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WTF PEPPY WHERE ARE YOU!?
this map... the best i played, only thing i'll say
this map... the best i played, only thing i'll say
Amazing mapper hope when this project is fully completed these maps are as big as Highscore ^^.. I do think that the size of the circles on Snowstorm does take away a little bit of the fun of the map. i understand that it is used to make it more difficult but i suggest making them 0.2 or so larger ^^
My first and probably my only post purely to motivate you for this map
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My first and probably my only post purely to motivate you for this map
.this map need to be ranked
Frozen
00:01:542 - end spinner here and place a circle where the old spinner ended
00:13:826 (2) - i dont like this circle
00:15:514 (3) - here you do the same thing but it fits the song better here
00:25:983 (4) - move circle to the red tick, dont use 1/3 snap divisor
00:26:858 (1,2,2,3,4) - remove whistle here, sounds bad
00:49:358 (3) - stack this on the slider head
00:52:358 (4) - same
01:39:233 (3) - this slider doesnt fit the song at all
01:59:858 (9) - stack this on the same place as the following circles
02:00:232 (2) - circle is unsnapped
02:00:233 (2) - new combo should be here, not the circle before
02:08:295 (8) - stack
02:09:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - put the same distance between these, in the top left you can see how far away from the previous and next object they are.
02:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
02:27:233 (3) - new combo here, not the next slider
02:30:233 (8) - new combo
02:34:263 (9) - slider end is unsnapped
02:35:763 (5) - same
02:33:420 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt really fit the music with these short sliders
02:45:233 (9) - new combo should be here
02:47:295 (1) - no new combo here
02:48:420 (4) - new combo should be here
02:51:233 (9) - new combo should be here
02:53:858 (9) - new combo should be here
map the different choruses in the same style, in the first you used straight sliders and the second and third ones, curved
overall, i dont like this difficulty.
00:13:826 (2) - i dont like this circle
00:15:514 (3) - here you do the same thing but it fits the song better here
00:25:983 (4) - move circle to the red tick, dont use 1/3 snap divisor
00:26:858 (1,2,2,3,4) - remove whistle here, sounds bad
00:49:358 (3) - stack this on the slider head
00:52:358 (4) - same
01:39:233 (3) - this slider doesnt fit the song at all
01:59:858 (9) - stack this on the same place as the following circles
02:00:232 (2) - circle is unsnapped
02:00:233 (2) - new combo should be here, not the circle before
02:08:295 (8) - stack
02:09:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - put the same distance between these, in the top left you can see how far away from the previous and next object they are.
02:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
02:27:233 (3) - new combo here, not the next slider
02:30:233 (8) - new combo
02:34:263 (9) - slider end is unsnapped
02:35:763 (5) - same
02:33:420 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt really fit the music with these short sliders
02:45:233 (9) - new combo should be here
02:47:295 (1) - no new combo here
02:48:420 (4) - new combo should be here
02:51:233 (9) - new combo should be here
02:53:858 (9) - new combo should be here
map the different choruses in the same style, in the first you used straight sliders and the second and third ones, curved
overall, i dont like this difficulty.
Supreme's Snow
difficulty isnt even finished!
Freezing
00:33:233 (2) - end isnt snapped
01:38:576 (2) - object isnt snapped
01:38:951 (5) - same
01:39:328 (8) - same
02:38:578 (2) - same
02:40:547 (2) - youll never guess whats wrong here
02:52:826 (5) - same
02:58:167 (5) - same
02:59:291 (1) - same
02:59:483 (3) - same
03:04:078 (2) - same
01:38:576 (2) - object isnt snapped
01:38:951 (5) - same
01:39:328 (8) - same
02:38:578 (2) - same
02:40:547 (2) - youll never guess whats wrong here
02:52:826 (5) - same
02:58:167 (5) - same
02:59:291 (1) - same
02:59:483 (3) - same
03:04:078 (2) - same
Insane
00:12:420 (3,4,5,6) - this can flow better
00:12:420 (3,4,5,6) - give these the same distance between jumps
00:25:983 (6) - remove this circle
00:28:983 (4) - same
00:51:983 (5,6) - make this a slider with a reverse arrow to better fit the music
00:53:483 (1,2,3) - remove the whistle hitsound on these circles
i like the way you mapped the chorus of the song on this difficulty
02:12:420 (6) - this slider feels weird, can you make it a different shape that doesnt feel so long?
