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Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos [OsuMania]

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_underjoy
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_underjoy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 lutego 2016 at 21:02:05

Artist: Rohi
Title: Kakuzetsu Thanatos
Tags: vocaloid hardcore tempo speed theziemniax tidek kagamine rin
BPM: 200
Filesize: 19296kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 4Key (3,04 stars, 1922 notes)
  2. Insane - 4Key (4,39 stars, 2871 notes)
  3. Isolation - 4Key (5,29 stars, 3372 notes)
  4. Normal - 4Key (2,04 stars, 1013 notes)
  5. Tidek's Easy - 4Key (1,42 stars, 657 notes)
Download: Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos
Download: Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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THE ONE HAND TRILL IS STILL RIP :<
Finally ranked! Thank you all BNs who iconed this map!

Tidek's Easy - Some basic patterning, however this is not a boring diff by any means!
Normal - Rhythmic difficulty that is aimed for intermediate players.
Hard - Quick 1/4 streams make this diff really intense despite it's low star rating! Also, don't get caught off guard by bursts!
Insane - Challenging jumpstreams and bursts with jackhammers combined with 1/8 burst make this diff very tricky. Aimed at advanced players.
Isolation - A really complex diff with dense jumpstreams, jackbursts, bursts and long notes. A true challenge for high-level players.
(Another version of this diff is included in Yolomania 4 Stepmania Pack)

Mods
Tidek's Easy - 6 mods
Normal - 7 mods
Hard - 8 mods
Insane - 9 mods
Isolation - 11 mods

Background, video and sync taken from NatsumeRin's mapset.
Thanks Tidek for Easy diff and your SV suggestions!
Last edited by _underjoy , edited 73 times in total.
Vygatron
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Joined November 2013
Vygatron
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Kreator014
Kreator014
jejjin
2015-10-18 15:03 _underjoy: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/790529 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos]
2015-10-18 15:03 _underjoy: could you take a look at that and possible mod?
2015-10-18 15:04 Kreator014: jesus christ what is this
2015-10-18 15:04 _underjoy: its without the svs
2015-10-18 15:04 _underjoy: you played this before ^^
2015-10-18 15:04 Kreator014: i don't remember this jej
2015-10-18 15:04 Kreator014: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/785580 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos [Isolation]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2015-10-18 15:04 _underjoy: jej
2015-10-18 15:08 Kreator014: Nice Difficulty Spikes ! !
2015-10-18 15:08 _underjoy: <3
2015-10-18 15:08 _underjoy: I know
2015-10-18 15:08 _underjoy: they are cute :D
2015-10-18 15:09 Kreator014: it's trying to be a 5.5 star map
2015-10-18 15:09 Kreator014: (:
2015-10-18 15:09 Kreator014: how cute
2015-10-18 15:09 _underjoy: but it's hard
2015-10-18 15:09 Kreator014: no it's undermapped and Homo
2015-10-18 15:09 _underjoy: I will probably remap the burst in some way
2015-10-18 15:09 _underjoy: undermapped?
2015-10-18 15:10 Kreator014: the js in the chorus is like
2015-10-18 15:10 Kreator014: really undermapped
2015-10-18 15:10 _underjoy: oh lol okay
2015-10-18 15:10 _underjoy: I can make it dense
2015-10-18 15:11 Kreator014: should be like
2015-10-18 15:11 Kreator014: handstream
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: also there's way too many trills like
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: stop
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: half of the map is asian trills
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: jej
2015-10-18 15:12 _underjoy: y u no like trills
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: cuz they look bad
2015-10-18 15:15 _underjoy: 200 handstream looks mean
2015-10-18 15:15 Kreator014: 01:06:220 - this part is bad to play
2015-10-18 15:16 _underjoy: what do
2015-10-18 15:16 Kreator014: make the trill not super gay
2015-10-18 15:17 Kreator014: also i remapped 01:08:170 - 01:12:670 - for you so you can look at that for an example on how to do stuff
2015-10-18 15:17 Kreator014: also cut down on the anchors there's a lot of them
2015-10-18 15:17 _underjoy: most are intentional though
2015-10-18 15:17 Kreator014: that is not how you do jumpstream
2015-10-18 15:17 Kreator014: up to 3 is fine but when you get to 4 that's when it starts going down
2015-10-18 15:18 Kreator014: 5 is a no-no zone and if you do that you're gay
2015-10-18 15:18 _underjoy: huhuu
2015-10-18 15:18 _underjoy: well it was meant to be a bit gay with those trills and anchors
2015-10-18 15:18 _underjoy: but i will listen to you
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: there's good gay and bad gay
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: you did the bad gay thing
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: ):
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: http://puu.sh/kOzcQ/98385aa711.osu
2015-10-18 15:19 _underjoy: damn
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: here's my remapped version of the first 4 or so seconds of the js
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: 01:07:870 -
2015-10-18 15:20 Kreator014: (those anchors are fine because this is dense ok)
2015-10-18 15:21 _underjoy: oh wow
2015-10-18 15:21 _underjoy: its dense
2015-10-18 15:21 Kreator014: that's what it's supposed to look like
2015-10-18 15:21 Kreator014: 01:12:670 (72670|0,72770|0,72870|0) - p.s. i accidentally made this and it's really gay and horrible
2015-10-18 15:22 _underjoy: 01:11:470 (71470|0,71470|2,71470|3,71695|0,71695|1,71695|3,71920|3,71920|1,71920|2) -
2015-10-18 15:22 _underjoy: why is this hand and earlier jump
2015-10-18 15:23 Kreator014: vocals
2015-10-18 15:23 Kreator014: it says so ok
2015-10-18 15:23 Kreator014: that's what my brain said
2015-10-18 15:24 _underjoy: oh k
2015-10-18 15:24 _underjoy: 01:13:270 -
2015-10-18 15:24 _underjoy: what about this
2015-10-18 15:25 Kreator014: listen to the vocals and map accordingly
2015-10-18 15:26 Kreator014: p.s. remove the anchors jesus fuq
2015-10-18 15:26 _underjoy: I tried to map accordingly to vocals and made anchors :<
2015-10-18 15:27 Kreator014: in that case
2015-10-18 15:27 Kreator014: 01:15:970 (75970|0,75970|2) - ??????
2015-10-18 15:27 Kreator014: 01:16:270 (76270|0,76270|1) - even more ?????????
2015-10-18 15:27 _underjoy: well I meant rather
2015-10-18 15:28 _underjoy: 01:13:420 (73420|3,73420|0,73570|3,73570|2,73720|3,73720|0,73870|0,73870|1,74020|2,74020|1,74170|1,74170|0,74320|2,74320|1) -
2015-10-18 15:28 _underjoy: but yeah those are by mistake
2015-10-18 15:28 Kreator014: jejjin
2015-10-18 15:30 _underjoy: any comment on this 02:39:670 -
2015-10-18 15:31 Kreator014: kill yourself
2015-10-18 15:31 _underjoy: but
2015-10-18 15:31 _underjoy: why
2015-10-18 15:31 _underjoy: the pattern is perfectly doable and fits
2015-10-18 15:31 Kreator014: because euhguehguehg
2015-10-18 15:31 Kreator014: is this a valid reason
2015-10-18 15:32 _underjoy: nope
2015-10-18 15:32 _underjoy: people's left hand needs some love too
2015-10-18 15:32 Kreator014: plasease no
2015-10-18 15:32 Kreator014: ))):
2015-10-18 15:33 _underjoy: yess
2015-10-18 15:33 Kreator014: m8 if i say no everyone else will too
2015-10-18 15:33 Kreator014: ):
2015-10-18 15:33 _underjoy: 03:12:080 -
2015-10-18 15:33 _underjoy: I know this is bad
2015-10-18 15:33 _underjoy: well the pattern is simple but its so hard execute
2015-10-18 15:34 _underjoy: and I don't want do make it full jumptrillable because its boring
2015-10-18 15:34 Kreator014: jesus fuck that's hard to read
2015-10-18 15:34 Kreator014: this is like
2015-10-18 15:34 Kreator014: 7 star map tier shit
2015-10-18 15:34 _underjoy: yeah that's why
2015-10-18 15:34 _underjoy: blue planet but more gay
2015-10-18 15:35 Kreator014: this looks nothing like blue planet
2015-10-18 15:35 _underjoy: more like gay planet haha
2015-10-18 15:36 Kreator014: you should really make it a lot less dense
2015-10-18 15:36 Kreator014: like holy shit this is worse than icyworld
2015-10-18 15:36 _underjoy: damn
2015-10-18 15:37 Kreator014: this pattern is almost nvlm tier
2015-10-18 15:37 Kreator014: jej
2015-10-18 15:37 _underjoy: but idk, less dense?
2015-10-18 15:37 Kreator014: yes less dense
2015-10-18 15:37 Kreator014: remove some of the jumps
2015-10-18 15:37 _underjoy: :< :< :<
2015-10-18 15:38 _underjoy: okay
2015-10-18 15:38 _underjoy: if I remove 2/3 of the jumps will it be k
2015-10-18 15:38 Kreator014: probably
2015-10-18 15:39 _underjoy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3831243
2015-10-18 15:40 Kreator014: http://puu.sh/kOAar/60c03f301e.png
2015-10-18 15:40 Kreator014: http://puu.sh/kOAaT/62b0477c67.png
2015-10-18 15:40 Kreator014: jej
2015-10-18 15:42 _underjoy: jej
2015-10-18 15:42 _underjoy: lemme think
2015-10-18 15:48 _underjoy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3831276
2015-10-18 15:48 _underjoy: and this
2015-10-18 15:50 _underjoy: also I don't think handstream is really needed because I use hands for the crashes, I will stick to the jumpstream using your suggestions though
2015-10-18 15:50 Kreator014: imo handstream would work better in that part but okay
2015-10-18 16:14 _underjoy: you can post the irc to get kds
2015-10-18 16:14 Kreator014: oh yeah forgot
2015-10-18 16:14 Kreator014: will do it soon
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
_underjoy

