Ongaku wrote:

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Still Alive

00:39:231 (6) - I wouldn't put a reverse slider here. Reason why is because it is emphasizing two things at once, and you really just want to focus on one. I don't see anything wrong with it, no change.

Suggestion

00:57:402 (4,1) - Overlapping like these notes never looks good. You can rearrange 00:57:745 (1,2) - over 00:57:402 (4,5) - like this: Already changed this myself http://puu.sh/ld0FM/33929c852a.jpg
^
00:58:431 (3,4,5,6) - Then you can rearrange these notes like this: http://puu.sh/ld0KO/b2f5505a99.jpg ^

01:05:288 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - You can make this look better and more fun to play by being creative and rearranging these notes. Used your advice on the stream, but changed the part afterwards myself.

Explanation

-You can have 01:05:631 (1,2,3,4,1) - overlapping 01:04:602 (1) - and make it look nice.
-01:06:145 (2) - You can place this note at x:396 y:235 (under 01:05:460 (6) - sliderend) to make it look cleaner: http://puu.sh/ld1xX/0ee571dbde.jpg
-01:06:145 (2,3,4,5,6) - Keeps the fun in these jumps!

01:08:717 (1,2,3) - The flow is interrupted by the sudden switch at 01:09:060 (3) - and can be really annoying. Already changed this myself.

Suggestion and Explanation

-Ctrl+G these sliders 01:09:060 (3,4) - so the flow stays while playing.
-To fix the other notes after these sliders, you can move 01:09:745 (5) - above 01:09:060 (3) - and 01:09:917 (6) - at x:203 y:206. This allows it to play smoothly to 01:10:088 (1) - , since it is also a reverse slider, the flow can be redirected to your next note, 01:10:602 (2) - , which will be right over 01:09:917 (6) - , making it look cleaner. http://puu.sh/ld22H/c15a13ae8c.jpg

01:26:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try making this into a triangle (http://puu.sh/ld2k8/6a74e0b097.jpg) to make it look aesthetically pleasing. I like it the way it is, no change.
^
01:27:574 (7,8) - CAN be placed at x:29 y:154. You can change these notes location to your desire.

01:48:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here, you can make a nice pattern. Already changed it myself.

Explanation

-By making this kind of pattern with 01:48:488 (1,2,3,4) - , you can change it up a bit by making a star with 01:49:174 (5,6,7,8,1) - ( http://puu.sh/ld2Hm/efb4809784.jpg ). I think this would be very neat and flow nicely.

General Stuff
The map has really nice patterns and I like to see that. A little more polishing and cleaning, it'll be a great map from what I can tell.
Also: Reason why I didn't mod the lower diffs is because I don't know how to mod Hards, Normal, Easy, etc. ;w; Is fine. Thank you for the mod!

Good luck!

DahplA wrote:

Still Alive

1. 00:34:431 (1) - Why not place this in a different spot to create a perfect triangle Ok :p
   
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2. 01:08:031 (3) - Since you stacked this note, it causes a squished sort of transition from 2 to 3. I recommend this pattern instead using the same notes (maybe find a different spot for 01:08:717 (1) - if you do this): Okie.
   
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3. 01:16:602 (4) - A bit of low spacing for a clap. I suggest moving it further to the left. Done.
4. 01:36:145 (1) - Same as above. However, move 6 to stack on 4 to create a better circular movement. I like it
   
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5. 01:51:231 (1) - I want to see this jump put further away. I mean, it's the finale right? Compared to some of the other patterns, this is low spacing. Moved it to another location, further away from 2. (Might've put it too far but IT'S FINE)

Hard

1. 00:33:060 (5,2) - Parallel? Sure.
2. 00:45:402 (1) - Woah, why is this placed so high up in the field. Move it down, there's plenty of room. Haha oops, fixed.
3. 00:56:374 (1) - Same sort of deal here. I wonder why you placed it here, there's more space towards the top or left from 3. It's really weird to place it back over where you've already had notes. Yeah.. I don't know how to fix though..
4. 01:06:488 (4) - This has the highest spacing of this combo, but has nothing in the music to suggest it. Double check this. No idea how to fix.
5. 01:18:660 (1) - I don't believe this needs an NC You're right, it's a mistake :d Fixed.
6. 01:51:231 (1) - Same as in Stay Alive Done.

Normal

1. 00:56:888 (2,3) - Why not make these go straight down? I don't get it, I like them the way they are.
2. 01:10:602 (2,3) - Same here. They both look to suggest it. ^
3. 01:21:574 (2,3) - ^ ^
4. 01:26:545 (1,1) - I think these can go in the same combo since they're both to the drums. Done.

Nice.

Thank you for the stars and modding DahplA!

• I highly recommend AR3.1-3.5 here because it isn't the most loose Easy ever and the density is still progressively growing.

