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KOAN Sound & Asa - Tetsuo's Redemption (Billain Remix)

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Bearizm
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[handsome]

00:50:084 (8,9,1) - manual stack intentional?

01:03:776 (6) - what's the emphasis behind this?

01:03:863 (7) - NC

01:36:305 (1) - change to a circle-1/2 slider?

02:05:607 (1,1) - highlight this 2 and move them to x484y104 for a smoother flow, along with the triangle pattern after it, i guess.

02:42:235 (2) - NC

02:42:758 (4) - NC (or 02:42:846 (5) - )

02:53:398 (2) - NC (there's a lot of SV changes that aren't NC'd imma just leave em off the mod from now)

02:57:410 (2) - ctrl+g for better emphasis (and gameplay) because this sounds louder than 02:57:584 (1) -

04:15:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i literally cannot see anything here due to the overdone overlaps
hehe

Sharkie wrote:

[Restitution]
05:01:421 (1,2,3) - Plays a bit weird imo, but really doesn't matter yea
05:04:822 (1) - is this supposed to be nc'd? aiceo pls fix
05:12:061 (2,3) - I get you want to be the next GIMMICKY AND CREATIVE MAPPER but pls. I didn't have trouble reading it/playing it but that shouldn't mean its acceptable imo. aiceo stack this with 05:12:584 (1) -

Bearizm wrote:

the handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome handsome

handsome's handsome handsome
[handsome]
04:15:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i literally cannot see anything here due to the overdone overlaps shut up noob
thx
Topic Starter
Aiceo
fixed everything in my parts
Mint
hihi o/
late

:idea: General


* normal-hitclap.wav unused?
* Three red lines + one green green line with different sampleset & volume. You know what to remove and what should stay.
* MP3 bitrate is too high, please get a 192kbps one.


Restitution


* 00:56:189 (1) - 01:03:165 (1) - Not sure if these combos here is needed... feels a bit spammed and seems to break your consistency. Just minor issue tho.
* 01:04:038 - Oh well, I see the 3/4 sounds cool for the wubs, but the beat here is quite noticeable, even with 100% feedback ;w;
* 01:19:474 (9,1) - 01:20:869 (10,1) - This double felt so weird to me, especially since you do triplets like 01:16:596 (7,8,1) - before this. Really felt something was missing here. I can see why you did this, but mehhehh.
* 01:20:956 (1) - 03:55:840 (1) - From this combo onwards, you seem to switch between doubles and triplets a lot. Since they are both stacked completely, it's quite hard to read the difference between them. What you could do is manually stacking the triplets like you di with 5-note streams (01:23:049 (5,6,7,8,9) - ). This way it's much more simple to catch the tricky rhythm here, since it's much easier to see which one's a triplet and which one's a double.
* 01:27:235 (9) - 04:03:514 (9) - Optional, but NC for snap change?
* 01:44:328 - Hmm... I see you're mostly following the wubs here, but I hope you consider mapping this one out. It's quite a prominent beat that you don't seem to skip in the rest of the 'chorus'. Just before this at 02:27:235 (1,1,2) - , 1/2 spacing is actually really small, and much smaller than the 1/4 spacing used here. I'd move them closer if I were you.
* 02:28:456 (4,5) - While I was playing this part, I got a bit tricked here. The distance isn't too large considering how other patterns are in the rest of the map.. but this seemed a bit too large in my point of view.
* 02:34:822 (2,3) - Don't really recommend starting the stream on the blue tick here, try this? http://puu.sh/kmF2x/6472c876cf.jpg
* 02:57:584 (1) - Unsnapped?
* 03:26:538 (1) - It's up to you, but you can lower the volume on the slider ends if you want. Sounds a bit noisy since it isn't really snapped to something.
* 03:43:631 (2) - Just veriying, is this a mistake or intentional? I'm not really used to seeing these kind of stuffs in your parts hehe
* 03:51:567 (9) - 03:54:357 (8,1) - While the doubles in the other section worked fine, I'm not quite sure why you put them here. It kinda breaks the polarity and there are audible sounds on the red tick... tho you probably end up not fixing this xd
* 04:10:927 (1) - Uhh.. this is really misleading. The way you spaced this made me think this was 1/4 earlier.. also the 1/4 jump with 04:10:927 (1,1) - is so large and plays really awkward imo.
* 04:15:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Sorry, but I know you can do better than this. This whole chunk is full of tricky patterns all clumped together in one spot, which is just unreadable for me. I hope you can redesign this / move the second part more to the top.
* 04:26:320 (3,4) - ... btw, to me (4) sounds better on the blue tick (1/4) , plays really bad tho, get this checked out? Maybe timing issue, mistake or change into a slider so it's more reasonable.
* 04:34:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Nice!