Kreator014 wrote:

jejjin
2015-10-18 15:03 _underjoy: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/790529 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos]
2015-10-18 15:03 _underjoy: could you take a look at that and possible mod?
2015-10-18 15:04 Kreator014: jesus christ what is this
2015-10-18 15:04 _underjoy: its without the svs
2015-10-18 15:04 _underjoy: you played this before ^^
2015-10-18 15:04 Kreator014: i don't remember this jej
2015-10-18 15:04 Kreator014: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/785580 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos [Isolation]] <osu!mania> |4K|
2015-10-18 15:04 _underjoy: jej
2015-10-18 15:08 Kreator014: Nice Difficulty Spikes ! !
2015-10-18 15:08 _underjoy: <3
2015-10-18 15:08 _underjoy: I know
2015-10-18 15:08 _underjoy: they are cute :D
2015-10-18 15:09 Kreator014: it's trying to be a 5.5 star map
2015-10-18 15:09 Kreator014: (:
2015-10-18 15:09 Kreator014: how cute
2015-10-18 15:09 _underjoy: but it's hard
2015-10-18 15:09 Kreator014: no it's undermapped and Homo
2015-10-18 15:09 _underjoy: I will probably remap the burst in some way
2015-10-18 15:09 _underjoy: undermapped?
2015-10-18 15:10 Kreator014: the js in the chorus is like
2015-10-18 15:10 Kreator014: really undermapped
2015-10-18 15:10 _underjoy: oh lol okay
2015-10-18 15:10 _underjoy: I can make it dense
2015-10-18 15:11 Kreator014: should be like
2015-10-18 15:11 Kreator014: handstream
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: also there's way too many trills like
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: stop
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: half of the map is asian trills
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: jej
2015-10-18 15:12 _underjoy: y u no like trills
2015-10-18 15:12 Kreator014: cuz they look bad
2015-10-18 15:15 _underjoy: 200 handstream looks mean
2015-10-18 15:15 Kreator014: 01:06:220 - this part is bad to play
2015-10-18 15:16 _underjoy: what do
2015-10-18 15:16 Kreator014: make the trill not super gay
2015-10-18 15:17 Kreator014: also i remapped 01:08:170 - 01:12:670 - for you so you can look at that for an example on how to do stuff
2015-10-18 15:17 Kreator014: also cut down on the anchors there's a lot of them
2015-10-18 15:17 _underjoy: most are intentional though
2015-10-18 15:17 Kreator014: that is not how you do jumpstream
2015-10-18 15:17 Kreator014: up to 3 is fine but when you get to 4 that's when it starts going down
2015-10-18 15:18 Kreator014: 5 is a no-no zone and if you do that you're gay
2015-10-18 15:18 _underjoy: huhuu
2015-10-18 15:18 _underjoy: well it was meant to be a bit gay with those trills and anchors
2015-10-18 15:18 _underjoy: but i will listen to you
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: there's good gay and bad gay
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: you did the bad gay thing
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: ):
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: http://puu.sh/kOzcQ/98385aa711.osu
2015-10-18 15:19 _underjoy: damn
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: here's my remapped version of the first 4 or so seconds of the js
2015-10-18 15:19 Kreator014: 01:07:870 -
2015-10-18 15:20 Kreator014: (those anchors are fine because this is dense ok)
2015-10-18 15:21 _underjoy: oh wow
2015-10-18 15:21 _underjoy: its dense
2015-10-18 15:21 Kreator014: that's what it's supposed to look like
2015-10-18 15:21 Kreator014: 01:12:670 (72670|0,72770|0,72870|0) - p.s. i accidentally made this and it's really gay and horrible
2015-10-18 15:22 _underjoy: 01:11:470 (71470|0,71470|2,71470|3,71695|0,71695|1,71695|3,71920|3,71920|1,71920|2) -
2015-10-18 15:22 _underjoy: why is this hand and earlier jump
2015-10-18 15:23 Kreator014: vocals
2015-10-18 15:23 Kreator014: it says so ok
2015-10-18 15:23 Kreator014: that's what my brain said
2015-10-18 15:24 _underjoy: oh k
2015-10-18 15:24 _underjoy: 01:13:270 -
2015-10-18 15:24 _underjoy: what about this
2015-10-18 15:25 Kreator014: listen to the vocals and map accordingly
2015-10-18 15:26 Kreator014: p.s. remove the anchors jesus fuq
2015-10-18 15:26 _underjoy: I tried to map accordingly to vocals and made anchors :<
2015-10-18 15:27 Kreator014: in that case
2015-10-18 15:27 Kreator014: 01:15:970 (75970|0,75970|2) - ??????
2015-10-18 15:27 Kreator014: 01:16:270 (76270|0,76270|1) - even more ?????????
2015-10-18 15:27 _underjoy: well I meant rather
2015-10-18 15:28 _underjoy: 01:13:420 (73420|3,73420|0,73570|3,73570|2,73720|3,73720|0,73870|0,73870|1,74020|2,74020|1,74170|1,74170|0,74320|2,74320|1) -
2015-10-18 15:28 _underjoy: but yeah those are by mistake
2015-10-18 15:28 Kreator014: jejjin
2015-10-18 15:30 _underjoy: any comment on this 02:39:670 -
2015-10-18 15:31 Kreator014: kill yourself
2015-10-18 15:31 _underjoy: but
2015-10-18 15:31 _underjoy: why
2015-10-18 15:31 _underjoy: the pattern is perfectly doable and fits
2015-10-18 15:31 Kreator014: because euhguehguehg
2015-10-18 15:31 Kreator014: is this a valid reason
2015-10-18 15:32 _underjoy: nope
2015-10-18 15:32 _underjoy: people's left hand needs some love too
2015-10-18 15:32 Kreator014: plasease no
2015-10-18 15:32 Kreator014: ))):
2015-10-18 15:33 _underjoy: yess
2015-10-18 15:33 Kreator014: m8 if i say no everyone else will too
2015-10-18 15:33 Kreator014: ):
2015-10-18 15:33 _underjoy: 03:12:080 -
2015-10-18 15:33 _underjoy: I know this is bad
2015-10-18 15:33 _underjoy: well the pattern is simple but its so hard execute
2015-10-18 15:34 _underjoy: and I don't want do make it full jumptrillable because its boring
2015-10-18 15:34 Kreator014: jesus fuck that's hard to read
2015-10-18 15:34 Kreator014: this is like
2015-10-18 15:34 Kreator014: 7 star map tier shit
2015-10-18 15:34 _underjoy: yeah that's why
2015-10-18 15:34 _underjoy: blue planet but more gay
2015-10-18 15:35 Kreator014: this looks nothing like blue planet
2015-10-18 15:35 _underjoy: more like gay planet haha
2015-10-18 15:36 Kreator014: you should really make it a lot less dense
2015-10-18 15:36 Kreator014: like holy shit this is worse than icyworld
2015-10-18 15:36 _underjoy: damn
2015-10-18 15:37 Kreator014: this pattern is almost nvlm tier
2015-10-18 15:37 Kreator014: jej
2015-10-18 15:37 _underjoy: but idk, less dense?
2015-10-18 15:37 Kreator014: yes less dense
2015-10-18 15:37 Kreator014: remove some of the jumps
2015-10-18 15:37 _underjoy: :< :< :<
2015-10-18 15:38 _underjoy: okay
2015-10-18 15:38 _underjoy: if I remove 2/3 of the jumps will it be k
2015-10-18 15:38 Kreator014: probably
2015-10-18 15:39 _underjoy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3831243
2015-10-18 15:40 Kreator014: http://puu.sh/kOAar/60c03f301e.png
2015-10-18 15:40 Kreator014: http://puu.sh/kOAaT/62b0477c67.png
2015-10-18 15:40 Kreator014: jej
2015-10-18 15:42 _underjoy: jej
2015-10-18 15:42 _underjoy: lemme think
2015-10-18 15:48 _underjoy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3831276
2015-10-18 15:48 _underjoy: and this
2015-10-18 15:50 _underjoy: also I don't think handstream is really needed because I use hands for the crashes, I will stick to the jumpstream using your suggestions though
2015-10-18 15:50 Kreator014: imo handstream would work better in that part but okay
2015-10-18 16:14 _underjoy: you can post the irc to get kds
2015-10-18 16:14 Kreator014: oh yeah forgot
2015-10-18 16:14 Kreator014: will do it soon
jej applied
NlHIL
856 posts
Joined December 2013
NlHIL
[Tidek's Easy]
nice vocal mapping!

00:10:570 - 00:10:720 - add?
00:48:970 - 00:49:120 - add?
↑joke

↓serious
02:48:670 (168670|1) - kill and add to 02:48:595 - 02:48:820 -
02:58:270 (178270|2) - ^
[Normal]
00:39:370 - 00:39:520 - 00:39:820 - add
01:56:170 - 01:56:320 - 01:56:620 - ^

01:07:270 (67270|1) - end at 01:08:470 -
01:12:670 (72670|1) - ^
01:22:270 (82270|2) - change to 2 LNs?
[Hard]
00:38:670 - 00:38:870 - why not add ;w;
00:55:170 (55170|3) - ?
01:00:070 - a,,add?
01:07:120 - add 2 notes
[Insane]
00:50:170 (50170|1,50370|1) - lol
01:00:070 - mmmmmmmmm....ok
01:07:270 (67270|0,67270|2,67270|3) - ........what?

NlHIL dead
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
_underjoy

NlHIL wrote:

[Tidek's Easy]
nice vocal mapping!

00:10:570 - 00:10:720 - add?
00:48:970 - 00:49:120 - add?
↑joke

↓serious
02:48:670 (168670|1) - kill and add to 02:48:595 - 02:48:820 -
02:58:270 (178270|2) - ^
[Normal]
00:39:370 - 00:39:520 - 00:39:820 - add ok
01:56:170 - 01:56:320 - 01:56:620 - ^ ok

01:07:270 (67270|1) - end at 01:08:470 - no
01:12:670 (72670|1) - ^ the lns got remapped to 1/3 notes
01:22:270 (82270|2) - change to 2 LNs? ^
[Hard]
00:38:670 - 00:38:870 - why not add ;w; Hard is quite draining already
00:55:170 (55170|3) - ? it's for the dubstepz
01:00:070 - a,,add? ok
01:07:120 - add 2 notes done
[Insane]
00:50:170 (50170|1,50370|1) - lol dubstepz
01:00:070 - mmmmmmmmm....ok yeah added and fixed the patterns
01:07:270 (67270|0,67270|2,67270|3) - ........what? what's wrong with it?

