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stu00608

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII, Again >:3


[stu's Inner Oni]
  • Ok Let's START!!
  1. ctrl+g 00:58:402 (319,321) - i guess sure~
  2. you can add notes here 00:59:628 - some like this yes... i don't have puush yet ;_; i want to make a little rest time so no notes there~
  3. add k 01:16:647 (451) - i think no ;w;
  4. add d 01:16:935 (452) - follow the melody i think k is better
  5. change to k 01:18:089 (460,461) -
  6. ^ 01:19:532 (475,476) - i change it to kd~ sounds good :D
  7. put Snap divior in 1/6 and put a k here ;_; 01:37:753 (651) - i think no D:
  8. change to k 01:42:248 (678) - because you are following a piano ( LOL i guess xD is a piano right? ) sure~
  9. add finish 01:48:666 (720) -
  10. ^ 01:50:253 (726) - i think no D:
  11. you can add some notes here too 01:59:051 - some like this i try it but not same set as your~

^^ GL again to rank this :D! also thank you :D

EDIT: NO KDS NO KDS :)
S a n d

Taiko mod request from: stu00608
Request Type: M4M
Request Diff: stu's Inner Oni
Modding Content: stu's Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*

收...收...收到什麼mod request才不開心呢 亨>////<


- 00:06:839 - Add d?
- 00:08:137 - Remove? No sound there.
- 00:10:012 ~ 00:10:589 - Could use 1/4 here to fit the music better.
- 00:18:017 - Maybe change to this?
- 00:19:243 - Suggest using big notes with high sv or a stream of 1/4.
- 00:35:108 - Nice sound change ;w;w;w;w;w;
- 00:37:056 - Change to d? Fits the song more.
- 00:38:137 - Change to k? ^
- 00:47:512 - I don't think volume change here is necessary?
- 00:56:238 - Remove here and 00:56:455 change to k?
- 01:36:551 - ddkkd -> dkddk? It sounds a lot smoother and fits the drum better.
- 01:37:633 - Add k here? You already did it here 01:42:248 lol

我....我....我才不希望這種東西被rank咧 亨>///<
stu00608

S a n d wrote:


Taiko mod request from: stu00608
Request Type: M4M
Request Diff: stu's Inner Oni
Modding Content: stu's Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*

收...收...收到什麼mod request才不開心呢 亨>////<


- 00:06:839 - Add d? 猴
- 00:08:137 - Remove? No sound there. 應該有吧!? 我還是照放
- 00:10:012 ~ 00:10:589 - Could use 1/4 here to fit the music better. 覺得步入開始的地方沒有必要加難D: 我超仁慈 :D
- 00:18:017 - Maybe change to this? 小改了一下 原本的的確怪怪的
- 00:19:243 - Suggest using big notes with high sv or a stream of 1/4. 放spinner感覺很酷D: 個人風格
- 00:35:108 - Nice sound change ;w;w;w;w;w; :D :D :D
- 00:37:056 - Change to d? Fits the song more. 猴 變更難
- 00:38:137 - Change to k? ^ 音調那邊往下所以我還是放d
- 00:47:512 - I don't think volume change here is necessary? ok 我yee到後面了
- 00:56:238 - Remove here and 00:56:455 change to k? 聽起來不錯 可是我想保留原來的D:
- 01:36:551 - ddkkd -> dkddk? It sounds a lot smoother and fits the drum better. 我改成dkkdd 最後一個擺k有點怪
- 01:37:633 - Add k here? You already did it here 01:42:248 lol 猴!



我....我....我才不希望這種東西被rank咧 亨>///<結果rank之後你就5mode全開100% (?
thank you Sand <3
Nyan
[Kantan]

SV 1.20

00:29:916 (21) - 앞쪽이든 뒤쪽이든 정박에 맞추는 것이 좋을듯
00:37:993 (1) - Remove Finish, 아니면 그냥 지워도 됨
00:46:214 (17) - 여기 00:46:358 로 옮긴 다음 Remove Finish
00:57:897 (39) - 끝을 00:58:762 - 에서 내는 것이 좋을듯.
01:26:743 (15) - add Finish
01:31:358 (25,26) - 원래 SV 1.20이었나 봄? 아무튼 얼른 수정 하셈.

[Futsuu]

00:19:243 (1) - 큰 캇
00:26:022 (28,29) -

00:38:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 이건 그냥 suggestion이긴 한데, 아무튼 후츠우에서 1/2 다른 색깔 섞어쓰면 뉴비들 몸에 해로움.

00:42:753 (20) - 지워
00:42:897 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) -

00:50:830 (51) - 00:51:407 에서 끝내도록

00:52:128 (53) - add Finish
00:53:282 (57) - add Finish
00:54:435 (61) - add Finish
00:56:743 (67) - add Finish
00:56:887 - add a kat
00:57:464 - add a kat

01:12:897 (9) - add Finish
01:15:205 (16,17,18,19) - add Finish
01:17:512 (1) - add Finish
01:26:743 (22,24) - add Finish
01:55:157 - add a don

[Muzukashii]

00:19:243 (53) - 큰 캇
00:22:272 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - 이 세 개의 ddk 중 하나만 살려 놓으셈
00:29:051 (111) - Remove Finish
00:36:911 (152) - move to 00:36:767
01:12:801 - add a don
01:15:108 - add a don
01:17:512 (1) - add Finish
01:21:743 - add a don
01:26:743 (45) - add Finish
01:27:897 (50) - add Finish
01:29:051 (55) - add Finish
01:30:205 (60) - add Finish
01:41:166 (18) - kat
01:47:224 - add a don
01:47:801 - add a don
01:51:262 (25,26,27) - ddk