Nice stuff, I always fail at the second KIAI ._.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Aiceo
Fixed everything in my parts except the double/triplet stacking
Secretpipe
ohhhh this song jsdbKSQNDSKFQDFS
hehe

appleeaterx wrote:

hihi o/
late

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* 04:10:927 (1) - Uhh.. this is really misleading. The way you spaced this made me think this was 1/4 earlier.. also the 1/4 jump with 04:10:927 (1,1) - is so large and plays really awkward imo. what a shocker it was a mistake!111 xd
* 04:15:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Sorry, but I know you can do better than this. This whole chunk is full of tricky patterns all clumped together in one spot, which is just unreadable for me. I hope you can redesign this / move the second part more to the top. fixed
* 04:26:320 (3,4) - ... btw, to me (4) sounds better on the blue tick (1/4) , plays really bad tho, get this checked out? Maybe timing issue, mistake or change into a slider so it's more reasonable. idk whart to do either
* 04:34:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Nice! me too thanks

Nice stuff, I always fail at the second KIAI ._. sry xd
Good luck!
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340,206,299241,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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162,189,299590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,296,299764,5,0,0:0:0:0:
186,296,299852,2,0,P|129:299|80:265,1,100
75,261,300114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,237,300200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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59,43,301247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,108,301421,6,0,P|270:162|253:219,1,100
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480,236,302032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,217,302119,2,0,L|344:230,1,100
383,187,302381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,179,302468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,141,302555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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132,105,302991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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347,235,304561,2,0,L|460:234,1,100
471,232,304822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,157,304910,2,0,P|515:97|491:54,1,100
483,42,305171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,157,305346,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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356,209,311276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,331,311799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,298,311886,5,0,0:0:0:0:
191,189,312061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,195,312933,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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464,81,314677,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,352,316072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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1,249,316421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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KASUM1
Here's 6 stars because you wanted to rank this map ♥
Topic Starter
Aiceo

KASUM1 wrote:

Here's 6 stars because you wanted to rank this map ♥
lets have sex
Hula
I'm hitsounding (trying) this map cos it had like none lol
Topic Starter
Aiceo
updated with hitsounds.
hent2222
omfg this anime is amazing
Asphyxia
[Red o emperoar]
  1. 01:26:538 (1) - Could be moved a little more down to the stream gets a proper star shape, it's kind of off now.
  2. 01:28:020 - Don't you want a break here, to be consistent with 04:04:299 - ?
  3. 01:51:654 (1,2) - Could be a little hard to distinguish that the first slider is actually 3/4, consider moving 2 a little more closer?
  4. 02:21:654 (3) - Could be extended to the blue tick, feels kind of funny now since the sound definitely continues there. Just make sure of the playability if you do plan to extend it!
  5. 03:05:956 (4,5) - I don't like how close they are visually. Could consider this maybe?
  6. 04:43:979 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like a rhythm such as the example below would follow the music a little better, try it?
  7. 04:49:212 (1) - Maybe make the jump a little smaller for better playability? Feels unnecessarily hard right now, or maybe that's because I haven't played..
Get few (2-3) more mods and call me back!
hehe