NlHIL dead rip
Thanks for the mod!
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Tidek

NlHIL wrote:

[Tidek's Easy]
nice vocal mapping!

00:10:570 - 00:10:720 - add?
00:48:970 - 00:49:120 - add?
↑joke nice joke

↓serious applied
02:48:670 (168670|1) - kill and add to 02:48:595 - 02:48:820 -
02:58:270 (178270|2) - ^
Thanks for mod!

http://puu.sh/kQVpx/dbbd7d859b.txt
XeoStyle
390 posts
Joined October 2013
XeoStyle
YOYOYOYEAHYEAH ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)/

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General Check
The quality of the BG is a little bad no ?
The timing and the metadata looks good for me

OK LET'S DO TIHS ! (it's exactly 6 PM)

Tidek's Easy
00:18:270 (18270|2) - Move to 1 ?
00:37:470 (37470|2) - ^
01:43:870 (103870|2,104170|3) - CTRL + G ?
01:44:670 (104670|1) - move to 2 ?
01:54:270 (114270|2) - ^
02:41:920 (161920|1) - move to 2 ?
03:19:362 (199362|2,199641|3) - CTRL + G ?
03:20:106 (200106|1) - move to 2 ?

Normal
00:41:170 (41170|2,41320|3) - CTRL + G ? (Looks good with the voice)
00:48:970 add LN maybe ?
01:38:170 (98170|0) - remove ?
01:56:920 (116920|1,116995|3,117070|0) - seems a little bit hard for beginners player no ?
01:14:470 (74470|3,74620|1,74770|3,74920|2,75070|0,75220|1,75370|3,75520|2,75670|0,75820|1,75970|2,76120|3) - Looks better like this imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3841483
01:38:170 (98170|0) - remove ?
01:56:920 (116920|1,116995|3,117070|0) - STAP WITH TIHS :x
The ending is good.

good job on this one, look pretty fun for beginner players.

Hard
00:46:645 (46645|3,46720|2) - Move 1 time to the left, looks better.
01:01:495 (61495|1,61570|0) - CTRL + G
01:35:470 (95470|1) - move to 2 so the chord is better.
01:42:745 (102745|0,102820|1,102895|2,102970|3,103045|1,103120|2,103195|3,103270|1,103345|2,103420|0,103495|1,103570|2,103645|3) - Isn't this a little bit too much upper stair pattern ?
02:18:295 (138295|2,138370|3) - CTRL + G

Insane
00:50:170 (50170|1,50370|1) - What the
00:54:970 (54970|2,55170|2) - fuck is this ? x)
01:23:470 (83470|3,83470|0,83545|2,83620|3,83695|2,83770|0,83770|3,83845|1,83920|0,83995|1) - Not a big fan of this kind of pattern, but it looks playable anyway, so I dunno.
01:34:270 (94270|3,94420|2) - a double LN is better than 2 little no ?
01:39:070 (99070|0,99070|1,99145|3,99220|2,99295|3,99370|0,99370|1,99445|2,99520|3,99595|2) - Like is said upper, not a big fan.
02:06:970 (126970|2,127170|2) - ewwww
02:11:770 (131770|1,131970|1) - ewwww²

Isolation
00:50:170 (50170|0,50170|1,50370|0,50370|1) - I'm gonna stop complaining about theses thing, since you seems to like them x)
00:59:320 (59320|1,59395|2,59470|1,59545|2,59620|1,59695|2,59770|1,59845|2,59920|1,59995|2) - Looks a little bit more fun like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3841788
01:01:720 (61720|0,61795|3,61870|0,61945|3,62020|0,62095|3,62170|0,62245|3,62320|0,62395|3) - ^
01:04:120 (64120|2,64195|1,64270|2,64345|1,64420|2,64495|1,64570|2,64645|1,64720|2,64795|1) - ^
(if you applie this, they are some more at 02:16:120 )
02:39:670 (159670|0,159670|2,159670|3) - as a lefty person, I approve this trill owo)b (and more seriously, people gonna maybe complain about it, keep it in mind :P )

Sorry for this diff, my modding skill isn't really good with high diff maps... :/

+ 4K PP MAP, LET IT RAIN YAYAYAYAY

It's now 8 PM and my head hurts as fuck, no more eurobeat vocaloid for me :lol:
Anyway, GL for rank doodz, this mapset looks fun as hell !
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
_underjoy

XeoStyle wrote:

YOYOYOYEAHYEAH ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)/

 ___ ___ ___ ___ 
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |  (4K)

General Check
The quality of the BG is a little bad no ? taken from std mapset, dunno :<
The timing and the metadata looks good for me

OK LET'S DO TIHS ! (it's exactly 6 PM)

Tidek's Easy
00:18:270 (18270|2) - Move to 1 ?
00:37:470 (37470|2) - ^
01:43:870 (103870|2,104170|3) - CTRL + G ?
01:44:670 (104670|1) - move to 2 ?
01:54:270 (114270|2) - ^
02:41:920 (161920|1) - move to 2 ?
03:19:362 (199362|2,199641|3) - CTRL + G ?
03:20:106 (200106|1) - move to 2 ?

Normal
00:41:170 (41170|2,41320|3) - CTRL + G ? (Looks good with the voice) sure
00:48:970 add LN maybe ? okay
01:38:170 (98170|0) - remove ? no, why?
01:56:920 (116920|1,116995|3,117070|0) - seems a little bit hard for beginners player no ? lol of course, note placed by accident
01:14:470 (74470|3,74620|1,74770|3,74920|2,75070|0,75220|1,75370|3,75520|2,75670|0,75820|1,75970|2,76120|3) - Looks better like this imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3841483 ok
01:38:170 (98170|0) - remove ? nope
01:56:920 (116920|1,116995|3,117070|0) - STAP WITH TIHS :x what's wrong with it?
The ending is good.

good job on this one, look pretty fun for beginner players. \:D/

Hard
00:46:645 (46645|3,46720|2) - Move 1 time to the left, looks better. sure
01:01:495 (61495|1,61570|0) - CTRL + G okay
01:35:470 (95470|1) - move to 2 so the chord is better. cannot, the structure is always 12 or 34
01:42:745 (102745|0,102820|1,102895|2,102970|3,103045|1,103120|2,103195|3,103270|1,103345|2,103420|0,103495|1,103570|2,103645|3) - Isn't this a little bit too much upper stair pattern ? changed a bit
02:18:295 (138295|2,138370|3) - CTRL + G

Insane
00:50:170 (50170|1,50370|1) - What the
00:54:970 (54970|2,55170|2) - fuck is this ? x) y u no like dubstepz wtf what is wrong with all of you
01:23:470 (83470|3,83470|0,83545|2,83620|3,83695|2,83770|0,83770|3,83845|1,83920|0,83995|1) - Not a big fan of this kind of pattern, but it looks playable anyway, so I dunno. trills are cool
01:34:270 (94270|3,94420|2) - a double LN is better than 2 little no ? there is a pitch switch (lol), plus I can't make a 2-chord with the double LN so no
01:39:070 (99070|0,99070|1,99145|3,99220|2,99295|3,99370|0,99370|1,99445|2,99520|3,99595|2) - Like is said upper, not a big fan. trills are love
02:06:970 (126970|2,127170|2) - ewwww
02:11:770 (131770|1,131970|1) - ewwww² dubbzzzzz

Isolation
00:50:170 (50170|0,50170|1,50370|0,50370|1) - I'm gonna stop complaining about theses thing, since you seems to like them x) :D
00:59:320 (59320|1,59395|2,59470|1,59545|2,59620|1,59695|2,59770|1,59845|2,59920|1,59995|2) - Looks a little bit more fun like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3841788 why didn't I think of that pattern before
01:01:720 (61720|0,61795|3,61870|0,61945|3,62020|0,62095|3,62170|0,62245|3,62320|0,62395|3) - ^
01:04:120 (64120|2,64195|1,64270|2,64345|1,64420|2,64495|1,64570|2,64645|1,64720|2,64795|1) - ^
(if you applie this, they are some more at 02:16:120 ) yup
02:39:670 (159670|0,159670|2,159670|3) - as a lefty person, I approve this trill owo)b (and more seriously, people gonna maybe complain about it, keep it in mind :P ) I love it, so I will just say no :D

Sorry for this diff, my modding skill isn't really good with high diff maps... :/

+ 4K PP MAP, LET IT RAIN YAYAYAYAY

It's now 8 PM and my head hurts as fuck, no more eurobeat vocaloid for me :lol:
Anyway, GL for rank doodz, this mapset looks fun as hell !
Thanks a lot man! <3
Vygatron
61 posts
Joined November 2013
Vygatron

XeoStyle wrote:

eurobeat vocaloid
kej
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Tidek

XeoStyle wrote:

Tidek's Easy
00:18:270 (18270|2) - Move to 1 ?
00:37:470 (37470|2) - ^
01:43:870 (103870|2,104170|3) - CTRL + G ?
01:44:670 (104670|1) - move to 2 ?
01:54:270 (114270|2) - ^
02:41:920 (161920|1) - move to 2 ?
03:19:362 (199362|2,199641|3) - CTRL + G ?
03:20:106 (200106|1) - move to 2 ?
!
I have to reject all, because I want to follow pitch here, sorry ;; but thanks for work!.
XeoStyle
390 posts
Joined October 2013
XeoStyle

Vygatron wrote:

XeoStyle wrote:

eurobeat vocaloid
kej
oui
juankristal
osu! Alumni
1,408 posts
Joined August 2010
juankristal
Before modding:

- Map is really fun! :D

-
LOLOLOO

- DAFUQ WITH THE 12 TRILL

Will be back with a mod
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,772 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
Ninja ninja ninja ninja

Ok, i see that sexy 5 stars. Music is ok. Will do insane and isolation.