02:20:108 - add a circle here
02:49:733 (4,5) - change these circles to a slider to follow vocals better
apart from these i really like this difficulty!
00:12:420 (3,4,5,6) - give these the same distance between jumps
00:25:983 (6) - remove this circle
00:28:983 (4) - same
00:51:983 (5,6) - make this a slider with a reverse arrow to better fit the music
00:53:483 (1,2,3) - remove the whistle hitsound on these circles
i like the way you mapped the chorus of the song on this difficulty
02:12:420 (6) - this slider feels weird, can you make it a different shape that doesnt feel so long?
02:20:108 - add a circle here
02:49:733 (4,5) - change these circles to a slider to follow vocals better
apart from these i really like this difficulty!
All difficulties
otherwise, awesome mapset, hope you can get it to ranked one day!you need to snap timing points it annoys me and AiMod. slider velocity changes still apply if the green line is snapped to the same beat as the beginning of a slider
i dont know if this was just on insane difficulty, but dont use 1/3 and 1/6 snap divisor if the song doesnt use a 3/4 metronome
turn down the volume of hitsounds, more than 70% on a calmer part of the song is not very comfortable to play with, it doesnt sound that good, for example the green lines at 25:875, 25:975, 34:125, 36:750, also, dont just use normal sample, some places this sounds really bad, if you desperately want the same sample for the whole song, use soft, and not normal
you have new combos on every other big white tick, i prefer it on every. idk you dont have to do this it might take too long to change its just what i usually prefer to do.
you can use hitsounds on only the slider head or the slider tail, some places this would sound a lot better.
on the end of each difficulty, dont use whistle, it sounds awful
i dont know if this was just on insane difficulty, but dont use 1/3 and 1/6 snap divisor if the song doesnt use a 3/4 metronome
turn down the volume of hitsounds, more than 70% on a calmer part of the song is not very comfortable to play with, it doesnt sound that good, for example the green lines at 25:875, 25:975, 34:125, 36:750, also, dont just use normal sample, some places this sounds really bad, if you desperately want the same sample for the whole song, use soft, and not normal
you have new combos on every other big white tick, i prefer it on every. idk you dont have to do this it might take too long to change its just what i usually prefer to do.
you can use hitsounds on only the slider head or the slider tail, some places this would sound a lot better.
on the end of each difficulty, dont use whistle, it sounds awful
Taro-chan_old_1
I'M LOVE THIS MAP
ok, let's mod!
Diffs:
Here you are
Good luck with rank!
[i'm listen to your map very long]
ok, let's mod!
General
01:39:839 - Klai Short than 15 seconds
Change mp3 from 221 kb/s to 192 kb/s or VBR
Change mp3 from 221 kb/s to 192 kb/s or VBR
Diffs:
Normal
Fix klai because is without tempo!
Without tempo: 01:03:000, 01:39:562,
Kiai short than 15 seconds: 01:39:562,
End of klai: 01:25:687
01:51:187
03:04:875
Without tempo: 01:03:000, 01:39:562,
Kiai short than 15 seconds: 01:39:562,
End of klai: 01:25:687
01:51:187
03:04:875
Infamous Hype
Same with normal
Frozen
Same with normal
02:34:263 (9) - Object end is without tempo
02:35:763 (5) - ^
02:34:263 (9) - Object end is without tempo
02:35:763 (5) - ^
Insane
Kiai short than 15 seconds - 01:39:608
Supreme's Snow
Same with normal
w8, this map need finished, because isn't finished to end
Author this GD need finished GD
w8, this map need finished, because isn't finished to end
Author this GD need finished GD
Extra
Same with normal
Rikka's dunno
Klai short than 15 seconds - 01:40:059
Snowstorm
Klai short than 15 seconds - 01:40:059
Freezing
Klai short than 15 seconds - 01:40:059
Here you are
Good luck with rank!
[i'm listen to your map very long]
This map has to be ranked!
I loved those maps, I do not understand why they have not been ranked yet.
This map probably isn't getting ranked. The best diff is Supreme's Snow. After that, the rest aren't that well mapped imo
sorry to say it, but unless you remapped almost the entire mapset, it's probably not getting ranked.