Asphyxia wrote:

[Red o emperoar]
  1. 04:43:979 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like a rhythm such as the example below would follow the music a little better, try it? >white tick triple
  2. 04:49:212 (1) - Maybe make the jump a little smaller for better playability? Feels unnecessarily hard right now, or maybe that's because I haven't played.. >havent played
Get few (2-3) more mods and call me back!
no change xd
zyoi
wao god map( ˘ω˘ )
Yoges
Holy shit this is soo good.
More fitting background? http://images8.alphacoders.com/423/423151.jpg
Bonzi
xd

- 00:44:067 (4) - uh, a little thing: beign on the blue tick, this was quite difficult to hit precisely. Consider changing 00:43:805 (3) - into a slider that ends at 00:44:067.
- 01:19:474 (9,1) - 01:20:869 (10,1) - I feel like these two are really missing something. It felt way too weird playing them, i kind of assumed they were triplets because of all the stuff that comes before those (like 01:15:200 (11,12,1) - for example).
You might consider changing those to triplets too or doing something else.
- 01:21:218 (2) - 01:25:142 (1) - I don't know why, but i had a really hard time trying to hit all these with proper accuracy.
- 01:26:538 (1,2,3,4,5) - you might want to do a perfect star adjusting 01:26:538 (1) - a bit , idk xdd
- 03:54:357 (8) - 04:01:421 (1) - Basically the same as 01:21:218 (2) - 01:25:142 (1) -
- 04:09:793 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - hey handsom xd what is this and why it's awesome do u use black magic
Topic Starter
Aiceo
thanks dad i fixed mostly everything except some doubles who i think play just fine because i cant play xd
Midget
Hot IRC mod

18+
23:07 Aiceo: cis men trigger me
23:07 *Aiceo is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/779964 KOAN Sound & Asa - Tetsuo's Redemption (Billain Remix) [Redemption]]
23:08 Aiceo: mod pls
23:08 Midget: tru
23:08 Midget: ok
23:08 Midget: when usee the inherited points
23:08 Midget: pizdec nx
23:08 Aiceo: you know
23:08 Aiceo: its rlc
23:09 Midget: galima tiesiog irc cia
23:09 Midget: ir pateikti copy pasta nes tingiu rasyt nx
23:09 Aiceo: okdad
23:09 Midget: cool
23:09 Aiceo: same
23:09 Midget: 00:43:805 (3) - why the fuck did you make it slider, did some nut-job suggest this to you?
23:09 Aiceo: TAIP AS TURIU BERNA
23:10 Aiceo: O KAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA?
23:10 Aiceo: KAS PER KAULSIMAS???
23:10 Midget: tai tu ne cis fagotas
23:10 Aiceo: TAIP AS TURIU BERNA
23:10 Aiceo: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
23:10 Midget: same
23:10 Midget: his name is daddy
23:10 Aiceo: yes
23:10 Aiceo: cause
23:10 Aiceo: bonzi
23:10 Aiceo: is a fag
23:10 Aiceo: and couldn't hit the blue tick on time
23:10 Midget: :D:D:D:D:D:D:D what a shitter
23:10 Midget: change it back
23:10 Midget: now
23:10 Aiceo: but i put
23:10 Aiceo: circle back
23:11 Aiceo: cause looks AAAAAA
23:11 Midget: what is this map for 50k ranks?
23:11 Midget: ok continuing now
23:12 Aiceo: NU KAS PER KLAUSIMAS
23:12 Aiceo: TAIP AS TURIU BERNA
23:12 Midget: pala tik per tavo parts moddint ar viska?
23:13 Aiceo: viska kitaip super cheap atrodys
23:14 Midget: 02:22:352 (1) - i dont remember this slider please revert it to what it was
23:15 Aiceo: kuo tau jis nepatinka
23:15 Aiceo: ???
23:15 Midget: nzn senas kurio neprisimenu buvo geresnis
23:16 Midget: 03:07:700 (3,4,5,1,2) - what is this pussy shit where my doubles
23:16 Aiceo: senas kurio neprisimenu nebera
23:17 Midget: atleast one time this
23:17 Midget: other times is fine for variety
23:17 Midget: 03:36:305 (1) - kabliukas
23:17 Midget: XD
23:19 Midget: 3:43 - 3:52 - padidinciau ''pentiples'' meme spacina 0.1
23:21 Midget: 05:12:061 (2) - put back on the end of the slider where it belongs
23:22 Midget: and im out
23:25 Aiceo: https://gyazo.com/d16d275590f6ce2cdac96188c0ef3c90
23:27 Midget: https://gyazo.com/1ccf9355b9a45f7116cff1157b569986
23:28 Midget: A E S T H E T I C
23:28 Midget: G E T C A N C E R
23:32 Aiceo: same
23:32 Aiceo: :Dddd
23:32 Aiceo: d
23:32 Aiceo: D
23:32 Aiceo: d
23:32 Midget: 03:45:200 (3,4,5,6) - 0.1
23:36 Midget: 05:33:514 (1) - make last hit stronger :)
23:36 Midget: and not hard sanre not cymbal
23:36 Midget: snare*
23:37 Midget: wtf i mean MAKE IT HARD SNARE AND NOT CYMBAL
23:37 Midget: 05:31:072 (5) - SAME HERE
23:38 Aiceo: ok men
23:38 Aiceo: #prayforisis
23:39 Midget: nice im done now #ThinkingAboutYou,Hurting
23:39 Midget: #prayforisis
23:40 Midget: https://gyazo.com/e9c7d03e9e6c8621154b04facae4cf3d
23:41 Midget: https://gyazo.com/0939c400d4782d13a1755e9ddbda1095
Midget
http://puu.sh/lmTKL/fbfe325f4e.wav here's the last hit for you

