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James2250
Why blank combo bursts, people can just turn them off if they don't want them

Easy:
HP Drain+1
AR + 1
01:25:861 (1) - shorten to previous white tick, it sounds odd atm

Normal:
Nice

Hard:
Nice

Lan's Insane:
00:17:853 (3,4) - jump doesn't really fit

*star*
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Can't tell the difference between hit300g and hit300k.
You could have remod the audio from the video.
That sliderball seems to be spinning too fast

[General]
Gray circle color is misleading on tag mode in multi.

[Timing]
Offset -28 ms

[Lan's Insane]
Love those sliders <3
00:17:250 (2,3,4) - Pretty!, however this doesnt seem to be an appropiate spot for a jump =( dont feel any jumpyness in the song hence it's misleading me to thin that (3,4) is twice as far on the timeline.
Other than that, fine.

[Hard]
00:21:475 (6) - i suggest you use a new combo here since it's a repeated lyric by a chorus
Not any technical errors, however feels a bit plain, and by that i mean kind of boring and not very appealing.

[Normal]
00:39:986 (2,3,1) - This direction reverse doesnt feel very flowy, if it were me i would look for a while to flip 2 and make it flow into (3) then into (1)
00:58:296 (2) - Why does this slider's waypoint go out like that?
01:13:990 (3,4) - Sounds weird, i think the slider shouldn't even be breaking to begin with.

[Easy]
01:16:203 (1,2) - Try adding some silences like on the rest of the diffs?
Topic Starter
roflninja

James2250 wrote:

Why blank combo bursts, people can just turn them off if they don't want them

Easy:
HP Drain+1 done
AR + 1 ^
01:25:861 (1) - shorten to previous white tick, it sounds odd atm ^

Normal:
Nice

Hard:
Nice

Sakura Hana wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
[General]
Gray circle color is misleading on tag mode in multi.

[Timing]
Offset -28 ms i get more misshit notes and a bigger time gap with that

[Hard]
00:21:475 (6) - i suggest you use a new combo here since it's a repeated lyric by a chorus done
Not any technical errors, however feels a bit plain, and by that i mean kind of boring and not very appealing.

[Normal]
00:39:986 (2,3,1) - This direction reverse doesnt feel very flowy, if it were me i would look for a while to flip 2 and make it flow into (3) then into (1) i think its fine
00:58:296 (2) - Why does this slider's waypoint go out like that? why not? fixed
01:13:990 (3,4) - Sounds weird, i think the slider shouldn't even be breaking to begin with. made into one slider

[Easy]
01:16:203 (1,2) - Try adding some silences like on the rest of the diffs? done
Thanks for the mods
Babble
Hiya :D #modReqs response

Easy
00:04:574 (1) - Maybe extend this slider to the next 1/2 tick at 00:05:982?
00:26:304 (3) - Move back 1/2 tick to 00:26:103 perhaps?

Hard
Maybe scoot HP drain up 1 notch?
00:46:022 (5) - Move back 1/4 tick to 00:45:922 maybe?

Insane
00:55:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Sounds ugly :| Make the hitsounds soft before this stream and change it back to normal after the stream.

Catchy song and map, good job :D
Lanttu
IceBeam
[Normal]
00:09:403 (1) - Maybe move to 00:09:201? Seems like you have to finish previous rhytm.Then you don't need a note here.
00:41:193 (3) - Finish?
00:46:022 (3) - Eh..if'd you used 1/4,you could place it at 00:45:922,but I think it's ok.
01:06:143 (3) - Move to 01:06:042 and add a note at 01:06:344? 1/4 Snap Divisor.
01:15:801 (4) - Finish?

[Hard]
00:33:547 (6) - Claps instead?
00:34:755 (2) - ^
00:42:401 (4) - Finish?

Others are fine to me.
Cute song,good luck!
Topic Starter
roflninja

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal]
00:09:403 (1) - Maybe move to 00:09:201? Seems like you have to finish previous rhytm.Then you don't need a note here.
00:41:193 (3) - Finish?
00:46:022 (3) - Eh..if'd you used 1/4,you could place it at 00:45:922,but I think it's ok.
01:06:143 (3) - Move to 01:06:042 and add a note at 01:06:344? 1/4 Snap Divisor.
01:15:801 (4) - Finish?