[Oni]

01:26:743 (72,81,90,99) - add Finish
01:57:897 (285) - 슬라이더로 교체해도 됨

[Inner Oni]

01:57:897 (880) - 슬라이더로 교체해도 됨

[stu's]

01:30:926 (582,583,584) - kkkd in 1/6
Topic Starter
L y s

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]

SV 1.20

00:29:916 (21) - 앞쪽이든 뒤쪽이든 정박에 맞추는 것이 좋을듯 - (깨달음)ok
00:37:993 (1) - Remove Finish, 아니면 그냥 지워도 됨 - ok
00:46:214 (17) - 여기 00:46:358 로 옮긴 다음 Remove Finish - ok
00:57:897 (39) - 끝을 00:58:762 - 에서 내는 것이 좋을듯. - 이 부분 깜빡잊고 수정안했네 ok
01:26:743 (15) - add Finish - 이 부분은 Finish 넣지 않아도 괜찮다고 생각함
01:31:358 (25,26) - 원래 SV 1.20이었나 봄? 아무튼 얼른 수정 하셈. - 여기도 깜빡잊고 수정안했네 ok

[Futsuu]

00:19:243 (1) - 큰 캇 - ok
00:26:022 (28,29) -
- ok
00:38:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 이건 그냥 suggestion이긴 한데, 아무튼 후츠우에서 1/2 다른 색깔 섞어쓰면 뉴비들 몸에 해로움.
- (깊은 깨달음) ok
00:42:753 (20) - 지워 - 응 (OK)
00:42:897 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) -
- 마지막만 kk으로 하고 나머지는 ok
00:50:830 (51) - 00:51:407 에서 끝내도록 - 이 부분도 칸탄처럼 깜빡잊고 수정안해서 ok

00:52:128 (53) - add Finish - 이 부분도 칸탄처럼 넣을 필요는 없다고 생각함
00:53:282 (57) - add Finish - ^
00:54:435 (61) - add Finish - ^
00:56:743 (67) - add Finish - ^ (여기에 finish넣으면 형이 말한대로 뉴비들 몸에 해로워)
00:56:887 - add a kat - ok
00:57:464 - add a kat - ^

01:12:897 (9) - add Finish - Finish 넣을 필요는 없다고 생각함
01:15:205 (16,17,18,19) - add Finish - ok
01:17:512 (1) - add Finish - ok
01:26:743 (22,24) - add Finish - 이 부분은 칸탄처럼 Finish 넣지 않아도 괜찮다고 생각함
01:55:157 - add a don - ok

[Muzukashii]

00:19:243 (53) - 큰 캇 - 스 캇 ok
00:22:272 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - 이 세 개의 ddk 중 하나만 살려 놓으셈 - 무즙은 ddk같은 패턴이 없으므로 그냥 으로 했음
00:29:051 (111) - Remove Finish - ok
00:36:911 (152) - move to 00:36:767 - (메우메우 깊은 깨달음)
01:12:801 - add a don - 넣어보니 앞에 패턴이 없어서 그런지 별로다...그래서 패스
01:15:108 - add a don - ^
01:17:512 (1) - add Finish - ok
01:21:743 - add a don - ok
01:26:743 (45) - add Finish - 이 부분도 칸탄,후츠으처럼 넣을 필요는 없다고 생각함
01:27:897 (50) - add Finish - ^
01:29:051 (55) - add Finish - ^
01:30:205 (60) - add Finish - ^
01:41:166 (18) - kat - ok
01:47:224 - add a don - ok
01:47:801 - add a don - ok
01:51:262 (25,26,27) - ddk - 00:22:272 여기처럼 무즙에는 그런패턴이 없으므로 이렇게 함

[Oni]

01:26:743 (72,81,90,99) - add Finish - 위의 난이도들 처럼 안넣어도 된다고 생각함
01:57:897 (285) - 슬라이더로 교체해도 됨 - ok

[Inner Oni]

01:57:897 (880) - 슬라이더로 교체해도 됨 - ok

[stu's] - 여긴 겟난 만들어주신 분이 고칠거야

01:30:926 (582,583,584) - kkkd in 1/6
모딩 너무 ㄴㅁ 감사
stu00608

Nyan wrote:

[stu's]

01:30:926 (582,583,584) - kkkd in 1/6 sounds good ! fixed :)
thank you :) :) :)
mliencheng
mod requested by stu


[ Oni]

  1. 01:41:392 add d maybe ?
[ Inner Oni]

  1. 01:39:444 change to d sounds good too

[ stu's Inner Oni]

  1. 01:48:291 (711,712) - d
  2. 01:48:579 (715,716) - k

Look forward to get this ranked! osu definitely needs more high quality maps like this !
Topic Starter
L y s

mliencheng wrote:

mod requested by stu


[ Oni]

  1. 01:41:392 add d maybe ?
- Added

[ Inner Oni]

  1. 01:39:444 change to d sounds good too
- Changed

────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────

[ stu's Inner Oni]