Gameplay Feedback

Isolation: Hate the trills (personal skill issues) love the jacks and jumps. Ending is boring and will need a diff raise (Add LNs or do triple-doubles)

Insane: Underrated. Really good. I'll try to nitpick mod this. (Can't)

Can only give feedback. Really like the map. Can't really mod anything. *throws stars
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
_underjoy

Lenfried- wrote:

Ninja ninja ninja ninja

Ok, i see that sexy 5 stars. Music is ok. Will do insane and isolation.

Gameplay Feedback

Isolation: Hate the trills (personal skill issues) love the jacks and jumps. Ending is boring and will need a diff raise (Add LNs or do triple-doubles)

Insane: Underrated. Really good. I'll try to nitpick mod this. (Can't)

Can only give feedback. Really like the map. Can't really mod anything. *throws stars
Thanks for the stars! Also, I added tripledoubles on Isolation!
Shoegazer
osu!mania Paragon
528 posts
Joined April 2013
Shoegazer
You're supposed to type a fruit but I'll mod your map anyway for various reasons.

SPOILER
[Isolation]
Good chart, one of the better ones going for rank in my opinion. Not enough SVs. Have some SVs similar to the one in Violet Soul. Make it jam.

00:02:170 - Missing note.
00:08:770 - Not sure about layering this sound straight away, I think the piano still has prominence at least. You can layer sounds like 00:09:070 - and 00:09:670 - , but I don't think there's a need to layer anything else other than the piano.
00:15:170 - You can probably make these doubles more like a jumpglut rather than just 2 separate jumptrills. Something like this seems fine.
00:39:970 - The main issue with this section is that the triplets are inconsistent. It's not layered incorrectly, but there's a lot of triplets with no hidden minijacks and lots of triplets that have minijacks. Try to stick with one type, preferably the latter as there's more variation and it's generally a lot more satisfying to play through.
00:48:970 - Layer vocals here, there's not much reason to keep this empty.
00:50:470 - The entire section doesn't have the vocals layered at all, which makes the chart rather... uneven/uncomfortable to play through. It doesn't give you a proper base, and you're not layering the most prominent part of the song. Would recommend layering the vocals to some extent here. Sections like 00:59:020 - to 01:03:370 - are sections that you definitely need to layer vocals into I feel. You don't have to rearrange much, if at all. I think the notes are fine, it's just missing something prominent.
00:50:620 - Add a note here for vocals, a 4 is fine.
01:08:170 - Layer vocals here, there's not much reason to keep this empty.
01:11:170 - Shift to [24] for better fluency.
01:11:245 - Shift this to 1 for ^.
01:12:870 - Try something like this, though I'm not sure whether or not you'd be fond of the separate jumpgluts.
01:13:870 - Shift this to [24] to create some accentuation for the vocals, since the syllable on 01:13:870 - is very similar phonetically to the one before. Move 01:13:945 - to 1 as well for fluency.
01:14:170 - Would recommend you to do something similar to the point above, but it's harder to do so I can understand why you'd avoid doing something like this.
01:17:320 - Change the burst to something like [14]234[12] for symmetry for the burst right after, it's also easier overall.
01:21:445 - Something like 1[24]3[12]4 would be more fluent.
01:21:820 - Change this to a [14][23][14] jumptrill, but this is optional because there's a lot of things that you'd have to change right after anyway.
01:23:470 - Move to [24] for the same reason in 1:13.870.
01:25:120 - Move to [13] for the same reason above.
01:25:270 - Would be better to layer doubles to the vocals and only the vocals. It's certainly more prominent than the kicks or whatever you're layering to. Basically layer 01:25:720 - but not 01:25:570 - .
01:28:270 - Not enough of a prominent sound to layer as a jumptrill, a normal trill would be fine.
01:33:370 - ^, but you can do a little more than just a normal trill here. Not sure what in particular.
01:37:870 - Try to avoid as many [12]3[14]2[12] (and mirrored variants) if possible. Pattern is generally really uncomfortable to hit through. Tried to rearrange the jumpstream for you, but it probably didn't come out too well. http://puu.sh/kVzLk/ddb616ab77.jpg
01:39:070 - I see what you're doing here (01:39:370 - with the same double because of how they complement each other), but you'd have to use a [12] or [34] double to accentuate it better. Probably [34] since you did the same thing with [12] a stanza later.

The mod for the first set of verses/bridge can be applied to the second set of verses and bridge.

02:39:670 - '_>' (at the very least just use a 323 or 232 trill)
02:46:120 - Shift to [24]1 for vocal accentuation and fluency.
02:47:395 - Shift to 1[24].
02:49:170 - Change this double to a [13], you can be a bit more unforgiving with your patterning now because it's more intense.
02:49:795 - Rolly jumpstream is never fun to hit to begin with unless you're playing it on like 1.4-1.5x rate or so. I think you can base the patterns in 02:50:770 - instead, I'm fond of the patterns in this part.
02:51:745 - Shift to [23]1 for vocal accentuation.
02:52:420 - Should be a double, I think [12] is ideal, since this syllable complements the one before it. Would have to do some rearranging however.
02:58:870 - Move to [24]. Don't see much of a reason to have it at [34], since the jumpglut before it doesn't have any emphasis (e.g. [34][34]) on anything.
03:00:070 - Shift to [24]3 for vocal accentuation and fluency.
03:02:020 - Refer to 02:52:420 -, but the double should be [14].
03:08:360 - r u trying to boost star rating here sry bro0o0 i can't let u do that i am the sr polis (Not sure if it's actually the first time sounds like this actually occur, if it is then disregard this, I never saw this pattern in the chart before)
03:15:734 - Try something like this.

Will make some mod for SVs when I'm not lazy with that silly SV calculator I made. Good chart overall.
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
_underjoy

Shoegazer wrote:

You're supposed to type a fruit but I'll mod your map anyway for various reasons.

SPOILER
[Isolation]
Good chart, one of the better ones going for rank in my opinion. Not enough SVs. Have some SVs similar to the one in Violet Soul. Make it jam.

00:02:170 - Missing note. Added, also added one later
00:08:770 - Not sure about layering this sound straight away, I think the piano still has prominence at least. You can layer sounds like 00:09:070 - and 00:09:670 - , but I don't think there's a need to layer anything else other than the piano. k, mapped only piano
00:15:170 - You can probably make these doubles more like a jumpglut rather than just 2 separate jumptrills. Something like this seems fine. ok
00:39:970 - The main issue with this section is that the triplets are inconsistent. It's not layered incorrectly, but there's a lot of triplets with no hidden minijacks and lots of triplets that have minijacks. Try to stick with one type, preferably the latter as there's more variation and it's generally a lot more satisfying to play through. revised the whole section
00:48:970 - Layer vocals here, there's not much reason to keep this empty. sure
00:50:470 - The entire section doesn't have the vocals layered at all, which makes the chart rather... uneven/uncomfortable to play through. It doesn't give you a proper base, and you're not layering the most prominent part of the song. Would recommend layering the vocals to some extent here. Sections like 00:59:020 - to 01:03:370 - are sections that you definitely need to layer vocals into I feel. You don't have to rearrange much, if at all. I think the notes are fine, it's just missing something prominent. I added some vocals, and I made a LN-heavy part later according to vocals, should be fine
00:50:620 - Add a note here for vocals, a 4 is fine. added 2 instead
01:08:170 - Layer vocals here, there's not much reason to keep this empty. kk
01:11:170 - Shift to [24] for better fluency. k
01:11:245 - Shift this to 1 for ^.
01:12:870 - Try something like this, though I'm not sure whether or not you'd be fond of the separate jumpgluts. I like it as it is currently
01:13:870 - Shift this to [24] to create some accentuation for the vocals, since the syllable on 01:13:870 - is very similar phonetically to the one before. Move 01:13:945 - to 1 as well for fluency. sure
01:14:170 - Would recommend you to do something similar to the point above, but it's harder to do so I can understand why you'd avoid doing something like this. yeah, no change here
01:17:320 - Change the burst to something like [14]234[12] for symmetry for the burst right after, it's also easier overall. okay
01:21:445 - Something like 1[24]3[12]4 would be more fluent. done, also rearranged a bit
01:21:820 - Change this to a [14][23][14] jumptrill, but this is optional because there's a lot of things that you'd have to change right after anyway. changed to [13][24][13] and revised
01:23:470 - Move to [24] for the same reason in 1:13.870. this would create a big anchor I can't get rid of. No change
01:25:120 - Move to [13] for the same reason above. k
01:25:270 - Would be better to layer doubles to the vocals and only the vocals. It's certainly more prominent than the kicks or whatever you're layering to. Basically layer 01:25:720 - but not 01:25:570 - . okay
01:28:270 - Not enough of a prominent sound to layer as a jumptrill, a normal trill would be fine. fine, kept the first and last note though
01:33:370 - ^, but you can do a little more than just a normal trill here. Not sure what in particular. deleted two notes from there
01:37:870 - Try to avoid as many [12]3[14]2[12] (and mirrored variants) if possible. Pattern is generally really uncomfortable to hit through. Tried to rearrange the jumpstream for you, but it probably didn't come out too well. http://puu.sh/kVzLk/ddb616ab77.jpg it is neat, I rearranged it to fit nicely
01:39:070 - I see what you're doing here (01:39:370 - with the same double because of how they complement each other), but you'd have to use a [12] or [34] double to accentuate it better. Probably [34] since you did the same thing with [12] a stanza later. I don't see a way to make it work, [14] stay (i switched some of the patterns though)

The mod for the first set of verses/bridge can be applied to the second set of verses and bridge.