[Hard]
00:33:547 (6) - Claps instead?
00:34:755 (2) - ^
00:42:401 (4) - Finish?

Others are fine to me.
Cute song,good luck!
All done except the 1//4 divisors. Thanks for modding, and sorry for the delay
Mizu_banned
*o*
nyah~ =o=
Star !^-^
Ekaru
Insane:

00:03:567 (7) - This poor spacing is noticeable. This is not nazi'ing; it is obvious and awkward in this case.
00:05:982 (9,10,11) - This is uneven ripple madness. I would just stack them in this case, it's too difficult to get these spaced evenly. The other case of this is done well, though.
00:10:006 (3,1) - This is awkward. Just put the 1 under the 3, it's a lot easier to read.
00:12:622 (1,2) - This does not feel like a jump to me, sorry. It feels a lot more like a stack. :/
00:18:457 (6,1) - This jump comes out of nowhere and feels weird. It's like this was done just for symmetry. The spacing right afterward reverting to normal does not help.
00:21:475 (1) - ...
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - Do not feel like sliders. Just make them hit circles, it's a lot easier and funner.
00:37:169 (4,5) - This jump is random.
00:45:620 (1,2) - This section of the song feels slower and softer. Why is there a jump like this there?!?!?
00:48:437 (8,1) - Noticeable spacing issue.
00:51:857 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This feels weird.
01:04:332 (3) - Move the 3 please, it'll feel better.
01:16:002 (1,2) - XP

Now, you don't need to fix nearly all of those, don't worry about it. I just feel that fixing a few of those (your choice) would make the map funner and better.

Hard:

Except for the 1/2 stream-ness at parts, it's good! Only thing that I think would make the map better is spacing the hit circles out a bit more. The 1/2 stream feels kind of cramped.

Normal:

:D Nothing bad

Easy:

:D Maybe a spinner at the end? I think the hit circles a beat apart shouldn't be that close, but eh.
Topic Starter
roflninja

Ekaru wrote:

Hard:

Except for the 1/2 stream-ness at parts, it's good! Only thing that I think would make the map better is spacing the hit circles out a bit more. The 1/2 stream feels kind of cramped.

Normal:

:D Nothing bad

Easy:

:D Maybe a spinner at the end? I think the hit circles a beat apart shouldn't be that close, but eh. added a note
Lanttu

Ekaru wrote:

Insane:

00:03:567 (7) - This poor spacing is noticeable. This is not nazi'ing; it is obvious and awkward in this case. >: Fixed.
00:05:982 (9,10,11) - This is uneven ripple madness. I would just stack them in this case, it's too difficult to get these spaced evenly. The other case of this is done well, though. Fixed.
00:10:006 (3,1) - This is awkward. Just put the 1 under the 3, it's a lot easier to read. I think it's just fine. ;_;
00:12:622 (1,2) - This does not feel like a jump to me, sorry. It feels a lot more like a stack. :/ I think it's fine, and right now I can't come up with anything else that doesn't need moving of the next combo. OTL
00:18:457 (6,1) - This jump comes out of nowhere and feels weird. It's like this was done just for symmetry. The spacing right afterward reverting to normal does not help. Fine to me..
00:21:475 (1) - ... >: Fixed.
00:23:085 (1,2,3,4) - Do not feel like sliders. Just make them hit circles, it's a lot easier and funner. Blahhhh, OK.
00:37:169 (4,5) - This jump is random. Plays fine with me
00:45:620 (1,2) - This section of the song feels slower and softer. Why is there a jump like this there?!?!? lol, just for the sake of symmetry. But it plays just fine with me. >:
00:48:437 (8,1) - Noticeable spacing issue. >: Fixed.
00:51:857 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This feels weird. Feels fine to me. >:
01:04:332 (3) - Move the 3 please, it'll feel better. Don't see any reason for that but did it anyways.
01:16:002 (1,2) - XP >: Fixed.
Download: Mai Mizuhashi - Toshokan dewa Oshiete Kurenai (TV Size) (roflninja) [Lan's Insane].osu
wmfchris
[Lan's insane]
0:04:775 (4,5,6) up 1 grid?
1:15:197 (8,9) down 1 grid to form stright line?

