1. Oni (4.82 stars, 2297 notes)

L1m3s wrote:

Hi, from my mod queue.

d = don, red note
k = kat, blue note
D = don finisher, big red note
K = kat finisher, big blue note

mod

General
I'm unsure about this one in terms of ranking criteria ._. but maybe its worth checking out?


Oni
I think that HP7 is a bit high when the most difficult streams are literally 30 sec away from the end.
I liked the way the kiai times were mapped ^_^ but they might have been a bit excessive (as in the amount of kiai time used). Again I'm not too sure about this one so it's best to get it checked by someone more experienced. Changed into 6.5, I only reduced to that because this map meant to be challenging
00:12:906 (59,60) - Ctrl + G? I think the beat is stronger on 60 and you mapped k to most of the stronger beats. You mapped it the other way at 00:40:147 (226,227) Changed
00:23:595 (121,122) - Same as above. Not gonna change it
00:24:457 (127) - Change to d? Changed
00:35:321 (196,197,198) - Consider dkk, it sounds weird as dkd as the k on its own sounds a little mistimed. Changed
01:36:009 (605) - Change to d? Not much emphasis here. I think I'm not gonna change it because it fits better imo
02:08:596 (836,837) - Ctrl + G? As per the above reasons. Not gonna change it
02:47:389 (1120,1121,1122,1123,1124) - Maybe try a kkdkd or kkdkk? I think those fit a bit better with the d on the third beat. Changed into kkdkk
03:26:871 - If you end up needing to get rid of kiai time imo this would be the first to go. I need second opinion about this.
03:54:458 (1405) - Doesn't sound like much of a drumroll, maybe use a spinner. Not too sure about this one. I think it's better to put drumroll imo.
05:19:975 (1913,1914,1915,1916,1917) - This sounds better as ddddk as the note stays the same but only the last beat is emphasised. Not gonna change it.
05:45:837 - Either the streams from here on are a bit brutal for HP7 or I suck lol. I need second opinion about this, I think it's meant for a challenge.]
06:09:630 - Maybe end the spinner here? Maybe not. lol

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Carnivore, from my queue

Oni

1. 00:05:320 (16) - Delete nah
2. 00:16:354 (80) - ^ same as above
3. 00:09:802 (41) - k I think d fits better here
4. 00:28:079 (142) - ^ same as above
5. 00:31:009 (168,172) - ^ (168) changed (172) keep
6. 00:33:940 (186) - ^ as it is
7. 00:41:009 (232) - ^ changed
8. 00:44:802 (257) - ^ changed
9. 01:43:596 (659) - ^ changed
10. 01:49:802 (705) - ^ as it is
11. 02:03:078 (795) - ^ changed
12. 02:31:871 (992) - ^ seems d is better imo
13. 02:34:113 (1009) - ^ same as above
14. 02:49:113 (1134) - ^ as it is
15. 04:10:923 (1492) - ^ d fits better imo
16. 04:41:182 (1709) - ^ as it is
17. 00:12:561 (57,58) - d (and 00:12:906 (59) - k) changed
18. 00:57:044 (344) - ^ keep
19. 01:29:458 (559,560) - ^ nah
20. 01:35:320 (601,602) - ^ nah
21. 01:46:699 (683) - ^ I think k follows the beat better
22. 02:08:423 (835) - ^ nah
23. 04:15:665 (1526) - ^ I think k follows the beat better
24. 00:13:768 (65) - Finisher (and 00:13:940 (66) - k) changed only the first one.
25. 00:29:975 (159,160) - Swap (and 00:30:320 (163,164) also) I think it's better to keep, it fits better imo
26. 01:00:665 (370,372) - ^ nah
27. 01:04:285 (396,397) - ^ nah
28. 01:11:700 (446,448) - ^ nah
29. 01:19:631 (496,497) - ^ (and 01:19:889 (499,500) also) same as the previous, it maybe ruin the pattern on the rest.
30. 04:05:234 (1458,1459) - ^ I tested it about few times and I think it's better to keep it.
31. 04:33:940 (1655,1658) - ^nah

xtrem3x wrote:

Request via Simple Taiko Modding Queue

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General:

ALL Suggestions are based in notorious sounds (other reason is with comments)

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

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Oni:

Can change diff name for "The Oni" XD Maybe I'll think something else better.
Hitsound volume in 80% Okay
HP/OD = 5.5 I will not change the OD,although there's a possibility that HP drain will go lower but not right now.

