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DJ Siesta - Another Day

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Streliteela
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月10日 at 10:34:34

Artist: DJ Siesta
Title: Another Day
Tags: Dulcet Series Summer Special Collection 2nd Lost Time and Memory GMO夏日特辑2 Mei DreaM117er m1223961117 sheela901 appleeaterx Squirrel Instrumental Piano Chord cut version
BPM: 99
Filesize: 3956kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Hyper (3.65 stars, 279 notes)
  2. Another (4.91 stars, 340 notes)
  3. apple's Normal (2 stars, 180 notes)
  4. Mei's Insane (4.54 stars, 284 notes)
  5. sheela's Hard (2.63 stars, 257 notes)
  6. Squirrel's Easy (1.49 stars, 103 notes)
Download: DJ Siesta - Another Day
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4
Another day, another hope~
A present for my best friend Guu
Wish your life full of hope and happiness~OwO~
Download full diffs with z1085684963's Insane here
=======================================================
Squirrel's Easy by Squirrel
apple's Normal by appleeaterx
sheela's Hard by sheela901
117's Hyper by DreaM117er
Mei‘s Insane by Mei
Another by me
Timing by Bonsai. Thanks for your help~:D
Enjoy the melody of life~
Guu
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DreaM117er
標記 :)
Bonsai
Hey, since you asked for a timing check in #modhelp here's the code for the timing sections at the end:
97114,631.578947368421,4,2,1,50,1,0
97745,666.666666666667,4,2,1,50,1,0
98411,705.882352941176,4,2,1,50,1,0
99116,774.193548387097,4,2,1,50,1,0
99890,845.070422535211,4,2,1,50,1,0
100735,923.076923076923,4,2,1,50,1,0
still not 100% sure because those numbers are really random, but it's definitely better - the bpm changes (at least) every white tic, and yours were always pretty early

Also since I had a quick look at the Insane, here's a very small mod ^^
Insane
  1. 00:17:417 (2) - the sound at the slidertail is more important than the head - on the tail there's the melody of what would be the right hand of the piano, on the head there's only the accompanying left hand - but this gives the opposite emphasis. maybe turning 00:17:114 (1) into a slider ending at the head of the current slider would work
  2. 00:18:629 (1) - this slider having x0.5 sv makes it look exactly the same as 00:17:417 (2) and 00:19:235 (2) and thus totally unreadable, I don't think that's rankable, but then again there's no exact rule ^^
  3. 00:33:175 (1) - 00:38:023 (6) and similar ones - head and tail are two strong, seperate sounds, not one holding sound, so mapping them with a slider feels pretty weird, just my opinion though
sheela
Since the timing has changed, I fixed some sliders' end to the correct snap to my difficulty.
sheela's
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DJ Siesta - Another Day (cut ver.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 24389,63176,82570
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Another day
TitleUnicode:Another day
Artist:DJ Siesta
ArtistUnicode:DJ Siesta
Creator:Streliteela
Version:sheela's Hard
Source:
Tags:Dulcet Series Summer Special Collection 2nd - Lost Time and Lost Me GMO夏日特辑2 sheela901 Squirrel cut version
BeatmapID:782477
BeatmapSetID:354179

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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99890,845.070422535211,4,2,1,50,1,0
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Topic Starter
Streliteela
All diffs completed~:3
GAME START LOL~~~
Sc4v4ng3r
Hello there~ NM as requested in my queue~

  1. Unrankable issues
  2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
  3. Just small suggestions/nazi

[Squirrel's Easy]
  1. 00:14:387 (2,1) - You could ctrl + h (1) for the linear transition, but you don't necessarily need to change this.
  2. 00:40:144 (2,1) - Personal opinion, (1) could go below in order to make a triangular pattern, but I guess it is up to you.
  3. 00:43:781 (1,2) - You could avoid polarity here (and for all other similar notes) by making (2) into a 1/2 slider starting from 00:45:599 - .
  4. 01:18:629 (2) - It is kinda weird that this slider skips the piano at 01:18:932 - ... You could separate this into 1 circle and slider.
  5. 01:39:890 (1,2,3) - The circle pattern here seems way too linear, you should try to make it zig-zag or something.
  6. Well, good difficulty, nothing much to say :D
[apple's Normal]
  1. 00:37:720 (3,4,5) - This pattern is kinda confusing for newer players, as (3) is pointing towards (5) but not (4). You could just undo the blanket to solve this.
  2. 01:29:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm... Single tapping 1/2 circles in 99 BPM is actually quite fast (1/1 in 188 BPM), it may be bit too hard for newer players... You could try to use some sliders to get rid of this.
  3. Other than that, really, really nice difficulty :D
[sheela's Hard]
  1. 00:14:690 (3,4) - Keeping the motion from before, I feel that the whole combo should progress towards the right(the opposite direction of 00:13:478 (5) - ).
  2. 00:35:902 (7,8,9,10,1) - I don't know about this... The distance considering this is a 1/4 rhythm is pretty far away from each other, which may be too hard for some players. But I guess I'm just being sensitive to things.
  3. 00:43:781 (1,2) - You could keep the consistency in rhythm and copy the rhythm from 00:46:205 (1,2,3) - .
  4. Really well done difficulty, I can't point out much here :D
That is all from me. GL!
Squichu