[hard]
0:03:165 (1) left 1 grid?
0:18:055 (4,5,6) (4) right 1 grid, (5,6) right 2 grids?
1:22:038 (5,6) If you're going to make this larger spacing, this is not enough.

star~

I'm sorry that I'm very busy these days but I'll try to make one diffs ~
Gonzvlo
General:
  1. Make "reversearrow.png" slightly smaller.
  2. You should make "scorebar-ki", "Scorebar-kidanger"..., bigger it will looke better.
  3. You need to add "Spinner-background.png" too , or your spinner will mix with other skins.
Easy:
  1. 00:32:743 (3) - New Combo.
  2. Perfect.
Normal:
  1. Cool~
Hard:
  1. 00:32:541 (2) - New Combo.
  2. 00:43:608 (1,2) - Swap New Combo.
Lan's Insane:
  1. 01:28:879 (3) - Add "finish".
That's all, no major problems, I think that this map is ready for a bubble. Star~
wmfchris
hmmm, I thought aabc would put this here >///<

I made this with aabc271.

Download: Mai Mizuhashi - Toshokan dewa Oshiete Kurenai (TV Size) (roflninja) [Taiko Collab].osu
narakucrimson
Didn't see any problem n.n Nice map :D - it's my first time modding though xD - but i did my best nwn
Cuuuuri
(ノ゚ω゚)ノHi
SPOILER
[Lan's Insane/Hit object/nazi]
*This looks more beautiful

00:01:656 (5,6) - x183 y171
00:03:266 (5,6) - x328 y171
00:22:682 (3,4) - x303 y177
00:24:292 (4) - 1 grid right
00:38:678 (7,8) - x257 y281
01:14:091 (3,4) - x328 y98
01:20:831 (1) - x36 y192
01:25:459 (7) - x215 y229

awesome~♪
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Lan's Insane

seems fine but some of the triple-notes are stiff, consider start them 1/2 later:

00:32:340 (7,8,9)
00:43:608 (3,4,5)
00:44:815 (3,4,5)
01:07:350 (5,6,7)


Hard

00:09:604 (1,2,3,1) - the spacing here confused me. make the slider farther away from the previous circle or stack them


Normal

00:09:604 (1,1,2) - a little awkward, try one more note on the repeat slider and removing 00:10:409 (1)
00:51:656 (5) - add a note?
01:13:990 (3) - I think here should be more notes but not a long slider


Easy

00:26:103 (3) - it's funny that mapper uses a single circle just to follow the lyric. if you really need this note you can use a slider instead which starts from a white line, and make this note as the end of it.

not bad, star 8-)
Lanttu

Sandpig wrote:

Lan's Insane

seems fine but some of the triple-notes are stiff, consider start them 1/2 later:

00:32:340 (7,8,9)
00:43:608 (3,4,5)
00:44:815 (3,4,5)
01:07:350 (5,6,7)
I can't seem to undestand what is wrong with those triplets so no change to them. >: Did other changes, though.
Download: Mai Mizuhashi - Toshokan dewa Oshiete Kurenai (TV Size) (roflninja) [Lan's Insane].osu
_Chie_
star =D

nice song*-*
DerekMcD
Hello!!!!

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Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.

Easy

00:17:048 (1): It's unsnapped a little bit...
00:50:449 (1): Like tihs one...
00:56:888 (1): Do this in a mirror way like (2).

Normal

00:35:560 (3): Little bit spacing...
00:37:974 (3): Fix this slider the way like (1) was...
01:06:545 (3): Turn off the grid snap and space it the right way it is.

Hard

01:02:320 (1): Move one grid right.

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That's it! I love this song and I can't even get this off my mind. That's why I'm gonna star this. *Star*

Thank you and good luck.

indyinyou
nice song ~
hinasis
Espero que la aprueben pronto, me gustó mucho :D
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