this gonna hurt but your map have so many errors D: u need to know the "AiMod" who can help you a lot (ctrl+shift+A) (remember this for your future maps)
one of the "secrets" of all maps is the "distance snap" and you need to know about this right now! https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Distance_Snap in resume is this
be careful with the combos, you can´t have a very long combo like 10 (not in normal) or a combo like 00:13:639 (normal mode)
Normal
(just suguestions)
put 00:01:089 slider in 00:01:114
00:01:639 slider in 00:01:714
00:06:189 circle in 00:06:139
00:11:314 double slider in 00:11:239
cut 00:22:039 slider until 00:22:639
cut 00:28:489 until 00:28:789, the next (8combo) until 00:29:427, and the next until 00:30:064
i dont have more time, sorry :s but I hope I've helped
Hello there and thanks! I'll try my best to polish the mapset as much as I can I'll update once I have the time, definitely gonna take a look at the aiMod thingy too.