02:39:670 - '_>' (at the very least just use a 323 or 232 trill) no change, trill is cool
02:46:120 - Shift to [24]1 for vocal accentuation and fluency. yup
02:47:395 - Shift to 1[24]. yup
02:49:170 - Change this double to a [13], you can be a bit more unforgiving with your patterning now because it's more intense. lol okay
02:49:795 - Rolly jumpstream is never fun to hit to begin with unless you're playing it on like 1.4-1.5x rate or so. I think you can base the patterns in 02:50:770 - instead, I'm fond of the patterns in this part. I made something interesting
02:51:745 - Shift to [23]1 for vocal accentuation. ?? I think I understood what you meant though
02:52:420 - Should be a double, I think [12] is ideal, since this syllable complements the one before it. Would have to do some rearranging however. I managed to do it somehow
02:58:870 - Move to [24]. Don't see much of a reason to have it at [34], since the jumpglut before it doesn't have any emphasis (e.g. [34][34]) on anything. done
03:00:070 - Shift to [24]3 for vocal accentuation and fluency. yup
03:02:020 - Refer to 02:52:420 -, but the double should be [14]. rearranged and done
03:08:360 - r u trying to boost star rating here sry bro0o0 i can't let u do that i am the sr polis (Not sure if it's actually the first time sounds like this actually occur, if it is then disregard this, I never saw this pattern in the chart before) this sound is k, and it's for the first time
03:15:734 - Try something like this. I had to change some patterns but did it

Will make some mod for SVs when I'm not lazy with that silly SV calculator I made. Good chart overall. jej
Thanks for the great mod (as always)! :D
Also sorry for the fruit name, let it be banana! I love bananas!
Valedict
242 posts
Joined April 2013
Valedict
Helloooo

I return from my 10,000 year nap to mod your Insane difficulty

(Only highlighted the starts of the sections I pointed out since copying all of it would break the page and make my post xbox hueg)


[Insane]
00:58:870 (58870|3) - No reason for this part to not include the LNs from Isolation, consider adding them.

01:00:220 (60220|1,60220|0) - This part is confusing, in Isolation you strictly follow the vocals but in Insane you go for the synth and then at that singular moment, you include a few LNs that go to the vocals. Pick one or the other I'd say, it would make more sense that way.

01:06:520 (66520|2) - This looks a lot harder than the way you mapped it in Isolation, either make these doubles or change the way this stream looks. Perhaps make a mirror of the same pattern from Isolation and paste it there? Not much you can do with two triples going into a triple chord.

01:12:870 (72870|3,72870|2) - Transitioning out of streams into a 4 note jackhammer is weird, especially how you they're jumpjacks in Isolation. http://puu.sh/kYIHf/856ab2c322.png <- Something like this maybe? Or you could make it a slow jumptrill, and that'd be fine for Insane diff.

01:22:470 (82470|1,82470|0) - ^Same here.

02:17:020 (137020|2,137020|3) - Same as my comments about 01:00:220, but it's all up to you really

Apart from all of that, I think you did a pretty good job with this difficulty and I'm looking forward to seeing it ranked.
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
_underjoy

Valedict wrote:

Helloooo

I return from my 10,000 year nap to mod your Insane difficulty

(Only highlighted the starts of the sections I pointed out since copying all of it would break the page and make my post xbox hueg)


[Insane]
00:58:870 (58870|3) - No reason for this part to not include the LNs from Isolation, consider adding them. Fixed all the diffs

01:00:220 (60220|1,60220|0) - This part is confusing, in Isolation you strictly follow the vocals but in Insane you go for the synth and then at that singular moment, you include a few LNs that go to the vocals. Pick one or the other I'd say, it would make more sense that way. welp

01:06:520 (66520|2) - This looks a lot harder than the way you mapped it in Isolation, either make these doubles or change the way this stream looks. Perhaps make a mirror of the same pattern from Isolation and paste it there? Not much you can do with two triples going into a triple chord.
done

01:12:870 (72870|3,72870|2) - Transitioning out of streams into a 4 note jackhammer is weird, especially how you they're jumpjacks in Isolation. http://puu.sh/kYIHf/856ab2c322.png <- Something like this maybe? Or you could make it a slow jumptrill, and that'd be fine for Insane diff. no change here, sorry :<

01:22:470 (82470|1,82470|0) - ^Same here. ^

02:17:020 (137020|2,137020|3) - Same as my comments about 01:00:220, but it's all up to you really done

Apart from all of that, I think you did a pretty good job with this difficulty and I'm looking forward to seeing it ranked.
Thanks for the mod! :D
Tidek
1,571 posts
Joined March 2011
Tidek
Big irc SV mod on isolation difficulty, now it looks and flows a lot better.