  1. 01:48:291 (711,712) - d
  2. 01:48:579 (715,716) - k
────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
Look forward to get this ranked! osu definitely needs more high quality maps like this ! - :) and :cry:
stu00608

mliencheng wrote:

mod requested by stu


[ stu's Inner Oni]

  1. 01:48:291 (711,712) - d
  2. 01:48:579 (715,716) - k
:idea: all fixed !
:idea: added a spinner at 00:59:204

Look forward to get this ranked! osu definitely needs more high quality maps like this !
thanks for a lot stars <3 <3
Aruel
야이거제목에 띄어쓰기 있어야된다드라
Topic Starter
L y s

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

야이거제목에 띄어쓰기 있어야된다드라
아 귀찮은데...
Maya Tendo
こんにちは~Modding Queueから~低難易度のModが少ないみたいなので低難易度重視で

[Kantan]
Kantanではもう少し似た配置の繰り返しを使い、ノーツラインを一定にすべきです。
00:20:684 (4,7) - delete + 00:21:261 add d。後ろと同じ配置にすべきでかつ難易度は落とすべきだと思ったからです。
00:29:338 delete。シンバルが鳴ってますが前後の音の大きさを考えるにそこまで大きな音ではない上に難しいからです。
00:29:915 delete。1/1の6連以上はよろしくないですし、この直前が3つごとの塊だったので。
00:44:915 move to 00:45:204。

その他は4/1の休憩もあるので良いと思います。

[Futsuu]
Muzukashiiと配置が似ていてもう少し簡単にしたほうがよいかと思います。
00:19:819~00:33:665の2/1が少ない(というか0)なので増やしたほうが良いと思います。また、リズムが難しいので繰り返しの配置を多用するのがいいと思います。

例えばこういった感じに基本のパターンをそろえ、折り返し地点で2/1程度でも休憩を入れるといいかもしれません。

1st kiai
ここも休憩はあるものの譜面が難しいため簡単にすべきです。

赤い丸を囲ったところのような規則のあるパターンを入れて3/1のbreakを入れていくといいかもしれません。

00:51:838~00:59:050
ここはKantan,Muzukashiiの配置の難易度を考えたとき1/2が少ないと思います。
add some 1/2。

01:12:319 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - ^
Muzukashiiでは1/3があるのにFutsuuでは1/1のみというのはよろしくないです。

このような形で後ろの方も難易度のバランスを取るのをお勧めします!
Topic Starter
L y s

Mrriichi wrote:

こんにちは~Modding Queueから~低難易度のModが少ないみたいなので低難易度重視で

[Kantan]
Kantanではもう少し似た配置の繰り返しを使い、ノーツラインを一定にすべきです。
00:20:684 (4,7) - delete + 00:21:261 add d。後ろと同じ配置にすべきでかつ難易度は落とすべきだと思ったからです。
00:29:338 delete。シンバルが鳴ってますが前後の音の大きさを考えるにそこまで大きな音ではない上に難しいからです。
00:29:915 delete。1/1の6連以上はよろしくないですし、この直前が3つごとの塊だったので。
- 全部OKです
00:44:915 move to 00:45:204。- これは曲と合わないのでPASSします。

その他は4/1の休憩もあるので良いと思います。

[Futsuu]
Muzukashiiと配置が似ていてもう少し簡単にしたほうがよいかと思います。
00:19:819~00:33:665の2/1が少ない(というか0)なので増やしたほうが良いと思います。また、リズムが難しいので繰り返しの配置を多用するのがいいと思います。

例えばこういった感じに基本のパターンをそろえ、折り返し地点で2/1程度でも休憩を入れるといいかもしれません。
- 参照して修正しました。

1st kiai
ここも休憩はあるものの譜面が難しいため簡単にすべきです。

赤い丸を囲ったところのような規則のあるパターンを入れて3/1のbreakを入れていくといいかもしれません。
- ここも参照して修正しました。

00:51:838~00:59:050
ここはKantan,Muzukashiiの配置の難易度を考えたとき1/2が少ないと思います。- 参照しました。
add some 1/2。

01:12:319 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - ^
Muzukashiiでは1/3があるのにFutsuuでは1/1のみというのはよろしくないです。- 参照しました。

このような形で後ろの方も難易度のバランスを取るのをお勧めします!
Modありがとうございます。アドバイスもありがとうございます :)
Konpaku Sariel
님 랭크 언제됨
Topic Starter
L y s

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

님 랭크 언제됨
제가 하고 싶은 말이군요...
Topic Starter
L y s
후..걍 접을까
JUDYDANNY
Hello, Requested to older request via PM. http://puu.sh/nyEXr/5acefd718a.png
Introduction

  • :!: Kantan ~ Oni , adjustment the Difficulty seems not the best.Some parts have a too hard.
    players endless plays with full sounds. BPM is too high and it sounds not clear to expression the louder and quieter gap with hitsounds .
    [list:1337] :!: calmer part (01:03:665 - ~ , 01:34:819 - (Oni ) , 01:37:127 - ~ )
  1. Verse part ( 00:19:819 - ~ )
  2. Ending (01:59:050 - ~) is killer FC. not sounds well but it’s Harder part on Futsuu ~~ Oni . no need to follow the percussion well.
  3. Futsuu has too long patterns, should divide the more.
  4. Muzukashii still needs more over 3/2 break.
  5. ⅓ part(Oni)
  6. long ¼ pattern seems not best the own diff levels to me. I think you can divide some. (Oni)
Symbol meaning
 
  1. >> Normal suggestion.
    Big text >> Strong suggestion.
    :?: >> Questionable imo.
    :!: >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
    No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on txhe other place.

