Metadata - Try adding 空中に沈む輝針城 ~ Counter-Clock World into tags as that is the original source name of the song
Also only 3 combo colors? I would suggest making adding a tint of blue to match the ribbon of the background http://puu.sh/kyvIM/213512274f.png
I do want to bring up that I have seen a lot of insignificant sliders show up that could definitely be redone, as well as some areas of the map where stream overlaps with sliders making the visibility of play go down a bunch. Basically those are the core aspects that I see and should be worked on slightly.
00:40:556 - and 04:30:178 - are these really necessary to the timing?
Also only 3 combo colors? I would suggest making adding a tint of blue to match the ribbon of the background http://puu.sh/kyvIM/213512274f.png
I do want to bring up that I have seen a lot of insignificant sliders show up that could definitely be redone, as well as some areas of the map where stream overlaps with sliders making the visibility of play go down a bunch. Basically those are the core aspects that I see and should be worked on slightly.
00:40:556 - and 04:30:178 - are these really necessary to the timing?
- 00:41:692 (8,9,1) - It's better to have this straight than slight curve - It brings out the flow to the next note significantly better http://puu.sh/kyreI/263903f148.jpg
- 00:44:448 (1) - This slider just seems awkward to me - I feel it's better if this somehow just matched up with this 00:44:773 (2) -
- 00:47:205 - What's with the dramatic pause? A note can be here to fill the guitar sound or just make 00:47:043 (2) - as a 1/1 slider to fill that gap
- 00:50:773 (1) - Oh boy this slider looks bad, 3 red anchor points just to have it curve like that? You can do better
- 00:53:367 (1) - How about this slider shape instead? http://puu.sh/kyrJZ/121fb06ac2.jpg
- 00:54:827 (1) - NC can start here to emphasize with the finish hitsound you have as well as the music sounds
- 00:55:474 (10,11,12) - Maybe have an effect like this http://puu.sh/kyrSn/fec73d9c04.jpg - It starts as a big 1/2 spacing but then shortens up to the NC to emphasize the change in rhythm you have going on
- 00:58:070 (3) - Where this is placed creates an unusual flow with movement - 00:58:070 (3,4) - CTRL+G will make a rotation to bring out the previous slider more
- 00:58:962 (2,3) - Can straighten out with the slider to make it visually look nicer, rather than having it placed awkwardly on the slider http://puu.sh/kys9X/ad9511bb1b.jpg
- 01:01:313 (1) - You're missing a finish here - add one pls
- 01:05:854 (7,9) - Looks unclean when these two sliders are touching, and slider (5) you could've made it more significant without the first red anchor http://puu.sh/kysri/4b863a2e40.jpg
- 01:09:178 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This feels very extended to have this certain amount of stream stacks on one place
- 01:16:962 (7) - The start of the stream here is weird with how the note is placed - I would believe trying to stack it and increasing the DS slightly will make this part look better than just having it overlap awkwardly, like does this not look better? http://puu.sh/kysIZ/181c330900.jpg
- 01:28:556 (1,2,3) - Ok this is very confusing - notes (2)(3) looks like a 1/2 and plus why not just do what you did here? 01:27:746 (1,2) - I believe it will cause issues if you have (2)(3) like that
- 01:29:529 (5) - Extend the guitar sound to the red tick please - it sounds a lot better than having an empty space like before
- 01:34:880 (1) - This slider will definitely do you better than forcing a curve like that http://puu.sh/kyt7U/5e042ca639.jpg
- 01:40:719 (4,5,6,7,8) - This feels clustered and tight together - how about a formation like this http://puu.sh/kytrl/43eb700679.jpg
- 01:44:367 (4,5,6,7,8) - Keep Distance snap here at 1.0 it will feel better than having .96 to 1.04 DS
- 01:52:719 (7) - This slider is out of screen - Unrankable issue
- 01:55:151 (1) - NC to emphasize the guitar/to Nc the clap rhythm, plus to not keep this stream long
- 02:01:232 (2,3) - This distance is relatively close compared to what the others one has - Move slightly further for equality
- 02:09:665 (8) - Awkward overlap
- 02:11:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Wait what?! what happened here? I don't see why this is here I'm pretty sure others would agree with me on this one
- 02:19:962 (6,7,8) - This flows feels really strange considering the effort it takes to hit these - Maybe a note structure like this http://puu.sh/kyu7u/d765f36b6e.jpg
- 02:37:962 (9) - NC here so it's not up to 16 note stream
- 02:46:232 (1) - Maybe? or something along the lines without so much red anchors http://puu.sh/kyunT/c3011e5abc.jpg
- 02:51:421 (1) - Again this can be simplified http://puu.sh/kyuts/2285a564eb.jpg
- 03:12:340 - Starting here the upcoming NC are very strange and abrupt it constantly keeps changing with the single notes and you should try to limit that
Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/kyuHX/94b477207a.jpg - 03:22:070 (1) - Move the left anchor a little more to the left and up, and it will balance it out
- 03:45:908 (1) - The white anchor before the red - please remove that
- 03:49:800 (1) - http://puu.sh/kyuY3/574c1d0f3d.png
- 03:55:151 (1,2,3,4,5) - What is with this all of a sudden clap spam?
- 03:55:800 (9) - NC - same reason as before
- 05:01:150 (1) - This slider is weird - Maybe? http://puu.sh/kyvgd/9367873ffb.jpg
- 05:07:637 (1) - You can do a better slider, too much anchor points to make a shape like this