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Horie Yui - silky heart

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Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
- Remove "TV Size Toradora!" from tags, since it is already exists in title/source
- offset -3It's correct offset. I used wizzy's timing.
- How about to use bigger background? I've found same picture as you have, but in greater resolution. You can find it here thank you
- Probably i'm having troubles with my pc, but is it supposed to be like this?:???I didnt attended it.


[Taeyang's Insane]

00:32:220 (7,8,9) - I think it's better to skip using 1/8 here
00:39:220 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:25:220 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ etc
00:56:998 (2) - honestly i do not see any reasons of such great jump
01:03:886 (1,2,3) - As before i do not see any reasons of such construction
01:29:664 - reduce volume till 5%


[Insane]

00:11:219 (3) - move to x124:y140

[bbNormal]

00:42:775 (2) - This looks not really good, consider to remake this pattern?
The rest is fine. I'm just not fan of such spacing...well, whatever

[Curi's Easy]

i have nothing to say


Good luck, wishing all the best
Thanks for mod
BeatofIke
Don't forget to fix tags/unicode artist in bbNormal. It's inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties o3o
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BeatofIke wrote:

Don't forget to fix tags/unicode artist in bbNormal. It's inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties o3o
OK. Thank you
Reillia
아니 그래서 븡체크는 언제..ㅠㅠ
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[C u r i] wrote:

아니 그래서 븡체크는 언제..ㅠㅠ
애플님이 언제 오려나요
Luel Roseline
모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다.

[Easy]
00:54:553 (1,2,3) - 1/1 스냅으로 기준해서 다시 수정해주세요.
01:09:220 (1,2,3,4) - 위와 같아요

[Normal]
간단해요. 제목 부분만 어떻게 처리만 해주면 됩니다.

[Hard]
00:14:553 (2,3) - 개인적인 생각인데, 그냥 ●▷●▷●▷● 형식으로 한 다음에 Ctrl + G 해주세요.
00:44:775 (4) - 이 서클을 슬라이더 밖으로 빼는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.
Reillia

S A V E R Y wrote:

모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다.

[Easy]
00:54:553 (1,2,3) - 1/1 스냅으로 기준해서 다시 수정해주세요. 별문제 없다고 봅니당
01:09:220 (1,2,3,4) - 위와 같아요 이것도 물론 문제는없다고 봅니당

Thanks for modding~
Reillia

Neoskylove wrote:

애플님이 언제 오려나요

아 부른게 애플이었음? 애플이면 한달정도 기다리면 올듯
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[C u r i] wrote:

Neoskylove wrote:

애플님이 언제 오려나요

아 부른게 애플이었음? 애플이면 한달정도 기다리면 올듯
헐 바이바이 무조건 잡고 늘어져야겠다
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S A V E R Y wrote:

모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다.

[Normal]
간단해요. 제목 부분만 어떻게 처리만 해주면 됩니다.수정했습니다

[Hard]
00:14:553 (2,3) - 개인적인 생각인데, 그냥 ●▷●▷●▷● 형식으로 한 다음에 Ctrl + G 해주세요.??이해가 안되어서 수정 안함요
00:44:775 (4) - 이 서클을 슬라이더 밖으로 빼는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.저는 이게 좋아요
모딩 감사합니다

BeatofIke wrote:

Don't forget to fix tags/unicode artist in bbNormal. It's inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties o3o
I fixed. Thank you
Taeyang
쉘라 불러놨어요
빨라 다 고쳐놓으셈

waiting... Satellite,sheela901
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Taeyang wrote:

쉘라 불러놨어요
빨라 다 고쳐놓으셈
고칠건 다고쳤는디...
Satellite
Hello. request by Taeyang. (m4m)

[General]
  1. remove "toradora!" to tag. because please check source lol
  2. Title must be changed " silky heart "
    metadata source :
    http://www.starchild.co.jp/artist/horie/disco/
  3. bbNormal remove WidescreenStoryboard check.
[Curi's Easy]
  1. Awesome. Nothing to say.
[bbNormal]
  1. HP Drain changed 4 best diff spread
  2. 01:25:442 (4,5) - Only this. This spacing is really awkward imo. please changed this rhythm.
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:331 (2) - I recommend that I switch to other patterns. It is unfavorable in the Hard diff.
  2. 00:45:220 (6) - add New combo here. probably you are forgot here.
  3. 00:52:331 (6) - same as above.
  4. 00:55:442 (3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. I think changed "circle + circle" more better much rhythm.
  5. 01:08:775 (2) - w-why used distance *1.0 ? maybe *1.2 better.
[Insane]
  1. looks good!
[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 01:27:887 (1) - slider end not much clap hitsound. please changed other or remove.
Call me back ~
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Satellite wrote:

Hello. request by Taeyang. (m4m)

[General]
  1. remove "toradora!" to tag. because please check source lol
  2. Title must be changed " silky heart "
    metadata source :
    http://www.starchild.co.jp/artist/horie/disco/
  3. bbNormal remove WidescreenStoryboard check.
[Curi's Easy]
  1. Awesome. Nothing to say.
[bbNormal]
  1. HP Drain changed 4 best diff spread
  2. 01:25:442 (4,5) - Only this. This spacing is really awkward imo. please changed this rhythm.fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:331 (2) - I recommend that I switch to other patterns. It is unfavorable in the Hard diff.fixed
  2. 00:45:220 (6) - add New combo here. probably you are forgot here.fixed
  3. 00:52:331 (6) - same as above.^
  4. 00:55:442 (3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. I think changed "circle + circle" more better much rhythm.fixed
  5. 01:08:775 (2) - w-why used distance *1.0 ? maybe *1.2 better.fixed
[Insane]
  1. looks good!
[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 01:27:887 (1) - slider end not much clap hitsound. please changed other or remove.fixed
Call me back ~
all fixed. Thanks
Satellite
Rechecked and Looks fine to me. So Bubbled!

mod log
2015-12-22 15:08 Satellite: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/788245 Horie Yui - silky heart [Hard]]
2015-12-22 15:08 Satellite: 00:26:331 (2,3,4) -
2015-12-22 15:08 Neoskylove: Yes
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: i think
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: http://puu.sh/m4tlO/9173b11936.jpg
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: this rhythm more better.
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: placement suggestion
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: http://puu.sh/m4tou/a07c2d0e85.jpg
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: 00:26:331 (2) - stack 00:27:442 (1) - this =w=
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: what's do you think =w=
2015-12-22 15:12 Neoskylove: I fixed
2015-12-22 15:12 Satellite: that's all ! please update =w=
2015-12-22 15:13 Neoskylove: updated

Nice mapset. Good luck on Ranked!
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Satellite wrote:

Rechecked and Looks fine to me. So Bubbled!

mod log
2015-12-22 15:08 Satellite: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/788245 Horie Yui - silky heart [Hard]]
2015-12-22 15:08 Satellite: 00:26:331 (2,3,4) -
2015-12-22 15:08 Neoskylove: Yes
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: i think
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: http://puu.sh/m4tlO/9173b11936.jpg
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: this rhythm more better.
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: placement suggestion
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: http://puu.sh/m4tou/a07c2d0e85.jpg
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: 00:26:331 (2) - stack 00:27:442 (1) - this =w=
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: what's do you think =w=
2015-12-22 15:12 Neoskylove: I fixed
2015-12-22 15:12 Satellite: that's all ! please update =w=
2015-12-22 15:13 Neoskylove: updated

Nice mapset. Good luck on Ranked!
Thank you
Kawashiro
사실 태양님에게 조금 실망했습니다

아무튼 축하드려요! 랭 ㄱㄱㄱ ^~^/
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UnLock- wrote:

사실 태양님에게 조금 실망했습니다조용히 해요....

아무튼 축하드려요! 랭 ㄱㄱㄱ ^~^/
감사합니다
Taeyang

UnLock- wrote:

사실 태양님에게 조금 실망했습니다

아무튼 축하드려요! 랭 ㄱㄱㄱ ^~^/
사실 지내온 시간으론 언락님이 더많은데 많이 못도와드려서 ㅈㅅ ㅠ...
그리고 네오님한테선 앞으로 준만큼 뜯어낼껍니다 ㅋㅅㅋ
(사심으로 제 인센난이도를 빨리 랭크시키고 싶었던 마음도 있어서 이번만 특별히 좀 많이 도와드린것뿐ㅋ)
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Taeyang wrote:

UnLock- wrote:

사실 태양님에게 조금 실망했습니다

아무튼 축하드려요! 랭 ㄱㄱㄱ ^~^/
사실 지내온 시간으론 언락님이 더많은데 많이 못도와드려서 ㅈㅅ ㅠ...
그리고 네오님한테선 앞으로 준만큼 뜯어낼껍니다 ㅋㅅㅋ
잔인하시다...ㄷㄷ
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Taeyang wrote:

그리고 네오님한테선 앞으로 준만큼 뜯어낼껍니다 ㅋㅅㅋ
저한테서 뭘 뜯어가실려고......ㄷㄷ
Reillia

Neoskylove wrote:

Taeyang wrote:

그리고 네오님한테선 앞으로 준만큼 뜯어낼껍니다 ㅋㅅㅋ
저한테서 뭘 뜯어가실려고......ㄷㄷ
그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
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[C u r i] wrote:

그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
랭되면 오스 접는 각(?)
Sangzin

Neoskylove wrote:

[C u r i] wrote:

그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
랭되면 오스 접는 각(?)
You shall not quit!!!
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Sangzin wrote:

You shall not quit!!!
영어 못해요
Sangzin

Neoskylove wrote:

Sangzin wrote:

You shall not quit!!!
영어 못해요
님은 접지 못함!!
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Sangzin wrote:

님은 접지 못함!!
히잌
sheela
Hello! Taeyang requested me this map for M4M! How sweet of him~

[General]
  1. The background is not in a good shape. Go for this instead: http://puu.sh/m3Iqm/ec917d1ece.jpg
  2. The video quality is average, but it could be better. Replace this instead: http://puu.sh/m4RyK/b319c24cde.avi

[bbNormal]
  1. 00:52:998 (2) - The shape feels so random lol, but like, it doesn't fit with the music honestly, like it's not the right place to make the slider complex. You can do a simple curve, it'd be nice in my opinion.
  2. 00:55:664 (1) - I'm not sure if this form is readable for the beginner players. The reason is the loop that overlaps on the slider's body. I would suggest you to make something else.
  3. 00:57:664 (1) - Because of the gap that is different from the others, and the stack with its previous object, it is hard to know when you have to press (1). I highly suggest you move it somewhere else.
  4. 01:26:331 (1) - Is ending the spinner on a 1/1 tick before the downbeat intended? Other difficulties end their maps 01:29:664 because the music ends there. It's really weird how it sounds.

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:109 - How about adding a note here? The beat is obvious here, and it would support the end of the measure.
  2. 00:44:775 (4) - Stacking it with the previous slider doesn't fit very well with the beats. Because the beat here is strong, it's better to let it open. In other words, you shouldn't stack it with its previous object. My suggestion is to switch positions of 00:44:775 (4,5) - (Ctrl + G). Everything is neat, so there shouldn't be any readability issues.
  3. 00:53:442 - Weird pause here... It doesn't sound very nice. I think you should add a hitcircle to support the tick.
  4. 01:02:331 (4,5) - Rhythmically, the upbeat 01:02:553 should have a clickable object, as the beat is loud. So, you would want to switch those two objects to fix it (Ctrl + G).
    There are many more in the kiai part;
    1. 01:05:887 (3,4) -
    2. 01:12:998 (4,5) -
    3. 01:20:109 (4,5) -
  5. 01:25:220 (3,4) - The rhythm here can be more complex, as the song reaches to the end. It will make a better emphasis. So I suggest you make two 1/4 repeat sliders, like in the following:
Everything is very neat!

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:109 - In like in Hard, it would be a good start to have a 1/4 rhythm here before the streams. Also, the beat is obvious, so you shouldn't skip it.
  2. 00:19:887 (4) - Move it a little down to avoid being too close to 00:18:775 (2) . Although it doesn't overlap, it's not pretty to see this.
  3. 00:48:331 (4,1) - Honestly the flow is not good here. Due to the slider going down, while (4) was also somewhere down, it makes the movement kind of uncomfortable. Try this instead?
  4. 00:51:664 (4,5) - What's with the inconsistent distance here? It doesn't emphasize anything in my opinion.
  5. 01:09:442 (7) - Remove the clap? It doesn't currently go with the rhythm and music.
  6. 01:18:775 (6) - I think you should move the tail to the left, like x:170 y:248. This is because 01:17:886 (3) was overlapping the body of 01:18:775 (6) -, making it a little unreadable. It's better to avoid these kind of issues.
  7. 01:25:220 - Like in Hard, but this time, how about a stream to end the map? If you don't want to apply this, then 01:25:220 (3) would need a new combo. It will fit with the star pattern.