This map will probably remain in the graveyard for a while. I'd say move on to a new mapset if you want a ranked map.
I'm surprised I'm the first mapper to say this.
This map will probably remain in the graveyard for a while. I'd say move on to a new mapset if you want a ranked map.
I'm surprised I'm the first mapper to say this.
map hard
there are some little issues, like in the frozen there is one note missing but that ain't a reason for it to not get ranked :'( it's beautiful! come on!
I would try just dropping a huuuge mod, but there would be so much I'd change.
tip to mapper
As a note, if you listen to a mod you should reply to it by quoting the whole mod, replying whether or not you fixed what the mod said. for example
##:##:# (1) - Make this slider 2 circles - Wow, that looks so much better, thank you!
##:##:# (1) - Make this slider 2 circles - Wow, that looks so much better, thank you!
I guess I could try dropping a mod that's not too big, so it could reach lovable standards, but it wouldn't be guaranteed.
(Wow i really bashed this map last month, it really is salvagable I believe lol)
(Wow i really bashed this map last month, it really is salvagable I believe lol)
Okay here it is, I guess lol.
Mods!
Whenever i put ^, that means "same as above" basically.
- - - NORMAL - - -
00:17:483 (2) - What's with this spacing? I know it's not an Easy, but Normal still needs pretty regular and consistent spacing.
00:20:858 (2) - No reason for this to be like this. It just wrong to not have it right here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873705
00:25:733 (4,5,1) - If you're gonna have this, at least make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873714
00:42:983 (2) - Here's how you make sliders like these good: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873759
00:54:608 - Could use a circle here, probably like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873729
00:59:858 (3) - Move this like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873767
01:01:358 (6) - How it should look: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873774
01:10:733 - Should be a circle here.
01:22:358 (6) - Fix spacing. Should look something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873745
01:35:483 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873749 that would look better.
02:53:108 (9) - New Combo
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - I'd delete these last 3 circles, the echo cannot really be heard anymore after circle 4.
Not as thorough as I'd like to make it, but I limited it on purpose.
- - - INFAMOUS HYPE - - -
00:09:045 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873786 Might look better.
00:03:233 (5) - New Combo here instead of 00:03:795
00:04:733 (4) - New Combo here instead of 00:05:295
00:06:608 (6) - New Combo
00:12:608 (8) - ^
00:15:233 (6) - ^
00:21:233 (7) - ^
00:23:108 (3) - New Combo here instead of 00:22:170
00:26:295 - I think 2 circles would fit here.
00:28:920 (5) - Maybe add a repeat to this slider?
00:32:295 - 2 Circles again.
00:33:795 - ^
00:36:983 (7) - New Combo
00:41:295 (6) - Do this with this circle: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873859
00:42:233 (9) - Extend slider to next white tick.
00:57:233 (7) - Take off the repeat on this slider.
01:06:795 (6) - New Combo
01:11:108 (7) - ^
01:20:108 (5) - ^
03:06:608 (8,9,10) - Same as Normal
I was way too thorough for the first minute, then I didn't mod anything for the next minute lol.
- - - FROZEN - - -
00:11:295 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874096 This would be better probably. That, or just stack it
00:12:045 (6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874103 Same here.
00:26:108 - There could be more circles here.
00:29:295 - Put 2 circles here.
00:30:420 - ^
00:32:108 - Add Circles.
00:33:420 - ^
00:39:233 (7) - New Combo
00:50:483 (7) - ^
00:53:483 (8) - ^
01:27:233 (5) - ^
01:28:545 - Add a circle.
01:30:983 (6) - New Combo
01:36:233 (4) - ^
01:37:358 (7) - ^
01:39:233 - You NEED a circle here. New Combo it as well.
01:59:483 (7) - New Combo probably.
01:59:858 (3) - Move here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874155
01:59:858 (3,4) - Then, Switch these 2 notes (highlight and press Ctrl+G)
02:00:232 (2) - New Combo here instead of 02:00:045
02:03:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stream is overmapping, remove circles on blue ticks, then maybe arrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874186
02:09:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapping again. Arrangement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874203
02:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874210
02:12:795 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrangement is a little weird here, i'd suggest something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874217
02:21:420 (4,5,6) - Overmapping. Arrangement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874230
02:22:920 (4,5,6) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874236
02:30:233 (8) - New Combo
02:44:483 (7) - ^
02:50:858 (7) - ^
02:54:233 (10) - New Combo here instead of 02:54:795
02:56:483 (6) - New Combo
03:02:858 (6) - ^
Also, this one was pretty thorough too lol. Keep in mind, it isn't as thorough as I would've made it.
