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Horie Yui - silky heart

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Sonnyc wrote:

코랸 에어
[Curi's Easy]
  1. 00:18:553 (1,2) - 00:25:664 (1,2) - 직선 평행 슬라이더들 사이의 공백이 지금보다 살짝 더 넓다면 더 안정적인 패턴이 될 수 있습니다. 유사한 00:52:331 (3,4) - 01:01:220 (1,2)에서 사용하신 안정적인 공백을 참조해주세요. Fix*
  2. 01:20:775 (3) - 유감스럽지만 살짝 오프스크린, 혹은 위험한 슬라이더입니다. 좀 더 화면 안쪽으로 오게 패턴 조절해주세요. Fix*

모딩 감사합니당~


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ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
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Sonnyc wrote:

코랸 에어
[Curi's Easy]
  1. 00:18:553 (1,2) - 00:25:664 (1,2) - 직선 평행 슬라이더들 사이의 공백이 지금보다 살짝 더 넓다면 더 안정적인 패턴이 될 수 있습니다. 유사한 00:52:331 (3,4) - 01:01:220 (1,2)에서 사용하신 안정적인 공백을 참조해주세요. Fix*
  2. 01:20:775 (3) - 유감스럽지만 살짝 오프스크린, 혹은 위험한 슬라이더입니다. 좀 더 화면 안쪽으로 오게 패턴 조절해주세요. Fix*

모딩 감사합니당~


고친거
osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
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401,197,69220,2,0,P|334:209|268:196,1,135,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,150,70331,2,0,P|181:101|191:63,1,90
277,38,71220,2,0,L|327:64,1,45
367,133,71887,6,0,P|377:182|367:220,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,276,72775,2,0,P|286:319|297:362,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,362,73664,2,0,B|403:313|443:305|443:305|511:290|516:217,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,216,74998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
494,155,75442,6,0,P|504:111|493:68,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,7,76331,2,0,P|382:-3|339:7,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,64,77220,2,0,P|185:91|101:64,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,15,78553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,104,78998,6,0,P|1:147|12:190,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,202,79887,2,0,P|113:245|102:288,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,352,80775,2,0,P|109:378|189:310,1,180
223,236,82109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,313,82553,6,0,P|307:347|363:352,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,343,83442,2,0,P|467:305|472:249,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,178,84331,2,0,P|422:144|366:139,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,184,85220,2,0,P|254:203|159:158,1,135,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86109,12,0,89664,0:0:0:0:
빼액 안넣을거임
Sonnyc

Doyak wrote:

본격 태양님과의 매핑 토론에 들어가신 손닉님
라이트 인센인게 함정
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아니 이분들ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ왜이래ㅋㅋ
Sangzin

Doyak wrote:

본격 태양님과의 매핑 토론에 들어가신 손닉님
히익......
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Sangzin wrote:

Doyak wrote:

본격 태양님과의 매핑 토론에 들어가신 손닉님
히익......
상진님 갑자깈ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Taeyang

Doyak wrote:

본격 태양님과의 매핑 토론에 들어가신 손닉님
뀨 ㅇㅅㅇ?
Lami

Sonnyc wrote:

Doyak wrote:

본격 태양님과의 매핑 토론에 들어가신 손닉님
라이트 인센인게 함정
qwp
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이분들 뭐임
Louis Cyphre
[General]
- Remove "TV Size Toradora!" from tags, since it is already exists in title/source
- offset -3
- How about to use bigger background? I've found same picture as you have, but in greater resolution. You can find it here
- Probably i'm having troubles with my pc, but is it supposed to be like this?:


[Taeyang's Insane]

00:32:220 (7,8,9) - I think it's better to skip using 1/8 here
00:39:220 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:25:220 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ etc
00:56:998 (2) - honestly i do not see any reasons of such great jump
01:03:886 (1,2,3) - As before i do not see any reasons of such construction
01:29:664 - reduce volume till 5%


[Insane]

00:11:219 (3) - move to x124:y140

[bbNormal]