[Kantan]
  1. 00:20:396 - remove? long rest (but Kantan players needed) seems better for expression the not louder part.
  2. 00:22:415 (1,2) - remove the one and move the one to 00:23:857 - here?
  3. 00:25:011 - remove? same as 20:396.
  4. 00:29:627 - , 00:31:934 - ^
  5. 00:34:531 - uneeded imo for Kantan.
  6. 00:55:877 - add don? for empashized to sound build up.
  7. 01:04:242 - (remove ) , 01:06:550 - (move to 01:07:704 - ?) same as 00:20:396 -.
  8. 01:17:511 - remove the finisher ? or changed some? D-d-d ;_;
  9. 01:22:415 - , 01:23:569 - should make the unifed (01:17:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ).
  10. 01:31:934 - , 01:33:088 - remove? avoid to add note sounds better to me as an clear accent. plz consider again.
  11. 01:30:492 - or somewhere? add note?
  12. 01:37:704 - seems not good at clam part.
  13. 01:38:569 - , 01:40:011 - , 01:40:588 - ^ , can add the long rest.
  14. 01:42:319 - , 01:43:184 - ^.
  15. 01:38:857 - , 01:43:473 - ^? if you hope.
  16. 01:48:954 - no add note? same as 1st.
[Futsuu]

  • :!: 00:15:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add more.
    [list:1337]E.g. 1 00:15:348 - , 00:16:502 - ?
    E.g. 2 00:16:069 - , 00:17:223 - .
00:20:107 - remove and 00:22:992 - move to 00:24:146 - ?00:26:742 (1,2) - change to k and 00:27:607 - remove, too long patterns (*-1)00:29:627 - remove, same as above. *-100:31:646 - ^ *-100:34:531 - remove, no need to play the full sound. (*-2)00:52:415 - ,00:53:569 - ^. *-101:03:954 - , 01:04:531 - , 01:06:261 - ^ . *-201:13:761 - , 01:14:915 - ^ *-1 and the gap between to before 2/1 rhythm…01:15:276 - , 01:15:925 - you can add.01:21:838 - remove, *-1 & *-2.01:29:338 - remove ^01:30:636 - can add d and 01:31:069 - change to d? for synthesizer?01:37:127 - ~ nerf the more. e.g.
  1. 01:37:415 - , 01:39:723 - , 01:42:031 - , 01:43:184 - remove.
01:51:261 - ,01:52:415 - ^.*-101:59:050 - , 01:59:194 - ,01:59:338 - remove. *-2.[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:059 - remove, making a little rest for players.
  2. 00:17:944 - remove, no need to play the full sound. (*-2)
  3. As my opinion, how about returning the beat at once on 00:21:982 - ? plays easier to me on the cool down part.
    1. 00:21:982 - move to 1/2right? (00:22:127 - )
    2. 00:22:271 - move to1/2right? (00:22:415 - )
  4. 00:23:713 - , 00:24:002 - remove, no need to play the full sound. (*-2).
    :!: 00:26:886 (1,2,4) - should change to k.
  5. 00:29:338 - how about change to K - d - ddd - d ? sounds well with drums.
  6. 00:32:367 - move to ½ left (00:32:223 - ) ? same as above.
  7. 00:33:184 - harder rhythm with 208BPM as Muzukashii, consider to remove.
  8. 00:34:242 (1,2,3) - remove and 00:34:531 - add k there? sounds more simple and avoid to full working.
  9. 00:35:107 - can addk for piano.
  10. 00:37:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,) - should remove, doesnt have long rest .
  11. 00:37:992 - and finisher K ?
  12. 00:47:223 - , 00:47:367 - remove? avoid to full working from kiai begins.
  13. 00:42:752 - ^?
  14. 00:49:675 - ^?
  15. 00:56:309 - overemphasized.
  16. 01:03:954 - , 01:06:261 - , 01:06:838 - , remove, *-2
  17. 01:15:781 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - short or divide more?
  18. from 01:17:511 - , you should more ⅓ double. like 01:17:992 - , 01:19:146 - , 01:20:300 - , 01:21:454 - .
  19. from 01:26:886 - , you should more ½ triple. like 01:26:886 - , 01:28:040 - , 01:29:194 - , 01:30:636 - .
  20. 01:28:761 - , 01:31:069 - no need finisher. not louder on music.
  21. 01:37:127 - same as Futsuu, nerf the more and change more kat sounds? expression for no bass sound on back.
  22. 01:59:050 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:59:987 (1,2) - remove? *-2
[Oni]
  1. 00:06:261 - , 00:06:838 - ,00:07:415 - earlyemphasized to me , remove ?
  2. 00:16:213 - , 00:17:367 - consider to remove, harder to play as Oni players. (*-3)
    :!: 00:22:415 - remove and 00:22:992 - move to 00:22:704 - .
  3. 00:25:011 - consider to change to d and 00:20:540 - d. sounds better the flow for expression the bass begins.
  4. 00:27:031 - , 00:27:319 - overemphasized, suggest to remove.
  5. same as Muzukashii ,from 00:29:338 - . change to K - k - ddd - d ?http://puu.sh/nyDUJ/9658c28df6.jpg
  6. 00:31:502 - remove? same as Muzukashii.
  7. 00:34:675 - move to 00:34:531 - and 00:35:540 - move to 00:35:107 - , 00:35:829 - move to 00:35:684 - ? http://puu.sh/nyE24/e443d04296.jpg (from 00:33:665 (1) - )
  8. 00:36:045 - suggest to remove, flows not the best to me.
  9. 00:36:550 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - make more simple like k-kkk-k, sounds not the best, sudden flows pattern.
  10. 00:37:127 (165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - divide more, *-2.
    e.g. 00:37:271 - , 00:38:136 - remove
  11. 00:42:175 - divide more? e.g.1 00:42:535 - , 00:42:680 - ? other long 1/4s are same.
  12. 00:48:232 - , 00:49:675 - , 00:51:694 - remove *-2..
  13. 00:56:309 - , 00:56:598 - ^ *-3.
  14. 01:03:809 - , 01:04:098 - , 01:04:675 - ,01:04:963 - ,01:05:252 - ,01:05:829 - ,01:06:117 -
    ,01:06:406 - ,01:06:982 - ,01:07:271 - ,01:07:559 - consider to remove, same as other diffs.
  15. from 01:12:896 - , I think ⅓-2plots sound better than ⅓-4plots. (e.g. 01:13:281 - , 01:13:857 - , 01:14:146 - , 01:14:242 - , 01:14:434 - , 01:15:588 - remove and 01:15:107 - add ) (from 01:12:896 - http://puu.sh/nyEta/cff21b522e.jpg)
  16. from 01:17:511 - should more divide.
  17. 01:34:819 - ^.
  18. 01:37:127 - nerf the more. If you cant remove more , change the more kat sounds same as Muzukashii suggestion.
  19. 01:55:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - make more simple plz…. ._.
  20. 01:59:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^.
Tired , Sorry to long mod and I skipped to mod over Inner Oni for now.
But these are needed to adjust the leves for rank.
You should look for modders (experienced to mod enough the easier ~ middle diffs).
Topic Starter
L y s