1. 00:39:917 (1) - A clap at the head of it should probably he removed here and should be placed 00:40:602 (2) - here, am I right?
2. 01:00:488 (3,4) - It feels a bit odd that there are claps at those sliders but not on the rest of the previous section. Maybe remove claps from here? I guess it would make more sense and would be more consistent.
3. 01:40:260 (1) - According to your hitsounding the end of the slider shouldn't be hitsounded with a clap.
4. To make it feel more powerful/dramatic you could add a finish at 01:46:431 (1) - or maybe a finish at 01:45:745 (5) - and a whistle at 01:46:431 (1) - : D

1. Again, accurate AR will be very troublesome for new players because approach circles appear very slowly when the density of the notes is even higher than previously and it's not that helpful to recognize what to click now when you have a whole bunch of notes to understand. This time I recommend AR5.5-5.8.
2. 01:18:317 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's very silent here, I think you forgot to add a whistle or two somewhere in this section. D:
3. 01:23:802 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
4. 01:29:288 - From here till the end there are only one whistle, drum and normal kicks and one finish at the end and nothing more. I advise to use some more whistles to make it alive because it's boring without it. :V

1. 01:18:660 (1) - I think you created a new combo here by a mistake, the previous one is enough. ;3

Krfawy wrote:

A techno feline! But why can I hear 'she wasn't banged tonight' at the end of the map? .3.

Easy

• I highly recommend AR3.1-3.5 here because it isn't the most loose Easy ever and the density is still progressively growing.

1. 00:39:917 (1) - A clap at the head of it should probably he removed here and should be placed 00:40:602 (2) - here, am I right?
2. 01:00:488 (3,4) - It feels a bit odd that there are claps at those sliders but not on the rest of the previous section. Maybe remove claps from here? I guess it would make more sense and would be more consistent.
3. 01:40:260 (1) - According to your hitsounding the end of the slider shouldn't be hitsounded with a clap.
4. To make it feel more powerful/dramatic you could add a finish at 01:46:431 (1) - or maybe a finish at 01:45:745 (5) - and a whistle at 01:46:431 (1) - : D

Normal

1. Again, accurate AR will be very troublesome for new players because approach circles appear very slowly when the density of the notes is even higher than previously and it's not that helpful to recognize what to click now when you have a whole bunch of notes to understand. This time I recommend AR5.5-5.8.
2. 01:18:317 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - It's very silent here, I think you forgot to add a whistle or two somewhere in this section. D:
3. 01:23:802 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
4. 01:29:288 - From here till the end there are only one whistle, drum and normal kicks and one finish at the end and nothing more. I advise to use some more whistles to make it alive because it's boring without it. :V

Hard

1. 01:18:660 (1) - I think you created a new combo here by a mistake, the previous one is enough. ;3

A very personal suggestion from me about Insane and the hardest diff. How about AR8.8 for Insane and AR9.3 for the highest diff?

That's all from me for now, call me back when you think it's ready.

Ongaku wrote:

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Noz's Insane

00:39:231 (6) - Kind of what I mentioned on the difficulty Still Alive, the reverse slider emphasizes two things. - Not really, I think it's fine.

Suggestion

01:10:602 (2,3,4,5,6) - You can emphasize the song more and make it more fun. - Did small change on DS to emphase more the song.

Explanation

What I like to do here, is use the DS to better emphasize the song.
-By moving 01:10:774 (3) - further from 01:10:602 (2) - , you can emphasize the jump in pitch in the song.
-By moving 01:10:945 (4) - closer to 01:10:774 (3) - , you can emphasize the jump in pitch in the song.
-01:11:117 (5,6) - Since these note emphasize the same pitch, you can use the same DS for both of them and still flow into 01:11:460 (1) - :http://puu.sh/ld3qE/0ff4f134d9.jpg

Good luck!

DahplA wrote:

Noz's Insane

1. 00:44:888 (3) - Is this shape really necessary? If you want to keep it, at least make it less cramped up. - Fix, but what happend if you mod Skystar map ? XD
   
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2. Hm, it's alright, just some weird flow and positioning.

Nice.

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Battle wrote:

[Still Alive]
00:34:088 (6,7,1) - The spacing between 5-6 is understandable since there's a whole beat pause, but the spacing for 1 is somewhat underwhelming since it's a pretty strong beat but it has the same spacing as 6-7 (it's basically the same since it's just a .1 difference .3.) I think it's fine.
00:41:288 (3,4) - You could blanket this a little better but I don't think it matters too much Uh, it's fine really.
00:43:688 (3,4,5) - Try to emphasize 4 more? It's fine the way it is.
01:07:345 (1,2) - 01:08:202 (4,5) - Why is the spacing for 1,2 smaller than 4,5 when the beat is equally as strong, I feel like you can easily fix this by making 2 a bit farther Moved it by a bit.
01:09:402 (4,5,6,1) - Wrong emphasis here, there is no indication on 6 for you to make it a jump, but there is a strong beat on 5, so basically make 5 a jump and don't make 6 a jump, but at the same time keep the jump between 6 and 1 I did something, I think.
01:11:117 (5,6,1) - Basically the same thing, the space between 4-5 is smaller than 5-6 but yet 5 is a stronger note than 6 I think it's fine, it's barely noticeable, especially while playing.
01:31:345 (3,4,5) - Okay so for this one, I feel like 4 can be emphasized more, it's a red tick but there are pretty strong vocals, jump between 4-5 is fine tho Done, I think?
01:32:888 (4,5,6) - 5 should be emphasized with the large jump, not 6 It's not even intended to be a jump, and it's not that large.
01:42:660 (6,1) - Blanket can be improved but it's w/e Improved it by a bit I guess?