00:52:302 - Delete nah
00:52:389 - Change to D (if delete this ^ ) nah

01:03:337 - Delete nah
01:03:423 - Change to D (same as 00:52:389- ) nah

01:14:371 - Delete I think this suggestion fits better, fixed.
01:14:458 - Change to K (same as 00:52:389- ) changed

01:41:958 - Delete nah
01:42:044 - Change to D (same) nah

01:52:992 - Delete nah
01:53:078 - Change to K (same) nah

02:03:337 - Delete I did not saw that earlier, fixed.

02:04:027 - Delete nah
02:04:113 - Change to D (same) nah

02:15:061 - Delete Okay
02:15:047 - Change to K (same) Chnaged

02:26:096 - Delete nah
02:26:182 - Change to K (same) nah

02:42:906 - Change to k changed

03:51:871 - d (have sound) added

04:10:923 - Delete Okay
04:11:009 - Change to D (same as 00:52:389- and emphasis for starts kiai) Okay

04:21:958 - Delete nah
04:22:044 - Change to D (bla bla bla) nah

04:32:992 - Delete nah
04:33:078 - Change to D (same) nah

04:44:027 - Delete nah
04:44:113 - Change to D (same) nah


Note: Basically is pure delete and finish, is repetitive but is good .-.

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1. 00:23:595 (121,122) - ctrl+g? and 00:23:940 (123) - change to d?
2. 00:27:734 (140) - change to k? Does a high-pitched guitar sound to here
3. 01:17:389 (476) - same as above.
4. 00:28:596 (145) - change to k?
5. 01:34:974 (598) - change to d? k is long.
6. 03:31:354 (1277) - change to d?

SKSalt wrote:

Hi, mod request from my queue.

[Oni]

1. 00:23:595 (121,122) - ctrl+g? and 00:23:940 (123) - change to d? Only applied the second one.
2. 00:27:734 (140) - change to k? Does a high-pitched guitar sound to here Keep, I think it's not there.
3. 01:17:389 (476) - same as above.^
4. 00:28:596 (145) - change to k? nah
5. 01:34:974 (598) - change to d? k is long. changed
6. 03:31:354 (1277) - change to d?changed

for example, 00:31:354 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187) - is kdddkdddkdddkddd............ When I turn on a break and increase the kinds of the pattern, how about? I'll try to find one but it's seems to keep them better.

that's all. good luck.

LCM01 wrote:

Yo M4M request in game chat + queue
Overall OK

Oni

HP=4? 6 is a bit harsh for long song like this There's a map that is harsher than this (longer and little bit higher HP) so I don't think I'll change that. (Reffering to this map >>> https://osu.ppy.sh/b/392976 )
02:51:354 d Changed
02:52:389 (1156,1158) k I made a variance there.
05:00:147 k Changed
05:10:837 add a note here? Added
05:15:923 - 05:17:216 I would rather change the speed on each notes Okay

The song is too loud and i can't hear the song clearly
But I hope my mod can help u a bit

1. Offset is incorrect imo. it would be better changing to 2740 (+6).

1. too long 1/2 patterns. try to add more stream and make little break.
2. 00:25:320 (131) - k? the sound feels like 00:25:665.
3. 01:34:027 (592,593) - Change to k. it is higher pitch than around.
4. 01:43:165 (654,655) - it is a bit awkward feeling. how about swapping these?
5. 02:26:699 (955) - Same as 00:25:320.
6. 02:59:113 (1185) - Remove this for consistency.
7. 03:05:751 (1207,1208) - i think this finisher is not necessary.
8. 03:07:906 (1212) - Same as above. there is nothing to emphasize.
9. 03:16:785 (1229) - This is 1/2 rhythm. move to 03:16:756.
10. 03:54:458 (1403) - Slider is too long. how about mapping using notes on this part? it can be mapped imo.

Underflow wrote:

Hi, carnivore101.