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

[Squirrel's Easy]
  1. 00:14:387 (2,1) - You could ctrl + h (1) for the linear transition, but you don't necessarily need to change this.
    prefer the current pattern ;o;
  2. 00:40:144 (2,1) - Personal opinion, (1) could go below in order to make a triangular pattern, but I guess it is up to you.
    sure!
  3. 00:43:781 (1,2) - You could avoid polarity here (and for all other similar notes) by making (2) into a 1/2 slider starting from 00:45:599 - .
    I could, but honestly - there's so much time to read the time/distance, even beginners shoudln't have any problem with this.
  4. 01:18:629 (2) - It is kinda weird that this slider skips the piano at 01:18:932 - ... You could separate this into 1 circle and slider.
    ye, changed, but used the same rhythm like 00:58:326 (1,2) - instead
  5. 01:39:890 (1,2,3) - The circle pattern here seems way too linear, you should try to make it zig-zag or something.
    sure!
Thank you!

meow
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sheela

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello there~ NM as requested in my queue~

  1. Unrankable issues
  2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
  3. Just small suggestions/nazi

[sheela's Hard]
  1. 00:14:690 (3,4) - Keeping the motion from before, I feel that the whole combo should progress towards the right(the opposite direction of 00:13:478 (5) - ).
    Alright, I did something.
  2. 00:35:902 (7,8,9,10,1) - I don't know about this... The distance considering this is a 1/4 rhythm is pretty far away from each other, which may be too hard for some players. But I guess I'm just being sensitive to things.
    I'll consider this. I don't really want to change the constant distance. Else, I have to change similar distances for 1/4 through the whole difficulty, and I honestly don't want to do that. Yet if others will say something about that, then I might change.
  3. 00:43:781 (1,2) - You could keep the consistency in rhythm and copy the rhythm from 00:46:205 (1,2,3) - .
    Oh that's true. Changed the rhythm.
  4. Really well done difficulty, I can't point out much here :D yey
That is all from me. GL!
Thank you for the mod, [Sc4v4ng3r]!
le difficulty
osu file format v14

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Keada
Hi :D mod from my queue, and you said I was gonna focus on the insane so I did.
+The other diffs seemed fine for me.


  • Insane

  1. 00:08:326 (3) - would fit better if you took one 1/4 slider then a note at 00:08:629 - because its a strong beat, and sliderends are usually not a strong beat
  2. 00:07:417 (1) - would look better if you did the same sliders as this 00:07:872 (2) -
  3. 00:40:750 - strong beat here ;w; why isnt it mapped D:
  4. 00:41:053 (7) - same as I said earlier, the slider end is a strong beat D:
  5. 01:03:175 (1) - would be better if this was a 1/2 slider cause I hear a beat on the red tick
  6. 01:05:599 (1) - ^
  7. 01:08:023 (1) - ^
  8. 01:10:447 (1) - like you did here for the ones above ^
  9. 01:14:690 (1) - same here again, its a beat on the red tick
  10. 01:41:888 - and just a suggestion, to do a spinner here to 01:44:427 -

Not much I found D: but really good mapset, good luck :3
Silky
my english is fuking poor i hope ur understanding xd

Insane
  1. 00:08:932 (4) - huge spacing gap between 00:07:872 (2,3) - and 00:08:326 (3,4) - ,I think this slider should change to circle*2
  2. 00:19:387 - add note? up to you
  3. 00:36:053 (6,7) - Ctrl+G for better flow
  4. 00:52:568 (6) - add nc? i think this sound is a set of 00:52:872 (1,1) -
  5. 01:00:144 (3) - add nc for readability? up to you
  6. 01:34:235 (4,5) - same as 00:36:053 (6,7) -
  7. 01:41:658 (2) - add NC please
maybe I'll mod 1~2 more diffs later
moonlightleaf
star , 祝早rank :)
z1085684963
...日本語で下さい :o
DreaM117er
Tags加上我的舊ID吧
m1223961117
麻煩了 :)
Topic Starter
Streliteela

z1085684963 wrote:

...日本語で下さい :o
笑哭了 :lol:

DreaM117er wrote:

Tags加上我的舊ID吧
m1223961117
麻煩了 :)
好的沒問題~~:3
KASUM1
Hello~! As requested from my queue ♥

[Squirrel's Easy]
01:00:902 - 01:02:568 - I think this break is bad for easy , It's so short

that's all

everything else seems fine for me :3

[apple's Normal]
00:15:296 (2,3) - more neater blanket
01:24:993 (1,2) - ^

[sheela's Hard]
00:21:205 (3,4,1) - more neater blanket
00:24:841 (2,3) - ^
00:05:902 (5,6) - spacing error
00:27:720 (3,4) - ^
00:28:023 (4,5) - ^
00:29:690 (2,3) - ^
00:34:084 (3,4) - move (4) left
00:34:538 (4,5) - ^ but (5) :)
00:35:296 (6,7) - spacing error
00:49:235 (3,4) - ^
00:51:659 (3,4) - ^
00:52:568 (5,6) - spacing error http://puu.sh/klfgg/a91ef7cff1.jpg something like that works
01:02:568 (6,7) - ^ http://puu.sh/klfi4/e10488b070.jpg
01:03:781 (3,4) - spacing
01:18:932 (5,6) - move (6) left
01:28:326 (3,4) - spacing
01:33:175 (3,4) - ^

that's all

[117's Hyper]
everything seems fine for me ♥


Streliteela why did you ask me to mod this map

this map is so perfect

anyway I hope my mod helps

just passing by

[z1085684963's Insane]
01:38:940 (2) - this slider end is not snapped
sheela

KASUM1 wrote:

Hello~! As requested from my queue ♥

[sheela's Hard]
00:21:205 (3,4,1) - more neater blanket
00:24:841 (2,3) - ^
00:05:902 (5,6) - spacing error
00:27:720 (3,4) - ^
00:28:023 (4,5) - ^
00:29:690 (2,3) - ^
00:34:084 (3,4) - move (4) left
00:34:538 (4,5) - ^ but (5) :)
00:35:296 (6,7) - spacing error
00:49:235 (3,4) - ^
00:51:659 (3,4) - ^
00:52:568 (5,6) - spacing error http://puu.sh/klfgg/a91ef7cff1.jpg something like that works
01:02:568 (6,7) - ^ http://puu.sh/klfi4/e10488b070.jpg
01:03:781 (3,4) - spacing
01:18:932 (5,6) - move (6) left
01:28:326 (3,4) - spacing
01:33:175 (3,4) - ^

that's all

Sorry, but none has applied except 00:35:296 (6,7) . You have no explanation after your points, which makes me don't know why should I change this. The blankets are fine, some might look like a blanket, but they're intended. Spacing error, those have a meaning because the beat gets stronger. And "move <objectt> left" doesn't mean to me honestly. You should put your points on each suggestion you do. I apologize if you think this is rude, but that's how I write.
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KASUM1

sheela901 wrote:

KASUM1 wrote:

Hello~! As requested from my queue ♥

[sheela's Hard]
00:21:205 (3,4,1) - more neater blanket
00:24:841 (2,3) - ^
00:05:902 (5,6) - spacing error
00:27:720 (3,4) - ^
00:28:023 (4,5) - ^
00:29:690 (2,3) - ^
00:34:084 (3,4) - move (4) left
00:34:538 (4,5) - ^ but (5) :)
00:35:296 (6,7) - spacing error
00:49:235 (3,4) - ^
00:51:659 (3,4) - ^
00:52:568 (5,6) - spacing error http://puu.sh/klfgg/a91ef7cff1.jpg something like that works
01:02:568 (6,7) - ^ http://puu.sh/klfi4/e10488b070.jpg
01:03:781 (3,4) - spacing
01:18:932 (5,6) - move (6) left
01:28:326 (3,4) - spacing
01:33:175 (3,4) - ^

that's all

Sorry, but none has applied except 00:35:296 (6,7) . You have no explanation after your points, which makes me don't know why should I change this. The blankets are fine, some might look like a blanket, but they're intended. Spacing error, those have a meaning because the beat gets stronger. And "move <objectt> left" doesn't mean to me honestly. You should put your points on each suggestion you do. I apologize if you think this is rude, but that's how I write.
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121,94,99890,6,0,L|133:192,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,234,100735,2,0,L|197:332,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,287,101658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
It's alright all these wasn't even problems I tried to find something to mention in the mod
except little things I was serious about it ♥
Mouse Player
Hi From My Queue!