Basically yeah

Krfawy wrote:

#DANGEROUSSAUSAGES

1. There is a unused osb in your folder
2. Try to add some more whistles at kiai, tbh the lack of hitsound its really sad there, using just sampleset its too monotonous and it doesn't really work a properly hitsounding, I'm not asking you to key sound, but a few more whistles during kiai can work nicely, I hope you consider or give me a good explain how your hitsouding work owo

1. AR9 its better, BPM is really low and jumps aren't that big, the ¨0,2¨ is unnecesary IMO
2. 00:24:488 (3,4) - this need more spacing tbh, current one its kinda ez to missread
3. 00:29:974 (4) - X:216 Y: 16 make it more clean tbh
4. 00:31:517 (1,2) - swap NC according to music and vocals
5. 00:32:202 (3) - if you are following vocals or instrument this slider should not end in such strong beat, just add a single circle in 00:32:374 -
6. 00:34:260 (7) - drum clap, like you did in 00:39:745 (7) - (apply to all diff that are missing it)
7. 00:41:288 (3,4) - Nazi blanket a bit off
8. 00:44:031 (4) - missing whistle
9. 00:55:345 - you shouldn't ignore this, since it break your clap pattern
10. 00:58:431 (3,4,5,6) - just suggestion, but mybe this pattern, can play alot better, anyways my suggestion:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:01:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - the lack of hitsounds make a bit sad here, maybe some drums sounds will do the work, apply t every diff as welll
12. 01:05:631 (1,2,3,4) - stream shape looks really bad, like you did by hand, I think you can improve it alot, try to do a blanket with 01:05:460 (6) -
13. 01:08:031 (3,4) - ctrl g play better
14. 01:40:088 SV change not needed tbh
15. 01:37:860 (2,3) - too close need moree spacing maybe
16. 01:45:745 (1,2) - ^
17. 01:50:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - you can make this stream shape more better

1. 00:32:202 (2) - same as insane diff
2. 00:34:088 (1,2) - according to the song yout NC should be in the actual 2 and not in 1, sop just swap them
3. 01:28:945 (7,1) - bit hard to read at first play, mmmmm anyways im good if you keep or change lol

1. 00:42:660 (1,2,3) - the overlaps looks a bit hard to play and can be a bit not ¨nice to see¨ pattern, I suggest you to try this out:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:517 (1,2) - swap NC
3. 00:34:260 (1,2) - swap NC same reason as your insane
4. 00:39:231 (1,3) - NC should be on 3 according to the music and your comboing not in 2
5. 00:44:717 (1) - remove NC, to keep your 2 stanzas pattern
6. 00:55:517 (2,3,1) - pattern can look a bit better than current is, for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:39:745 (4,5,1) - jump feels better from 5 to 1 than from 4 to 5
8. 01:29:288 (1,2) - you can avoid this overlap by making the slider curvy (blanket?)
9. 01:45:060 (3,4,5,6,7) - use the same spacing pls, this can be really stressful to play for a hard diff
10. 01:06:145 (2,3) - CTRL G play better for a hard diff, tbh, also will help us to balance more the spread
11. 01:12:145 (4,5,6,7,8) - when using circle patterns like this, better avoid doing jumps and just stick to the spacing, tbh I think this is too hard for what the current diff is
12. 01:23:117 (4,5,6) - a triplet in tail is really hard to play for this lvl, just remove 5
13. 01:25:860 (4,5,6) - ^
14. 01:35:460 (3) - ctrl G, slider to slider jump play alot better, because the slider leniency allow u to not end the slider and archive 300, but circle to slider is moe uncomfortable to play, also is just hard C:
15. 01:47:288 (2,3,4) - pattern need rework actually its too confuse for a hard and doesn't looks ¨planned¨

1. 01:01:174 (2) - CTRL G and adjust the spacing, so the spinner play alot better
2. 01:49:860 (1) - remove NC?

Natsu wrote:

Insane:

00:32:202 (2) - same as insane diff - Ok fair.
00:34:088 (1,2) - according to the song yout NC should be in the actual 2 and not in 1, sop just swap them - Fix
01:28:945 (7,1) - bit hard to read at first play, mmmmm anyways im good if you keep or change lol - That's good imo.

