[Ienakatta]
- 00:06:434 (4,5) - This spacing is going to be really confusing to read.
- 00:07:161 (5,1,2,1,2) - Actually all of this xP.
- 00:11:161 (2,4,2,4) - These are overmapped xP
- 00:14:979 (5,6) - You miss quite a few of the background intruments with this rhythm choice xP
- 00:17:524 (1,2,3,4) - ^ There are some cool drums you could have followed.
- 00:23:888 (3,4) - These two notes should be emphasized xP I used 1/2 sliders for the jumps instead of leaving a 1/1 gap.
- 00:26:070 (4) - You want to start an object on the downbeat here xP The slider end is noticeably stronger than the head.
- 00:45:161 (9,1) - Why the jump here xP. You should put the jump on the downbeat (large white tick) so it makes sense with the music.
- 01:02:615 (1,2,3,1) - I really dont get this rhythm here xP. 01:03:343 - 01:04:070 - are the strong beats but you neglect them.
- 01:18:434 (5) - You're completely skipping a downbeat with that repeat
- 01:20:070 - ^ Please start an object on a downbeat unless you have a specific rhythmic reason not to xP
- 01:28:434 (5) - ^
- 01:28:070 (4) - Could make this a 1/2 slider instead so there isn't an awkward spacing gap between 4 and 5
- 01:29:525 (4,5) - ^^
- 01:41:706 - You could put a circle here and start the spinner 1/2 a beat later
- 01:47:706 (5,1) - Why the jumpx P
- 01:48:979 (7,1) - ^This is what you should be doing honestly.
- 02:03:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Oh, nice <3
- 02:29:525 (7) - STart on a downbeat please so the stream isnt so awkward to play
- 02:30:161 (3) - People don't expect hold sliders on a blue tick.. Also they don't expect 3 repeats. its always 2 repeats xP. 02:30:979 (5) - Like this. THe fact you have 3 just means your rhythm choice is poor because you dont start on a downbeat.
- 02:31:706 (5) - Remove one of the repeats, a circle on 02:32:070 - is nice.
- 02:52:979 (4) - Downbeat please
- 02:52:979 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What you have here is a 1/2 jump rhythm, but the rhythm here is 3/2. one two three one two three. you arrange it like "one two one two one two" with the back and forth jumps which imo is incorrect
- 03:01:646 - It's 1/6 here too. Begins here.
- 03:39:343 (7) - Downbeat
- 04:05:888 - Ehh not going to map this?
- 04:08:797 (1) - I would end the spinner 1/2 earlier so i can map another circle on 04:10:979 - . plays really well imo.
- 05:39:645 (1,2,3) - I would just use a repeat slider... people aren't going to expect 1/6 triples here especially when they dont even begin on a white/red tick.
- 05:45:525 - I feel like ending the spinner on a white tick is always better