[General]

1. Offset is incorrect imo. it would be better changing to 2740 (+6). fixed

[Oni]

1. too long 1/2 patterns. try to add more stream and make little break. I think it doesn't much need a break and I think the 1/2 patterns were fine.
2. 00:25:320 (131) - k? the sound feels like 00:25:665. for variance
3. 01:34:027 (592,593) - Change to k. it is higher pitch than around. keep, it fits better imo
4. 01:43:165 (654,655) - it is a bit awkward feeling. how about swapping these? Changed
5. 02:26:699 (955) - Same as 00:25:320. keep for variance
6. 02:59:113 (1185) - Remove this for consistency. It has sound.
7. 03:05:751 (1207,1208) - i think this finisher is not necessary. I think there is
8. 03:07:906 (1212) - Same as above. there is nothing to emphasize. same as above
9. 03:16:785 (1229) - This is 1/2 rhythm. move to 03:16:756. Changed
10. 03:54:458 (1403) - Slider is too long. how about mapping using notes on this part? it can be mapped imo. it emphasized the long sound there (I don't think I'll change this.)

Flying Pan wrote:

hello, from my queue.

[Oni]
i think this map needs more work. some pattern doesn't accompany the music well. hitsound arrangement can be better. the long 1/2 chains is somehow boring, can add intentional breaks and some 1/4. some part is overmapped (ex: 03:57:567 - ). and the slow down part... Some minor changes about the 1/2 chain. About overmapping, I think it's fine imo. (Let's see if others will say that too.)

04:55:153 - this SV is unrankable. the notes is overlapping and can make player confused. check ranking criteria again. you have to divide the SV to notes so it's gradually slow down Fixed, I think it's okay now

05:06:188 (1839) - finisher in the end of 1/4.. and the SV... please no. delete 05:06:102 - Okay

another thing:
00:27:567 ~ 01:14:464 - basically no breaks for 1 minutes. please add some 1/1 breaks. I'll try to find one but I can't find a good spot for that right now.
01:17:222 ~ 02:26:188 - and another 1 minutes-no-breaks... ^
05:14:464 ~ 06:01:360 - this part too.. ^

sorry i didn't help much. gl

ptar124 wrote:

Hello, From - N a n a k a -'s Thai Modding Queue

Oni
00:02:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - consider adding something between d-d-k-d-d-d-k-d-d-d-k..., it is too repetitive, change some notes to create some 1/4 patterns Well, I don't think I'll add 1/4's nor changing patterns here.
00:12:222 (55) - change to don doesn't fit imo
00:22:222 (113) - change to kat changed
00:22:911 (117) - change to kat changed
00:28:084 (142) - change to kat It doesnt fit imo
00:28:257 (143) - change to don ^
00:28:429 (144) - change to kat ^
00:39:808 (224,225) - change either one to don changed
00:49:808 (292) - change to kat changed
01:08:688 (427,428) - change either one to kat or change both to kat changed one of them
01:17:740 (478) - change to kat nah
01:17:913 (479) - change to don ^
01:18:258 (481) - change to kat ^
01:29:808 (560) - change to don changed
01:34:119 (593) - change to kat changed
01:35:498 (601) - change to don nah
01:39:463 (625) - change to kat changed
01:41:015 (635) - change to kat
01:42:395 (648) - change to kat changed
01:58:946 (770,771) - change either one to kat changed
02:15:498 (881) - change to kat changed
02:29:464 (966) - change to kat nah [/color]
02:29:636 (967) - change to don ^
02:29:981 (969) - change to kat ^
02:32:740 (995) - ^ changed
02:34:119 (1006) - ^ changed
02:35:498 (1017) - ^ changed
02:39:981 (1055,1056,1057,1058,1059) - consider revising, it does not fit with the song okay
02:43:774 (1088) - change to kat changed
02:45:154 (1099) - change to kat changed
02:46:533 (1110) - change to kat changed
03:36:533 (1307,1308,1309,1310,1311,1312,1313,1314,1315,1316,1317) - too repetitive, consider revising okay
03:42:394 (1341) - change to don changed
03:47:826 (1374,1375) - Ctrl + G keep, I think it fits better imo
03:57:567 (1404,1405,1406,1407,1408,1409,1410,1411,1412,1413,1414,1415,1416,1417,1418,1419,1420,1421,1422,1423,1424,1425,1426,1427,1428,1429,1430,1431,1432) - (HIGH PRIORITY, DO NOT IGNORE) does not match song at all remapped
04:00:671 (1434) - delete okay
04:06:015 (1462) - change to don changed
04:06:360 (1463,1464) - Ctrl + G okay
04:07:050 (1466,1467) - change to kat changed
04:09:636 (1475,1476,1477,1478,1479,1480,1481,1482,1483,1484,1485,1486,1487,1488,1489) - (LOW PRIORITY, MERE RECCOMENDATION) add a little bit of 1/6 for some melody emphasis and diff boost? okay
04:22:395 (1570) - change to kat chnaged
04:33:429 (1648) - ^ chnaged
04:34:119 (1653) - ^ chnaged
04:34:808 (1659) - ^ chnaged
04:44:464 (1729) - ^ chnaged
05:01:705 (1821) - ^ chnaged
05:03:946 (1829) - ^ chnaged
05:18:257 (1897,1908,1919) - ^
05:26:533 (1970,1971,1972,1973,1974,1975,1976,1977,1978,1979,1980,1981,1982,1983,1984,1985,1986,1987,1988,1989,1990) - a little bit of spikes here and there, consider revising okay
05:29:291 (1998) - change to kat chnaged
05:59:119 (2253) - change to don chnaged
06:06:791 (2299) - change to kat chnaged