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello, Requested to older request via PM. http://puu.sh/nyEXr/5acefd718a.png
Introduction

  • :!: Kantan ~ Oni , adjustment the Difficulty seems not the best.Some parts have a too hard.
    players endless plays with full sounds. BPM is too high and it sounds not clear to expression the louder and quieter gap with hitsounds .
    [list:1337] :!: calmer part (01:03:665 - ~ , 01:34:819 - (Oni ) , 01:37:127 - ~ )
  1. Verse part ( 00:19:819 - ~ )
  2. Ending (01:59:050 - ~) is killer FC. not sounds well but it’s Harder part on Futsuu ~~ Oni . no need to follow the percussion well.
  3. Futsuu has too long patterns, should divide the more.
  4. Muzukashii still needs more over 3/2 break.
  5. ⅓ part(Oni)
  6. long ¼ pattern seems not best the own diff levels to me. I think you can divide some. (Oni)
Symbol meaning
 
  1. >> Normal suggestion.
    Big text >> Strong suggestion.
    :?: >> Questionable imo.
    :!: >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
    No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on txhe other place.

[Kantan]
  1. 00:20:396 - remove? long rest (but Kantan players needed) seems better for expression the not louder part.
  2. 00:22:415 (1,2) - remove the one and move the one to 00:23:857 - here?
  3. 00:25:011 - remove? same as 20:396.
  4. 00:29:627 - , 00:31:934 - ^
  5. 00:34:531 - uneeded imo for Kantan.
  6. 00:55:877 - add don? for empashized to sound build up.
  7. 01:04:242 - (remove ) , 01:06:550 - (move to 01:07:704 - ?) same as 00:20:396 -.
  8. 01:17:511 - remove the finisher ? or changed some? D-d-d ;_;
  9. 01:22:415 - , 01:23:569 - should make the unifed (01:17:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ).
  10. 01:31:934 - , 01:33:088 - remove? avoid to add note sounds better to me as an clear accent. plz consider again.
  11. 01:30:492 - or somewhere? add note?
  12. 01:37:704 - seems not good at clam part.
  13. 01:38:569 - , 01:40:011 - , 01:40:588 - ^ , can add the long rest.
  14. 01:42:319 - , 01:43:184 - ^.
  15. 01:38:857 - , 01:43:473 - ^? if you hope.
  16. 01:48:954 - no add note? same as 1st.
[Futsuu]