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280,125,110631,1,0,3:0:0:0:
310,138,110717,1,0,3:0:0:0:
335,158,110802,1,0,3:0:0:0:
350,187,110888,2,0,P|346:233|372:273,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
468,144,111231,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Natsu wrote:

hurry Aia, so Euny can cook me the dinner and we can boom boom boom~

Krfawy wrote:

Call me back once it's bubbled so Aia and I can sleep togeduh. \o/

Natsu wrote:

ok


General:

1. There is a unused osb in your folder Removed.
2. Try to add some more whistles at kiai, tbh the lack of hitsound its really sad there, using just sampleset its too monotonous and it doesn't really work a properly hitsounding, I'm not asking you to key sound, but a few more whistles during kiai can work nicely, I hope you consider or give me a good explain how your hitsouding work owo Nozhomi made hitsounds to everything except Easy diff, and he already answered to this. (He did fix some hitsounding stuff in my diffs though.)

Still alive

1. AR9 its better, BPM is really low and jumps aren't that big, the ¨0,2¨ is unnecesary IMO I like it being a bit more than the other insane diff. :<
2. 00:24:488 (3,4) - this need more spacing tbh, current one its kinda ez to missread I don't think it's weird at all, I've seen many people play this map without having any problems reading this part.
3. 00:29:974 (4) - X:216 Y: 16 make it more clean tbh Blanketed it with 1.
4. 00:31:517 (1,2) - swap NC according to music and vocals Done
5. 00:32:202 (3) - if you are following vocals or instrument this slider should not end in such strong beat, just add a single circle in 00:32:374 - Ok done.
6. 00:34:260 (7) - drum clap, like you did in 00:39:745 (7) - (apply to all diff that are missing it) Done.
7. 00:41:288 (3,4) - Nazi blanket a bit off Uhh, fixed.
8. 00:44:031 (4) - missing whistle Added.
9. 00:55:345 - you shouldn't ignore this, since it break your clap pattern Added.
10. 00:58:431 (3,4,5,6) - just suggestion, but mybe this pattern, can play alot better, anyways my suggestion: Done.
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:01:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - the lack of hitsounds make a bit sad here, maybe some drums sounds will do the work, apply t every diff as welll
12. 01:05:631 (1,2,3,4) - stream shape looks really bad, like you did by hand, I think you can improve it alot, try to do a blanket with 01:05:460 (6) - Fixed it by a bit myself, think it's a bit better now.
13. 01:08:031 (3,4) - ctrl g play better oops yeah, done .
14. 01:40:088 SV change not needed tbh Oops, didn't even know that was a thing there, fixed.
15. 01:37:860 (2,3) - too close need moree spacing maybe Spaced it out a bit more.
16. 01:45:745 (1,2) - ^ ^
17. 01:50:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - you can make this stream shape more better I like it sorry :<

Hard:

1. 00:42:660 (1,2,3) - the overlaps looks a bit hard to play and can be a bit not ¨nice to see¨ pattern, I suggest you to try this out:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:31:517 (1,2) - swap NC
3. 00:34:260 (1,2) - swap NC same reason as your insane
4. 00:39:231 (1,3) - NC should be on 3 according to the music and your comboing not in 2
5. 00:44:717 (1) - remove NC, to keep your 2 stanzas pattern
6. 00:55:517 (2,3,1) - pattern can look a bit better than current is, for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:39:745 (4,5,1) - jump feels better from 5 to 1 than from 4 to 5
8. 01:29:288 (1,2) - you can avoid this overlap by making the slider curvy (blanket?)
9. 01:45:060 (3,4,5,6,7) - use the same spacing pls, this can be really stressful to play for a hard diff
10. 01:06:145 (2,3) - CTRL G play better for a hard diff, tbh, also will help us to balance more the spread
11. 01:12:145 (4,5,6,7,8) - when using circle patterns like this, better avoid doing jumps and just stick to the spacing, tbh I think this is too hard for what the current diff is
12. 01:23:117 (4,5,6) - a triplet in tail is really hard to play for this lvl, just remove 5
13. 01:25:860 (4,5,6) - ^
14. 01:35:460 (3) - ctrl G, slider to slider jump play alot better, because the slider leniency allow u to not end the slider and archive 300, but circle to slider is moe uncomfortable to play, also is just hard C:
15. 01:47:288 (2,3,4) - pattern need rework actually its too confuse for a hard and doesn't looks ¨planned¨

Normal:

1. 01:01:174 (2) - CTRL G and adjust the spacing, so the spinner play alot better
2. 01:49:860 (1) - remove NC?

Applied everything in Normal & Hard diffs.