Dear carnivore101,

This beatmap have countless of elements to work on. Usually, I am very flexible with the snare sounds being mapped as dons but as for this beatmap, the snare is too strong to be ignored and thus, have to be mapped as kats. Most of your streams don't match the song very well. I would consider revising ALL OF THEM including the ones that I have not mentioned. Lastly, I have a suggestion that would be useful for the rest of you mapping career. You can't just emphasize the vocal and ignore all other elements that have effect on hitsounds. In fact, many would even choose to emphasize other elements before vocals.

Wrapping things up, this map still needs a lot of work before it could become ranked.

Don't give up fast ,
ptar124

Nyan wrote:

[General]

Correct all green timing points. They need to delay +6ms. Fixed

[Oni]

00:08:429 - can add a kat with guitar sounds.Let that thing empty.
00:35:843 (200) - add Finish Added
00:46:877 (274) - add Finish Added
01:25:498 (535) - add Finish Added

02:27:567 (958,959,960) - can be K d d k nope

02:52:395 (1156,1157,1158,1159,1160,1161,1162,1163) - you can put a slider or spinner here. Better keep it.

02:56:533 (1174) - remove Finish Removed
02:59:291 (1186) - remove Finish Removed
03:02:050 (1196) - remove Finish Removed

03:32:394 (1283) - add Finish Added
03:43:429 (1347) - add Finish Added

05:06:877 (1829,1830) - can be d d d
05:07:912 (1832,1833,1834) - can be k k d d k
05:09:291 (1836,1837) - can be k k d
05:12:395 (1848,1849) - can be d d d
05:13:429 (1851,1852,1853) - can be k k d d k I ignore at these part since the recent one is better.

I actually liked the Kiai part. 1/2 k d d k d d rhythm was awesome. Thanks!

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Oni]

04:59:808 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
05:05:326 - Change to k to follow the consistency with 04:59:636 (1801,1802) -
05:05:671 - Change to k to follow the rhythm and the consistency with 05:00:153 (1803,1804) -
06:09:636 - End the slider because the song end here.

