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yanaginagi - Owari no Sekai Kara [OsuMania]

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DJ Profetti
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年9月27日 at 上午 12:05:46

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Owari no Sekai Kara
Source: 終わりの惑星のLove Song
Tags: Owari no Hoshi no Love Song SHOGO 浅見百合子 yama_ko 麻枝准 asami yuriko asaeda jun
BPM: 134
Filesize: 24554kb
Play Time: 05:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. MX - 7Key (4.39 stars, 3198 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Owari no Sekai Kara
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i can take M4M if you want, just PM me :D
NlHIL
00:38:562 - add for piano
00:55:083 - 00:56:704 - 00:58:326 - 00:59:745 - 01:01:569 -01:03:191 - add?
01:11:197 - add
02:01:873 (121873|0) - remove?
02:43:630 - add?
03:17:684 (197684|4) - end at 03:17:887 - ?
03:26:400 (206400|3) - change to LN?
03:42:008 (222008|0) - ^
04:47:076 - add a LN?
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

NlHIL wrote:

00:38:562 - add for piano
00:55:083 - 00:56:704 - 00:58:326 - 00:59:745 - 01:01:569 -01:03:191 - add?/over diff then kiai part so remove
01:11:197 - add
02:01:873 (121873|0) - remove?/move to 02:01:772
02:43:630 - add?
03:17:684 (197684|4) - end at 03:17:887 - ?/change pattern
03:26:400 (206400|3) - change to LN?/nice
03:42:008 (222008|0) - ^
04:47:076 - add a LN?
nice modding
love you very much :D
Hestia-
Hi Taiwan CDZ

[MX]
01:27:920 - Add note
01:28:326 - Add note on 5
01:29:137 - Add 6
01:29:542 - Add 2
01:29:947 - Add 5
01:31:164 - Add 6
01:33:292 - Add note?
01:34:812 - Add 2
01:36:029 - Add note?
01:36:637 - Add note
01:36:839 - Add note
01:37:447 - Add note
01:37:650 - Add 5
^above=mostly bad changes
below=okay changes
02:04:812 - Add 6
02:05:015 - Add 4
02:16:569 - Add 5
02:17:380 - Add 1
02:23:157 - Add 5
04:17:988 - Add note
04:18:393 - Add note
04:34:610 (274610|3) - Remove

nice map >//< yanaginagi<3

Edit: sorry if mod isn't helpful I didn't see anything really wrong with the map
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti
i will check it in weekend, thanks modding Hestia :D
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Hestia- wrote:

Hi Taiwan CDZ

[MX]
01:27:920 - Add note no sound
01:28:326 - Add note on 5 no drum sound
01:29:137 - Add 6 no sound
01:29:542 - Add 2 no sound
01:29:947 - Add 5 no sound
01:31:164 - Add 6 no sound
01:33:292 - Add note? no
01:34:812 - Add 2 no sound
01:36:029 - Add note? no sound
01:36:637 - Add note no sound
01:36:839 - Add note no sound
01:37:447 - Add note no sound
01:37:650 - Add 5 no sound
^above=mostly bad changes yea true :?
below=okay changes
02:04:812 - Add 6 no sound
02:05:015 - Add 4 no sound
02:16:569 - Add 5 no drum sound
02:17:380 - Add 1 no drum sound
02:23:157 - Add 5 no sound
04:17:988 - Add note okey
04:18:393 - Add note no sound
04:34:610 (274610|3) - Remove no

nice map >//< yanaginagi<3

Edit: sorry if mod isn't helpful I didn't see anything really wrong with the map
thanks modding :D
Taiwan-NAK
Mark(?
Taiwan-NAK
6666
00:03:297 - 既然雙鍵了 00:03:520 - 00:03:744 - 都一起雙鍵 Piano不能省鍵也不能多一鍵 原音重現
00:03:968 - 3鍵

00:04:640 - 這邊開始 後面的部分仔細聽 調整按鍵量 符合Piano的音
例如00:05:088 - 3鍵
00:04:640 - 2鍵
00:07:326 - 沒音
00:07:774 - 3鍵
00:08:670 - 3鍵

00:09:565 - 2
00:09:789 - 2
後面的自己仔細聽就好 很容易分辨

很多部分Overnote了 該多的鍵不要省 該少的鍵不要多放 記得全check一次

00:53:866 (53866|1) - 這顆音很雜 忽略不要放比較好

後面基本都是一樣的問題 感受音樂 在用Note LN表現出來 不能為了難而塞
謹慎點放 :? 可以參考其他麻婆做的長圖 來改進

別給kuds
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

6666
00:03:297 - 既然雙鍵了 00:03:520 - 00:03:744 - 都一起雙鍵 Piano不能省鍵也不能多一鍵 原音重現
00:03:968 - 3鍵 刪了00:03:297