- - - INSANE - - -
00:16:545 (1) - This slider doesn't look very good to me. Do this instead maybe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10877964
00:19:545 - A circle would fit well here.
00:22:545 (1) - The slider might look better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10877977
00:34:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing on these objects is bad. Here is once again, what i'd do: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878027 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878039
00:47:858 (4) - New Combo
00:49:358 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878066 Something like this would work here.
00:52:545 (6) - The good wavy slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878114
00:59:858 (8) - New Combo
01:27:233 (5) - ^
01:30:608 (5,6,7) - Arrangement would be better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878134
01:33:420 (5,6) - I'd stack the 5 onto the 6, and put another circle on that stack on the blue tick, so it'd look like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878155
01:37:358 (7) - New Combo
01:45:045 (5) - Move this circle up, try to have equal spacing before and after it. Maybe here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878173
01:54:233 (1,2,3) - I'd make this 2 half-beat sliders then 2 circles.
02:18:983 (8) - New Combo
02:25:358 (7) - ^
02:39:983 (3) - New combo here, or on the slider ahead.
02:43:733 (5,6,7) - I'd do slider->slider->circle here, then rearrange to make it look good.
02:50:858 (7) - New Combo
02:52:920 (3) - ^
03:02:858 (7) - ^
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - These last 3 circles, same as previous difficulties.
Usually when I say New Combo, it's either it just feels appropriate, or looks better imo.
- - - SUPREME'S SNOW - - -
00:41:483 (7) - New combo here maybe? Maybe somewhere else, I just think the combo is too long.
00:49:920 - Put a circle here, on the stack, it just makes better sense to me.
00:56:108 - I think a circle should go here to. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878309
00:56:295 (9) - New Combo
There's a lot of random triplets that don't work very well in this kiai imo. The ones right after the kiai are fine though.
01:37:358 (3) - New Combo
01:38:483 (6) - New Combo
02:02:858 - The map just kinda stops here lol.
Maybe what you could do, is either you or another mapper could finish it, assuming Supreme never comes back, and you could rename it to Collab Snow.
But that's all. Notice that this diff didn't get many mods. Not only is it just pretty good, but the higher the difficulty, the more you can get away with lol.
- - - EXTRA - - -
00:36:045 (9) - Delete slider then make this slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878392 (I feel like this works pretty well)
00:47:858 (4) - New Combo
Some of the jump patterns in the kiais are not very good, but for lovable standards it might be fine? Maybe...
02:07:170 (4,7) - New Combo on these
02:25:358 (4) - New Combo
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - Again with these last 3 circles.
There's a lot more that more experienced mappers would attack you for, but when thinking of loved maps, I believe that not much more, maybe more, but not much more than this would be good for getting it loved.
- - - RIKKA'S DUNNO - - -
Please change that difficulty name, it's very not cool. Something like "Rikka's Blizzard" would be great.
00:02:670 (3) - Stack the 3 onto the 4, would look better.
00:06:608 (8) - New Combo
00:08:295 (4) - This slider would work better half a beat later, so move the circle after it onto that red tick, then the slider to start on the white tick, then rearrange to make it look good.
00:08:858 (5,6,7) - You probably did this on purpose, just do it where it looks appropriate please. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878502 Like this.
00:12:608 (8) - New Combo
00:21:233 (8) - ^
00:59:858 (7) - New Combo here or circle immediately after.
01:25:733 - This timing point should have kiai on.
01:26:670 - This timing would work better starting on the slider, at 01:27:045
01:30:983 (5) - New Combo
01:38:295 - Move this timing point to on top of the slider ahead of it, and turn kiai on for it.
01:50:108 (8) - New Combo
01:52:358 (7) - ^
01:53:483 (13) - ^
01:56:108 (7) - ^
01:58:733 (7) - ^
02:01:733 (6) - ^
02:07:733 (9) - ^
02:18:983 (8) - ^
02:28:733 (10) - ^
02:32:108 (10) - ^
02:40:545 (3) - I'd make this 2 circles, 2nd one being a New Combo.