Very Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

1. BG Size not Support, try to resize or find other BG with fit resolution

1. 00:02:740 - this cymbal can be finisher ( Stronk Pitch )
2. 00:12:739 (54) - change to kat, still on high guitar pitch and this high drum *00:13:084 - Consistent with this
3. 00:22:911 (110,112) - change to don, you can feel guitar pitch get emphasized
4. 00:23:774 - high drum need to be emphasized with kat
5. 00:25:326 - missing hitsounding? change to kat for consistent rhytm
6. 00:26:188 (127) - not change to don finisher? for getting nice Contrast? *cymbal not have kick sound, but if u follow flow. is up to u
7. 00:27:567 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - want change to kkdkddk 1/2? *Contrast/emphasize hitsound is fit imo
8. 00:45:067 - over putting? i not hear pitch in here.. delete?
9. 00:51:188 (293,294) - ctrl g? for adjusting rhytm
10. 00:52:740 - ^ sama above, give kat
11. 00:53:171 - want put don? flow is fit with this
12. okay, i see this patterns not have rest until end of 1st kiai. i give some example to deleting for rest: 00:32:222 - 00:33:602 - 00:36:015 - 00:37:740 - 00:39:119 - and etc (but remember to make consistent patterns when deleting some 1/2 patterns)
13. 01:00:584 - not put don? this fit to be 3plet
14. 01:01:619 - ^ same above
15. 01:03:774 - 01:12:050 - 01:14:981 - 01:18:257 - kat, follow rhytm (do Selfmod for put kat on high drum) and 01:15:843 - same above with before about don finisher
16. 01:26:446 - want put this don to be 3plet?
17. 02:09:205 - same above about over putting
18. 02:52:740 - some pitch from here.. can be 1/4 patterns
19. 3rd kiai not have 1/4 patterns? i give some suggestion for placing note: 03:27:308 - 03:27:826 - 03:28:343 - 03:28:860 - 03:28:860 - 03:29:205 - 03:29:377 - and etc, make this by yourself in other way
20. 04:54:119 - empty, okay from here make kdk 1/2 for rhytm
21. 06:06:877 - move spinner to 06:07:050 - here, and 06:06:877 - give this don, ez to play with distance 1/2 spinner

Surono wrote:

Dem, Hai

>General

1. BG Size not Support, try to resize or find other BG with fit resolution Can someone provide this please?

>Oni

1. 00:02:740 - this cymbal can be finisher ( Stronk Pitch ) Changed
2. 00:12:739 (54) - change to kat, still on high guitar pitch and this high drum *00:13:084 - Consistent with this Changed
3. 00:22:911 (110,112) - change to don, you can feel guitar pitch get emphasized Only applied the first one
4. 00:23:774 - high drum need to be emphasized with kat Okay
5. 00:25:326 - missing hitsounding? change to kat for consistent rhytm That's intended
6. 00:26:188 (127) - not change to don finisher? for getting nice Contrast? *cymbal not have kick sound, but if u follow flow. is up to u Not gonna change that
7. 00:27:567 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - want change to kkdkddk 1/2? *Contrast/emphasize hitsound is fit imo Okay (applied on the second part too)
8. 00:45:067 - over putting? i not hear pitch in here.. delete? Okay
9. 00:51:188 (293,294) - ctrl g? for adjusting rhytm Nah
10. 00:52:740 - ^ sama above, give kat Nah
11. 00:53:171 - want put don? flow is fit with this Okay
12. okay, i see this patterns not have rest until end of 1st kiai. i give some example to deleting for rest: 00:32:222 - 00:33:602 - 00:36:015 - 00:37:740 - 00:39:119 - and etc (but remember to make consistent patterns when deleting some 1/2 patterns) Hmmm, I'll think about it.
13. 01:00:584 - not put don? this fit to be 3plet Okay
14. 01:01:619 - ^ same above No need for that
15. 01:03:774 - 01:12:050 - 01:14:981 - 01:18:257 - kat, follow rhytm (do Selfmod for put kat on high drum) and 01:15:843 - same above with before about don finisher Applied all except the third
16. 01:26:446 - want put this don to be 3plet? Okay
17. 02:09:205 - same above about over putting Okay
18. 02:52:740 - some pitch from here.. can be 1/4 patterns It's intended
19. 3rd kiai not have 1/4 patterns? i give some suggestion for placing note: 03:27:308 - 03:27:826 - 03:28:343 - 03:28:860 - 03:28:860 - 03:29:205 - 03:29:377 - and etc, make this by yourself in other way Okay (buffed density lol)
20. 04:54:119 - empty, okay from here make kdk 1/2 for rhytm Okay
21. 06:06:877 - move spinner to 06:07:050 - here, and 06:06:877 - give this don, ez to play with distance 1/2 spinner Okay

you can selfmod or call more modder ( Priority caring to looks deleting for rest of 1/2, still have some improve 1/4, and try delete to fix over putting note like 02:09:205 - this, but you need looks on your 1/4 patterns stream too. I see many some harsh hitsounding to play.)