let me know when u reply to this

1. imo *ikr nice argument oko* this thing doesn't ~need~ AR 9.2 just 9 would have worked just as well
2. i would have mapped 00:28:431 - 00:28:602 - 00:33:917 - in the intro more consequently, right now you got 00:27:574 (4,5,1) - and 00:33:060 (4,5,6,1) - for the same kind of vocal instance (yaya im aware that one has a drum etc, but that still doesn't warrant stuff for 00:34:088 - because 00:28:602 - is also a because vocal )
3. 00:33:060 (4) - tbh im kind of confused why you do this if you did 00:26:202 (1,4) - 1/1 sliders for vocals for the most parts and suddenly switch to 2/1 for instruments only
   makes me think if there's the variety thought behind them or something else i don't see here
4. 00:55:002 - to 01:01:860 - is this section supposed to follow melody > instruments because instruments have stronger kicks on red ticks like
   00:55:517 - 00:57:231 - etc but i guess that was your intention
   i also thought this thing is building up towards the end where the strong drums kick in so 01:00:488 (1,2) - could be a bit more dense imo (as in the current rhythm is kinda ok but anticlimactic xd)
5. 01:01:860 - to 01:04:602 - is a very clear buildup so having sliders for 01:03:574 (1,2) - kind of disturbs that stuff
   what i mean is that you started to buildup with circles and increasing jumps and then suddenly go a step backwards in terms of intensity and do 01:03:574 (1,2) - as sliders, it'd make more sense with an actual buildup if this would start out as sliders and then go into larger and larger distance circles
6. 01:03:917 (2,3) - 01:07:688 (2,3) - 01:13:174 (2,3) - 01:13:860 (5,1) - 01:37:517 (1,2,3) - these kind of look like you mapped yourself in a corner and ran out of space so you decided to just ignore the way you spaced everything much higher and do something that plays okayish idk these stick out because they kind of break emphasis
7. 01:07:002 (1,2,3,4,1) - i don't really see a reason for a custom stack here tbh but that's kind of your choice i guess (all it does is making the pattern look a bit weird with hr lol)

1. 01:10:088 (1) - 01:15:574 (1,2) - 01:18:660 (2,3,4) - 01:24:145 (2,3) - are basically like 1:1 the same thing in the music and you mapped them differently each time you encountered it, it's not like none of your rhythms is terrible or something like that but the way you vary which sounds to place clickable notes on here doesn't make much sense to me:
   sometimes you decide to have the white tick not clickable (on a sliderend) like 01:10:431 - 01:15:917 - 01:43:345 - and in literally all other cases you decided it's better if the player has to click these sounds
   for last one the reason is probably vocals but I can't come up with a really good explanation for the first two
2. similarly to the point above these also seem a bit contradictory to have:
   01:11:117 (5,6,1) - 01:16:602 (4,1) - 01:22:088 (5,1) - 01:33:060 (5,6,1) - as you can see most *hopefully all* of these are identical things in the music, but sometimes you decide to skip 01:16:774 - 01:22:260 - by either leaving it out or putting a circle on it and for the most time you just keep mapping 1/2 rhythms over it
   due to that these 2 01:22:088 (5,1) - 01:16:602 (4,1) - stick out a lot but i can't really find a reason for you to highlight them like this nor do i find a reason why you don't do this again idk
3. o yes 01:18:317 (1,2,3) - i don't really get why this is stacked and so small in comparison to 01:21:402 (2,3) - 01:29:631 (3,4) - 01:35:117 (3,4) -
4. 01:40:260 (1,2,3) - this, more than most other patterns really looks like you ran out of space to put your circles at so you jsut did super close spacing opposed to everthing else idk

1. Some of your claps are missing. If there were some intended effects, use it consistently through the whole pattern. Else, it only feels as a hitsound error.
   01:11:802 (3) -
   01:22:088 (2) -
   01:24:831 (2) -
   01:29:631 -
   01:30:317 (2) -
   01:33:060 (2) -
   01:35:802 (2) -
   01:38:545 (2) -
   01:41:288 (2) -
   01:44:031 (2) -

1. 01:14:202 (5) - You forgot to add NC.
2. The normal-whistle sounds really random along this dnb song. Did you had any particular logic behind these whistles? I can't feel a musical difference for those parts.
   01:34:431 -
   01:37:174 -
   01:45:402 -
   01:50:888 -

1. 00:55:345 - Mapping along the vocal was fine, but this strong beat getting ignored wasn't cool enough.

1. 01:28:945 (7,1) - Guess you wanted to place the tail of (7) on the slider path, but the spacing is pretty bad right after a stream also considering your overall map is having a fast cursor flow. I don't see this part deserving such anti jump damaging intuitive readability.