[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 00:27:442 (1,2) - I don't think this kind of spacing fits with the music, and it kind of plays weird. There are more:
    1. 00:45:664 (2,3) -
    2. 00:50:109 (6,7) -
    3. 00:56:998 (2,3) - Also, the stack doesn't go with the music. Since 00:57:664 (1) has a bigger beat, it would be logical to let it open, like jumps when there's a strong beat.
  2. 00:56:998 (2) - I doubt that everyone will get this. Don't you think the jump is too much? I don't see how it would fit with the music and it is kind of forceful to play. You should tone it down.
All right, call me back!
Taeyang

[C u r i] wrote:

그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
님도 예외는아님

t/362904
랭시키라고 별 20개 쐇더니 방치플레이잼...ㅋㅅㅋ
빨리 랭시키라고요 엉엉엉
rank plz ;w; that map i shot 20 stars!!! ... 20 star... star...20...
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Taeyang wrote:

[C u r i] wrote:

그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
님도 예외는아님

t/362904
랭시키라고 별 20개 쐇더니 방치플레이잼...ㅋㅅㅋ
빨리 랭시키라고요 엉엉엉
rank plz ;w; that map i shot 20 stars!!! ... 20 star... star...20...
여기는 태양님 노예들의 모임...
Taeyang

Reana wrote:

[Taeyang's Insane]
00:11:442 (1,2) - 1번 슬라 더 구부리셔서 블랭킷..?
흐름 위해서 그대로 놔두겠습니다.
00:32:109 (6,7,8,9) - 리딩 힘들게 생겼는데 조금 고치시는게?...
위의 답변에서도 말씀했듯이 인센과의 차이를 위해,그리고 왠만해선 리듬을 다 잡아두고싶어서 저렇게 해뒀습니다.
00:39:220 (7,8,9,10) - ^
^
00:39:664 (10,2) - 블랭킷 맞나요
흐름 위해서 놔뒀습니다.

Side wrote:

[Taeyang's Insane]

Should consider AR8.5 since it's the highest diff and an insane so mostly these have AR8.5 or AR9. In this case 8.5 is better cuz the BPM is low. Also makes it a fun DT :v

00:55:220 (2) - I think something cool you could do here is like move (2) to x:168 y:200 (and also add NC) and then add a note on 00:55:442 - where (2) used to be so it looks like this. I think its cool because then you add a note on the vocals in the white tick plus it gives it a fun jump and jump back into a slow slider which is a nice effect imo.
sry;w; i did agree this because there is antijumps fit more (For tension)

01:11:887 (1) - Add finish
:O fixed

01:26:109 - Yay you mapped the ending!
no 01:29:664 - and here fine to me

Some people might tell you it's overmapped but that's not a big deal nowadays at least not to me. So no real issues.
Thanks :D

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Taeyang's Insane]

00:32:220 (7,8,9) - I think it's better to skip using 1/8 here
00:39:220 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:25:220 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ etc
00:56:998 (2) - honestly i do not see any reasons of such great jump
01:03:886 (1,2,3) - As before i do not see any reasons of such construction
01:17:887 (4,5,1,2,3) -same reason
for reading 01:03:886 (1) - i did NC and not same DS

for tension i used big jump
01:29:664 - reduce volume till 5%
ok

Satellite wrote:

[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 01:27:887 (1) - slider end not much clap hitsound. please changed other or remove.
    checked

sheela901 wrote:

[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 00:27:442 (1,2) - I don't think this kind of spacing fits with the music, and it kind of plays weird. There are more:
    1. 00:45:664 (2,3) -
    2. 00:50:109 (6,7) -
    3. 00:56:998 (2,3) - Also, the stack doesn't go with the music. Since 00:57:664 (1) has a bigger beat, it would be logical to let it open, like jumps when there's a strong beat.
    this map i made DT playable
    spacing reason is for snap
    00:35:887 (6,7,1,2) - 00:15:442 (2,3,4,5) - 00:22:553 (2,3,4) - etc... here is all honest flows but there is need some snap(?)
    asdfasdf sry my english poor ;w;
  2. 00:56:998 (2) - I doubt that everyone will get this. Don't you think the jump is too much? I don't see how it would fit with the music and it is kind of forceful to play. You should tone it down.
    ok i did ctrl+G
I checked all
Thanks a lot so many modders :D

