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Yuuki Noeru - Shoujo vanpaia
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Saw u on #modreqs so decided to give it a try ^^
General stuff: Some of the hitcircle patterns feels abit forced and overused (star patterns, zig-zags etc), try to do another pass on those parts and see if there isnt a better way to map it that goes with the music better seing as theres tons of nice opportunities to map the vocals with sliders ^^. By all means keep some of them but with the amount that's currently there it gets abit dull (mindless tapping=slightly boring).
My first mod
If you wanna talk about the stuff I said in the "General stuff" just PM me or somethin.
General stuff: Some of the hitcircle patterns feels abit forced and overused (star patterns, zig-zags etc), try to do another pass on those parts and see if there isnt a better way to map it that goes with the music better seing as theres tons of nice opportunities to map the vocals with sliders ^^. By all means keep some of them but with the amount that's currently there it gets abit dull (mindless tapping=slightly boring).
Mod
01:02:449 (4) - Don't get why this repeats once, since the you followed the vocal with the sliders prior to that, the third hit on that slider doesnt hit on a vocal but on a snare so just having the slider non-repeating and a normal stacked circle would work better.
01:03:626 (2,3) - Reverse the order on these sliders, putting 2 to repeat and 3 to just be normal, plays better.
01:14:018 (5) - This feels weird to play and not super intuitive, suggest changing it to a 1/2 slider (repeating once) and a 1/2 note.
01:45:783 (1) - Is this note really necessary? Would be better to just keep the break at full length (without that note in the middle)
01:55:194 (11,12,13) - Suggest to put a NC on each one of these three. Helps emphasize the cymbal hit in the music.
02:00:489 (6,7,1) - This part could flow better with the vocals, suggest to replace 02:00:489 (6,7) - with a slider and replace 02:01:077 (1) - with a repeating 1/2 slider.
02:12:253 (9) - New combo here
02:13:822 (1) - New combo here
02:18:724 (1) - New combo here
02:21:861 (1) - New combo here
02:24:802 (1) - New combo here
02:26:371 (1) - New combo here
02:33:430 (2,3) - I think making new combos on these two objects would look nice and emphasize the music more, similar to the hits I mentioned earlier in the post.
02:37:547 (10) - New combo here
02:39:508 (13,14) - Plays/feels weird, would be better to just make them regular 1/2 sliders, would still match the music and play better.
02:41:077 (16) - New combo here. Also this entire chain of sliders feels kinda off, either make a different pattern and use some circles or move the chain so the sliders start on a red tick (not ending on a red tick). That would match up with the backing drums and the violin (which imo is the dominating sound here). Alternatively replace the sliders up until 02:42:253 (19) (this is the point where the violin is most noticable in that part).
02:44:410 (24,25,26) - New combo on these three, similar to what I mentioned earlier with emphasizing bla.bla.bla.bla
02:50:096 (39) - New Combo here
02:51:665 (40,41) - To be consistent with what I said before, make into 1/2 sliders.
02:56:371 (54,55,56,57) - New combo on these.
03:10:587 - Maybe delete this break here to get rid of the break-end arrows (they kinda kill the mood
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03:15:194 (11) - New combo
03:18:135 (19) - New combo
03:19:704 (25) - New combo
03:28:528 (4) - Suggest to extend this slider by 1/2 and curving it towards the next slider (example: http://puu.sh/keBFw/f5d77dafb2.jpg)
03:31:077 (1) - Maybe keep the it going with some neat sliders instead of the spinner. 03:34:018 (1) - is at a better finishing point to build towards which you don't quite get with the spinner before it.
01:03:626 (2,3) - Reverse the order on these sliders, putting 2 to repeat and 3 to just be normal, plays better.
01:14:018 (5) - This feels weird to play and not super intuitive, suggest changing it to a 1/2 slider (repeating once) and a 1/2 note.
01:45:783 (1) - Is this note really necessary? Would be better to just keep the break at full length (without that note in the middle)
01:55:194 (11,12,13) - Suggest to put a NC on each one of these three. Helps emphasize the cymbal hit in the music.
