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[NOVICE]
[*] 00:14:434 (14434|2,14758|1,15083|3,15407|2) - arrange to 4 3 2 4 for more balance
[*] 00:21:245 (21245|1) - to first column, same reason as ^
[*] 00:22:218 (22218|1,22461|2) - ctrl G seems better, hmmm . . . novice diff needs more hand balance , it's more friendly for beginner player here
[*] 00:23:758 (23758|0,24002|2) - move to 2 and 1
[*] 00:43:623 - 00:44:921 - 00:46:218 - 00:47:515 - and so on . . . i think it's no need 2 note, since this part was really calm . . . and give some relaxing pattern for beginner player is great way
[*] 00:56:434 - missing note for kick sound ?
[*] 01:05:840 (65840|2,66326|0) - move to 1 and 2 . . more better
[*] 01:12:326 (72326|1,72488|2,72650|3) - not contain any sounds like 01:11:677 (71677|1,71840|2,72002|3) - so . . i suggest to do this
http://puu.sh/kfsCt/0e5de6b213.jpg for covering the guitar sound, it's better way
[*] 01:17:029 (77029|0,77191|1,77353|2,77515|3,77677|0,77840|1,78002|2,78164|3,78326|0,78488|1,78650|2,78812|3) - you can re-arrange this a little, since this part is clearly have different sound
[*] 01:34:056 (94056|2) - change to single note only, sice you've map the guitar sound only use single note from beginning
[*] 01:44:272 (104272|2,104272|1,104596|0,104596|3) - same sound as 01:43:623 (103623|2,103948|3) - why different ?
[ADVANCED]
[*] 00:20:921 (20921|0) - extend to 00:21:569 - the sound still exist
[*] 00:26:272 (26272|1,26434|2,26596|3) - move to 3 4 3 . . . for make a better flow
[*] 00:30:002 (30002|1) - try this ==>
http://puu.sh/kfsXX/5f6ad811a3.jpg[*] 00:31:623 (31623|0) - since have same drum sound . . . so
http://puu.sh/kft4Z/62c3b447cd.jpg[*] 00:41:029 (41029|3,41191|0) - ctlg G . . feels better ;w;
[*] 00:41:677 (41677|0,41758|1,41840|2,41921|3,42002|2,42083|1,42164|0,42245|2) - incorrect snapping , use 1/3 snap for that . . . refer to EXHAUST diff is correct snap
[*] 00:56:434 (56434|0) - move to 4, cuz bad at same column with this LN 00:56:596 (56596|0) -
[*] 00:56:434 (56434|3) - missing note for kick sound ?
[*] 01:00:245 (60245|0,60326|1,60407|2) - incorrect snap . . still 1/3 sound here
[*] 01:00:975 (60975|2) - clearly same kick sound as 01:01:056 (61056|0,61056|1) - why different ?
[*] 01:12:812 (72812|1,72975|2) - add note, have another big sound here
[*] 01:23:434 (83434|1) - no drum sound, since your pattern is for drum from beginning
[*] 01:34:461 - missing sound here . . . still have a sound
[*] 01:40:542 (100542|1,100704|2) - move to 1 and 2 . . . more better
[*] 01:46:380 (106380|3) - snap to 01:46:461 - still have sound
[*] 01:47:840 (107840|1) - try
http://puu.sh/kftAl/b2f95ca55d.jpg[*] 01:49:461 (109461|1,109542|2,109623|3,109623|0,109704|1,109785|2,109867|3,109948|1,110029|0,110110|2,110110|1,110272|3,110434|1,110434|0) - incorrect snap, this must be 1/3 sound
[*] 01:51:569 (111569|0,111650|1,111731|3,111812|2,111894|3,111894|1) - same as ^
[*] 01:52:218 (112218|2) - snap to 01:52:299 -