I check all
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Toradora! opening 2.MP3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57442
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 776,7887,14998,29220,36331,43442,57664,71887,86109,89664
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:silky heart
TitleUnicode:silky heart
Artist:Horie Yui
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:Neoskylove
Version:Taeyang's Insane
Source:Toradora!
Tags:とらドラ! op opening TV Size [C_u_r_i] Taeyang bbj0920
BeatmapID:793107
BeatmapSetID:358471

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8.2
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"toradora op 2.AVI"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
776,444.444444444444,4,2,15,60,1,0
887,-100,4,2,15,40,0,0
13220,-133.333333333333,4,2,15,40,0,0
14998,-100,4,2,15,50,0,0
54109,-100,4,2,15,60,0,0
55664,-200,4,2,15,60,0,0
56664,-100,4,2,15,60,0,0
57664,-83.3333333333333,4,2,16,70,0,1
71775,-83.3333333333333,4,2,16,70,0,0
71887,-83.3333333333333,4,2,16,70,0,1
86109,-133.333333333333,4,2,15,45,0,0
89664,-133.333333333333,4,2,15,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,62,62
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,0,128
Combo4 : 66,160,255
Combo5 : 211,174,24

[HitObjects]
165,194,109,5,0,0:0:0:0:
230,267,331,2,0,P|274:269|318:261,1,90
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182,114,71664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,114,71775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
182,114,71887,5,6,0:0:0:0:
171,325,72109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,230,72331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,203,72553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,203,72664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,203,72775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,88,72998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,257,73220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
305,274,73331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,285,73442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,288,73553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,283,73664,5,2,0:0:0:0:
161,42,73887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,171,74109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,203,74331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,203,74442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,203,74553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,88,74775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,285,74998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,117,75220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,117,75331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,117,75442,5,2,0:0:0:0:
189,349,75664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,161,75887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,203,76109,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,203,76220,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,203,76331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,281,76553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,88,76775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,274,76998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,274,77109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,274,77220,5,2,0:0:0:0:
281,44,77442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,203,77664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,270,77887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
331,276,77998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,281,78109,5,2,0:0:0:0:
363,242,78220,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,203,78331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,119,78553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,274,78775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,274,78887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,274,78998,5,2,0:0:0:0:
291,131,79220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,207,79442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,227,79664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,227,79775,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,227,79887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,119,80109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,274,80331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,131,80553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,222,80775,5,2,0:0:0:0:
331,248,80998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,57,81220,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,274,81442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,274,81553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,274,81664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
314,112,81887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,207,82109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,271,82331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,271,82442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,271,82553,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,298,82775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,242,82998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
114,195,83220,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,195,83331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,195,83442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,147,83664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,325,83887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,83,84109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,83,84220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,83,84331,5,2,0:0:0:0:
425,190,84553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,351,84775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
187,56,84998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,194,85220,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,194,85331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,194,85442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,194,85553,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,194,85664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
438,221,85775,2,0,L|394:218,1,26.9999991760254,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,251,85887,2,0,P|390:254|358:250,1,53.9999983520508,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,249,86109,6,0,P|180:251|127:297,1,135.000005149842,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
132,289,87220,5,2,0:0:0:0:
293,352,87664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
362,293,87887,6,0,P|375:228|369:161,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,180,88553,2,0,P|425:218|390:83,1,337.500012874604,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

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KIAI motive : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/362949
this mapset insane
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모딩따위 간단히 씹어먹는다
일단은 뭘 어떻게 해야할지 모르겠....
Taeyang
last checking

Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

  • General
  1. I swear to my virginity that there aren't any DQable issues here :P


  • 이지
  1. 00:13:220 (3) - 담요 해도될거같은뎁?
  2. 00:43:442 (1) - 힛사운드 빠진거같음 피니시 추가
  3. 01:08:331 (1,2,3,4) - 리듬 아래껄로 추천해드릴게요 이맵에 1/2 리듬이 저거 하나인데 왠만하면 비추


  • bbNormal
  1. 01:26:331 (1) - 스핀 끝나는 지점이 다른맵셋과 다르네요 01:29:664 - 여기까지
  2. 00:09:664 (1) - 뉴콤제거 ;앞뒤 처럼 다운비트 지켜가면 좋을것 같습니다.
  3. 00:43:442 (1,2,3) -서클 연속세개는 조금 많다고 생각됩니다. 00:46:998 (1,2) - 여기처럼 어떨까요?
  4. 01:02:553 (4,5,1) - ^
  5. 01:10:775 - 01:11:220 - 딱히 음량을 크게 강조할 필요가 없다고 생각되는데...초록선 지우는게...


