happy30 wrote:

funny map, the skin is also very nice

small mod in IRC

kioukiou wrote:

Could not find too much problems.

[Sleep Style] and [Spec.C]

remove Lead-in　　　　　　
that's all i can find.

star.

Ex Boy wrote:

Well...good song, good map...

Some little problems

[Spec.C]
01:58:191 (2) - head and tail of sliders can't overlap fixed

[Sleep Style]
all right

[Yuca Style]
AR and OD are too low to read. maybe 7 or 8 fixed

star

Dr_dy wrote:

lovely map~:)

A little problem:

NORMAL
00:50:062 (6) If no open snaking sliders, i don't konw the slider will go right or left... fixed~

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa yuca-san

[General]
1) In SB, you have to double check your keyframe, I see some lots of keyframe that makes lag for bad PC (look here http://puu.sh/czh). You have to remove the unnesescary keyframe, like this http://puu.sh/czi

2) Make sure you have to make fade out at start and fade in at end of SB
3) Source : Vocaloid 2

[Spec.C]
00:23:352 (1) - Clap at start are not fit
01:05:546 (5) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:53:546 (5) - ^

[Sleep Style]
You need add more hitsound

00:15:997 (6) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
00:19:094 (6) - ^
00:22:191 (5) - ^
00:25:288 (6) - ^
00:35:739 (5) - ^
00:42:320 (5) - ^
00:50:062 (6) - Ugly slider, and don't let the startpoint overlap endpoint
00:54:707 (5) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:04:191 (6) - ^
01:38:062 (4) - ^
01:44:255 (9) - ^
01:49:675 (4) - Ugly slider

[Yuca Style]
00:03:610 (6) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
00:08:255 (5) - ^
00:15:997 (5) - ^
00:19:094 (5) - ^
00:22:191 (5) - ^
00:34:578 (7) - ^
00:42:320 (8) - ^
00:48:513 (9) - ^
00:51:610 (8) - ^
00:54:707 (5) - ^
00:57:804 (7) - Ugly slider
01:38:062 (7) - Should new combo, since the pattern are changed
01:45:804 (1,2,3,4) - Make a diamond pattern?

Nice song
STAR

P.S sorry for long mod about combo issue

y u c a wrote:

no~..
sorry;_;
thx mod~>w<

Sakura Hana wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
BG has a long name, please shorten it, make it something simple like BG.jpg or something, dont forget to edit the .osu files with this new change fixed
bit rate is too low bit rates lower than 128 are unrankable, consider getting a higher quality mp3 this is the best mp3 sample I can get


[Yuca Style]
00:01:868 (2) - I suggest you remove this note fixed
00:09:997 (2,3,4) - I suggest you dont alter the rythm you have, that is, note note triplet note note triplet. no,sorry
00:31:868 (4,5) - Unintutive jump and add place for it too. no,sorry

00:47:546 (4,5,6) - Theese play awkward, i recommend you remove (5) as it doesnt appear to have the same rythmical pattern with it there, if you want a triplet, put it in between (3) and (4) instead no,sorry

01:07:868 - Weird way of using kiai time, kiai time should enphasize certain parts of the song, not the video, i recommend you rethink your kiai
01:45:804 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesnt really fit... try a parallelogram? no,sorry

01:57:417 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Dont see the need for another stream here, only felt a stream on the previous one. no,sorry


[Sleep Style]
00:50:062 (6) - Unrankable slider, beginning and end touch each other. no,sorry


[Spec. C]
This diff is ok.

Alace wrote:

<Yuca>
01:31:868 (5) - new combo here

<Extra> you can ask ccbp to translate XD and i made a .osu to show what i did
00:03:223 (4) - remove this note may make this part sounding better
00:08:255 (5,6,7,8) - usually triples sound good from red tick,
00:14:449 (1) - normalclap fits the song well, you put enough notes so it is easy to make a hitsound pattern (i-10% volume for 1st red line)
00:26:836 (1) - i add a finish sound because of BGM finish
00:34:578 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - really good job here, i add more finish
00:39:513 (3) - this note didn`t follow any thing i change it a bit

OK i may stop here, those mods are general tips of mapping, you don`t need to 100% follow those tips
In fact, it is a very good mapset, even you don`t feel like to change anything that i point out

btw it`s good to think about modder`s mods, don`t just follow the mod posts

karenying wrote:

Spec. C
00:57:804(3) - 1 grid up and 1 grid left fixed

Alace wrote:

sorry for my super nazi modding
bubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Yuca Style]

00:39:804 (4,5,6) - Can you make this spacing better? It's a bit hard to read right now.

Fix and I'll rank.

Verdisphena wrote:

wtf is tamago º-º

Oh...
Congratz ;3

Krisom wrote:

Who created the song? I can't find him in the tags :/

I could not find it either, but the niconico douga site http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm4686820 says something like ラヴリーP, wich I THINK It translates as Lovely-P.

Please search the creator of the song for future Vocaloid maps you do

(btw, Tamago means Egg, right?)

Garven wrote:

Charming skin~

Verdisphena wrote:

I love tamago >w<

osuplayer111 wrote:

Heart fixed.