  • :!: 00:15:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add more.
    [list:1337]E.g. 1 00:15:348 - , 00:16:502 - ?
    E.g. 2 00:16:069 - , 00:17:223 - .
00:20:107 - remove and 00:22:992 - move to 00:24:146 - ?00:26:742 (1,2) - change to k and 00:27:607 - remove, too long patterns (*-1)00:29:627 - remove, same as above. *-100:31:646 - ^ *-100:34:531 - remove, no need to play the full sound. (*-2)00:52:415 - ,00:53:569 - ^. *-101:03:954 - , 01:04:531 - , 01:06:261 - ^ . *-201:13:761 - , 01:14:915 - ^ *-1 and the gap between to before 2/1 rhythm…01:15:276 - , 01:15:925 - you can add.01:21:838 - remove, *-1 & *-2.01:29:338 - remove ^01:30:636 - can add d and 01:31:069 - change to d? for synthesizer?01:37:127 - ~ nerf the more. e.g.
  1. 01:37:415 - , 01:39:723 - , 01:42:031 - , 01:43:184 - remove.
01:51:261 - ,01:52:415 - ^.*-101:59:050 - , 01:59:194 - ,01:59:338 - remove. *-2.[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:059 - remove, making a little rest for players.
  2. 00:17:944 - remove, no need to play the full sound. (*-2)
  3. As my opinion, how about returning the beat at once on 00:21:982 - ? plays easier to me on the cool down part.
    1. 00:21:982 - move to 1/2right? (00:22:127 - )
    2. 00:22:271 - move to1/2right? (00:22:415 - )
  4. 00:23:713 - , 00:24:002 - remove, no need to play the full sound. (*-2).
    :!: 00:26:886 (1,2,4) - should change to k.
  5. 00:29:338 - how about change to K - d - ddd - d ? sounds well with drums.
  6. 00:32:367 - move to ½ left (00:32:223 - ) ? same as above.
  7. 00:33:184 - harder rhythm with 208BPM as Muzukashii, consider to remove.
  8. 00:34:242 (1,2,3) - remove and 00:34:531 - add k there? sounds more simple and avoid to full working.
  9. 00:35:107 - can addk for piano.
  10. 00:37:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,) - should remove, doesnt have long rest .
  11. 00:37:992 - and finisher K ?
  12. 00:47:223 - , 00:47:367 - remove? avoid to full working from kiai begins.
  13. 00:42:752 - ^?
  14. 00:49:675 - ^?
  15. 00:56:309 - overemphasized.
  16. 01:03:954 - , 01:06:261 - , 01:06:838 - , remove, *-2
  17. 01:15:781 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - short or divide more?
  18. from 01:17:511 - , you should more ⅓ double. like 01:17:992 - , 01:19:146 - , 01:20:300 - , 01:21:454 - .
  19. from 01:26:886 - , you should more ½ triple. like 01:26:886 - , 01:28:040 - , 01:29:194 - , 01:30:636 - .
  20. 01:28:761 - , 01:31:069 - no need finisher. not louder on music.
  21. 01:37:127 - same as Futsuu, nerf the more and change more kat sounds? expression for no bass sound on back.
  22. 01:59:050 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:59:987 (1,2) - remove? *-2
[Oni]
  1. 00:06:261 - , 00:06:838 - ,00:07:415 - earlyemphasized to me , remove ?
  2. 00:16:213 - , 00:17:367 - consider to remove, harder to play as Oni players. (*-3)
    :!: 00:22:415 - remove and 00:22:992 - move to 00:22:704 - .
  3. 00:25:011 - consider to change to d and 00:20:540 - d. sounds better the flow for expression the bass begins.
  4. 00:27:031 - , 00:27:319 - overemphasized, suggest to remove.
  5. same as Muzukashii ,from 00:29:338 - . change to K - k - ddd - d ?http://puu.sh/nyDUJ/9658c28df6.jpg
  6. 00:31:502 - remove? same as Muzukashii.
  7. 00:34:675 - move to 00:34:531 - and 00:35:540 - move to 00:35:107 - , 00:35:829 - move to 00:35:684 - ? http://puu.sh/nyE24/e443d04296.jpg (from 00:33:665 (1) - )
  8. 00:36:045 - suggest to remove, flows not the best to me.
  9. 00:36:550 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - make more simple like k-kkk-k, sounds not the best, sudden flows pattern.
  10. 00:37:127 (165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - divide more, *-2.
    e.g. 00:37:271 - , 00:38:136 - remove
  11. 00:42:175 - divide more? e.g.1 00:42:535 - , 00:42:680 - ? other long 1/4s are same.
  12. 00:48:232 - , 00:49:675 - , 00:51:694 - remove *-2..
  13. 00:56:309 - , 00:56:598 - ^ *-3.
  14. 01:03:809 - , 01:04:098 - , 01:04:675 - ,01:04:963 - ,01:05:252 - ,01:05:829 - ,01:06:117 -
    ,01:06:406 - ,01:06:982 - ,01:07:271 - ,01:07:559 - consider to remove, same as other diffs.
  15. from 01:12:896 - , I think ⅓-2plots sound better than ⅓-4plots. (e.g. 01:13:281 - , 01:13:857 - , 01:14:146 - , 01:14:242 - , 01:14:434 - , 01:15:588 - remove and 01:15:107 - add ) (from 01:12:896 - http://puu.sh/nyEta/cff21b522e.jpg)
  16. from 01:17:511 - should more divide.
  17. 01:34:819 - ^.
  18. 01:37:127 - nerf the more. If you cant remove more , change the more kat sounds same as Muzukashii suggestion.
  19. 01:55:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - make more simple plz…. ._.
  20. 01:59:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^.
Tired , Sorry to long mod and I skipped to mod over Inner Oni for now.
But these are needed to adjust the leves for rank.
You should look for modders (experienced to mod enough the easier ~ middle diffs).
修正しました。私は英語が下手です・・・次には日本語でお願いします…
xtrem3x
Removing my lazyness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

01:37:127- what happen here?? ... this velocity change is unranked ... change your inherited point from 01:37:415- to this point. for avoid these problem in all diffs (except stu's diff ... already)


  • Kantan:

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:896- .. is better with finish notes (?)

    01:34:819 - Reduce spinner until 01:35:973- ... and leave a empty space for "break"

    01:45:204 - Autoplay don't finish this spinner (well in my PC, not have idea .. is a bug or something)...