02:48:795 (7) - New Combo
02:50:858 (14) - ^
03:02:858 (8) - ^
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - These last 3 circles as always.
I think the jumps in this map are not bad, they just have extremely high spacing. Like with Supreme's diff, there are some triples/bursts that I don't think work too well (not the long stream, that one I thought was pretty good), but oh well.
- - - SNOWSTORM - - -
00:03:233 (6) - Move this to probably here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878631
00:18:233 (6) - New Combo
00:21:233 (7) - ^
00:32:858 (11) - ^
00:36:045 (1) - Might be better if you shortened it to the white tick before the red tick where it currently ends, but I'll leave that up to you.
00:50:483 (9) - New Combo
00:59:858 (4) - ^
01:25:733 - Turn kiai on for this timing point
01:26:670 - Move this timing point onto the slider at 01:27:045
01:33:420 (4) - This could be a triple, I'd say Ctrl+H then Ctrl+Shft+F and hit ok, and bam. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878701
01:42:608 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wth lol that's a very weird pattern.
01:47:108 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Most people don't like jump patterns that are just a circle motion, triangles are fine, and squares are fine if they're not done for too long, so this jump pattern might not be so good.
01:52:733 (6) - New Combo
02:06:608 (5) - ^
02:07:733 (11) - ^
02:15:608 (5) - ^
02:28:733 (4) - ^
02:30:233 (8) - ^
02:30:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This whole section is off, it should be redone imo.
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - Again with these circles.
Like the other 2 diffs, there are triples/bursts that don't work very well imo.
- - - FREEZING - - -
00:04:733 (1) - I'd take off repeat, and put another circle instead.
00:47:858 (7) - New Combo
00:59:858 (7) - ^
03:06:608 (10,11,12) - And these circles.
Okay, I know I didn't make many points, but this map is far from perfect. Yeah, you have triples and bursts that don't for me, but the way you amplified the difficulty is jump spamming very high spaced all over the kiais. Most people don't like this. I'd say, just maybe (so take this with a grain of salt), reduce a lot of spacing, and maybe this map will be automatically more enjoyable.
That being said, most of the non-kiai time's mapping is quite nice, at least acceptable.
- - - MOD DONE - - -
- - - NORMAL - - -
00:17:483 (2) - What's with this spacing? I know it's not an Easy, but Normal still needs pretty regular and consistent spacing.
00:20:858 (2) - No reason for this to be like this. It just wrong to not have it right here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873705
00:25:733 (4,5,1) - If you're gonna have this, at least make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873714
00:42:983 (2) - Here's how you make sliders like these good: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873759
00:54:608 - Could use a circle here, probably like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873729
00:59:858 (3) - Move this like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873767
01:01:358 (6) - How it should look: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873774
01:10:733 - Should be a circle here.
01:22:358 (6) - Fix spacing. Should look something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873745
01:35:483 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873749 that would look better.
02:53:108 (9) - New Combo
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - I'd delete these last 3 circles, the echo cannot really be heard anymore after circle 4.
Not as thorough as I'd like to make it, but I limited it on purpose.
- - - INFAMOUS HYPE - - -
00:09:045 (5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873786 Might look better.
00:03:233 (5) - New Combo here instead of 00:03:795
00:04:733 (4) - New Combo here instead of 00:05:295
00:06:608 (6) - New Combo
00:12:608 (8) - ^
00:15:233 (6) - ^
00:21:233 (7) - ^
00:23:108 (3) - New Combo here instead of 00:22:170
00:26:295 - I think 2 circles would fit here.
00:28:920 (5) - Maybe add a repeat to this slider?
00:32:295 - 2 Circles again.
00:33:795 - ^
00:36:983 (7) - New Combo
00:41:295 (6) - Do this with this circle: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10873859
00:42:233 (9) - Extend slider to next white tick.
00:57:233 (7) - Take off the repeat on this slider.
01:06:795 (6) - New Combo
01:11:108 (7) - ^
01:20:108 (5) - ^
03:06:608 (8,9,10) - Same as Normal
I was way too thorough for the first minute, then I didn't mod anything for the next minute lol.