00:04:640 - 這邊開始 後面的部分仔細聽 調整按鍵量 符合Piano的音
例如00:05:088 - 3鍵
00:04:640 - 2鍵
00:07:326 - 沒音
00:07:774 - 3鍵
00:08:670 - 3鍵 刪了00:03:297所以不衝突 保留

00:09:565 - 2 同上
00:09:789 - 2
後面的自己仔細聽就好 很容易分辨

很多部分Overnote了 該多的鍵不要省 該少的鍵不要多放 記得全check一次

00:53:866 (53866|1) - 這顆音很雜 忽略不要放比較好 不放會卡手 8-) 保留

後面基本都是一樣的問題 感受音樂 在用Note LN表現出來 不能為了難而塞
謹慎點放 :? 可以參考其他麻婆做的長圖 來改進
恩我再檢查一次吧

別給kuds
謝摸 :D
abraker
Oh my...


[Note-Song]
[1] 00:07:326 (7326|2) - Ghost note
[2] 00:09:565 (9565|5) - Ghost note
[3] 00:09:565 (9565|5) - Ghost note

[4] 00:52:954 (52954|2) - Not sure the purpose of this LN. Can you explain ?_?

[5] 01:13:630 (73630|2) - ok this is following the chord. What is 01:13:630 (73630|5) - following? If voice, why does there only one here?

[6] 01:15:150 (75150|1,75353|5) - What are these following?
[7] 01:15:961 (75961|3,76164|5) - What are these following?
[8] 01:16:670 (76670|2,76772|3,76873|1,76974|2) - What are these following? If voice, its role is too small to follow smoothly

[9] 01:32:076 (92076|0,92279|2,92279|6,92279|5) - The clash at 01:32:279 doesn't play clearly in the patterns with that stream in the middle
[10] 01:33:089 (93089|2,93089|4) - Not sure what this leads into. Seems to be following the voice but not fully because it ends and the voice continues

[11] 02:04:306 (124306|2) - What is this note following?
[12]
...
Similiar problems in repeated sections

[Patterns]
[1] 00:09:341 (9341|3) - move to 00:09:341 (9341|5) - <Dependency: Note-Song:3>

[2] 00:29:035 (29035|3) - move to 00:29:035 (29035|2) -
[3] 00:29:137 (29137|2) - move to 00:29:137 (29137|0) -
[4] 00:29:238 (29238|1) - move to 00:29:238 (29238|2) -

[5] 00:32:279 (32279|3) - move to 00:32:279 (32279|2) -
[6] 00:32:380 (32380|2) - move to 00:32:380 (32380|0) -
[7] 00:32:481 (32481|1) - move to 00:32:481 (32481|2) -
[8] 00:32:684 (32684|2) - move to 00:32:684 (32684|1) -

[9] 00:35:623 (35623|5) - move to 00:35:623 (35623|4) -
[10] 00:35:724 (35724|4) - move to 00:35:724 (35724|6) -

[11] 00:41:400 (41400|6,41603|4,41603|6,41806|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[12] 00:42:211 (42211|6,42414|6,42414|4,42616|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.

[13] 00:43:022 (43022|0,43224|0,43224|2,43427|0) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[14] 00:43:833 (43833|0,44035|0,44035|2,44238|0) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.

[15] 00:44:643 (44643|6,44846|6,44846|4,45049|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[16] 00:45:454 (45454|6,45657|4,45657|6,45860|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.

[17] 00:48:596 (48596|1) - move to 00:48:596 (48596|0) -
[18] 00:48:697 (48697|0) - move to 00:48:697 (48697|2) -
[19] 00:48:697 (48697|3) - move to 00:48:697 (48697|5) - or consider deleting
[20] 00:48:900 (48900|2) - move to 00:48:900 (48900|1) -
[21] 00:48:900 (48900|5) - move to 00:48:900 (48900|4) -

[23] 01:09:981 (69981|1) - delete?

[25] 01:13:630 (73630|2,75251|3,75251|4,75657|3,75961|3) - High multi-finger/hand/thumb indpendence strain
[26] 01:17:684 (77684|5,77887|4,77887|6,78089|5,78089|3,78292|5,78393|4,78495|5) - High finger indpendence strain
[27] 01:23:765 (83765|1,83765|0,83968|2,84069|0) - Finger indpendence strain

[28] 01:52:751 (112751|6,112954|6,112954|4,113157|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[29] 01:53:562 (113562|6,113765|6,113765|4,113968|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[30] 01:55:995 (115995|6,116197|6,116197|4,116400|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[31] 01:56:806 (116806|6,117008|6,117008|4,117211|6) - 01:56:806 (116806|6,117008|6,117008|4,117211|6) -
[32]
...
Similiar problems in repeated sections
...
[33] 03:12:008 (192008|1,192008|0,192211|3,192211|2,192414|5,192414|4,192616|3,192616|6,192819|2,192819|1,193022|4,193022|3,193224|6,193224|5,193427|1,193427|2) - Any reasoning to do LN wall on drums?
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti
blue is reject
green is aspect

abraker wrote:

Oh my...