02:00:489 (6,7,1) - This part could flow better with the vocals, suggest to replace 02:00:489 (6,7) - with a slider and replace 02:01:077 (1) - with a repeating 1/2 slider.
02:12:253 (9) - New combo here
02:13:822 (1) - New combo here
02:18:724 (1) - New combo here
02:21:861 (1) - New combo here
02:24:802 (1) - New combo here
02:26:371 (1) - New combo here
02:33:430 (2,3) - I think making new combos on these two objects would look nice and emphasize the music more, similar to the hits I mentioned earlier in the post.
02:37:547 (10) - New combo here
02:39:508 (13,14) - Plays/feels weird, would be better to just make them regular 1/2 sliders, would still match the music and play better.
02:41:077 (16) - New combo here. Also this entire chain of sliders feels kinda off, either make a different pattern and use some circles or move the chain so the sliders start on a red tick (not ending on a red tick). That would match up with the backing drums and the violin (which imo is the dominating sound here). Alternatively replace the sliders up until 02:42:253 (19) (this is the point where the violin is most noticable in that part).
02:44:410 (24,25,26) - New combo on these three, similar to what I mentioned earlier with emphasizing bla.bla.bla.bla
02:50:096 (39) - New Combo here
02:51:665 (40,41) - To be consistent with what I said before, make into 1/2 sliders.
02:56:371 (54,55,56,57) - New combo on these.
03:10:587 - Maybe delete this break here to get rid of the break-end arrows (they kinda kill the mood
)03:15:194 (11) - New combo
03:18:135 (19) - New combo
03:19:704 (25) - New combo
03:28:528 (4) - Suggest to extend this slider by 1/2 and curving it towards the next slider (example: http://puu.sh/keBFw/f5d77dafb2.jpg)
03:31:077 (1) - Maybe keep the it going with some neat sliders instead of the spinner. 03:34:018 (1) - is at a better finishing point to build towards which you don't quite get with the spinner before it.
My first mod
If you wanna talk about the stuff I said in the "General stuff" just PM me or somethin.
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod. Be sure we to talk to the PM. As for the first mod you did well.Berezz wrote:
Saw u on #modreqs so decided to give it a try ^^
General stuff: Some of the hitcircle patterns feels abit forced and overused (star patterns, zig-zags etc), try to do another pass on those parts and see if there isnt a better way to map it that goes with the music better seing as theres tons of nice opportunities to map the vocals with sliders ^^. By all means keep some of them but with the amount that's currently there it gets abit dull (mindless tapping=slightly boring).Mod01:02:449 (4) - Don't get why this repeats once, since the you followed the vocal with the sliders prior to that, the third hit on that slider doesnt hit on a vocal but on a snare so just having the slider non-repeating and a normal stacked circle would work better.✔️
01:03:626 (2,3) - Reverse the order on these sliders, putting 2 to repeat and 3 to just be normal, plays better.✔️
01:14:018 (5) - This feels weird to play and not super intuitive, suggest changing it to a 1/2 slider (repeating once) and a 1/2 note. ✔️
01:45:783 (1) - Is this note really necessary? Would be better to just keep the break at full length (without that note in the middle)✔️
01:55:194 (11,12,13) - Suggest to put a NC on each one of these three. Helps emphasize the cymbal hit in the music.✔️
02:00:489 (6,7,1) - This part could flow better with the vocals, suggest to replace 02:00:489 (6,7) - with a slider and replace 02:01:077 (1) - with a repeating 1/2 slider.✔️
02:12:253 (9) - New combo here✔️
02:13:822 (1) - New combo here✔️
02:18:724 (1) - New combo here✔️
02:21:861 (1) - New combo here✔️
02:24:802 (1) - New combo here✔️
02:26:371 (1) - New combo here✔️
