• 00:21:412 (2,3,4) - seems the DS are not same, mean to do like that?
  01:03:012 (2) - out of grid
  01:10:412 (1) - 0.9X BPM here feels no sense. not much diffrent bettween 1.0 mb change to 0.8X
  01:29:612 (1,2,3,1) - feels flow not good
  01:43:812 (5) - mb move a little to left
  01:10:412 (1) - make it more regular?
  02:14:412 same here, mb 0.8X?
  02:21:612 (3) - add whistle here?
  02:23:212 (3) - and here
  02:24:812 (3) - well..
  02:20:812 (1) - add a green line here to reduce volume to 35% mb good?
  02:46:412 (1) - move a little right
  02:58:412 (3,4,5,6) - no need every note clap, try remove clap from 3&4?
  03:01:612 (3) - remove clap here？
  03:11:212 (4,5) - same here remove clap mb？
  03:03:212 (3,1) - i think its too close, or u just overlap

• 00:43:612 (5,6,7) - mb add whistle here ？but reduce the volume to half
  00:56:812 (7,8,9,10) - same suggest in insane
  01:47:612 (5) - add NC, for sv change
  02:45:212 (4) - NC,in last part of music u change sv, but here not

• 02:45:212 (4) - move to 280;111 ?
  00:32:412 (2,3) - flow here not good for ez
  00:35:212 (1,2,3) - make them kinda regular
  00:38:412 (1,2,3) - flow
  00:46:412 (4,5,6) - more regular
  02:01:612 (1,2) - flow

AlejandroMedia wrote:

From my queue, I'll mod you Normal

[General]

1. Replace the MP3. Needs to be 192Kbps instead of 320Kbps. That's can be unrankable. (I can give you one) thanks!
2. Why Madoka Magica as BG? changed, but it was cool <3
3. Put tags in the beatmaplater

[Normal]
00:06:412 - 2 lines, you need only one, the red. Delete the green ok
00:24:012 (4) - Short slider for this time not sure what that means
00:29:412 (2,3,4,5) - Delete this. The rhythm changes and can be confuse for some players. ? i think its fine
01:10:412 - So short break yas
01:15:012 - This object is too far... (AiMod) fixed

Just that, this is so well beatmapped. Congrats!

LittlePigRMX wrote:

hello from queue, everything looks perfect, but I got some minor stuff.
hard
Change overall difficulty to 6

</3
Change overall difficulty to 7

nignog9000 wrote:

Yo from my queue i just went over your hard difficulty, Im new at this so im not that good but i still found one thing that could maybe be fixed.

00:38:212 (7) - You should probably delete this, it feels a little out of place

I really wish is could help you more but you already seem to have a solid Hard difficulty.

rs_fadeaway wrote:

Hi, from my queue ~
i have a long time not force on the pop music,but it is really a nice song! seems that i can feel the sadness and anger of singer lol

[Insane]

• 00:21:412 (2,3,4) - seems the DS are not same, mean to do like that? tbh didnt take my time on thse X_X fixd
  01:03:012 (2) - out of grid fix
  01:10:412 (1) - 0.9X BPM here feels no sense. not much diffrent bettween 1.0 mb change to 0.8X good idea
  01:29:612 (1,2,3,1) - feels flow not good no change, i tihkni tso kay
  01:43:812 (5) - mb move a little to left i think its ok
  01:10:412 (1) - make it more regular? umm unsure what you mean
  02:14:412 same here, mb 0.8X? changed it to .6 and gradually increase. thanks for pointing this out!!
  02:21:612 (3) - add whistle here? put new hitsounds on this section
  02:23:212 (3) - and here
  02:24:812 (3) - well..
  02:20:812 (1) - add a green line here to reduce volume to 35% mb good? 50% is enough i feel
  02:46:412 (1) - move a little right syre
  02:58:412 (3,4,5,6) - no need every note clap, try remove clap from 3&4? removed some claps
  03:01:612 (3) - remove clap here？ no change, i think its okay
  03:11:212 (4,5) - same here remove clap mb？no change, i think its okay
  03:03:212 (3,1) - i think its too close, or u just overlap no change, i think its okay

[Hard]

• 00:43:612 (5,6,7) - mb add whistle here ？but reduce the volume to half no hitsound is okay i feel
  00:56:812 (7,8,9,10) - same suggest in insane mm its ok
  01:47:612 (5) - add NC, for sv change there is no sv change here
  02:45:212 (4) - NC,in last part of music u change sv, but here not

[Easy]

• 02:45:212 (4) - move to 280;111 ? no change to all of these, i feel they are okay to play
  00:32:412 (2,3) - flow here not good for ez
  00:35:212 (1,2,3) - make them kinda regular
  00:38:412 (1,2,3) - flow
  00:46:412 (4,5,6) - more regular
  02:01:612 (1,2) - flow

i will glad，if my mod helps.

votex09 wrote:

General: Please note that the "pulsing" during the chorus or similar areas are in 4:3 ratio, causes this weird lighter area on the right and left side of the screen on 16:9 or 16:10 screens


What is this map still doing in pending?