1. You are using whistles on the correct spots... but they sound too loud and that gives a bad experience, as the players aren't able to listen to the music properly. The whistle isn't the best option for the kind of beat you are mapping, but you make it work. Just regulate the volume.
2. 01:50:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This really looks awful. Very bad, to be honest. Especially that (1,2,3,4), even if you used the transform slider into stream, it doesn't look like that, seems like you manually placed every note. That's not a bad idea as long as the stream is well-build around your map, but this is just disorganized. In case you want to make something creative and gimmicky, you could have done something similar to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3977271 that. Isn't that best option, but definitely looks better, especially with HR. Compare that with something like 01:28:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , there's an enourmous difference.
3. 01:26:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:48:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These patterns not only play bad due to the fact that they can be easily misread as 1/4 due to how they have been placed but also are counter-intuitive for a similar reason. If I had to compare each one, you made a lot of mistakes. You mapped them on a build-up section, when the music is getting more and more intense and the song goes on, therefore you want to increase the spacing between each note over and over instead of doing this... thing. It's also very surprising how you mapped them the same with whereas the accentuation change in the music is gigantic. You just can't compare one rhythm with the other one, it just doesn't make any sense, the final is much more stronger.
4. 01:07:002 (1,2,3,4) - Oko mentioned this previously, but I want to highlight it again. The way you are mapping this is incorrect, but why? It is our personal preference? A whim? Not at all. Music is about to enter on its momentum, on the hyped thing, it's the Kiai approaching in a nutshell!! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3977345 this is just a reference, you can use it, if you want, but you are not forced to follow my style.
5. 01:04:602 - 01:07:002 (1,2,3,4) - Lower the volume on these streams to 50%, they sound too loud in comparison to the music as a whole. But you can (optional) increase it on 01:05:974 - for that pattern up to 60%. Volume is important, you don't want to overshadow the music with the hitsounds, and vice versa, you don't want to let hitsounds become inaudible, either.
6. Another thing that must be mentioned as well are anti-jumps and how inconsistent they are. They don't have a clear path nor are being justified with the music. I can give you a whole explanation if you want, but that'd be pointless, because pretty much everywhere there's a random anti-jump followed by more than one jump, and that can make players do awkward movements as well as causing them misses just for not being able to understand where should they move later on.
7. Stacks are as well inconsistent. I'm talking about the back-and-forths specifically, though. Let me give you a couple of examples. 01:24:831 (5,6) - that random stack doesn't fit at all, why would you do that? It is because you think the song isn't strong enough particularly on (6)? Then what about 01:29:288 - when the music has the same intensity and rhythm and the jumps are way more bigger? What was that choice of mapping 01:29:288 (1,2,3,4) - as circles instead of sliders? Diversity? Alright, fine, we can live with that. But, boy those jumps are too different from the other section... very different in terms of placement and spacing. Regarding back-and-forths, they are inconsistent as well, especially if you place them during a jump-y section and on the end of it. You know when you place a jump, you have to move your cursor faster in order to hit the note (doesn't matter if they are small or bigger, you must be accurate in this sense), thus it puts pressure on the player that has to play the pattern. This also means you must place the following object where you think the player is going to be instead of forcing any bad movement. An example of this can be 01:41:460 (7,1) - whereas the player would expect you move where 01:41:802 (2) - is, you placed it on the other side of the map. During the Kiai, jumps and especially the emphasis of each beat is absolutely random and inconsistent.
8. Regarding anti-jumps (yes, I decided to explain you): Something that I said before applies here as well. You should place them when the music isn't stressed enough therefore the intensity isn't the same as other spots where you could place normal jumps. I'm not going to go in-depth again, but a good place to put something similar to what you are doing on other spots would be 01:47:117 (1,2,3,4) - when the map could perfectly have sliders instead, but in case you want to keep the circles, reduce the distance, since you want to remark the emphasis of every change of accentuation in the music properly, make 01:47:802 - 01:48:488 - be more noticeable. But in this map they just don't fit at all with the music.
9. Last but not least, the spacing of some 1/2 and 1/4 patterns feel very similar. 01:22:088 (5,1) - 01:39:917 (4,5,1) - 01:42:660 (6,1) - compare them and take your guess!
10. Take a look at the intensity at the beginning of the map and compare every prominent beat. Remap that if possible, 00:28:945 (1,2) - 00:29:288 (2,3) - 00:29:631 (3,4) - 00:29:974 (4,5) - just take a look at everything and compare the beats and the hitsounds, you will notice that this happens everytime on each pattern throughout the opening.
11. 00:34:431 - I want to guess that this 100% green line volume isn't intentional.

Sonnyc wrote:

[Noz's Insane]
01:28:945 (7,1) - Guess you wanted to place the tail of (7) on the slider path, but the spacing is pretty bad right after a stream also considering your overall map is having a fast cursor flow. I don't see this part deserving such anti jump damaging intuitive readability.

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]

1. Some of your claps are missing. If there were some intended effects, use it consistently through the whole pattern. Else, it only feels as a hitsound error.
   01:11:802 (3) -
   01:22:088 (2) -
   01:24:831 (2) -
   01:29:631 -
   01:30:317 (2) -
   01:33:060 (2) -
   01:35:802 (2) -
   01:38:545 (2) -
   01:41:288 (2) -
   01:44:031 (2) -

[Normal]

1. 01:14:202 (5) - You forgot to add NC.
2. The normal-whistle sounds really random along this dnb song. Did you had any particular logic behind these whistles? I can't feel a musical difference for those parts.
   01:34:431 -
   01:37:174 -
   01:45:402 -
   01:50:888 -

[Hard]

1. 00:55:345 - Mapping along the vocal was fine, but this strong beat getting ignored wasn't cool enough.

I applied everything except hitsound stuff for normal diff since Nozhomi hitsounded it.