  • Futsuu:

    00:35:973 - Reduce spinner until 00:37:127- ... just follow "stream" sound and leave a empty space...

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:607- .. is better with finish notes (?)

    01:12:752 - if applies above suggest, then delete this note...

  • Muzukashii:

    00:18:449 - Move to 00:18:305- .. 2 triples in a row is "hard" .. is better a 5-notes stream for typical rhythm.

    00:40:156 - Move this note to 00:40:444- ... comparin with similar sequence in 00:44:482- here have other focus, then, is better a variety without repeat pattern.

    00:49:747 - Delete this note, not nessesary.

    00:58:833 - is hard this sequence .. need delete this note and ...
    00:58:978 - Delete this note too...

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:607- .. is better with finish notes (?)

    01:30:997 - Move this note to 01:30:853- .. have better emphasis with triple of this way.

    01:55:156 - Delete this note .. to reduce density in this sequence.

    01:57:680 - Delete this note and ...
    01:57:824 - Delete this note too ... Same reason as 00:58:833-

  • Oni:

    00:53:208 - is possible change this note to d ... for emphasis in BG sound and pitch sound relatively...
    00:55:516 - Same ^

    00:58:761 - Change this note to k, have same pitch sound as next notes.

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:607- .. is better with finish notes (?)

    01:53:425 - Add note d ... missing note (?)

    01:55:083 - Add note here, have sound for a triple.

  • Inner Oni:

    00:42:752 - these 3 last notes can be ddk for emphasis in drums ...

    00:44:987 - add note k ... have sound for a triple.

    00:45:204 - Add note d .. have bass sound.

    from 00:55:300- to 00:59:050- = Long stream ...
    00:56:382 - Change to d ...
    00:58:761 - Change to k.

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:607- = Long stream ...
    01:08:281 - first 4 notes can be k .. for piano sound
    01:11:454 - change to k ... ^

    from 01:12:800- to 01:17:223- = Long stream ...
    01:15:492 - ctrl+g with next note ... here broken your follow in piano sound...
    01:16:934 - last 4 notes with k.

    from 01:17:511- to 01:26:742- = other LOOOONG stream ...
    01:20:684 - piano sound is here ... change to k ...
    01:22:992 - ctrl+g with next note ^
    01:24:146 - Same ^
    01:25:877 - Change to d
    01:26:069 - Change to d
    01:26:357 - ctrl+g with next note ...
    01:26:550 - Change this note to d.

    from 01:54:146- to 01:57:896- = Other long stream ...
    01:55:877 - ctrl+g with next note...
    01:56:958 - Change to k ...
    01:57:391 - Change to k.

  • stu's Inner Oni:

    00:24:218 - Delete ...
    00:24:362 - Delete too ... focusing in hit drum sounds.

    00:52:632 - Change to d .. have same sound as previous 5-note stream...
    00:53:208 - Change to d .. not same as previous 5-note why here changes sound.

    from 00:55:444- to 00:59:050- = Long stream ...
    00:58:112 - Change to k ...
    00:58:545 - Change to k ...
    00:58:689 - ctrl+g with next note ...
    00:58:833 - Change to k.

    from 01:17:511- to 01:26:742- = other long stream ...
    01:26:357 - ctrl+g with next note ...
    01:26:742 - Change to k

    01:27:824 - Change this note to k ... have similar sound as previous 3 notes...

    01:30:132 - ctrl+g with next note .. is more fluid comparing BG sound...

    01:46:213 - Change to k ...
    01:46:285 - Change to k too ... both notes have similar pitch sound as previous 2 notes.

    01:51:478 - Change to d ... is low sound here.
    01:52:055 - Same here...

    from 01:54:290- to 01:57:896- = other long stream ...
    01:54:362 - ctrl+g with note 01:54:579- ...
    01:54:651 - ctrl+g with next note ...
    01:54:795 - ctrl+g with next note.

    01:59:627 - in this part is possible 4 notes in 1/6 .. kkkd
Topic Starter
L y s

xtrem3x wrote:

Removing my lazyness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

01:37:127- what happen here?? ... this velocity change is unranked ... change your inherited point from 01:37:415- to this point. for avoid these problem in all diffs (except stu's diff ... already)


  • Kantan:

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:896- .. is better with finish notes (?)

    01:34:819 - Reduce spinner until 01:35:973- ... and leave a empty space for "break"

    01:45:204 - Autoplay don't finish this spinner (well in my PC, not have idea .. is a bug or something)...

  • Futsuu:

    00:35:973 - Reduce spinner until 00:37:127- ... just follow "stream" sound and leave a empty space...

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:607- .. is better with finish notes (?)

    01:12:752 - if applies above suggest, then delete this note...

  • Muzukashii:

    00:18:449 - Move to 00:18:305- .. 2 triples in a row is "hard" .. is better a 5-notes stream for typical rhythm.

    00:40:156 - Move this note to 00:40:444- ... comparin with similar sequence in 00:44:482- here have other focus, then, is better a variety without repeat pattern.

    00:49:747 - Delete this note, not nessesary.

    00:58:833 - is hard this sequence .. need delete this note and ...
    00:58:978 - Delete this note too...

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:607- .. is better with finish notes (?)

    01:30:997 - Move this note to 01:30:853- .. have better emphasis with triple of this way.

    01:55:156 - Delete this note .. to reduce density in this sequence.

