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Jeff Williams - Time To Say Goodbye (feat. Casey Lee William

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Cheesecake
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Cheesecake
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 September 2015 at 20:33:44

Artist: Jeff Williams
Title: Time To Say Goodbye (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
Source: RWBY
Tags: season 2 opening
BPM: 250
Filesize: 3338kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Innocence of Youth (8.22 stars, 721 notes)
Download: Jeff Williams - Time To Say Goodbye (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
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Last edited by Cheesecake , edited 5 times in total.
Weber
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Joined May 2015
Weber
Cool challenge map. I definitely like the style this map has, here are a few changes to consider:

00:26:603 (4,5) - One slider where the 4 is should be enough, it seems overmapped currently.
03:08:903 (5) - This slider is a bit off here, try this length and position out: http://puu.sh/k55TJ/f1b542c2c9.jpg
03:13:043 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These sliders don't align with the songs in the drums, I would suggest increasing the slider velocity for them to fit.
Cheesecake
729 posts
Joined December 2013
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Cheesecake

qzy wrote:

Cool challenge map. I definitely like the style this map has, here are a few changes to consider:

00:26:603 (4,5) - One slider where the 4 is should be enough, it seems overmapped currently. -Nice catch
03:08:903 (5) - This slider is a bit off here, try this length and position out: http://puu.sh/k55TJ/f1b542c2c9.jpg -While I agree it is a bit off, I don't particularly want to have a slider on a blue tick, but I did flip the slider vertically so that it flows a bit better
03:13:043 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These sliders don't align with the songs in the drums, I would suggest increasing the slider velocity for them to fit. -Done and added another hitcircle 03:14:483 (8) -
Thanks for the mod dude, I really appreciate it
Cheesecake
729 posts
Joined December 2013
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Cheesecake
Nerfed streams because they were silly

01:20:363 (1) - Changed anchor points so that the sliderball doesn't peak too high

Remapped 02:52:163 - 02:53:963 to match the song better
Weber
1,254 posts
Joined May 2015
Weber
been a while, thought I would look over it again for some changes:

01:18:323 (11) - I would suggest adding another hitcircle here and shortening the following slider. I understand the slider is supposed to match up with the guitar note there, but it feels a bit off because the previous patterns (01:17:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ) are all matched to the drum beat, which continues for an extra beat during the current slider. I think it would be better for it to hit 12 in this color combo rather than 11. Like so:
SPOILER

01:42:623 (9) - This note should be the start of a new combo. Not something huge, but I think it just fits the stream timing better.

01:45:443 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:46:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, these combos should be 4 each to match the drums. I would suggest either leaving 01:46:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - as a 7 note combo, or change it into two color combos (4 and then 3). Like so:
SPOILER

03:08:843 (4) - Looking at this again, I noticed this hitcircle should probably be replaced with the slider that follows it, as the "TIME" lyric coincides perfectly with this instead of 03:08:963 (5) - and it feels a little awkward the way it currently is. Like so:
SPOILER
Cheesecake
729 posts
Joined December 2013
Topic Starter
Cheesecake

qzy wrote:

been a while, thought I would look over it again for some changes:

01:18:323 (11) - I would suggest adding another hitcircle here and shortening the following slider. I understand the slider is supposed to match up with the guitar note there, but it feels a bit off because the previous patterns (01:17:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ) are all matched to the drum beat, which continues for an extra beat during the current slider. I think it would be better for it to hit 12 in this color combo rather than 11. Like so:
SPOILER
Done

01:42:623 (9) - This note should be the start of a new combo. Not something huge, but I think it just fits the stream timing better. Done

01:45:443 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:46:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, these combos should be 4 each to match the drums. I would suggest either leaving 01:46:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - as a 7 note combo, or change it into two color combos (4 and then 3). Like so:
SPOILER
This part sounded a bit off anyway so I've changed it

03:08:843 (4) - Looking at this again, I noticed this hitcircle should probably be replaced with the slider that follows it, as the "TIME" lyric coincides perfectly with this instead of 03:08:963 (5) - and it feels a little awkward the way it currently is. Like so:
SPOILER
Done, and also remapped 03:09:323 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
Thanks for another mod! :D
unko
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Joined March 2014
unko
Man.... I hope your not trying to rank it LOL
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