GLuck

Surono wrote:

thx for say engrizh me how i (Rip Engrish Intentelez) lol

dont give me kudosu

this Song from Dota2? you can remove Dota2 on tags and put to Source. No, that song is used by DotaFX (youtube channel) which is why it is in the tags.

00:30:498 - untill 00:51:360 - here, 1/2 patterns must have rest.. *and others unkiai or over 1/2* (yeah, is fun to play singletap/alternate on 1/2 patterns, but /me tired, but is fun, but is rip engrish) I'll find some better parts to break.
00:52:740 - u forgot this to kat ( 02:04:464 - this too, and next if see like this again ) Oh I forgot to put that (or did I just not saved it lol)
00:54:808 - change kat, and make kdkkd (you can think this.. because is fit with vocal flow > 00:55:067 - <) Okay
Improve suggestion: 00:56:791 - add don, and 00:57:481 - you can move this to 00:57:136 - here, why? because you can see what i mean ( emphasize really good ) Okay
Some suggestion for 3plet or stream: 01:35:240 - 01:37:481 - 01:35:757 - 01:50:240 - 02:01:274 - 04:19:205 - put all to don for this Okay
02:05:843 (810,812) - ctrl g Okay
02:28:946 - forget kkdkddk 1/2? Oh yeah, dang it lol
02:52:222 - here is drum stop, so 02:52:395 (1149,1150) - delete this, and 02:52:740 - untill 02:53:602 - here flow is fit with slider *I see other modders point this too* Alright...
03:15:714 (1221) - really akward lol, move to 03:15:757 - here please XD (Vocal really in thats blue tick lol) I tested this many times and oh this is wrong offset back them (which is why it's not on the blue tick lol), okay
03:32:394 (1287) - 03:43:429 (1368) - remove finisher I saw what I did there, I rushed to submit it lol

GLuck again, I just help with u where forgot to fix. and give rest on unkiai parts
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/373017 and you can mod my map? rare to find taiko modders, thx XD

guro wrote:

Aloha, from my modding queue

[Oni]