    01:57:680 - Delete this note and ...
    01:57:824 - Delete this note too ... Same reason as 00:58:833-

  • Oni:

    00:53:208 - is possible change this note to d ... for emphasis in BG sound and pitch sound relatively...
    00:55:516 - Same ^

    00:58:761 - Change this note to k, have same pitch sound as next notes.

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:607- .. is better with finish notes (?)

    01:53:425 - Add note d ... missing note (?)

    01:55:083 - Add note here, have sound for a triple.

  • Inner Oni:

    00:42:752 - these 3 last notes can be ddk for emphasis in drums ...

    00:44:987 - add note k ... have sound for a triple.

    00:45:204 - Add note d .. have bass sound.

    from 00:55:300- to 00:59:050- = Long stream ...
    00:56:382 - Change to d ...
    00:58:761 - Change to k.

    from 01:08:281- to 01:12:607- = Long stream ...
    01:08:281 - first 4 notes can be k .. for piano sound
    01:11:454 - change to k ... ^

    from 01:12:800- to 01:17:223- = Long stream ...
    01:15:492 - ctrl+g with next note ... here broken your follow in piano sound...
    01:16:934 - last 4 notes with k.

    from 01:17:511- to 01:26:742- = other LOOOONG stream ...
    01:20:684 - piano sound is here ... change to k ...
    01:22:992 - ctrl+g with next note ^
    01:24:146 - Same ^
    01:25:877 - Change to d
    01:26:069 - Change to d
    01:26:357 - ctrl+g with next note ...
    01:26:550 - Change this note to d.

    from 01:54:146- to 01:57:896- = Other long stream ...
    01:55:877 - ctrl+g with next note...
    01:56:958 - Change to k ...
    01:57:391 - Change to k.
  • stu's Inner Oni:

    00:24:218 - Delete ...
    00:24:362 - Delete too ... focusing in hit drum sounds.

    00:52:632 - Change to d .. have same sound as previous 5-note stream...
    00:53:208 - Change to d .. not same as previous 5-note why here changes sound.

    from 00:55:444- to 00:59:050- = Long stream ...
    00:58:112 - Change to k ...
    00:58:545 - Change to k ...
    00:58:689 - ctrl+g with next note ...
    00:58:833 - Change to k.

    from 01:17:511- to 01:26:742- = other long stream ...
    01:26:357 - ctrl+g with next note ...
    01:26:742 - Change to k

    01:27:824 - Change this note to k ... have similar sound as previous 3 notes...

    01:30:132 - ctrl+g with next note .. is more fluid comparing BG sound...

    01:46:213 - Change to k ...
    01:46:285 - Change to k too ... both notes have similar pitch sound as previous 2 notes.

    01:51:478 - Change to d ... is low sound here.
    01:52:055 - Same here...

    from 01:54:290- to 01:57:896- = other long stream ...
    01:54:362 - ctrl+g with note 01:54:579- ...
    01:54:651 - ctrl+g with next note ...
    01:54:795 - ctrl+g with next note.

    01:59:627 - in this part is possible 4 notes in 1/6 .. kkkd
all fixed except for GD. thx :)
stu00608

xtrem3x wrote:

Removing my lazyness ...


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

01:37:127- what happen here?? ... this velocity change is unranked ... change your inherited point from 01:37:415- to this point. for avoid these problem in all diffs (except stu's diff ... already)


  • stu's Inner Oni:

    00:24:218 - Delete ...
    00:24:362 - Delete too ... focusing in hit drum sounds. --I don't think so XD

    00:52:632 - Change to d .. have same sound as previous 5-note stream... --retain
    00:53:208 - Change to d .. not same as previous 5-note why here changes sound. --sounds good!

    from 00:55:444- to 00:59:050- = Long stream ...
    00:58:112 - Change to k ... --It is following background sound!?
    00:58:545 - Change to k ... --It will be harder and i don't like it
    00:58:689 - ctrl+g with next note ... --sounds good
    00:58:833 - Change to k.
    --so, i changed 00:58:761 ~ 00:59:050 to kkdkd , sounds good.

    from 01:17:511- to 01:26:742- = other long stream ...
    01:26:357 - ctrl+g with next note ... --umm, i think dk there is good
    01:26:742 - Change to k --no

    01:27:824 - Change this note to k ... have similar sound as previous 3 notes... -- it has :D

    01:30:132 - ctrl+g with next note .. is more fluid comparing BG sound... --sounds good!!

    01:46:213 - Change to k ... --no
    01:46:285 - Change to k too ... both notes have similar pitch sound as previous 2 notes. --no

    01:51:478 - Change to d ... is low sound here. --same as previous, no
    01:52:055 - Same here... --same as previous, fixed!

    from 01:54:290- to 01:57:896- = other long stream ...
    01:54:362 - ctrl+g with note 01:54:579- ... --sounds good!
    01:54:651 - ctrl+g with next note ... --no
    01:54:795 - ctrl+g with next note. --no , i mod it myself somewhere

    01:59:627 - in this part is possible 4 notes in 1/6 .. kkkd --more harder i like it :D
I don't want my map be overmodded so i only pick something i think better in this map to fix ~ Thank you for modding <3
Shinsekai-
W H E N!! call a BN now ;A;
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Topic Starter
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랭크언제함???
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あし발 이 다음에 어떻게 하더라
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L y s

[_Chichinya_] wrote:

W H E N!! call a BN now ;A;
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