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  1. 00:08:023 (3) - move to x 231 y 146
  2. 00:15:296 (2) - ^ x 128 y 328
  3. 00:19:235 (2) - NC
  4. 00:19:538 (1) - If you NC at 00:19:235 (2) , NC remove
  5. 00:33:781 (2) - NC
  6. 00:34:084 (1) - If you NC at 00:34:084 (1) , NC remove
  7. 00:35:296 (6) - NC
  8. 00:53:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to another pattern. it's maybe confusing.
  9. 00:55:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  10. 00:58:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  11. 01:31:962 (2) - NC
  12. 01:32:265 (1) - NC remove if you nc at 01:31:962 (2)
  13. 01:36:811 (2) - NC
  14. 01:37:114 (1) - NC remove if you nc at 01:36:811 (2)

    COOL MAP! :>

z1085684963's Insane

  1. 00:43:781 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Try to make another pattern
  2. 01:00:144 (3) - NC
  3. 01:03:781 (2) - ^
  4. 01:06:205 (2) - ^
  5. 01:08:629 (2) - ^
  6. 01:11:053 (3) - ^
  7. 01:31:962 (5) - smaller than now.

    You're promise mapper! :><
HappyRocket88
Hello! From my queue. Here's the mod. \(ºuº
[ General]Well, we have here some General stuffs that you might consider after read all of them:

  1. Consider add these info into tags. I must clarify I found out most of the information surfing on BandCamp, muzofox and this osu! version:

    1. Remove " - " from tags as it doesn't make really sense here. I know the website says this is the album, but you just should include relevant information here.
    2. Add piano to tags as long this is one of the main instruments that sounds in the set.
    3. Add chord to tags because this song is a harmony of chords.
    4. Add Beatholic to tags. He was the one who uploaded the first version of the set over the internet. You can found out the real information of song here.
    5. Add electronic intrumental jazz hiphop as this is the genre of the music. Do not need to use them all though as long as BN will decide which one is the best which fits here.
  2. Kiai Sections: I know Ranking Criteria has stated thar Gd'ers can use the kiai times they want as long they makes sense. But, digging into the difficulties, there are some of them that has kiai and other ones don't have. It would make more sense if all the diffs have AT LEAST one kiai time.
  3. Here you have the lyrics if you want to included on the description. <3
  4. The soft-hitclap.wav file has a possible delay higher than 5ms. And also it is shorter than 100ms. Consider to fix it.
  5. The Hyper diff name doesn't fit properly here. Because it doesn't have sense naming a hyper over a ENHI mapset, so I highly suggest renaming the hyper into Light Insane to a better name consistency of the diffs.
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[ Squirrel's Easy]Woah! This easy really impressed me. It's really well made and the flows are perfect. you have done a great job mapping this Easy! What I'm going to point out here just minor suggestions that can improve the readability a bit:
  1. 00:04:690 (1) I'm not against this NC. This plays good, but it would be cools that you keep the NC pattern that you manage in all the difficulty and in this way, it would be consistency throughout the other diffs.
  2. 00:07:417 (1) You can move the slider here a bit to reduce the off-screened of this section. You can do the same with this slider 00:29:235 (1) too.
  3. 00:31:659 (1) The red points don't follow properly the waves of what this song suggest. If you listen to this section carefully, you'll find there just one main change that is here 00:32:265, despite the piano sets suggest that there are two changes. It would be more cool if you followed that piano changes with a slider wave. What about this?
  4. 00:34:084 (1,2) The current rhythm doesn't play bad, but it would flow better if you followed this slider's end 00:33:478 (3) to place the next slider and make it blanket with 00:35:296 (2). For example.
  5. 00:35:296 (2) I highly suggest to emphasize this section with a whistle with the auto sampleset. In this way, you keep consistency with the first sound pattern that you used here 00:33:175 (2,1).The soft sampleset you use here would make more sense if it were in the slider's end. If you agree you can do the same with these following notes:
    Sliders's heads: 00:37:720 (2) - 00:40:144 (2) - 00:42:568 (3) (In this case, it would sound better if you added whistle-auto in the head and soft-whistle on the reverse)
  6. 00:46:205 (1) This slider is a bit off-screened. Consider moving it a bit to the left to reduce the off-screens.
  7. From 01:01:356 to 01:02:568 there are important beats that can't be avoided. Despite this is a Easy diff, I think it would be better if you emphasize that piano set with some notes. What about this?
  8. 01:20:144 (1) Just a minor suggestion, but you can place it here x=312|y=120to improve the cursor movement and make it more relax.
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[ apple's Normal] Nothing to complain about this diff. It's well done! Good job apple! However, I'm going to point out some personal suggestion that you might consider if they improve the difficulty:
  1. 00:15:296 (2,3) This blanket can be improved. I know this doesn't change anything on the readability of this pattern but it would better if you blanketed them better.
  2. 00:37:720 (3,4) The flow here doesn't play bad, but I think it would be better if you try out an intuitive cursor flow. The main flow suggest to players move the cursor to up to click this 00:38:326 (4) despite the slider 00:37:720 (3) suggests the next note will be next to it. I think it would make more sense if you follow the slider's end and place the circle over this slider 00:38:629 (5) as a stack.
  3. 00:41:356 (1,2) The main flow plays good, but I'll just suggest to change the slider's shape to something that can blanket better the circle. For example.
  4. 01:24:993 (1,2) Same here. But, in this particular case, I'd rather go for placing the circle at the bottom to follow the slider's end.
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[ sheela's Hard] I liked this diff. I don't the patterns are readable and the flow is perfect! Congratulations! Nonetheless, I have some suggestions. Feel free to read it and consider if they're garbage or not:
  1. Digging into the Song Setup option of the Normal and this hard, I found out that the difference of HP Drain time and Overall Difficulty isn't the same. Despite you increase the OD +2, the HP goes +1. I highly suggest to keep this consistent because the Hyper has the same OD with this hard. So, I think it would be better if you decrease on 1 the OD.
  2. 00:13:478 (5,3) Just a minor suggestion with these two slider: I think you can improve the blanket among them by Ctrl + G this 00:14:690 (3) and follow the approach circle to improve the blanket.
  3. 00:16:811 (3,1) The flow here doesn't play bad, but I think keeping the DS here would make stuffs easier and coherent.
  4. 00:24:841 (2,3) Same as the second point. I know this doesn't change anything in readability or either flow, but I think it would be better to keep neater patterns amond the objects.
  5. 00:44:993 (5,6) Notable distance snap error here, I know that you wanted to separate the objects in a way to make a jump and follow a equal DS among these objects 00:45:599 (6,7,1) , but I think following the DS would be the best option to make this pattern.
  6. 00:53:478 (1) A really nazi suggestion here, by moving a grid of the second slider's point to the right would make this blanket perfect.
  7. 01:01:356 (3) Another nazi suggestion: Move the slider's end point here x=336|y=40 to have the same x axis with this slider 01:01:962 (5)
  8. 01:05:447 (7) this circle doesn't fit properly here. I think this is not following the piano set as long as this part 01:05:447 doesn't have any sound. So it would be better if you remove it to make more emphasize on the next slider as well as you did here 01:12:569 (7,1) .
  9. 01:06:205 (3) Nazi suggestion: by moving the slider's end point a grid to the right and then to up, it would make the perfect blanket with this slider 01:06:811 (4).
  10. 01:21:811 Doesn't the piano scale start here? If you agree, consider adding a circle.
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[ 117's Hyper] I love the jumps of this diff despite I can't pass them. Here some personal suggestions:
  1. HP -0.5 would fit better to have HP increase consistent. Because the Normal diff uses HP on 4 Hard difficulty uses HP on 5 and the Insane difficulty uses HP on 7, so it would make sense if this hyper uses HP on 6
  2. 00:09:538 (6) Despite this jump here looks good, it seems to be a bit forced. As it finished on a blue tick, players must have to move into a awkward jump that doesn't feel properly here. I highly suggest to try out something less hard as long as it is a hyper diff. What about this?
  3. 00:32:872 (5,6) Why the increase of DS here? Despite it plays good, it would flow better if you keep the DS consistency as well as you did here 00:31:659 (1,2,3,4,5)
  4. 00:36:508 (1,2) Just a minor suggestion here, but you can improve the blanket among these object by placing this slider 00:37:114 (2) here x=473|y=251.
  5. 00:48:629 (1,2,3,4) The rhythm here doesn't play good. If we take into account that the most important beats here are the piano scale, it's not well emphasize and it is missing a lot of significant beats that can't be avoided. So I highly suggest to keep the 1/2 sliders pattern here as you were managing in the previous sections to improve the readability here. Like this.
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[ z16161's Insane] I can't mod this diff. Because I just pass it with B lol:
  1. 01:38:940 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
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