1. 00:11:188 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - feels a bit too dense, maybe delete 00:13:946 (62) - ? Kinda awkward to play if that note is missing
2. 00:28:946 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156) - seems to be too much, consider breaking it down into multiple patterns It fits the music though.
3. 00:44:291 (244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459) - super long and dense part that does not have to be as straining as it is. Removing some of the 1/2s before the Kiai will definitely make this part more enjoyable. Kiai seems reasonable though. Possible improvements during Kiai below Added breaks although it might still long for others.
4. 00:51:533 (292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302) - maybe remove 00:51:964 (296), as it is not very necessary I'll just keep that.
5. 01:13:860 (453) - removing this one fits the section of that song better in my opinion. The note does not add much to the pattern Keep.
6. 01:28:429 (539,540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569,570,571,572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600,601,602,603,604,605,606,607,608,609,610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635) - another long portion that deserves a few breaks Added few breaks (includes kiai time)
7. 01:31:188 (557) - you can remove this note for example and change 01:31:015 (556) to d to have a short break that doesn't kill the flow entirely I found one better than that.
8. 01:41:877 (632) - change to d Keep for consistency.
9. 02:30:326 (962,963,964,965,966,967,968,969,970,971,972,973,974,975,976,977,978,979,980) - is way too much. Turn 02:30:498 (963) into k and remove 02:30:757 (966,970) maybe? It matches the song.
10. 03:47:567 (1389,1390,1391,1392,1393,1394,1395,1396,1397,1398,1399,1400,1401,1402,1403,1404,1405) - also unnecessarily dense. based on my experiment (using the playback rate) it can be separated so deleted some notes.
11. ( 03:54:464 (1420) - that slider looks pretty funky in the editor ) lol
12. 03:59:033 (1426,1428) - consider removing those. They have no business to be there in my opinion and make that pattern longer than it needs to be It's better to keep these imo.
13. 04:04:464 (1453,1454,1455,1456,1457,1458,1459,1460,1461,1462,1463,1464) - feels pretty odd, but I am not sure if it needs change. Might be my personal perception No need to change that.
14. 04:09:636 (1479,1480,1481,1482,1483,1484,1485,1486,1487,1488,1489,1490,1491,1492,1493,1494,1495) - I really feel uncomfortable with those 1/6s. I understand why you placed them there, but do they really have to be there? It sounds a bit overambitous Think of it as adrenaline rush.
15. 04:11:015 (1496) - Kiai time maybe needs a few breaks, changes to the second Kiai time apply Nah,btw I don't add breaks at this part.
16. 04:55:153 (1807) - why is this the only slow part of the song with SV changes? I would remove that Keep them
17. 05:21:964 (1938,1944) - maybe remove those so it does not look as cramped
18. 05:26:533 (1979,1980,1981,1982,1983,1984,1985,1986,1987,1988,1989,1990,1991,1992,1993,1994,1995,1996,1997,1998,1999,2000,2001) - deserves some removals aswell, in my opinion
19. 05:38:602 (2074,2075,2076,2077,2078,2079,2080,2081,2082,2083,2084,2085,2086,2087,2088,2089,2090) - as does this one
20. 05:45:843 (2137,2138,2139,2140,2141,2142,2143,2144,2145,2146,2147,2148,2149,2150,2151,2152,2153,2154,2155,2156,2157,2158,2159) - and this
21. 05:48:602 (2165,2166,2167,2168,2169,2170,2171,2172,2173,2174,2175,2176,2177,2178,2179,2180,2181,2182,2183,2184,2185,2186,2187) - and this
22. 05:56:877 (2239,2240,2241,2242,2243,2244,2245,2246,2247,2248,2249,2250,2251,2252,2253,2254,2255,2256,2257,2258,2259) - and actually this one aswell
23. 06:05:498 (2293,2294,2295,2296,2297,2298,2299,2300,2301,2302,2303,2304,2305,2306,2307,2308,2309) - especially the beginnings of the mentioned patterns have more notes than they should have and splits would really make these parts feel better. As the patterns are similar, you can take a look at my previous suggested changes for those (Note: I considered those streams a final challenges.)
24. 06:07:050 (1) - maybe make that spinner end at 6:10:326 It fits better.
    

The map in general is pretty well done, but there are quite a few breaks missing and mentioned patterns are seriously too long, in my opinion. Otherwise, I hope I have been helpful and good luck!

chaica wrote:

Hi,from my queue.

[Oni]
00:41:274 - delete,and 00:41:360 change K? - same as 00:46:877. Okay
00:52:308 - delete,and 00:52:395 change D? - 00:52:395 is high sound. Okay
00:57:136 - delete? Better to keep there
00:57:826 - delete,and 00:57:912 change D? - ^^ Okay
01:30:929 - delete,and 01:31:015 change K? - high sound. Okay
01:42:050 - same as 00:52:308 Okay
01:47:481 - delete,and 01:47:567 change K? D instead
02:37:136 - delete,and 02:37:222 change K? Nope.
03:46:533 - change D? - high sound. You have a point there but it's my choice to keep as that though.
03:46:877 - ^ same as above
03:47:222 - ^ sane as above
03:47:395 - change K? Nah
03:53:084 - change d? Another point there but my choice is to keep.
Slider finish is 03:56:877? I think it's better to keep that also.
04:16:533 - D? and delete 04:16:446 Okay

good luck~~

[R] wrote:

from my queue

[Oni]
00:09:464 - d i will be sync with 00:08:084 (29,30,31) - well it's already d (?)
00:10:153 - ^ This one too.
00:11:705 - k suddenly you follow the guitar ,it's weird with this d It's fine
00:12:308 - k make not boring Okay

00:20:498 - repeat 00:09:464 - the same reason

00:27:567 - add finisherKeep as it is
00:31:188- d bit akward after stream Okay


03:29:981 (1249,1250,1251) - kkk emphasize for 03:31:015 (1257,1258,1259) - Okay
03:30:498 (1253,1254,1255) - ^ Okay,Note that this also appies 03:41:188 and 03:41:705

sry not much