00:42:775 (2) - This looks not really good, consider to remake this pattern?
The rest is fine. I'm just not fan of such spacing...well, whatever

[Curi's Easy]

i have nothing to say


Good luck, wishing all the best
Akiyama Mizuki

Sonnyc wrote:

[bbNormal]
  1. 00:36:109 (4) - 00:39:664 (5) - 박자 밀도를 보시면 00:32:998 - 00:40:998 구간에서 1/1 여백이 하나도 없이 빽빽한 상황입니다. 저 두 노트 삭제하셔서 숨통이 트이는 박자를 설정하는게 어떨까요?
  2. 00:48:553 (1,2,3) - 뭔가 전체적인 맵 퀄로 봤을 때 흐름이 뭔가 이상한 요소였습니다.
  3. 00:55:887 (1,1) - 노말 수준의 비트맵에서 스피너 회복 권장 시간은 2 박자입니다. 지금의 박자 설정은 너무 텀이 적은 감이 있습니다. 그 외에도 스피너의 길이가 노말로서는 짧은 감도 없지 않은데 차라리 여기서는 슬라 아트 처리하는 것도 나쁘지 않을 것 같네요.
  4. 01:25:887 (5,6) - 그냥 제 의견입니다만, (1,2,3,4,5)의 박자들은 모두 가사를 따라가고 있어서 가사가 없지만 심볼이 존재하는 (6)도 1/2 클릭으로 만들어서 (3,4)와 동일한 느낌을 준 것이 음악과 잘 맞는지는 의문스러웠습니다. 차라리 (5,6)을 하나의 1/2 슬라이더로 합치시거나, (6)에 뉴콤을 넣어서 이전 가사 박자에서 분리하는게 어떨까요?
다 고침

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[bbNormal]

00:42:775 (2) - This looks not really good, consider to remake this pattern? - I personally don't see it as much of a problem, good enough to be blanket imo
The rest is fine. I'm just not fan of such spacing...well, whatever
http://puu.sh/lREeC/27af26b948.osu
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Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
- Remove "TV Size Toradora!" from tags, since it is already exists in title/source
- offset -3It's correct offset. I used wizzy's timing.
- How about to use bigger background? I've found same picture as you have, but in greater resolution. You can find it here thank you
- Probably i'm having troubles with my pc, but is it supposed to be like this?:???I didnt attended it.


[Taeyang's Insane]

00:32:220 (7,8,9) - I think it's better to skip using 1/8 here
00:39:220 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:25:220 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ etc
00:56:998 (2) - honestly i do not see any reasons of such great jump
01:03:886 (1,2,3) - As before i do not see any reasons of such construction
01:29:664 - reduce volume till 5%


[Insane]

00:11:219 (3) - move to x124:y140

[bbNormal]

00:42:775 (2) - This looks not really good, consider to remake this pattern?
The rest is fine. I'm just not fan of such spacing...well, whatever

[Curi's Easy]

i have nothing to say


Good luck, wishing all the best
Thanks for mod
BeatofIke
Don't forget to fix tags/unicode artist in bbNormal. It's inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties o3o
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BeatofIke wrote:

Don't forget to fix tags/unicode artist in bbNormal. It's inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties o3o
OK. Thank you
Reillia
아니 그래서 븡체크는 언제..ㅠㅠ
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[C u r i] wrote:

아니 그래서 븡체크는 언제..ㅠㅠ
애플님이 언제 오려나요
Luel Roseline
모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다.

[Easy]
00:54:553 (1,2,3) - 1/1 스냅으로 기준해서 다시 수정해주세요.
01:09:220 (1,2,3,4) - 위와 같아요

[Normal]
간단해요. 제목 부분만 어떻게 처리만 해주면 됩니다.

[Hard]
00:14:553 (2,3) - 개인적인 생각인데, 그냥 ●▷●▷●▷● 형식으로 한 다음에 Ctrl + G 해주세요.
00:44:775 (4) - 이 서클을 슬라이더 밖으로 빼는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.
Reillia

S A V E R Y wrote:

모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다.