Lanturn wrote:

SHOOT MORE STARS

-Lemons wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

SHOOT MORE STARS

DID SOMEBODY SAY STARS?

bigjoe97 wrote:

From my queue

Just in general, maybe use the soft whistle instead of claps, this song is quite quiet and the claps feel out of place. maybe its cause ive just listened to it a thousand times with claps already,but i think theyre fine.

Normal

00:06:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this whole beginning part I'd map following the vocals. The guitar pattern is hard to hear at the beginning and is also a lot less prominent than the vocal rhythm. you say i switch between vocals and guitars a lot, but you suggest i map to vocals here, which will leave me either mapping nothing for 2-3 seconds in between the vocals or switching from vocals to guitar, neither of which sounds very appealing, so i will stay with the guitar here.

You switch between the vocals and the guitar a lot in this diff. I'd pick one and just stick with it - I suggest the vocals, since they're the most prominent. ^

Nothing particularly wrong here, although a couple sections might need remapping to fit a different rhythm.

Hard

1.5 star gap is pretty big, especially at this level. A player that could get an A on normal might not even be able to pass Hard.. Maybe make your normal Easy and add a Normal around 2.5 stars. its fine

Same thing here with the beginning and mapping following vocals. Pick something and stick with it. ^

02:01:212 (9,10) - These are very difficult to read. I'd reposition them so they're not hidden under the slider. thats the plan
02:10:412 (6,7,8,9) - Same with these. intentional.
02:11:012 (9,1,2,3) - Flow through these is awkward, straighten it out. i think its fine
02:50:012 (2,3) - These are also awkward. Maybe this? i feel this motion is fine

</3

plz no emoticons for diff name </3

Loved the jumps in this diff.

00:06:412 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is totally weird. Again, the song emphasizes vocals, so you should be mapping those. ^

Other than that this one looked very nice.

ReFaller wrote:

hi, i found this song in modreqs
[Normal]
00:43:612 (5) - i'm suprised this shape, who needs some repair i think tis okay :p
01:20:012 (1) - move to x:360 y:224 for receive better blanket. Might be needed move 01:21:612 (2) to x:276 y:192 oh right
01:30:012 - this is slider tick place. Are you thinking about customizing slidertick sound like a hitclap? And all ticks which are placed when people do claps. ehhhhhhh laaazy ;_;
[Hard]
03:23:012 (5) - this slider is very but very extremely beautiful, but isn't too close from circle before? fixed (i think)
[I can't draw this heart ]
02:14:212 (7) - i have an idea moving in other place, but i don't know where me neither :3
03:03:212 (3) - end of this slider is strange curved, is it broken ? its okay
03:19:812 (6) - i think you move it for example in x:180 y:256 i like it here.

Finally normal music. Push it for ranked!

Lanturn wrote:

Kueyyyyy where are you ;_;

Mollon wrote:

hi~ here is my mod.

normal
i think its very nice for me！

hard
the gap between N and H diff is a little big...
01:15:212 (4,5,6) - move 4's tail a little remote from 6's head would look nice.

</3
02:14:412 - you've placed notes here in other diffs so maybe you would place one here too.
through this diff there are many jumps with over 4 stars at 150 bpm,i've tried ar 8.5 and it read more comfortable.

Sorry for i cant mod more about this map,but i think its really nice to me.The flow,sound,array are very ripeness.And i can learn a lot from this map.
Thank you for using my modding queue and i'll try my best to improve my modding skill!

Lanturn wrote:

SB needs some fixing still.

Most images still don't cover the full screen, like the rain and flashes. Double check this kuey! k

Also rain.png isn't needed. if it's supposed to be part of the animation, call it rain8.png and make sure you're animating 9 frames. Or just delete the rain.png and be done with it

1. Diff name is not that nicely, tbh a similar one was made some days ago and seems QAT did disagree with it, I'd just rename it to Broken Heart or something like that
2. I don't think the epilepsy warning its needed..
   

