[General]
You have a red and a grey combo color, but I feel it lacks something a tad blue. Consider adding one that is slightly blue to match the clothing and the bottom of the background.
Unused Hitsounds:
drum-slidertick3.wav
soft-sliderslide.wav
soft-hitwhistle.wav
soft-hitclap.wav
soft-hitnormal.wav
normal-slidertick.wav
Delete all of these, as they are not used at any point in the song.
Your timing is wrong in the 4/4 section. It needs to be a downbeat on times such as 00:54:827 as an example and every 4th beat from there. The BPM is correct, you just need to adjust the offset so that the downbeats are matched by the large white ticks.
You have a red and a grey combo color, but I feel it lacks something a tad blue. Consider adding one that is slightly blue to match the clothing and the bottom of the background.
Unused Hitsounds:
drum-slidertick3.wav
soft-sliderslide.wav
soft-hitwhistle.wav
soft-hitclap.wav
soft-hitnormal.wav
normal-slidertick.wav
Delete all of these, as they are not used at any point in the song.
Your timing is wrong in the 4/4 section. It needs to be a downbeat on times such as 00:54:827 as an example and every 4th beat from there. The BPM is correct, you just need to adjust the offset so that the downbeats are matched by the large white ticks.
[Inversion]
05:34:394 - Unsnapped green line. Fix this; unrankable issue.
00:46:881 (1) - Not the biggest fan of this reversing on the downbeat. Preferably you want to have something click-able on downbeats for better emphasis.
00:55:475 (1,1,1) - Not only is this kind of a pain to read, but the spacing is so low that it feels like a really wonky transition into 00:55:962 (1) . Try spreading them out more; that should do the trick.
01:16:962 (7,8,9,10,11) - You should manually stack these. Looking at it in the editor and playing it should explain enough about how it doesn't flow well at all. Similar:
02:10:313 (2,3,4,5) - 100% change this one.
01:17:773 - This guitar sound should be mapped. It sounds too empty otherwise.
01:39:908 (8) - Move this similar to x:212, y:57 for better emphasis.
02:01:232 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The flow here is too erratic. Make it at least make sense and not appear and play completely random.
02:11:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I see no reason for these to be like this.
02:13:638 (10) - This isn't 1/6 snap here. I'd just pop a slider here honestly. Similar:
02:16:232 - ^
02:26:610 (5) - ^
02:54:665 (4) - This is 1/4 snap in my eyes.
02:38:529 (16,1) - Keep this spacing consistent to the rest of the stream. You need to manually do it here.
02:37:151 (8,1) - There's a red point in this slider that is unneeded (the fifth red one). I'd just delete that since it has little to no effect on the end result of the slider.
03:45:259 (8,9,10) - Stack 9 and 10 on the end of 8. It's too off center as it is right now.
04:22:719 (4,9,14) - There are too many of these in the stream to really improve the game play. It felt like I just kinda had to play it like a regular circle and hope for the best.
04:32:123 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Slider shapes are way too random here. Try to make them more similar in this measure especially and in general. Likewise:
04:48:664 - ^
05:34:394 - Unsnapped green line. Fix this; unrankable issue.
00:46:881 (1) - Not the biggest fan of this reversing on the downbeat. Preferably you want to have something click-able on downbeats for better emphasis.
00:55:475 (1,1,1) - Not only is this kind of a pain to read, but the spacing is so low that it feels like a really wonky transition into 00:55:962 (1) . Try spreading them out more; that should do the trick.
01:16:962 (7,8,9,10,11) - You should manually stack these. Looking at it in the editor and playing it should explain enough about how it doesn't flow well at all. Similar:
02:10:313 (2,3,4,5) - 100% change this one.
01:17:773 - This guitar sound should be mapped. It sounds too empty otherwise.
01:39:908 (8) - Move this similar to x:212, y:57 for better emphasis.
02:01:232 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The flow here is too erratic. Make it at least make sense and not appear and play completely random.
02:11:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I see no reason for these to be like this.
02:13:638 (10) - This isn't 1/6 snap here. I'd just pop a slider here honestly. Similar:
02:16:232 - ^
02:26:610 (5) - ^
02:54:665 (4) - This is 1/4 snap in my eyes.
02:38:529 (16,1) - Keep this spacing consistent to the rest of the stream. You need to manually do it here.
02:37:151 (8,1) - There's a red point in this slider that is unneeded (the fifth red one). I'd just delete that since it has little to no effect on the end result of the slider.
03:45:259 (8,9,10) - Stack 9 and 10 on the end of 8. It's too off center as it is right now.
04:22:719 (4,9,14) - There are too many of these in the stream to really improve the game play. It felt like I just kinda had to play it like a regular circle and hope for the best.
04:32:123 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Slider shapes are way too random here. Try to make them more similar in this measure especially and in general. Likewise:
04:48:664 - ^