[Easy]
00:54:553 (1,2,3) - 1/1 스냅으로 기준해서 다시 수정해주세요. 별문제 없다고 봅니당
01:09:220 (1,2,3,4) - 위와 같아요 이것도 물론 문제는없다고 봅니당

Thanks for modding~
Reillia

Neoskylove wrote:

애플님이 언제 오려나요

아 부른게 애플이었음? 애플이면 한달정도 기다리면 올듯
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Neoskylove wrote:

애플님이 언제 오려나요

아 부른게 애플이었음? 애플이면 한달정도 기다리면 올듯
헐 바이바이 무조건 잡고 늘어져야겠다
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S A V E R Y wrote:

모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다.

[Normal]
간단해요. 제목 부분만 어떻게 처리만 해주면 됩니다.수정했습니다

[Hard]
00:14:553 (2,3) - 개인적인 생각인데, 그냥 ●▷●▷●▷● 형식으로 한 다음에 Ctrl + G 해주세요.??이해가 안되어서 수정 안함요
00:44:775 (4) - 이 서클을 슬라이더 밖으로 빼는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.저는 이게 좋아요
모딩 감사합니다

BeatofIke wrote:

Don't forget to fix tags/unicode artist in bbNormal. It's inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties o3o
I fixed. Thank you
Taeyang
쉘라 불러놨어요
빨라 다 고쳐놓으셈

waiting... Satellite,sheela901
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Taeyang wrote:

쉘라 불러놨어요
빨라 다 고쳐놓으셈
고칠건 다고쳤는디...
Satellite
Hello. request by Taeyang. (m4m)

[General]
  1. remove "toradora!" to tag. because please check source lol
  2. Title must be changed " silky heart "
    metadata source :
    http://www.starchild.co.jp/artist/horie/disco/
  3. bbNormal remove WidescreenStoryboard check.
[Curi's Easy]
  1. Awesome. Nothing to say.
[bbNormal]
  1. HP Drain changed 4 best diff spread
  2. 01:25:442 (4,5) - Only this. This spacing is really awkward imo. please changed this rhythm.
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:331 (2) - I recommend that I switch to other patterns. It is unfavorable in the Hard diff.
  2. 00:45:220 (6) - add New combo here. probably you are forgot here.
  3. 00:52:331 (6) - same as above.
  4. 00:55:442 (3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. I think changed "circle + circle" more better much rhythm.
  5. 01:08:775 (2) - w-why used distance *1.0 ? maybe *1.2 better.
[Insane]
  1. looks good!
[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 01:27:887 (1) - slider end not much clap hitsound. please changed other or remove.
Call me back ~
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Satellite wrote:

Hello. request by Taeyang. (m4m)

[General]
  1. remove "toradora!" to tag. because please check source lol
  2. Title must be changed " silky heart "
    metadata source :
    http://www.starchild.co.jp/artist/horie/disco/
  3. bbNormal remove WidescreenStoryboard check.
[Curi's Easy]
  1. Awesome. Nothing to say.
[bbNormal]
  1. HP Drain changed 4 best diff spread
  2. 01:25:442 (4,5) - Only this. This spacing is really awkward imo. please changed this rhythm.fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:331 (2) - I recommend that I switch to other patterns. It is unfavorable in the Hard diff.fixed
  2. 00:45:220 (6) - add New combo here. probably you are forgot here.fixed
  3. 00:52:331 (6) - same as above.^
  4. 00:55:442 (3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. I think changed "circle + circle" more better much rhythm.fixed
  5. 01:08:775 (2) - w-why used distance *1.0 ? maybe *1.2 better.fixed
[Insane]
  1. looks good!
[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 01:27:887 (1) - slider end not much clap hitsound. please changed other or remove.fixed
Call me back ~
all fixed. Thanks
Satellite
Rechecked and Looks fine to me. So Bubbled!