1. 00:25:012 (3,4,1) - stacks with different gaps are a pain to play and your rhythm choice make it harder to play, just unstack 00:25:412 (4,1) - or keep your pattern consistent like past ones.
2. 00:32:412 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - vocals are calm and music as well, tbh the music isn't sugesting to have that jumps there it isn't building up or strong, just keep your spacing consistent at that part
3. 00:44:812 (1,3) - nazi, blanket is a it off, just fix if you care about design
4. 01:52:012 (1,3) - ^
5. 02:27:212 (1,3) - will be super hard to notice with hidden, do a manual stack or change the pattern a bit
6. 03:13:212 (4,5) - jump its really huge and 5 isn't following any heavy beat, so I totally disagree with this, just use normal spacing

1. 00:45:612 (3,4) - really huge jump for a hard diff, slider leniency helps, but at this case I'm really sure it will cause alot of combo breaks, so try something different here
2. 00:52:812 (5,7) - blanket still can be improved
3. 00:56:812 (7,8) - really troll movement, personally I'll not accept this, because 8 is hidden under the slider and its really hard to notice, yeah good players can notice, but a casual player will have problems with it, also if you take mods in consideration will be a pain to play with HD. There are more cases like 01:22:012 (5,7) - 01:53:612 (5,7) -
4. 02:45:212 (1) - remove NC is not needed, pattern its easy to read without it, just keep your comboing consistent its better~
5. 03:06:812 (3,4) - even if 1/1, this jump its too much for a hard diff, IMO.

1. The fade-in of the rain animation in the last kiai is somewhat long and delayed, it would be better if you started fading in at 02:46:412 - already and make it reach full opacity earlier on.

1. 02:23:612 (5,1) - Unstack them, feels more fitting to the music as new verse starts on the new combo too.
2. 03:04:012 (4,5,6) - Would move this down a bit more so 03:03:212 (3,5) - aren't too close to each other.
3. 03:13:612 (4) - This is heavily cramped for a normal difficulty, please make it smoother.

1. 00:22:412 (1,2,3,4) - The distance between 1-2 should be the same as between the other circles since all beats have about the same intensity (I mean it's the same guitar chord for all of them) and thus should be seen as one tight unit.
   This goes for 00:27:212 (4,5,6,7) - as well, also don't forget to set NC there to make the spacing change understandable.
2. 01:10:212 (10) - Two circles would be better here, the guitar beat on the white tick is pretty notable.
   The same goes for 02:14:212 (10) -
3. 02:10:412 (6) - Try do something like this, there's a lot of pressure on this rather weak beat right now:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 03:04:012 (4,5,6) - Lower the distance between 4-5 and increase it between 5-6, would fit better to the music

1. The intro has some of these 4-in-a-row patterns that I don't agree with, the reason is the same as my first point in the Hard difficulty. I'm speaking of:
   00:09:612 (1,2,3,4) - 00:11:212 (1,2,3,4) - 00:17:612 (1,2,3,4) - 00:20:812 (1,2,3,4) - 00:24:012 (1,2,3,4) - (concerning this one also increase the spacing between 00:25:412 (4,1) - )00:28:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - .
   The other ones are pretty much fine as you can clearly hear a difference in pitches between the slider and the subsequent circles .
2. 00:32:412 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel these jumps are somewhat heavy for a transition, and the music is still in progress of growing up in tension. Lower the spacing between them.
3. 01:10:012 (6,7) - 02:14:012 (6,7) - Since they're stacked, they take away momentum sooner than I expected; the climax is on the big white tick after them after all. Consider adding higher spacing between them.
4. 01:26:412 (1,2) - This overlap didn't look pretty nice in gameplay and it's the only occurence as far as I could see, so please make them not to.
5. The map could be cleaner at times, but I don't want to interfere much with your mapping style here. Good to play.

1. 00:35:212 - Around that timestamp if you take a look closer that flash effect looks a bit mess up, check your sb code again
2. I want to ask regarding sb concept on this first kiai part 00:44:812 - umm is the lightning supposed to zap the couple? e.g. 00:48:012 - 00:57:612 - imo they looks kinda odd when the lightning strikes on their face lol
3. 01:48:812 - Around that timestamp it seems you are missing a pulse effect there. As on I see the second kiai is have pulse effect on every downbeat like you did on 01:50:412 - , so I think better to add that one as well
4. 02:46:412 - Around that timestamp add a flash effect like you did on 02:43:212 - ? I think the flash effect can make the rain sb looks less delayed

1. 00:11:012 (4,1) - Umm how we turn left kinda too harsh imo, also the jump seems a bit too big compared to the rest similliar pattern on intro part
2. 00:41:612 (1) - 01:45:612 (1) - and 03:09:412 (3) - Can't you move there somewhere else? it seems that anti jump on that strong beat kinda out of place, imo you can make them to have same emphsized like you did on previous 00:32:012 (1) - 00:35:212 (1) - 00:38:412 (1) -
3. 00:43:612 (1,2,3) - Umm I think the anti jump would be good if same with 01:47:612 (1,2,3) - since those two have same music
4. 01:07:812 (3) - 02:11:812 (3) - Delete clap on tail? the sound a bit conflict with finish imo
5. 01:19:012 (2) - Missing whistle on head?
6. 01:34:812 (2) - Missing whistle on tail?
   
   If you use hitsound copier make sure to apply on hard and normal as well

1. 00:52:812 (4,5) - and 01:57:612 (5) - The rhythm feels odd, I think they are better be like 01:05:612 (4,5,6) - ?