  • Hard
  1. 00:26:553 (3) - 머리에 휘슬
  2. 00:26:998 (4) - 클랍
    꼭 고치세요
  3. 00:52:331 (1) - 슬라안에든 휘슬 빼세요
  4. 00:55:442 (3) - 클랍 00:55:664 (4) - 휘슬
  5. 00:45:220 (1,2) - 꼬리에 힛사운드 제거 00:45:220 (1) - 머리에 휘슬 00:45:664 (2) - 클랍
  6. 00:44:998 (1,2) - 리듬 이쪽이 더나아보입니다.
  7. 00:41:442 (1) - 여기머리 심벌뺴고 00:43:442 (1) - 이쪽에 넣는게 더 나아요


  • Insane
  1. 딱히 없네요
  2. 01:25:220 (3,4,5,6,7) - 별굳 ㅇㅅㅇ

ok i too checked all

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다시 버블받기전에 만약제가있다면 한번더 검사받으러오세요
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sheela901 wrote:

Hello! Taeyang requested me this map for M4M! How sweet of him~

[General]
  1. The background is not in a good shape. Go for this instead: http://puu.sh/m3Iqm/ec917d1ece.jpgno. I like this BG
  2. The video quality is average, but it could be better. Replace this instead: http://puu.sh/m4RyK/b319c24cde.avi
fixed,

[bbNormal]
  1. 00:52:998 (2) - The shape feels so random lol, but like, it doesn't fit with the music honestly, like it's not the right place to make the slider complex. You can do a simple curve, it'd be nice in my opinion.I think this is not bad.
  2. 00:55:664 (1) - I'm not sure if this form is readable for the beginner players. The reason is the loop that overlaps on the slider's body. I would suggest you to make something else.fixed to spinner.
  3. 00:57:664 (1) - Because of the gap that is different from the others, and the stack with its previous object, it is hard to know when you have to press (1). I highly suggest you move it somewhere else.
  4. 01:26:331 (1) - Is ending the spinner on a 1/1 tick before the downbeat intended? Other difficulties end their maps 01:29:664 because the music ends there. It's really weird how it soundsfixed.

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:109 - How about adding a note here? The beat is obvious here, and it would support the end of the measure.OK
  2. 00:44:775 (4) - Stacking it with the previous slider doesn't fit very well with the beats. Because the beat here is strong, it's better to let it open. In other words, you shouldn't stack it with its previous object. My suggestion is to switch positions of 00:44:775 (4,5) - (Ctrl + G). Everything is neat, so there shouldn't be any readability issues.fixed
  3. 00:53:442 - Weird pause here... It doesn't sound very nice. I think you should add a hitcircle to support the tick.added
  4. 01:02:331 (4,5) - Rhythmically, the upbeat 01:02:553 should have a clickable object, as the beat is loud. So, you would want to switch those two objects to fix it (Ctrl + G).
    There are many more in the kiai part;
    1. 01:05:887 (3,4) -
    2. 01:12:998 (4,5) -
    3. 01:20:109 (4,5) -no. I don't want to change this flow
  5. 01:25:220 (3,4) - The rhythm here can be more complex, as the song reaches to the end. It will make a better emphasis. So I suggest you make two 1/4 repeat sliders, like in the following:over mapping...?
Everything is very neat!

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:109 - In like in Hard, it would be a good start to have a 1/4 rhythm here before the streams. Also, the beat is obvious, so you shouldn't skip it.added...but....
  2. 00:19:887 (4) - Move it a little down to avoid being too close to 00:18:775 (2) . Although it doesn't overlap, it's not pretty to see this.fixed
  3. 00:48:331 (4,1) - Honestly the flow is not good here. Due to the slider going down, while (4) was also somewhere down, it makes the movement kind of uncomfortable. Try this instead?umm....fixed...
  4. 00:51:664 (4,5) - What's with the inconsistent distance here? It doesn't emphasize anything in my opinion.fixed
  5. 01:09:442 (7) - Remove the clap? It doesn't currently go with the rhythm and music.fixed
  6. 01:18:775 (6) - I think you should move the tail to the left, like x:170 y:248. This is because 01:17:886 (3) was overlapping the body of 01:18:775 (6) -, making it a little unreadable. It's better to avoid these kind of issues.fixed
  7. 01:25:220 - Like in Hard, but this time, how about a stream to end the map? If you don't want to apply this, then 01:25:220 (3) would need a new combo. It will fit with the star pattern.NC