- - - FROZEN - - -
00:11:295 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874096 This would be better probably. That, or just stack it
00:12:045 (6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874103 Same here.
00:26:108 - There could be more circles here.
00:29:295 - Put 2 circles here.
00:30:420 - ^
00:32:108 - Add Circles.
00:33:420 - ^
00:39:233 (7) - New Combo
00:50:483 (7) - ^
00:53:483 (8) - ^
01:27:233 (5) - ^
01:28:545 - Add a circle.
01:30:983 (6) - New Combo
01:36:233 (4) - ^
01:37:358 (7) - ^
01:39:233 - You NEED a circle here. New Combo it as well.
01:59:483 (7) - New Combo probably.
01:59:858 (3) - Move here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874155
01:59:858 (3,4) - Then, Switch these 2 notes (highlight and press Ctrl+G)
02:00:232 (2) - New Combo here instead of 02:00:045
02:03:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stream is overmapping, remove circles on blue ticks, then maybe arrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874186
02:09:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapping again. Arrangement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874203
02:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874210
02:12:795 (3,4,5,6,7) - Arrangement is a little weird here, i'd suggest something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874217
02:21:420 (4,5,6) - Overmapping. Arrangement: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874230
02:22:920 (4,5,6) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10874236
02:30:233 (8) - New Combo
02:44:483 (7) - ^
02:50:858 (7) - ^
02:54:233 (10) - New Combo here instead of 02:54:795
02:56:483 (6) - New Combo
03:02:858 (6) - ^
Also, this one was pretty thorough too lol. Keep in mind, it isn't as thorough as I would've made it.
- - - INSANE - - -
00:16:545 (1) - This slider doesn't look very good to me. Do this instead maybe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10877964
00:19:545 - A circle would fit well here.
00:22:545 (1) - The slider might look better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10877977
00:34:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing on these objects is bad. Here is once again, what i'd do: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878027 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878039
00:47:858 (4) - New Combo
00:49:358 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878066 Something like this would work here.
00:52:545 (6) - The good wavy slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878114
00:59:858 (8) - New Combo
01:27:233 (5) - ^
01:30:608 (5,6,7) - Arrangement would be better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878134
01:33:420 (5,6) - I'd stack the 5 onto the 6, and put another circle on that stack on the blue tick, so it'd look like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878155
01:37:358 (7) - New Combo
01:45:045 (5) - Move this circle up, try to have equal spacing before and after it. Maybe here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878173
01:54:233 (1,2,3) - I'd make this 2 half-beat sliders then 2 circles.
02:18:983 (8) - New Combo
02:25:358 (7) - ^
02:39:983 (3) - New combo here, or on the slider ahead.
02:43:733 (5,6,7) - I'd do slider->slider->circle here, then rearrange to make it look good.
02:50:858 (7) - New Combo
02:52:920 (3) - ^
03:02:858 (7) - ^
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - These last 3 circles, same as previous difficulties.
Usually when I say New Combo, it's either it just feels appropriate, or looks better imo.
- - - SUPREME'S SNOW - - -
00:41:483 (7) - New combo here maybe? Maybe somewhere else, I just think the combo is too long.
00:49:920 - Put a circle here, on the stack, it just makes better sense to me.
00:56:108 - I think a circle should go here to. Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878309
00:56:295 (9) - New Combo
There's a lot of random triplets that don't work very well in this kiai imo. The ones right after the kiai are fine though.
01:37:358 (3) - New Combo
01:38:483 (6) - New Combo
02:02:858 - The map just kinda stops here lol.
Maybe what you could do, is either you or another mapper could finish it, assuming Supreme never comes back, and you could rename it to Collab Snow.
But that's all. Notice that this diff didn't get many mods. Not only is it just pretty good, but the higher the difficulty, the more you can get away with lol.
- - - EXTRA - - -
00:36:045 (9) - Delete slider then make this slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878392 (I feel like this works pretty well)
00:47:858 (4) - New Combo
Some of the jump patterns in the kiais are not very good, but for lovable standards it might be fine? Maybe...
02:07:170 (4,7) - New Combo on these
02:25:358 (4) - New Combo
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - Again with these last 3 circles.