SPOILER
19:47 Tidek: dobra
19:47 Tidek: irc?
19:48 _underjoy: k
19:48 Tidek: minuta
19:48 Tidek: zagram jedno gówno
19:48 Tidek: xD
19:49 Tidek: dobra
19:50 Tidek: sv wpierw
19:50 *Tidek is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/785580 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos [Isolation]]
19:54 Tidek: 00:09:670 - to sv tutaj
19:55 Tidek: nie potrzebnie robisz przyspieszenie od tego momentu
19:55 Tidek: bo dalej jest calm part
19:55 Tidek: polecam zrobić coś takiego http://puu.sh/laxox/7417d6d902.png
19:55 Tidek: żeby przyspieszenie było od tego momentu 00:10:570 - i płynne
19:56 Tidek: bo tutaj rozpoczyna się intensywność
19:58 _underjoy: done
19:58 Tidek: ok, teraz sugestia
19:58 Tidek: bo takich momentów jest w tej nucie pełno
19:58 Tidek: 00:18:070 - 
19:58 Tidek: na te 3chordy można zrobić lekkie SV bumpy
19:59 Tidek: nie mocne, ale lekkie
19:59 _underjoy: wlasnie tez chcialem to zrobic :<
19:59 _underjoy: tylko nie umiem tego dobrze wsadzic
19:59 Tidek: ok
19:59 Tidek: tylko pamiętaj, ten moment 00:18:670 - już na 1x
19:59 Tidek: bo by był rozpierdól z reading
19:59 Tidek: tylko na 3chordy z przerwami
20:00 Tidek: ok więc tak
20:00 Tidek: ustaw beat snapa na 1/6
20:00 Tidek: i zaraz ci wyślę cyferki
20:03 Tidek: http://puu.sh/laxXi/ac42e3dd4d.jpg
20:04 Tidek: uznałem że taka siła będzie najodpowiedniejsza
20:04 Tidek: jeśli chcesz mocniejsze/słabsze to wystarczy że proporcjonalnie wartości oddalisz i przybliżysz do zera
20:04 Tidek: do 1,0*
20:04 Tidek: a nie zera xD
20:06 Tidek: http://puu.sh/lay5W/50a862b891.jpg
20:06 Tidek: poprawiony screen
20:06 Tidek: bo nie widać wszystkich wartości
20:07 _underjoy: oki
20:07 _underjoy: hmm wczesniej mialem takie na 1.25/0.75
20:07 _underjoy: ale nie tak plynne
20:09 Tidek: jeśli ci to odpowiada, to robisz to samo: 00:37:270 - 01:26:470 - 01:34:870 - 01:44:470 - 01:54:070 - 02:53:170 - 03:02:770 - 03:10:937 - 03:19:920 - 
20:09 Tidek: trochę roboty
20:09 Tidek: więc napisz jak skończysz
20:10 _underjoy: wim
20:10 Tidek: uznałem żeby nie robić za mocnych
20:10 Tidek: więc 1,2 będzie idealne
20:10 Tidek: bo tam i tak w chuj gęsto od notek
20:12 _underjoy: wait
20:12 _underjoy: tam niektore sa na 1/4 nie na 1/6
20:12 _underjoy: zrobic sv w srodku?
20:12 Tidek: timeline
20:13 _underjoy: 01:26:470 -
20:13 Tidek: a no tak, rzeczywiście
20:13 Tidek: ustawiasz wtedy na 1/8
20:13 Tidek: i ten moment 01:26:582 - 
20:13 Tidek: itd
20:13 Tidek: wartości te same
20:19 _underjoy: waaait
20:19 _underjoy: 02:53:170 -
20:19 _underjoy: w środku kiai?
20:20 Tidek: nom
20:20 Tidek: co za problem
20:20 _underjoy: w pierwszym też?
20:20 Tidek: nom
20:20 Tidek: kiai ma być cały czas włączone
20:31 Tidek: dajesz radę?
20:31 Tidek: xD
20:32 Tidek: a właśnie w tym momencie
20:32 Tidek: zapomniałem
20:32 Tidek: że jest przyspieszenie
20:33 Tidek: musisz inne wartości użyć
20:33 _underjoy: daje xD
20:33 Tidek: 03:10:937 - 
20:33 _underjoy: ok
20:34 Tidek: robisz SV względem 0,85
20:34 Tidek: 0,95*
20:34 Tidek: a nie 1,0
20:34 Tidek: czyli 0,75/1,15
20:34 _underjoy: k
20:34 Tidek: nie wiem czy to matemtycznie jest prawidłowo
20:35 Tidek: nie chcę mi się liczyć
20:35 Tidek: ale to jest różnica błędu max 1-2 setnych
20:35 Tidek: a tego nie widać
20:35 Tidek: xD
20:35 Tidek: 03:19:920 - za to tutaj 0,73/1,13
20:36 Tidek: tylko pamiętaj ze jako pierwsza zielona linia to 1,13
20:36 Tidek: abyś na odwrót nie jebnął xD
20:38 _underjoy: oki oki xD
20:38 _underjoy: 1,15
20:39 _underjoy: aa tam dobra
20:39 Tidek: czemu 1,15
20:39 Tidek: różnica ma być 0,2
20:39 Tidek: xD
20:39 Tidek: done?
20:40 _underjoy: done
20:40 Tidek: ok jedziemy dalej
20:40 Tidek: 01:37:270 - 
20:40 Tidek: nie wiem coś pan tutaj odjebał
20:40 Tidek: ale tutaj jest idealna okazja na mocnego bumpa
20:41 _underjoy: sv?
20:41 Tidek: więc prawidłowo to powinno tak wyglądać: http://puu.sh/laAwK/cc9b30783a.jpg
20:41 Tidek: no o sv cały czas piszemy
20:41 _underjoy: k
20:41 Tidek: jeśli boisz się 1,75/0,25
20:41 Tidek: możesz osłabić do 1,5
20:41 Tidek: ale myślę że 1,75 jest idealne
20:42 _underjoy: tbh wczesniej tez byl bump
20:42 Tidek: tak
20:42 _underjoy: ale uznalem ze przejebane i zrobilem to xD
20:42 Tidek: tylko ujowym
20:42 Tidek: ujowy*
20:42 Tidek: bo postawiłeś typowo linie na 1/4
20:42 Tidek: bez żadnego odbicia
20:43 Tidek: nie jestem pewny co do tego przyspieszenia wcześniej
20:43 Tidek: muzycznie pasuje
20:43 _underjoy: k zrobione
20:43 Tidek: ale hmm
20:43 Tidek: not sure
20:43 Tidek: w sumie
20:43 Tidek: dobre wejście do tego mocnego bumpa jest
20:43 Tidek: więc może zostać
20:43 Tidek: jedziemy dalej
20:43 _underjoy: 02:44:470 -
20:43 _underjoy: wat here
20:43 Tidek: czekaj
20:43 Tidek: pokolei
20:43 Tidek: xD
20:44 Tidek: 02:25:270 - 
20:45 Tidek: proponowałbym silniejszego slowjama
20:45 Tidek: tak jak na początku
20:45 Tidek: czyli 0,85
20:45 Tidek: bo to są 2 najspokojniesze momenty
20:46 _underjoy: done
20:46 Tidek: 02:34:870 - sugestia, co myślisz o leciutkim bumpie który nie psuje readingu, ale tak jakby pokazuje graczowi że będzie przyspieszenie, ALE jednak nie
20:46 Tidek: bo ten crash dość mocny
20:47 Tidek: jeśli tak, to 02:34:870 - dajesz 1,1 02:34:945 - 0,6 02:35:020 - 0,85
20:48 _underjoy: zostawię raczej jak jest
20:49 Tidek: w sumie nawet ledwo co tego bumpa widać
20:49 Tidek: 02:44:470 - 
20:50 Tidek: tutaj, jeśli chcesz te SV mieć zrobione dobrze
20:50 Tidek: to musisz to 02:44:470 (164470|3) - 
20:50 Tidek: zamienić w notke
20:50 _underjoy: k
20:50 _underjoy: w innych diffach zostawie lna
20:51 Tidek: 02:44:470 - 0,25 02:44:620 - 1,75 02:44:770 - 1,0
20:51 Tidek: chociaż zastanawiam się czy nie lepiej wpierw 1,75 a potem 0,25
20:52 Tidek: ale to już według twojego uznania
20:52 _underjoy: chyba lepiej najpierw zrobic speedup
20:53 _underjoy: bardziej spodziewany
20:53 _underjoy: kdone
20:53 Tidek: 03:13:223 - 
20:55 Tidek: 03:13:223 - 1,68 03:13:362 - 0,18 03:13:502 - 1,0
20:55 Tidek: a to 03:13:292 - wypierdol
20:57 _underjoy: kk
20:57 Tidek: i jeszcze to 03:28:949 - 
20:57 Tidek: hmm
20:57 Tidek: myślę nad bumpami
20:57 Tidek: ale tutaj już jest to zwolnienie
20:58 Tidek: btw
20:58 Tidek: masz źle postawioną zieloną linie lol
20:58 Tidek: http://puu.sh/laBKA/959551fc1c.jpg
20:59 Tidek: jeśli chcesz bumpy
20:59 Tidek: to 1,25/0,85
20:59 Tidek: w snapie 1/6
20:59 _underjoy: gdzie ta linia
21:00 Tidek: jak u ciebie wygląda
21:00 Tidek: screen
21:00 _underjoy: ale czego ;_;
21:01 Tidek: 03:28:870 - tego momentu
21:01 Tidek: chce linie na pasku widzieć
21:01 Tidek: a czekaj
21:02 Tidek: bo tobie chodzi o linie do sv bumpa tak?
21:02 Tidek: to tak jak zawsze, pomiędzy
21:02 Tidek: 03:29:063 - 
21:02 Tidek: 03:29:291 - 
21:02 _underjoy: a dobra widzę tą linie
21:02 _underjoy: co źle była
21:03 Tidek: k
21:03 Tidek: to samo w innych diffach
21:04 _underjoy: oki
21:05 _underjoy: tzn tylko w isolation beda sv
21:05 _underjoy: w innych diffach poprawie tylko te dluzsze sv
21:05 Tidek: i wyrąb z insane tego slowdowna na samym końcu
21:05 Tidek: jeśli nie chcesz sv w innych diffach
21:06 _underjoy: w sensie sv te bumpy
21:06 Tidek: to 03:31:184 - 
21:07 Tidek: dałeś 1,0
21:07 Tidek: a to jest slowjam
21:07 Tidek: na insane
21:07 _underjoy: jest tak samo jak na isolation
21:08 _underjoy: a nie wiem jak to matematycznie zrobić żeby było całość 1.0
21:08 Tidek: w sumie od tego momentu masz źle 03:27:686 - 
21:08 Tidek: lol
21:08 _underjoy: chyba że po prostu usunąć to 1.00
21:08 Tidek: w isolation chcesz żeby było równie szybko?
21:08 Tidek: czy żeby zwalniało?
21:08 _underjoy: robiłem to tak żeby było widać lekki slowjam
21:09 _underjoy: zeby zwalniało ^^
21:09 Tidek: ale w isolation czy insane też
21:09 _underjoy: w insane też może zwolnić
21:09 _underjoy: bo to nie bumpy
21:09 Tidek: to usuń to 1,0 na końcu
21:09 Tidek: i wystarczy
21:10 _underjoy: done
21:10 _underjoy: nie wiem czemu w ogole to tam dałem
21:10 Tidek: apdejtuj
21:10 Tidek: a ja to sprawdzę jeszcze raz
21:10 Tidek: coś odjebał
21:10 Tidek: xD
21:11 _underjoy: done
21:13 Tidek: btw
21:13 Tidek: takie okazje
21:13 Tidek: 01:06:070 - 
21:13 Tidek: byłyby dobre do małych bumpów
21:13 Tidek: ale rip bo nie ma wolnej przestrzeni po 2gim 3chordzie
21:14 _underjoy: [*]
21:17 Tidek: ok
21:17 Tidek: zobacze jeszcze jak to wygląda w rzeczywistości
21:17 Tidek: w normalnej grze
21:22 Tidek: jest git
21:22 Tidek: możesz mi dać 5zł
21:22 _underjoy: jej
21:22 Tidek: i nazywać mnie mistrzem sv
21:22 _underjoy: slyszalem ze kudosy teraz tyle chodza
21:22 Tidek: zaraz wkleje loga
21:22 Tidek: notki później zmoduje
21:22 Tidek: te sv zajeły za dużo
21:22 Tidek: lol
21:22 _underjoy: <3
21:23 Tidek: nie jestem pewny czy to 1,75 0,25 za mocne czasem
21:23 Tidek: może 1,5 0,5 by było lepsze jednak
21:23 Tidek: ale wygląda ok
Steins
308 posts
Joined December 2013
Steins



General
* Timing : --
* Kiai : --
* AImod : --
* BG/Audio : --
* Metada: remove theziemniax because you changed your nick and http://puu.sh/lj1Lf/de74ea3fc0.png / http://puu.sh/lj1Wm/2b426d5eb9.png for your "source"
* Diffspread : --
* OD/HP : 9/9 OD at isolation diff look very harder and maybe unrankable, and OD 8 on EZ/NM too

Other
* Column : 0|1|2|3



Tidek's Easy
  1. 00:19:870 (19870|0) - LN finish before i think, around 00:20:320 (20320|1) -
  2. 00:22:720 (22720|3,22870|3) - you don't think this pattern is a bit hard for "EZ" diff ?
  3. 00:25:120 (25120|2,25270|2) - ^
  4. 00:25:120 (25120|0) - note is missing here for consistancy with 00:22:720 (22720|3,22870|3) - / 00:25:120 (25120|2,25270|2) -
  5. 00:27:520 (27520|3,27670|3) - a bit hard too
  6. 00:39:070 (39070|0) - same thing as before for this LN
  7. 01:07:270 (67270|0) - LN look bad at this place (suddenly vocal mapping) maybe add just one note for high sound or add LN here 01:07:720 (67720|2) -
  8. 01:25:270 (85270|0,85720|1,86170|2) - here maybe try to focus this sounds (i used playback rating 25%)
  9. 01:29:470 (89470|1) - LN sound finish here 01:29:695 (89695|2) - maybe a bit hard
  10. 01:34:270 (94270|2) - ^
  11. 01:36:070 (96070|3) - ^
    |*] 01:39:070 (99070|2,99370|1) - simple notes will be better than LN, for an example
  12. 01:43:870 (103870|2,104170|3) - ^
    you are free to keep LN i can understand what you trying to make but it's very down sound so maybe better to focus high sound
  13. 01:55:870 (115870|0) - this LN sound finish 01:56:170 (116170|1) -
  14. 02:06:520 (126520|0,126670|2,127270|0,127570|1,127870|2) - your last similar patterns started with left hand (00:49:270 (49270|3,49270|0,49720|0,49870|2,50470|0,50770|1,51070|2) - ) maybe reverse for this time ?
  15. 02:22:720 (142720|1,142870|2,143020|1,143320|2,143470|1,143620|2,143920|1,144070|3) - ) - same thing about this
  16. 02:24:070 (144070|0) - just add note, it will be better than this vocal LN
  17. 02:27:670 (147670|3,149770|2) - like this
  18. 02:37:270 (157270|2) - finish this LN here 02:39:520 (159520|1) - ?
  19. 02:41:920 (161920|1) - move to |2 ? variation hands
  20. 02:45:595 (165595|1) - replace here 02:45:670 (165670|1) - drum
  21. 02:46:795 (166795|2) - replace here 02:46:870 (166870|2) - drum
  22. 02:47:995 (167995|1) - ^
  23. 02:48:595 (168595|2) - ^
  24. 02:53:395 (173395|2) - ^
  25. 02:55:195 (175195|2) - ^
  26. 02:56:395 (176395|1) - ^
    |*] 02:57:595 (177595|2) - ^
  27. 02:58:195 (178195|1) - ^
  28. 03:02:995 (182995|1) - ^ and maybe move at 0 ?
  29. 03:08:067 (188067|2,188360|1) - for consistency keep one LN ~
  30. same thing as before for 03:14:897 (194897|2,195176|1) - / 03:19:362 (199362|2,199641|3) -