mod log
2015-12-22 15:08 Satellite: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/788245 Horie Yui - silky heart [Hard]]
2015-12-22 15:08 Satellite: 00:26:331 (2,3,4) -
2015-12-22 15:08 Neoskylove: Yes
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: i think
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: http://puu.sh/m4tlO/9173b11936.jpg
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: this rhythm more better.
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: placement suggestion
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: http://puu.sh/m4tou/a07c2d0e85.jpg
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: 00:26:331 (2) - stack 00:27:442 (1) - this =w=
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: what's do you think =w=
2015-12-22 15:12 Neoskylove: I fixed
2015-12-22 15:12 Satellite: that's all ! please update =w=
2015-12-22 15:13 Neoskylove: updated

Nice mapset. Good luck on Ranked!
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Satellite wrote:

Rechecked and Looks fine to me. So Bubbled!

mod log
2015-12-22 15:08 Satellite: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/788245 Horie Yui - silky heart [Hard]]
2015-12-22 15:08 Satellite: 00:26:331 (2,3,4) -
2015-12-22 15:08 Neoskylove: Yes
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: i think
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: http://puu.sh/m4tlO/9173b11936.jpg
2015-12-22 15:09 Satellite: this rhythm more better.
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: placement suggestion
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: http://puu.sh/m4tou/a07c2d0e85.jpg
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: 00:26:331 (2) - stack 00:27:442 (1) - this =w=
2015-12-22 15:10 Satellite: what's do you think =w=
2015-12-22 15:12 Neoskylove: I fixed
2015-12-22 15:12 Satellite: that's all ! please update =w=
2015-12-22 15:13 Neoskylove: updated

Nice mapset. Good luck on Ranked!
Thank you
Kawashiro
사실 태양님에게 조금 실망했습니다

아무튼 축하드려요! 랭 ㄱㄱㄱ ^~^/
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UnLock- wrote:

사실 태양님에게 조금 실망했습니다조용히 해요....

아무튼 축하드려요! 랭 ㄱㄱㄱ ^~^/
감사합니다
Taeyang

UnLock- wrote:

사실 태양님에게 조금 실망했습니다

아무튼 축하드려요! 랭 ㄱㄱㄱ ^~^/
사실 지내온 시간으론 언락님이 더많은데 많이 못도와드려서 ㅈㅅ ㅠ...
그리고 네오님한테선 앞으로 준만큼 뜯어낼껍니다 ㅋㅅㅋ
(사심으로 제 인센난이도를 빨리 랭크시키고 싶었던 마음도 있어서 이번만 특별히 좀 많이 도와드린것뿐ㅋ)
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Taeyang wrote:

UnLock- wrote:

사실 태양님에게 조금 실망했습니다

아무튼 축하드려요! 랭 ㄱㄱㄱ ^~^/
사실 지내온 시간으론 언락님이 더많은데 많이 못도와드려서 ㅈㅅ ㅠ...
그리고 네오님한테선 앞으로 준만큼 뜯어낼껍니다 ㅋㅅㅋ
잔인하시다...ㄷㄷ
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Taeyang wrote:

그리고 네오님한테선 앞으로 준만큼 뜯어낼껍니다 ㅋㅅㅋ
저한테서 뭘 뜯어가실려고......ㄷㄷ
Reillia

Neoskylove wrote:

Taeyang wrote:

그리고 네오님한테선 앞으로 준만큼 뜯어낼껍니다 ㅋㅅㅋ
저한테서 뭘 뜯어가실려고......ㄷㄷ
그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
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그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
랭되면 오스 접는 각(?)
Sangzin

Neoskylove wrote:

[C u r i] wrote:

그렇게 태양님의 노예가되는 네오님..
랭되면 오스 접는 각(?)
You shall not quit!!!
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Sangzin wrote:

You shall not quit!!!
영어 못해요
Sangzin

Neoskylove wrote:

Sangzin wrote:

You shall not quit!!!
영어 못해요
님은 접지 못함!!
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Sangzin wrote:

님은 접지 못함!!
히잌
sheela
Hello! Taeyang requested me this map for M4M! How sweet of him~

[General]
  1. The background is not in a good shape. Go for this instead: http://puu.sh/m3Iqm/ec917d1ece.jpg
  2. The video quality is average, but it could be better. Replace this instead: http://puu.sh/m4RyK/b319c24cde.avi

[bbNormal]
  1. 00:52:998 (2) - The shape feels so random lol, but like, it doesn't fit with the music honestly, like it's not the right place to make the slider complex. You can do a simple curve, it'd be nice in my opinion.
  2. 00:55:664 (1) - I'm not sure if this form is readable for the beginner players. The reason is the loop that overlaps on the slider's body. I would suggest you to make something else.
  3. 00:57:664 (1) - Because of the gap that is different from the others, and the stack with its previous object, it is hard to know when you have to press (1). I highly suggest you move it somewhere else.
  4. 01:26:331 (1) - Is ending the spinner on a 1/1 tick before the downbeat intended? Other difficulties end their maps 01:29:664 because the music ends there. It's really weird how it sounds.

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:109 - How about adding a note here? The beat is obvious here, and it would support the end of the measure.
  2. 00:44:775 (4) - Stacking it with the previous slider doesn't fit very well with the beats. Because the beat here is strong, it's better to let it open. In other words, you shouldn't stack it with its previous object. My suggestion is to switch positions of 00:44:775 (4,5) - (Ctrl + G). Everything is neat, so there shouldn't be any readability issues.
  3. 00:53:442 - Weird pause here... It doesn't sound very nice. I think you should add a hitcircle to support the tick.
  4. 01:02:331 (4,5) - Rhythmically, the upbeat 01:02:553 should have a clickable object, as the beat is loud. So, you would want to switch those two objects to fix it (Ctrl + G).
    There are many more in the kiai part;
    1. 01:05:887 (3,4) -
    2. 01:12:998 (4,5) -
    3. 01:20:109 (4,5) -
  5. 01:25:220 (3,4) - The rhythm here can be more complex, as the song reaches to the end. It will make a better emphasis. So I suggest you make two 1/4 repeat sliders, like in the following:
Everything is very neat!

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:109 - In like in Hard, it would be a good start to have a 1/4 rhythm here before the streams. Also, the beat is obvious, so you shouldn't skip it.
  2. 00:19:887 (4) - Move it a little down to avoid being too close to 00:18:775 (2) . Although it doesn't overlap, it's not pretty to see this.
  3. 00:48:331 (4,1) - Honestly the flow is not good here. Due to the slider going down, while (4) was also somewhere down, it makes the movement kind of uncomfortable. Try this instead?
  4. 00:51:664 (4,5) - What's with the inconsistent distance here? It doesn't emphasize anything in my opinion.
  5. 01:09:442 (7) - Remove the clap? It doesn't currently go with the rhythm and music.
  6. 01:18:775 (6) - I think you should move the tail to the left, like x:170 y:248. This is because 01:17:886 (3) was overlapping the body of 01:18:775 (6) -, making it a little unreadable. It's better to avoid these kind of issues.
  7. 01:25:220 - Like in Hard, but this time, how about a stream to end the map? If you don't want to apply this, then 01:25:220 (3) would need a new combo. It will fit with the star pattern.

[Taeyang's Insane]
  1. 00:27:442 (1,2) - I don't think this kind of spacing fits with the music, and it kind of plays weird. There are more:
    1. 00:45:664 (2,3) -
    2. 00:50:109 (6,7) -
    3. 00:56:998 (2,3) - Also, the stack doesn't go with the music. Since 00:57:664 (1) has a bigger beat, it would be logical to let it open, like jumps when there's a strong beat.
  2. 00:56:998 (2) - I doubt that everyone will get this. Don't you think the jump is too much? I don't see how it would fit with the music and it is kind of forceful to play. You should tone it down.
All right, call me back!
Taeyang

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