds and plays a bit better if you follow the guitar
01:05:146 - // A little suggestion here, it'd be better if you follow the guitar lol
01:19:313 - Change to d to emphasize the cymbals on the next 3 notes
01:32:091 (340,341,342,343) - Invert colors there, guitar goes up then down
00:38:341 - Delete? I know the guitar starts there but it really plays weird lol
01:00:702 - 01:02:091 - // Change colors? I think it sounds and plays a bit better if you follow the guitar
01:05:146 - // A little suggestion here, it'd be better if you follow the guitar lol
01:19:313 - Change to d to emphasize the cymbals on the next 3 notes
01:32:091 (340,341,342,343) - Invert colors there, guitar goes up then down
[ Oni]
01:31:813 to 01:49:590 - In general this part feels and plays really weird with the finisher usage, I'd move 01:31:952 - to 01:32:368 - and so on with the rest of the patterns so after the finish it gets a 1/1 break, or you could delete them, as you prefer lol. Or you could remove all the finishers (except the first one), because this is the only diff that puts finishers like that (besides Relentless Oni) on all that section, which seems odd in my opinion
00:47:785 - Delete this note to make a break between the snap changes?
01:19:729 - ^
02:03:757 (786,787) - Ctrl+G? Guitar goes on the same note on the last 2 notes
00:47:785 - Delete this note to make a break between the snap changes?
01:19:729 - ^
02:03:757 (786,787) - Ctrl+G? Guitar goes on the same note on the last 2 notes
[ Inner Oni]
Really fun diff with DT :^)
00:41:396 (209,210) - // Ctrl+G for some variety in the pattern so it's not too boring?
00:45:007 - Change to k, guitar has the same pitch here as the previous note
00:45:841 (244,245) - // Same as the first suggestion
01:19:313 (542,543,544,545,546) - kdkkd? Follows guitar better
01:28:294 - Add a don here and // change 01:28:387 - to d? Having a single 1/3 kk pattern there seems odd
02:16:630 - move this volume change a bit to the right? it affects the finisher and it makes it super quiet
[ Relentless Oni]00:41:396 (209,210) - // Ctrl+G for some variety in the pattern so it's not too boring?
00:45:007 - Change to k, guitar has the same pitch here as the previous note
00:45:841 (244,245) - // Same as the first suggestion
01:19:313 (542,543,544,545,546) - kdkkd? Follows guitar better
01:28:294 - Add a don here and // change 01:28:387 - to d? Having a single 1/3 kk pattern there seems odd
02:16:630 - move this volume change a bit to the right? it affects the finisher and it makes it super quiet
00:26:952 (165,166,167) - Change all to kat? Guitar is high there, also consistency with 00:35:979 -
00:41:813 - // This is just my opinion, but you could start doing like kkdkkdk.... until 00:42:924 - so you map the guitar going higher and higher?
00:54:799 - Delete this note, there's nothing there, and it's weird to play
00:59:729 - Change to d? There's a kick there and it makes the thing less awkward to play lol
01:04:868 - 01:05:285 - 01:05:702 - 01:06:118 - Why aren't these notes as dons? The guitar goes with the same notes as 01:02:924 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - but in 1/4 and it sounds really nice :thinking:
02:16:630 - Same as Inner Oni
00:41:813 - // This is just my opinion, but you could start doing like kkdkkdk.... until 00:42:924 - so you map the guitar going higher and higher?
00:54:799 - Delete this note, there's nothing there, and it's weird to play
00:59:729 - Change to d? There's a kick there and it makes the thing less awkward to play lol
01:04:868 - 01:05:285 - 01:05:702 - 01:06:118 - Why aren't these notes as dons? The guitar goes with the same notes as 01:02:924 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - but in 1/4 and it sounds really nice :thinking:
02:16:630 - Same as Inner Oni
That's all, fun map overall. Good luck!