Normal
  1. 00:11:770 (11770|2,11920|2) - i recommand to not use this kind of pattern on NM diff because be careful about BPM
  2. 00:14:170 (14170|1,14320|1) - ^
  3. 00:16:570 (16570|1,16720|1) - ^
  4. 00:18:070 (18070|3,18070|2,18270|3,18470|3) - this it's hard pattern but like this is more simple with balance hands
  5. 00:18:670 (18670|0,18670|1,18870|0,19070|0) - ^
  6. 00:19:870 (19870|0) - LN finish here 00:20:320 (20320|1) -
  7. 00:30:970 (30970|0,31120|0) - same thing as before
  8. 00:33:370 (33370|3,33520|3) - ^
  9. 00:35:770 (35770|3,35920|3) - ^
  10. 00:37:270 (37270|1,37270|0,37470|0,37670|0,37870|3,37870|2,38070|3,38270|3) - same thing as before about this ~
  11. 00:39:070 (39070|2,39070|3,39370|1,39520|2,39670|0,39670|1,39820|2) - consistency problem with 00:19:870 (19870|1,19870|0,20470|2,20470|3) - also LN finish before ~
  12. 00:41:920 (41920|0,42070|0) - same thing as before
  13. 00:48:970 (48970|2,49270|0) - i think it will be better if you delete this and add 1 more note for drum (00:49:270 (49270|3,49870|3) -)
  14. 00:50:470 (50470|2) - / 00:52:870 (52870|1) - / 00:54:070 (54070|0) - / 00:55:270 (55270|1) - / 00:57:670 (57670|3) - i think it's useless LN, simple notes will be more suitable at this part
  15. also i don't agree so much with 00:51:670 (51670|3,51895|3,52120|3) - / 00:56:470 (56470|0,56695|0,56920|0) - maybe re-pattern for make this more easy
  16. 00:58:870 (58870|0,59470|3) - sound similar than 01:00:070 (60070|0,60370|1,60670|2) - use same LN ? also i recommand to use playback rating for replace 01:00:070 (60070|0,60370|1,60670|2) - because i heard sound starting here 00:59:920 (59920|0) - / 01:00:220 (60220|1) - / 01:00:520 (60520|2) - ect...
  17. 01:02:920 (62920|1,63220|1) - make this pattern more simple
  18. 01:03:820 (63820|3,63820|0) - move at |1|2 for balance hands ?
  19. 01:05:020 (65020|2,65020|1) - move at |0|3 ?
  20. 01:06:220 (66220|2,66220|0) - Ctrl + H ?
  21. 01:06:820 (66820|1,66820|3) - Ctrl + H ?
  22. 01:07:270 (67270|1,67270|2) - LN will be better at this place start: 01:07:645 (67645|3) - finish: 01:08:245 (68245|3) - (if you move this then you can add 01:07:120 (67120|2) - / 01:07:270 (67270|0) - )
  23. same problems as before here 01:25:270 (85270|1,85720|2,86170|3) - all LN start at red lines
  24. 01:29:470 (89470|0) - sound LN finish here 01:29:695 (89695|1) -
  25. 01:34:270 (94270|0) - ^
  26. 01:34:870 (94870|3,94870|0,95070|0,95270|0,95470|2,95470|3,95670|3,95870|3) - same thing as before about this patterns
  27. 01:44:470 (104470|3,104470|2,104670|3,104870|3,105070|0,105070|1,105270|0,105470|0) - ^
  28. 01:46:270 (106270|0) - move this at |2 and start 01:46:420 (106420|3) - like
  29. 01:47:770 (107770|0,107920|0) - / 01:50:170 (110170|3,110320|3) - / 01:52:570 (112570|3,112720|3) - ^
  30. 01:54:070 (114070|1,114070|0,114270|0,114470|0,114670|2,114670|3,114870|3,115070|3) - use balance hands
  31. between 02:05:770 (125770|1) - / 02:15:670 (135670|2) - my thing still the same, LN are not suitable here
  32. between 02:15:670 (135670|3) - / 02:19:720 (139720|2) - use playback rate for replace LN, they starting at red lines
  33. 02:20:020 (140020|2) - move this note ?
  34. 02:20:620 (140620|1,140620|0) - Ctrl + H ?
  35. 02:21:820 (141820|2,141820|3) - ^ ?
  36. 02:23:020 (143020|0,143020|2) - ^ ?
  37. 02:23:620 (143620|3,143620|1) - ^ ?
    Last time you started this kind of patterns (02:22:870 (142870|0,142870|2) - ) on |0|2 maybe reverse ?
  38. 02:24:070 (144070|2,144070|1) - delete and add 02:23:920 (143920|2) - / 02:24:070 (144070|0) -
  39. 02:40:870 (160870|3,160870|1) - Ctrl + H ?
  40. 02:42:070 (162070|2,162070|0) - Ctrl + H ?
  41. 03:01:570 (181570|1,182020|2,182470|3) - same thing about this LN, i just feel that like suddenly vocal patterns
  42. 03:04:848 (184848|2,184994|2) - / 03:07:189 (187189|1,187335|1) - same thing as before
  43. 03:08:067 (188067|2,188360|1) - Ctrl + H ?
  44. 03:09:509 (189509|1,189652|1) - / 03:10:937 (190937|3,190937|2,191128|3,191318|3,191509|1,191509|0,191699|0,191890|0) - same things as before
  45. 03:12:080 (192080|3) - LN finish here 03:13:080 (193080|2) -
  46. 03:19:920 (199920|2,199920|3,200106|2,200292|2,200478|0,200478|1,200664|1,200850|1) - try to use balance hands
  47. 03:21:595 (201595|1,201595|0,202153|3,202153|2) - it's similar than 01:46:270 (106270|0,106270|1,106870|3,106870|0) - keep consistancy
  48. 03:28:633 (208633|3,208791|3,208949|1,208949|0,209177|0,209406|0,209634|3,209634|2,209884|3,210134|3) - bit too much for BPM change part, try to make this more easier and use balance hands


Hard
  1. 00:10:570 (10570|2) - move at |1 ? look better
  2. 00:13:270 (13270|3) - add note for consistency with 00:10:870 (10870|3,10870|2) -
  3. 00:18:870 (18870|1,18970|1,19070|2,19170|2) - i think if you want keep this patterns you should make this 00:19:470 (19470|0,19570|0,19670|3,19770|3) - more easy like
  4. 00:19:870 (19870|0) - LN sound are not so long
  5. 00:21:670 (21670|3) - move at |0 ? this pattern are not suitable at this place
  6. 00:22:870 (22870|0) - ^
  7. 00:24:070 (24070|3) - ^
  8. 00:25:270 (25270|3) - ^
  9. 00:26:470 (26470|0) - ^
    ect...
  10. 00:37:970 (37970|0,38070|2,38170|2,38270|1,38370|1,38470|2,38470|3,38570|0,38670|3,38770|3,38870|0,38970|0) - why not try to replace like this for balance hands
  11. between 00:48:970 (48970|2) - and 00:58:870 (58870|1) - like said before it's not a good part for make LN, also if you want keep this you should heard with playback rating like 00:54:070 (54070|0) - finish here 00:54:370 (54370|1) -
  12. 01:02:920 (62920|2,63220|1) - Ctrl + H ?
  13. 01:04:270 (64270|3) - LN place is starting here 01:04:420 (64420|1) - finish here 01:04:570 (64570|1) -
  14. 01:05:470 (65470|3) - look like vocal mapping
  15. 01:07:270 (67270|1,67270|2) - will be better if you move this here 01:07:870 (67870|0) -
  16. 01:22:870 (82870|2,82870|3) - move at |1|2
  17. 01:27:820 (87820|1,87895|2) - move this here 01:27:895 (87895|1,87970|2) - better follow >.<
  18. 01:29:470 (89470|2,89620|1) - i think delete 01:29:620 (89620|1) - and keep 01:29:470 (89470|2) - because second LN have very down sound
  19. 01:34:270 (94270|0,94420|3) - ^
  20. 01:35:270 (95270|3,95270|0,95470|1,95470|0,95570|3,95670|1,95770|1,95870|2,95970|2) - is similar than 00:18:870 (18870|1,18970|1,19070|2,19170|2,19270|1,19270|0,19370|3,19470|0,19570|0,19670|3,19770|3) - try to keep consistency
  21. 01:42:070 (102070|1,102070|0) - move at |1|2 ? for use balance hands
  22. 01:45:270 (105270|2,105370|2,105470|1,105570|1,105670|3,105670|2,105770|0,105870|3,105970|3,106070|0,106170|0) - as thing as before, try to make this more easy with balance hands
  23. 01:46:270 (106270|3,106270|2) - try this maybe for better follow ?
  24. 01:56:470 (116470|3) - move this at |2 ?
  25. 01:57:670 (117670|1,117745|2,117820|1,117970|2,117970|3,118045|1,118120|2,118270|1,118345|2,118420|1,118570|2,118570|3,118645|1,118720|2,118870|3,118945|1,119020|3,119170|1,119170|2,119245|3,119320|1,119470|3,119545|1,119620|3,119770|2,119770|1,119845|3,119920|1) - / 02:00:070 (120070|0,120145|2,120220|0,120370|2,120370|1,120445|0,120520|2,120670|0,120745|2,120820|0,120970|2,120970|1,121045|0,121120|2) - suddenly you don't add at |0 and |3, i can't understand ~ focus only 3 columns can be "very hard" for players
  26. 02:05:770 (125770|1) - / 02:15:670 (135670|2) - same thing as before about this part
  27. 02:16:270 (136270|0) - finish here 02:16:720 (136720|2) -
  28. 02:18:820 (138820|3,138970|2,139120|1) - move at |2|1|0 ?
  29. 02:24:070 (144070|0,144070|3) - change by 2 simples notes will be better
  30. 02:24:970 (144970|1,145120|2) - notes for pitch better too
  31. 02:25:270 (145270|0,145270|1) - at this part i recommand to use LN for sound + note for vocal mapping like
  32. 02:49:570 (169570|0,169570|1) - move at |1|2 for balance hands
  33. 03:17:688 (197688|3) - move at |1
  34. 03:20:478 (200478|0,200478|1,200571|3,200664|1,200757|1,200850|2,200943|2,201036|1,201036|0,201129|3,201223|0,201316|0,201409|3,201502|3) - same thing as before
  35. 03:21:595 (201595|1,201595|0) - ^ if you have changed LN before as i told you, keep consistency
  36. 03:29:759 (209759|3,209884|2,210009|2,210134|1,210259|1) - can be hard with BPM change maybe repattern