[Note-Song]
[1] 00:07:326 (7326|2) - Ghost note piano
[2] 00:09:565 (9565|5) - Ghost note piano
[3] 00:09:565 (9565|5) - Ghost note piano

[4] 00:52:954 (52954|2) - Not sure the purpose of this LN. Can you explain ?_? remove

[5] 01:13:630 (73630|2) - ok this is following the chord. What is 01:13:630 (73630|5) - following? If voice, why does there only one here? because no drums there, for balance

[6] 01:15:150 (75150|1,75353|5) - What are these following? drum
[7] 01:15:961 (75961|3,76164|5) - What are these following? drum
[8] 01:16:670 (76670|2,76772|3,76873|1,76974|2) - What are these following? If voice, its role is too small to follow smoothly drum

[9] 01:32:076 (92076|0,92279|2,92279|6,92279|5) - The clash at 01:32:279 doesn't play clearly in the patterns with that stream in the middle for more visible
[10] 01:33:089 (93089|2,93089|4) - Not sure what this leads into. Seems to be following the voice but not fully because it ends and the voice continues following instrument

[11] 02:04:306 (124306|2) - What is this note following? remove
[12]
...
Similiar problems in repeated sections i'll recheck it, since this map is my early beatmap. there are lots of mistake

[Patterns]
[1] 00:09:341 (9341|3) - move to 00:09:341 (9341|5) - <Dependency: Note-Song:3>

[2] 00:29:035 (29035|3) - move to 00:29:035 (29035|2) -
[3] 00:29:137 (29137|2) - move to 00:29:137 (29137|0) -
[4] 00:29:238 (29238|1) - move to 00:29:238 (29238|2) -

[5] 00:32:279 (32279|3) - move to 00:32:279 (32279|2) -
[6] 00:32:380 (32380|2) - move to 00:32:380 (32380|0) -
[7] 00:32:481 (32481|1) - move to 00:32:481 (32481|2) -
[8] 00:32:684 (32684|2) - move to 00:32:684 (32684|1) -

[9] 00:35:623 (35623|5) - move to 00:35:623 (35623|4) -
[10] 00:35:724 (35724|4) - move to 00:35:724 (35724|6) -

[11] 00:41:400 (41400|6,41603|4,41603|6,41806|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.( bms style pattern
[12] 00:42:211 (42211|6,42414|6,42414|4,42616|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.

[13] 00:43:022 (43022|0,43224|0,43224|2,43427|0) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[14] 00:43:833 (43833|0,44035|0,44035|2,44238|0) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.

[15] 00:44:643 (44643|6,44846|6,44846|4,45049|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[16] 00:45:454 (45454|6,45657|4,45657|6,45860|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.

[17] 00:48:596 (48596|1) - move to 00:48:596 (48596|0) -
[18] 00:48:697 (48697|0) - move to 00:48:697 (48697|2) -
[19] 00:48:697 (48697|3) - move to 00:48:697 (48697|5) - or consider deleting
[20] 00:48:900 (48900|2) - move to 00:48:900 (48900|1) -
[21] 00:48:900 (48900|5) - move to 00:48:900 (48900|4) -

[23] 01:09:981 (69981|1) - delete? drum+piano

[25] 01:13:630 (73630|2,75251|3,75251|4,75657|3,75961|3) - High multi-finger/hand/thumb indpendence strain
[26] 01:17:684 (77684|5,77887|4,77887|6,78089|5,78089|3,78292|5,78393|4,78495|5) - High finger indpendence strain
[27] 01:23:765 (83765|1,83765|0,83968|2,84069|0) - Finger indpendence strain

[28] 01:52:751 (112751|6,112954|6,112954|4,113157|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[29] 01:53:562 (113562|6,113765|6,113765|4,113968|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[30] 01:55:995 (115995|6,116197|6,116197|4,116400|6) - Medium finger dependence strain; Consider changing.
[31] 01:56:806 (116806|6,117008|6,117008|4,117211|6) - 01:56:806 (116806|6,117008|6,117008|4,117211|6) - no
[32]
...
Similiar problems in repeated sections
...
[33] 03:12:008 (192008|1,192008|0,192211|3,192211|2,192414|5,192414|4,192616|3,192616|6,192819|2,192819|1,193022|4,193022|3,193224|6,193224|5,193427|1,193427|2) - Any reasoning to do LN wall on drums? for more interest

thanks modding, i'll take your map first in 7/4 8-)
abraker

DJ Profetti wrote:

Any reasoning to do LN wall on drums? for more interest

DJ Profetti wrote:

thanks modding, i'll take your map first in 7/4
sweeeet
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