NOKDS
Topic Starter
Aiceo
fenks, couldn't live without it
Charles445
Writing a mod would be too big / a huge mess...
So I'm tackling parts individually.
This post is literally a newcombo mod from 01:29:263 - to 02:58:282 -

New Combo Planning
Okay so new comboing in this song is going to be a lot more tricky than normal.
Usually white ticks and sometimes reds are the way to go, but this song has instruments on the blue ticks that just completely overpower the beats and take control of the mental metronome, if you get what I mean.
I'll give an example.

Starting at the first breakdown bit, new comboing starts off normally at 01:29:328 - .
Now theoretically the next NC would be at 01:30:724 - , but that's clearly not going to work as there really isn't anything going on at that point. Also, there's kinda a slider going over it...
So, that slider at 01:30:549 (1) - takes the priority, as that WUUUUU sound is basically what the player is paying attention to.
01:31:421 (3,1,2) - For here, this isn't going to work out as the blue tick isn't demanding any attention / power, it's best on the 3 slider before so it's (1,2,3)

01:32:119 - So here a tough decision has to be made regarding new combos.
Are the new combos going to follow the kicks in the music, or follow the woump woump woump noises.
The way it's currently built is following the woump noises, but inconsistently (01:32:817 (1) - and 01:34:212 (2) - are similar woump).
So here's the possible layouts.
Strictly following the kicks -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3978629 pretty good actually. Nothing compromised, ends up being on the white ticks as well. 01:34:474 (2) - Is technically a kick but a new combo on it would be needless.
Following the woump -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3978663 Excluding the beginning, all the new combos are on the blue ticks. This pairs things up pretty well visually and is intuitive to play, albeit less intuitive than the previous example. 01:32:293 (2,1) - Serves as the bridge between the two NC styles. Note how the VERY NEXT PART, 01:37:875 (1,1) - , does that EXACT bridge. 01:34:474 (4,1) - The 4 slider is left without a new combo as a bridge back to normal.

So both work... for that part. As the song gets to bits like 01:48:863 - it becomes clear that it'll take too many exceptions to get working right.