There's a lot more that more experienced mappers would attack you for, but when thinking of loved maps, I believe that not much more, maybe more, but not much more than this would be good for getting it loved.
- - - RIKKA'S DUNNO - - -
Please change that difficulty name, it's very not cool. Something like "Rikka's Blizzard" would be great.
00:02:670 (3) - Stack the 3 onto the 4, would look better.
00:06:608 (8) - New Combo
00:08:295 (4) - This slider would work better half a beat later, so move the circle after it onto that red tick, then the slider to start on the white tick, then rearrange to make it look good.
00:08:858 (5,6,7) - You probably did this on purpose, just do it where it looks appropriate please. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878502 Like this.
00:12:608 (8) - New Combo
00:21:233 (8) - ^
00:59:858 (7) - New Combo here or circle immediately after.
01:25:733 - This timing point should have kiai on.
01:26:670 - This timing would work better starting on the slider, at 01:27:045
01:30:983 (5) - New Combo
01:38:295 - Move this timing point to on top of the slider ahead of it, and turn kiai on for it.
01:50:108 (8) - New Combo
01:52:358 (7) - ^
01:53:483 (13) - ^
01:56:108 (7) - ^
01:58:733 (7) - ^
02:01:733 (6) - ^
02:07:733 (9) - ^
02:18:983 (8) - ^
02:28:733 (10) - ^
02:32:108 (10) - ^
02:40:545 (3) - I'd make this 2 circles, 2nd one being a New Combo.
02:48:795 (7) - New Combo
02:50:858 (14) - ^
03:02:858 (8) - ^
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - These last 3 circles as always.
I think the jumps in this map are not bad, they just have extremely high spacing. Like with Supreme's diff, there are some triples/bursts that I don't think work too well (not the long stream, that one I thought was pretty good), but oh well.
- - - SNOWSTORM - - -
00:03:233 (6) - Move this to probably here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878631
00:18:233 (6) - New Combo
00:21:233 (7) - ^
00:32:858 (11) - ^
00:36:045 (1) - Might be better if you shortened it to the white tick before the red tick where it currently ends, but I'll leave that up to you.
00:50:483 (9) - New Combo
00:59:858 (4) - ^
01:25:733 - Turn kiai on for this timing point
01:26:670 - Move this timing point onto the slider at 01:27:045
01:33:420 (4) - This could be a triple, I'd say Ctrl+H then Ctrl+Shft+F and hit ok, and bam. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10878701
01:42:608 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - wth lol that's a very weird pattern.
01:47:108 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Most people don't like jump patterns that are just a circle motion, triangles are fine, and squares are fine if they're not done for too long, so this jump pattern might not be so good.
01:52:733 (6) - New Combo
02:06:608 (5) - ^
02:07:733 (11) - ^
02:15:608 (5) - ^
02:28:733 (4) - ^
02:30:233 (8) - ^
02:30:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This whole section is off, it should be redone imo.
03:06:608 (5,6,7) - Again with these circles.
Like the other 2 diffs, there are triples/bursts that don't work very well imo.
- - - FREEZING - - -
00:04:733 (1) - I'd take off repeat, and put another circle instead.
00:47:858 (7) - New Combo
00:59:858 (7) - ^
03:06:608 (10,11,12) - And these circles.
Okay, I know I didn't make many points, but this map is far from perfect. Yeah, you have triples and bursts that don't for me, but the way you amplified the difficulty is jump spamming very high spaced all over the kiais. Most people don't like this. I'd say, just maybe (so take this with a grain of salt), reduce a lot of spacing, and maybe this map will be automatically more enjoyable.
That being said, most of the non-kiai time's mapping is quite nice, at least acceptable.
- - - MOD DONE - - -
Congrats on almost 1000 favourites
I played this map since I started playing osu and i've been waiting since then for it to be ranked.
Keep up the great work
Keep up the great work
Jesus! this is one of the most epic and fun map that i have ever played, hope this get ranked!
This map likely won't get ranked. After Gologle responds to my mod, I might submit it for loved though! :3
Actually, I'll probably want to mod the new diff too.
Actually, I'll probably want to mod the new diff too.
Your mapping style on the higher diffs is like Frostmourne's but on steroids
Before i mod iceless diff, can you fix combo colors to be appropriate on it, so i can more easily focus? lol
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