DahplA wrote:

Still Alive

1. 01:00:831 (3,6) - There's definitely a weird overlap which looks out of place aesthetically. Before you look to fix this though, I want to mention something about this whole combo in the next part.
2. 01:00:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So, this whole combo is what I'm talking about. Very cramped positioning which does not fit the rest of your mapping at all. It looks to me that you've placed 01:00:488 (1,2) - quite low in the field which sets this combo up, and then base the rest of the notes in the combo off of this. Look at your spacings for your previous combos in this part. You've provided plenty for the others, but this part truly is out of sync with the rest. Personally it's just 01:00:488 (1,2,4,5) - this part, where you've essentially stacked 4 of the 6 notes in this combo in the same place.
3. 01:26:545 (1,2,3,4) - Similar thing here. Considering this is the build up for the next part, it's given some low spacing compared to the other combos. This part is packed full of drum beats, right? It's safe to allow these all to be jumps, especially considering this is the hardest difficulty. And I'm talking in comparison to parts like 01:30:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this, where there are only few strong notes, but the whole thing has much more spacing than that of the previous combo.

Just a few parts which break the "consistency" of the map. I would go so far as to say the rest of it is perfect, but brought down by several parts. Best of luck.

1. 00:28:431 - Following the snare sound, how about add note there?
2. 00:33:745 - Based on your hitsound sequence, probably missing clap there?
3. 00:33:060 (4,5,6,1) - Imo, on that one the rhythm may be better if like this http://puu.sh/lunQw/efc2651581.jpg, kinda not feels right if the snare here 00:33:917 - not mapped. Furthermore imo, the circle here 00:34:088 -on white tick doesn't represent anyhting
4. 00:38:202 (3,4,5,6) - Kinda same as above, a rhythm like this might be good http://puu.sh/luot6/fdeb1ce91e.jpg
5. 01:19:345 (5) - and 01:38:545 - and 01:39:917 (7) - 01:45:402 (7) - 01:46:774 (5) - 01:47:460 (3) - 01:48:145 (7) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that
6. 01:28:431 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo that stream not comfortable to play, especially 1/4 slider on 01:28:431 (1) - , it's like we just have to sudden jump on to reach next stream
7. 01:49:517 (7,8) - Maybe better stacked them, to keep the consistency stacking two circles like 01:48:488 (1,2) - and 01:48:831 (3,4) - and 01:49:174 (5,6) - on the whole stanza here 01:48:488 -
8. 01:50:031 (2,3,4,1) - After some testplay that triplet spacing with last stream kinda too far for some reason

1. 01:19:345 (4) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that
2. 01:28:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Idk noz, the placement of (7) kinda too force there imo, maybe a flip ctrl+j might improve the flow between stream towards next (1) http://puu.sh/luoNr/a2c840ff53.jpg
   
   Aside from that pretty clean

1. 00:28:431 - Following the snare sound, how about add note there?
2. 00:33:917 - Same as above
3. 00:55:002 (1) - Imo based on that drum sound on music, I guess it's better change that slider into two circle, so you will have a rhythm like http://puu.sh/lup6q/f2ba660f59.jpg? the placement something like http://puu.sh/lup9K/61960a4ab7.jpg
4. 01:06:145 - I think you misplaced that sampleset Normal there, that sampleset supposed to be here 01:06:317 - 01:19:345 - 01:48:145 (5) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that
5. 01:48:488 (1) - I think that will more appropriate with music if changed into 1/2 slider plus circle or similiar. Because you miss the beat here 01:48:660 - make it kinda odd to hear

1. 00:43:345 (2,3) - Spacing error
2. 01:07:345 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to avoid them overlaping, by moving (3) more to right http://puu.sh/lupwk/346593bf16.jpg and readjust next notes?
3. 01:10:088 (1,2,3) - Spacing kinda inconsistence a bit
4. 01:14:545 - 01:15:231 - 01:19:345 - 01:41:288 (4) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that
5. 01:37:174 - I'm not sure why there's normal-whistle there?

1. 01:07:345 - The hitsound on kiais, kinda inconsistence with your whole normal, hard, and extra diff. Because you didn't use normal sampleset on entire kiai in this diff and you use soft-clap instead here, kinda questionable for me
2. 01:39:574 (4,1) - Spacing error

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as requested
Some small sugestion,

[Still Alive]

1. 00:28:431 - Following the snare sound, how about add note there? Couldn't find a good way to add this
2. 00:33:745 - Based on your hitsound sequence, probably missing clap there?
3. 00:33:060 (4,5,6,1) - Imo, on that one the rhythm may be better if like this http://puu.sh/lunQw/efc2651581.jpg, kinda not feels right if the snare here 00:33:917 - not mapped. Furthermore imo, the circle here 00:34:088 -on white tick doesn't represent anyhting
4. 00:38:202 (3,4,5,6) - Kinda same as above, a rhythm like this might be good http://puu.sh/luot6/fdeb1ce91e.jpg
5. 01:19:345 (5) - and 01:38:545 - and 01:39:917 (7) - 01:45:402 (7) - 01:46:774 (5) - 01:47:460 (3) - 01:48:145 (7) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that
6. 01:28:431 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo that stream not comfortable to play, especially 1/4 slider on 01:28:431 (1) - , it's like we just have to sudden jump on to reach next stream
7. 01:49:517 (7,8) - Maybe better stacked them, to keep the consistency stacking two circles like 01:48:488 (1,2) - and 01:48:831 (3,4) - and 01:49:174 (5,6) - on the whole stanza here 01:48:488 - It's a great buildup for the triple, and it works, no change.
8. 01:50:031 (2,3,4,1) - After some testplay that triplet spacing with last stream kinda too far for some reason Not really, I think it's fine.