Insane
  1. 00:19:870 (19870|3) - LN finish before ~
  2. 00:29:470 (29470|0,29470|1,29545|2,29545|3,29620|1,29620|0,29695|3,29695|2) - it's a bit overmapped here i can heard 00:29:470 (29470|0,29470|1,29545|2,29545|3,29620|1,29620|0,29695|3,29695|2) - high voice here and 00:29:620 (29620|2) - little drum here
  3. 00:39:820 (39820|2,39820|3) - change in simple note for make consistance with 00:20:620 (20620|2) -
  4. 00:49:270 (49270|3,49270|2) - / 00:58:870 (58870|0) - same thing as before, simple notes will be better than LN + notes
  5. 00:58:870 (58870|3) - finish here 00:59:395 (59395|2) -
  6. 01:00:070 (60070|1,60220|2,60370|1,60520|2,60670|3,60970|2,61120|1,61270|3,61420|0,61570|1,61720|2) - same errors here, it look like vocal + sound in same time with same pattern, if you heard with playback rating sound is 01:00:220 (60220|2) - / 01:00:520 (60520|2) - / 01:00:820 (60820|0) - ect..
  7. 01:04:270 (64270|0) - mhmm LN problems too i can heard sound here 01:04:420 (64420|0) - / 01:04:870 (64870|0) -
  8. 01:05:020 (65020|0,65170|1,65320|3,65470|2) - same thing here try to make on sound and not vocal
  9. 01:07:270 (67270|3,67270|2,67270|0) - good place for this is here 01:07:870 (67870|1) -
  10. 01:13:070 (73070|3,73070|2,73170|2,73170|3) - try to use balance hands here
  11. 01:22:670 (82670|0,82670|1,82770|0,82770|1) - ^
  12. 01:36:070 (96070|0) - finish here 01:37:195 (97195|1) -
  13. 01:46:270 (106270|2) - i think delete for keep only this 01:45:670 (105670|3,105670|2,105720|0,105770|3,105770|2,105870|0,105870|1,105970|1,105970|0,106070|1,106070|2,106170|2,106170|1) -
  14. 01:55:870 (115870|3) - delete this too ~ look better
  15. 02:03:070 (123070|2,123070|1,123145|0,123220|2,123370|0,123370|3,123445|2,123520|0,123595|1,123670|2,123670|3) - try to reverse patterns ?
  16. 02:05:770 (125770|1) - / 02:15:670 (135670|3) - same thing as before ~
  17. 02:16:870 (136870|2,137170|1,137470|3,137770|0,138070|3) - / 02:18:670 (138670|0,139270|2,139420|1,139570|3,139720|2) - ^
  18. 02:24:070 (144070|3,144070|2,144070|0) - change in simple notes for notice "finish part"
  19. 02:25:270 (145270|1,145270|0) - here use LN for sound + notes for vocal like
  20. 02:49:370 (169370|3,169370|2,169470|2,169470|3) - use balance hands
  21. 02:58:970 (178970|1,178970|0,179070|0,179070|1) - ^
  22. 03:21:595 (201595|2) - delete ~
  23. 03:31:184 (211184|3,211184|1,211184|0,211184|2) - 4 notes look a bit too much maybe delete one note ?


Isolation
  1. 00:05:620 (5620|2) - add note for piano
  2. 00:10:570 (10570|2) - note will be better for consistancy with other diffs
  3. 00:19:470 (19470|0,19670|3,19870|2,19870|0) - i recommand to delete this for not overmapped too much on down sound
  4. 00:20:470 (20470|0,20470|1,20470|2) - 3 notes for this kind of sound even if it look like finish is a bit too much
  5. 00:28:870 (28870|1,28870|0,28945|3,28945|2,29020|0,29020|1,29095|2,29095|3,29170|1,29170|0,29245|3,29245|2,29320|1,29320|0,29395|3,29395|2,29470|0,29470|1,29545|3,29545|2,29620|0,29620|1) - i can't understand this, it's totally overmapped and don't follow vocal or sound mapping
  6. 00:34:570 (34570|2,34570|0,34670|1,34670|3) - look better ~
  7. 00:38:670 (38670|1,38670|3,38670|0,38770|3,38770|2,38870|0,38870|3,38870|2,38970|1,38970|0,39070|2,39070|0,39070|1) - same thing than before
  8. 00:39:820 (39820|1,39820|2) - make consistency with 00:20:620 (20620|0,20695|1) -
  9. 00:39:670 (39670|1,39670|2,39670|0) - same thing than before
  10. 00:48:070 (48070|3,48070|2,48145|1,48145|0,48220|2,48220|3,48295|0,48295|1) - this don't follow vocal or rythm
  11. 00:49:270 (49270|2,49270|3) - / 01:00:070 (60070|1) - like i said before only notes will be more suitable here
  12. 01:00:970 (60970|3,61120|2,61270|1,61345|3,61420|0,61420|2,61495|3,61570|1,61720|2) - you can heard LN sound why focus vocal when you can make on sound ?
  13. 01:07:270 (67270|2,67270|3,67270|0) - LN will be better if you start here 01:07:570 (67570|1) - on the sound
  14. 01:17:620 (77620|0,77620|1,77695|2,77695|3,77770|3,77770|1,77770|0) - Ctrl + H for balance hands ?
  15. 01:17:320 (77320|0,77320|3,77357|1,77395|2,77432|3,77470|1,77470|0,77620|3,77620|2,77695|0,77695|1,77770|2,77770|3,77770|0,77920|0,77920|3,77957|2,77995|1,78032|0,78070|2,78070|3) - this is similar than 01:22:195 (82195|1,82270|3,82270|0,82320|2,82370|1,82370|0,82470|3,82470|2,82570|0,82570|2,82670|3,82670|1,82770|2,82770|1,82870|3,82870|2,82870|0) - why you don't keep similar patterns ?
  16. 01:27:557 (87557|2,87595|3) - this will be better at this place 01:27:720 (87720|3) -
  17. 01:29:620 (89620|2) - delete this focus this kind of high sound 01:29:470 (89470|3,89470|1) - (if you delete this, i recommand to 01:29:770 (89770|3) - move this at |1
  18. 01:34:420 (94420|1) - ^
  19. 01:35:470 (95470|1,95470|2,95470|0,95520|3,95570|1,95570|0,95670|2,95670|3,95770|3,95770|2,95870|3,95870|0,95970|1,95970|2) - keep consistency with 00:18:970 (18970|3,18970|2,19070|0,19070|1,19170|0,19170|1,19270|3,19270|0,19270|2,19320|1,19370|3,19370|2,19470|0,19470|3,19470|2,19570|0,19570|1,19670|3,19670|0,19670|1,19770|2,19770|0,19870|3,19870|1,19870|2,19870|0) - similar sound
  20. 01:46:270 (106270|1,106270|0,106270|3,106270|2) - same thing as before i told you in other diffs
  21. 01:45:970 (105970|3) - delete down sound
  22. 01:55:870 (115870|0,115870|1) - keep consistency before for same sound you added 3 notes ~
  23. 02:04:945 (124945|2,124945|3,125095|2,125095|3,125245|2,125245|3,125395|3,125395|2) - drum aren't here and it's not high sound
  24. 02:05:770 (125770|2) - / 02:20:320 (140320|2) - ^^^^^
  25. 02:24:070 (144070|3,144070|1,144070|0) - 3 notes will be better than LN
  26. 02:25:270 (145270|1,145270|0) - here maybe like this ect..
  27. 02:39:670 (159670|0,159670|2,159670|3,159745|1,159820|0,159895|1,159970|0,160045|1,160120|0,160195|1,160270|0,160345|1,160420|0,160495|1,160570|0,160645|1,160720|3,160720|2,160720|0,160795|1,160870|3,160870|2,160870|0,160945|1,161020|0,161095|1,161170|0,161245|1,161320|0,161395|1,161470|0,161545|1,161620|0,161695|1,161770|0,161845|1,161920|3,161920|2,161920|0,161995|1,162070|3,162070|2,162070|0,162145|1,162220|0,162295|1,162370|0,162445|1,162520|0,162595|1,162670|3,162670|2,162670|0,162745|1,162820|0,162895|1,162970|0,163045|1,163120|0,163195|1,163270|2,163270|0,163270|3,163345|1,163420|0,163495|1,163570|3,163570|2,163570|0,163645|1,163720|0,163795|1,163870|3,163870|2,163870|0,163945|1,164020|0,164095|1,164170|3,164170|2,164170|0,164245|1,164320|0,164395|1,164470|3) - i recommand to use balance hands or if you want keep this, focus trills on right hands
keep consistancy at each parts and sounds, it's good mapset a bit overmapped and underrated, be careful about balance hands ~ Good luck
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