So you're better off just going with the kicks, which will end up doing the woumps justice anyway.
The Actual NC Mod
NC fix changes.
01:31:421 (3) - Add NC
01:31:683 (1) - Remove NC
01:32:119 (5) - Add NC
01:32:293 (1) - Remove NC
01:33:253 (1) - Remove NC
01:33:514 (4) - Add NC
01:33:950 (1) - Remove NC
01:34:212 (4) - Add NC
01:34:386 (1) - Remove NC
01:34:910 (4) - Add NC
01:37:700 (4) - Add NC
01:37:875 (1) - Remove NC
01:38:136 (1) - Remove NC
01:38:398 (4) - Add NC
01:38:834 (1) - Remove NC
01:39:096 (4) - Add NC
01:39:532 (1) - Remove NC
01:39:793 (4) - Add NC
01:39:968 (1) - Remove NC
01:40:404 (1) - Remove NC
01:40:491 (5) - Add NC
01:41:189 (3) - Add NC
01:41:363 (1) - Remove NC
01:43:282 (3) - Add NC
01:43:456 (1) - Remove NC
01:45:026 (1) - Remove NC
01:45:375 (5) - Add NC
01:45:636 (1) - Remove NC
01:45:985 (1) - Remove NC
01:46:072 (4) - Add NC
01:49:822 (1) - Remove NC
01:49:910 (3) - Add NC
From this point on NC seems to be used for speed changes until 02:36:305 - .
The beat placement from 1:49 till then isn't great but this is focusing on NC right now.
02:37:003 (3) - Add NC
02:37:526 (1,1) - So this is a bit tricky. Ideally it's a (1,2) here but... the spacing is a bit small compared to this previous moment at 01:30:549 (1,2) - where it was clearly 1/2. I'd say remove the NC from 02:38:049 - and call it a day.
02:38:398 (3) - Add NC
02:38:660 (1) - Remove NC
02:39:096 (5) - Add NC
02:39:270 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:055 (1) - Remove NC
02:40:840 (1) - Remove NC
02:41:450 (1) - Remove NC
02:42:584 (3) - Add NC
02:44:677 (4) - Add NC
02:44:852 (1) - Remove NC
02:45:375 (4) - Add NC
02:45:636 (1) - Remove NC
02:46:770 (4) - Add NC
02:46:945 (1) - Remove NC
02:47:381 (1) - Remove NC
02:47:468 (5) - Add NC
Skipping 02:47:490 - to 02:50:171 - due to probably suggesting a beat placement overhaul later.
02:50:258 (3) - Add NC
02:50:433 (1) - Remove NC
02:50:956 (4) - Add NC
02:51:131 (1) - Remove NC
02:51:654 (5) - Add NC
02:52:003 (1) - Remove NC
02:52:352 (5) - Add NC
02:52:613 (1) - Remove NC

And that's it for now.
Truzon
That Allah Akbar though....
byfar
d
byfar
god tier shit, gj boys