[Hard]

1. 00:28:431 - Following the snare sound, how about add note there?
2. 00:33:917 - Same as above
3. 00:55:002 (1) - Imo based on that drum sound on music, I guess it's better change that slider into two circle, so you will have a rhythm like http://puu.sh/lup6q/f2ba660f59.jpg? the placement something like http://puu.sh/lup9K/61960a4ab7.jpg
4. 01:06:145 - I think you misplaced that sampleset Normal there, that sampleset supposed to be here 01:06:317 - 01:19:345 - 01:48:145 (5) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that
5. 01:48:488 (1) - I think that will more appropriate with music if changed into 1/2 slider plus circle or similiar. Because you miss the beat here 01:48:660 - make it kinda odd to hear

[Normal]

1. 00:43:345 (2,3) - Spacing error
2. 01:07:345 (1,2,3) - Maybe try to avoid them overlaping, by moving (3) more to right http://puu.sh/lupwk/346593bf16.jpg and readjust next notes?
3. 01:10:088 (1,2,3) - Spacing kinda inconsistence a bit
4. 01:14:545 - 01:15:231 - 01:19:345 - 01:41:288 (4) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that
5. 01:37:174 - I'm not sure why there's normal-whistle there?

[Easy]

1. 01:07:345 - The hitsound on kiais, kinda inconsistence with your whole normal, hard, and extra diff. Because you didn't use normal sampleset on entire kiai in this diff and you use soft-clap instead here, kinda questionable for me
2. 01:39:574 (4,1) - Spacing error

[]
Good luck on requalified!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as requested
Some small sugestion,

[Still Alive]

1. 01:19:345 (5) - and 01:38:545 - and 01:39:917 (7) - 01:45:402 (7) - 01:46:774 (5) - 01:47:460 (3) - 01:48:145 (7) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that

[Noz's Insane]

1. 01:19:345 (4) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that

[Hard]

1. 01:06:145 - I think you misplaced that sampleset Normal there, that sampleset supposed to be here 01:06:317 - 01:19:345 - 01:48:145 (5) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that

[Normal]

1. 01:14:545 - 01:15:231 - 01:19:345 - 01:41:288 (4) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that
2. 01:37:174 - I'm not sure why there's normal-whistle there?

[Easy]

1. 01:07:345 - The hitsound on kiais, kinda inconsistence with your whole normal, hard, and extra diff. Because you didn't use normal sampleset on entire kiai in this diff and you use soft-clap instead here, kinda questionable for me This diff is hitsounded by me, others by Nozhomi. That's why it's so different, sorry for poor hitsounding I wanted to try doing it myself for the first time ^^. Nozhomi said it should be fine like that.

[]
Good luck on requalified!

Fixed everything except the one I wrote on. Thank you again .

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Noz's Insane]

1. 01:19:345 (4) - Set sampleset to Normal like this http://puu.sh/lupQ9/038085aacd.jpg, I guess you miss that - Yep nice catch.
2. 01:28:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Idk noz, the placement of (7) kinda too force there imo, maybe a flip ctrl+j might improve the flow between stream towards next (1) http://puu.sh/luoNr/a2c840ff53.jpg - I prefer my flow like 200% more than this suggestion ^^' sry. When you play it, it don't feel forced at all imo.
   
   Aside from that pretty clean

Good luck on requalified!

Stjpa wrote:

[Noz's Insane]
• 01:09:060 (3,4) - Sliders like these play kinda weird imo. But it's still up to you. (and they're kinda ugly too '-' ) - They are fine.
• 01:11:802 (2,4,5,6) - What's the reason for not stacking them? It kinda destroys the prettiness of this map. - Try to active stacking option on editor and you will see.
• 01:37:002 (6,8,2) - Stack the slidertail of (2) on (6) and (8)? Plays a bit better I think. - Would kill the curved flow here. Also this stack is not important imo.

Stjpa wrote:

I really love your maps Aia \o/ Thank you ^_^

[Still Alive]
• 00:34:260 (6,1) - Both objects have a clap for whatever reason. Doesn't sound right. And theres also a missing Clap on the slidertail of 00:33:060 (4)
• 01:26:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - It kinda disturbs me that these objects have hitsounding like a build-up but are very boring to play due to very low spacing and the sliderends that are not clickable. You've done it here 01:48:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) better. Jumps could be a little bit bigger in both parts, but not that much. Maybe 0,2 or something.


[Normal]
• 00:26:202 (1) - Why no 1/2 pattern here like 00:31:517 (1,2) - 00:34:260 (6,1) etc?
• 00:45:402 (4) - NC?


[Easy]
• 01:14:202 (2) - Missing Clap in the middle.

Applied everything, thank you

DahplA wrote:

I actually never realised, but this is a great song. It wasn't until I listened to another Veela song that I realised her vocals were amazing. Good luck, again.

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