02:33:430 (2,3) - I think making new combos on these two objects would look nice and emphasize the music more, similar to the hits I mentioned earlier in the post.✔️
02:37:547 (10) - New combo here✔️
02:39:508 (13,14) - Plays/feels weird, would be better to just make them regular 1/2 sliders, would still match the music and play better. ✘
02:41:077 (16) - New combo here. Also this entire chain of sliders feels kinda off, either make a different pattern and use some circles or move the chain so the sliders start on a red tick (not ending on a red tick). That would match up with the backing drums and the violin (which imo is the dominating sound here). Alternatively replace the sliders up until 02:42:253 (19) (this is the point where the violin is most noticable in that part).✔️
02:44:410 (24,25,26) - New combo on these three, similar to what I mentioned earlier with emphasizing bla.bla.bla.bla✔️
02:50:096 (39) - New Combo here✔️
02:51:665 (40,41) - To be consistent with what I said before, make into 1/2 sliders.i have done differently
02:56:371 (54,55,56,57) - New combo on these. ✔️
03:10:587 - Maybe delete this break here to get rid of the break-end arrows (they kinda kill the mood
03:15:194 (11) - New combo✔️
03:18:135 (19) - New combo✔️
03:19:704 (25) - New combo✔️
03:28:528 (4) - Suggest to extend this slider by 1/2 and curving it towards the next slider (example: http://puu.sh/keBFw/f5d77dafb2.jpg) ✔️
03:31:077 (1) - Maybe keep the it going with some neat sliders instead of the spinner. 03:34:018 (1) - is at a better finishing point to build towards which you don't quite get with the spinner before it.
My first mod
Маленький мод-_-
00:19:704 -может переместить? оно как то не красиво смотрится
00:38:920 - здесь можно поставить слайдер так лучше будет
01:24:998 это переместить на 01:24:606 так лучше
02:27:351 02:27:939 кажется не красивым сделай что то с ним
03:27:155 -может здесь что то поставить?
00:38:920 - здесь можно поставить слайдер так лучше будет
01:24:998 это переместить на 01:24:606 так лучше
02:27:351 02:27:939 кажется не красивым сделай что то с ним
03:27:155 -может здесь что то поставить?
Topic Starter
Mineca wrote:
Маленький мод-_-00:19:704 -может переместить? оно как то не красиво смотрится ok
00:38:920 - здесь можно поставить слайдер так лучше будет no
01:24:998 это переместить на 01:24:606 так лучше no
02:27:351 02:27:939 кажется не красивым сделай что то с ним ok
03:27:155 -может здесь что то поставить? ok
Hii!
Normal:
00:38:332 (3) - Move this to x340 y152 to improve the blanket
01:03:430 (1) - I think this one should be shortened by half a beat and moved back half a beat. Just my opinion though =)
02:07:351 (3) - Move this one down two grid squares
02:08:920 (5) - then this one to x196 y208 and you've got yourself a nice blanket
02:47:351 (2) - Move that to x188 y156 and you've got another blanket
Nice song! Good luck with ranking!!
Normal:
00:38:332 (3) - Move this to x340 y152 to improve the blanket
01:03:430 (1) - I think this one should be shortened by half a beat and moved back half a beat. Just my opinion though =)
02:07:351 (3) - Move this one down two grid squares
02:08:920 (5) - then this one to x196 y208 and you've got yourself a nice blanket
02:47:351 (2) - Move that to x188 y156 and you've got another blanket
Nice song! Good luck with ranking!!
Topic Starter
Thanks!Wingmann wrote:
Hii! Hii
Normal:
00:38:332 (3) - Move this to x340 y152 to improve the blanket ✔️
01:03:430 (1) - I think this one should be shortened by half a beat and moved back half a beat. Just my opinion though =)
02:07:351 (3) - Move this one down two grid squares ✔️
02:08:920 (5) - then this one to x196 y208 and you've got yourself a nice blanket ✔️
02:47:351 (2) - Move that to x188 y156 and you've got another blanket ✔️
Nice song! Good luck with ranking!!