irc
12:18 Aiceo: byfar
12:18 Aiceo: sweetie
12:18 *Aiceo is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/779964 KOAN Sound & Asa - Tetsuo's Redemption (Billain Remix) [Redemption]]
12:18 Aiceo: i need 1 more mod
12:18 Aiceo: pls save me from the nothing i've become
12:18 byfar: WH
12:19 Aiceo: need
12:19 Aiceo: 1 more mod
12:19 Aiceo: can u
12:19 Aiceo: pls
12:19 Aiceo: ASPHYXIA WONT BUBB OTHERWISE
12:19 Aiceo: AND I CANT GET MORE MODS
12:19 byfar: my dick is 20 thousand inches long
12:19 byfar: i can irc
12:19 byfar: i dont wanna thread xd
12:19 Aiceo: mines 22
12:19 byfar: the whitue one
12:19 byfar: fucking kills me
12:19 byfar: like
12:19 Aiceo: can u
12:19 Aiceo: irc
12:19 Aiceo: and
12:19 Aiceo: ill apply
12:19 byfar: i can irc
12:20 Aiceo: ok just
12:20 Aiceo: send me everything
12:20 Aiceo: i need to go afk for like 30 mins
12:20 Aiceo: ill apply everything aftererer
12:33 Aiceo: ya asph gonna bubb today if u irc
12:33 Aiceo: anyways
12:33 Aiceo: afk
12:33 byfar: k
13:19 Aiceo: where's my
13:19 Aiceo: irc
13:19 Aiceo: ??
13:19 byfar: wait xd
13:27 byfar: 00:31:072 (2,3) - this gets quiet a little bit
13:27 byfar: u decreased spacing relative to the song sound before
13:27 byfar: so u should do the same here
13:28 byfar: 00:36:654 (2,3) - same
13:28 byfar: 00:54:096 (7,8,1) - pattern looks aids imo lol
13:29 byfar: 00:54:793 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - should do equal spacing hereimo
13:29 byfar: like as in distance between objects
13:29 byfar: so it looks consistent and steady
13:30 byfar: 00:57:933 (4,5,6,8,9,1) - looks like a gay orgy here
13:30 byfar: should increase the distance
13:30 byfar: between those objects
13:30 byfar: roughly the same distance as 00:56:538 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -
13:31 byfar: between those quints and triplets
13:31 byfar: 00:48:165 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -
13:31 byfar: same gay orgyh
13:32 byfar: 01:22:352 (1,2,3) - polarity issue
13:32 byfar: 01:21:218 (2,3) - ^
13:35 byfar: for @ rlc 02:38:049 (1) - FIX PLEASE
13:35 byfar: LOOKS UGLY
13:36 byfar: 03:45:549 (7,8) -
13:36 byfar: make it the fuckin same please
13:37 byfar: ones more tilted than the other
13:37 byfar: 03:47:468 (1) - THIS SLIDERS AIDS
13:40 byfar: 05:20:607 (1) - this slider could be better, i dont know about u tho
Topic Starter
Aiceo
go die byfar ty
Topic Starter
Aiceo
@Charles i did apply all the nc changes thanks
Asphyxia
ヾ(´▽`;)ゝGood luck!
Mint
Still looks good to me!
Bubble #2!
Nathan
ok
Bearizm

Bearizm wrote:

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handsome's handsome handsome
[handsome]

00:50:084 (8,9,1) - manual stack intentional?

01:03:776 (6) - what's the emphasis behind this?

01:03:863 (7) - NC

01:36:305 (1) - change to a circle-1/2 slider?

02:05:607 (1,1) - highlight this 2 and move them to x484y104 for a smoother flow, along with the triangle pattern after it, i guess.

02:42:235 (2) - NC

02:42:758 (4) - NC (or 02:42:846 (5) - )

02:53:398 (2) - NC (there's a lot of SV changes that aren't NC'd imma just leave em off the mod from now)

02:57:410 (2) - ctrl+g for better emphasis (and gameplay) because this sounds louder than 02:57:584 (1) -

04:15:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i literally cannot see anything here due to the overdone overlaps

wtf literally best mod EU

gratz btw!
Kalibe
gratz !
Hula
these hitsounds are everything.
Guy
Hello!

We have found some potential issues that we feel are important enough to address before continuing:

Redemption

Unsnapped slider
  1. 00:55:142 (6) - This slider end is unsnapped (1/12). Please snap to 1/4 00:55:229 - .

If you disagree with these suggestions, please reply to this thread justifying why so we can discuss alternatives.

Otherwise, please reply to this thread when these issues are resolved.

Thanks for working with us towards higher quality beatmaps, we hope to see your beatmap ranked soon!
Topic Starter
Aiceo
Totally my bad, updated.
Mint
#1!
Asphyxia
#2
Nathan
#3
Akiyama Mizuki
who's tetsuo
Charles445

bbj0920 wrote:

who's tetsuo
Sampled from this probably
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