Hi
from your modding queue m4m
) (im not an experienced modder btw)
00:38:611 (1) - this looks nicer no? ->
http://prntscr.com/8iati000:48:178 (1) - this slider shape is weird but maybe its just me
00:49:800 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - this part is very compact and shaped very weirdly do change it (readability affected)
01:00:826 (5,6) - doesnt flow along well?
01:02:610 (1,2,3) - pls space this properly and why not straighten it
01:03:097 (1,2,3) - straighten this too? things look neater as well
01:06:178 (9,10) - the space between here is quite misleading people might intuitively think its a half beat tap rather than stream
01:06:989 (1,2) - ^
01:07:638 (1,2) - ^(ok maybe its just me but of coz its up to you since youre the mapper and im just giving opinions
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01:08:773 (3) - slider shape
01:14:935 (8,9) - i feel that changing their order like as in putting the 9 before the 8 and then ctrl+g both of them flows better
01:15:583 (1,2) - the spacing problem as well
01:16:556 (6,7) - ^
01:19:151 (5,1) - ^
01:19:962 (1,2) - ^
01:20:610 (5,6) - ^
01:21:016 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - im not sure whether u can map that low the screen :/
01:23:205 (6,7) - spacing
01:26:448 (9,10,1,2,3) - the flow here is bad
01:29:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messy jumps
01:40:475 (2,3) - why place it like that? why not flow with the slider
01:40:719 (4,5,6,7,8) - compact and hard to read but i guess thats barely acceptably compact but the flow?? maybe can make the slider point towards the next hit
01:43:070 (2,3) - why place it like that?
01:43:962 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - messy i feel
01:46:962 (2,3) - ok at this point i kind of get why u place it like that but its really messy to look at especially when its used a few times in the map? why not place it sth like this
http://prntscr.com/8ib0jc (i guess ill stop talking about this problem now coz its really up to you)
01:49:800 (4) - overmapped coz theres only 1/4 beats in the song
01:56:043 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - really hard to read if youre gonna do this do space it out more so its easier to read and the last 3 taps doesnt even follow the flow??
02:00:259 (2,1) - its like theres a stop in the streams pls space accordingly to the streams
02:01:313 (3,4) - this is really quite unacceptable (and ill stop talking about spacing too)
02:08:448 (1) - why nc
02:10:313 (2,3,4,5) - bad flow from previous slider
02:12:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ?? inconsistent pattern
02:18:502 (6,7,8,9) - misleading and inconsistent spacing
02:37:475 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - weird flow and shape
02:38:610 (1) - slider shape
02:54:665 (4) - while i feel its overmapped at the same time i seem to be picking sth up from the music but idk i tried very hard to listen but i still cant be sure(do confirm with other modders)
03:08:286 (1) - ???? slider shape
03:13:638 (1,1,1) - spacing really misleading (what i suggest is spacing the 1 beat taps while u jump the 1/2 beats
03:16:232 (1,1) - ^ because that way at least theres a consistent patter behind
03:16:719 (1,1) - ^
03:18:827 (1,1) - ^
03:19:313 (1,1) - ^
03:19:475 (1) - why not just
http://prntscr.com/8ib61u03:20:286 (1,1) - spacing(kk i wont talk about it anymore im sure u can sieve it out yourself if you decide to change coz it seems youre using it a lot)
03:31:962 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - one thing is the jump streams but i guess its acceptable but more imptly the sliders are overlapping so why not space it out a little? btw nice flow
03:34:070 (1) - see this is a nice slider
03:47:043 (4) - dont stack it directly under space a little
03:47:692 (6) - ^
03:56:448 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - oh hey the flow here is quite fun
04:02:935 (1) - pls fix especially the bottom part where theres some awkward contours
04:05:448 (12,1,2) - ?? flow???
04:14:205 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - wow im not sure whether this is rankable but hey i like it
04:19:583 (6,7) - misleading since its spaced out so much while your previous non stream jumps are equally spaced
04:48:664 (1,2) - spacing but wow this kiai section was done very well
04:49:637 (1,2) - ^
04:49:961 (3,4) - ^ oh yes i wont talk about it anymore but im sorry i had to point it out coz these are really the things that forced the difficulty out
05:02:934 (5,6) - im sorry but... ^ this is really misleading
05:14:529 (2) - dont place directly under
05:19:718 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ok this has to be fixed very unreadable
05:34:394 (2,1) - nice move but not blanketed well
05:39:745 (5,6) - nvm might as well point it out since im finishing :< spacing
05:45:259 (1,2) - ^ you know this wouldnt be a problem if it isnt this far apart so if you insist on doing this pls reduce the gap
05:50:448 (1,2) - ok the flow is good and all and its barely acceptable i guess its ok but if you wanna improve it make it closer
05:53:042 (1) - ooh cool slider
05:55:637 (1) - ok i guess its fun and all the make it this way but lik its misleading coz the previous one wasnt even this far and the sudden increment in spacing might lead players to think its a tap one beat apart?
general comments and thoughts-overall its quite messy
-do check on slider shapes, spacing and flow
-there are some nice sliders so maybe u should try to keep up the good work?? (for eg 02:44:935 (1) ) looks really smooth and neat
-some of the spacing leads me to think the difficulty was quite forced? to prevent this you should just map however u deem fit and whatever difficulty the map is at the end of it so be it since yours is a 5 minute map requiring only 1 difficulty so you dont have to control the difficulty. Like some of the spaced streams are overused and forced
-there are some nice flows too like the alternating direction short sliders so do follow
-oh btw the difficulty name hmmmm sunken???? idk coz like the song title is sinking and like the past tense of sinking
-and of coz pls feel free to disagree with me because most of it is just my opinion other than overmapping and unreadability which is unrankable
-ps it seems you know of other people mapping this same song pst you can refer to theirs
:D::D:D and i noticed one of them actually does have streams places apart from sliders but you know whats the difference? theirs is consistent throughout the song and they make it such that its need so ya if you really wanna do the same ensure the consistency and neatness(pm me in game if you wanna know which map im referring to so you can reference
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