[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 00:27:442 (1,2) - I don't think this kind of spacing fits with the music, and it kind of plays weird. There are more:
    1. 00:45:664 (2,3) -
    2. 00:50:109 (6,7) -
    3. 00:56:998 (2,3) - Also, the stack doesn't go with the music. Since 00:57:664 (1) has a bigger beat, it would be logical to let it open, like jumps when there's a strong beat.
  2. 00:56:998 (2) - I doubt that everyone will get this. Don't you think the jump is too much? I don't see how it would fit with the music and it is kind of forceful to play. You should tone it down.
All right, call me back!
이런 버블팝 같은 경우를 봤나
Thanks for modding.
sheela
Recheck! No kudosu for this post.

[bbNormal]
  1. 00:55:664 (1) - You might want to extend it to the red tick 00:56:998 . The spinner will sound better when it ends on where the rhythm is ending, and it would be longer because the spinner was too short, and some players may not pass it.
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:109 (5) - I think it's better if it's between the slider and the circle to make everything consistent.
  2. 01:25:220 (3,4) - Not really overmapping, because you can hear that you can also make a 1/4 rhythm in this part. But I don't mind if you want to keep the way is it.
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:109 (6) - The distance is bigger than the regular spacing you use for streams. You should bring it in-between 00:12:775 (5,1) .
  2. 00:48:998 (2) - Pretty minor, but it's weird to see the stack like that when you play. Move it until it snaps with the slider's end, and everything should turn out okay.

Taeyang wrote:

sheela901 wrote:

[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 00:27:442 (1,2) - I don't think this kind of spacing fits with the music, and it kind of plays weird. There are more:
    1. 00:45:664 (2,3) -
    2. 00:50:109 (6,7) -
    3. 00:56:998 (2,3) - Also, the stack doesn't go with the music. Since 00:57:664 (1) has a bigger beat, it would be logical to let it open, like jumps when there's a strong beat.
    this map i made DT playable
    spacing reason is for snap
    00:35:887 (6,7,1,2) - 00:15:442 (2,3,4,5) - 00:22:553 (2,3,4) - etc... here is all honest flows but there is need some snap(?)
    asdfasdf sry my english poor ;w;
I don't understand what you are trying to say. The first thing that you pointed out has a similar sound for the objects I've pointed out, so editing them as 00:35:887 (6,7,1,2) would make them consistent.

Also, basing something with mods like HR isn't a good reason to deny a point, as they are optional. Just remember that.


Okay, call me back again!
Akiyama Mizuki
랭크를 빨리빨리 하려는 건 좋습니다. 하지만 모딩을 받으셨다면 모딩은 최소한 gd를 제작한 사람이 스스로 고치게 하는 게 예의라고 생각합니다. 원래 그게 맞는 거고요.
저로써는 그냥 넘어가는데 제가 아닌 다른 매퍼한테는 이게 무례한 행동일 수 있다는 것 정도는 알고 계셨으면 합니다.

00:55:664 (1) - 여기 슬라는 지울 생각이 없었음
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bbj0920 wrote:

랭크를 빨리빨리 하려는 건 좋습니다. 하지만 모딩을 받으셨다면 모딩은 최소한 gd를 제작한 사람이 스스로 고치게 하는 게 예의라고 생각합니다. 원래 그게 맞는 거고요.
저로써는 그냥 넘어가는데 제가 아닌 다른 매퍼한테는 이게 무례한 행동일 수 있다는 것 정도는 알고 계셨으면 합니다.

00:55:664 (1) - 여기 슬라는 지울 생각이 없었음
아...죄송합니다...제가 너무 급해서...
Kawashiro
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UnLock- wrote:

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Taeyang wrote:

[C u r i] wrote:

그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
님도 예외는아님

t/362904
랭시키라고 별 20개 쐇더니 방치플레이잼...ㅋㅅㅋ
빨리 랭시키라고요 엉엉엉
rank plz ;w; that map i shot 20 stars!!! ... 20 star... star...20...
아니 인센 열심히 만들구있다구여 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
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