Sweyax wrote:

'lu 'lu
Suggestions
A faire sinon jte dé-add de mes friends WTF?

[General]
Baise le volumes des HS d'1-2 tick sinon jte saumonne *0* "Baise"? o_o Sinon le volume est déjà assez bas comme ça D:
[Normal]
00:12:100 (x) - Met un Circle sinon sa fait comme une coupure ,sa fait moche Fix'd.
a tous les finish c'est a dire a :
00:05:623 (1) - Sur le Slider (que le slider) Pas besoin.
00:10:736 (4,1) - du finish de la fin au début du slider suivant ^
00:16:191 (2,1) - ^ ^
00:21:645 ( 2,1) - ^ ^
00:27:441 (1) - Sur le slider ^
00:30:168 (1) - ^ ^
00:35:623 (1,2) - sur ces deux Circles ^
00:40:736 (3,1) - du finish de la fin au début du slider suivant ^
00:46:191 (6,1) - ^ ^
00:51:645 (2,1) - ^ ^
00:57:441 (1) - sur le slider ^
01:00:168 (1)- sur le slider ^
de ici 01:04:941 à 01:05:623 ^
01:16:191 (6,1)- le circle et le début du Slider ^
01:21:645 - (4,1) - le finish et le début du Slider ^
etc... ^
tu fait un Kiai Time tres cours , sa fait plus joli :p[/color] Pas besoin.
Nazi Mod :p
SweyStar :p Thanks.

Lunah wrote:

Julien<3 Lunah <3

Dagonnater's Hard
00:06:645 (1) - Snap with 00:06:304 (3)'s finish I change this part. >.>
00:09:799 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - A little evil for a Hard I think i keep this.. ._.

Sky
01:21:304 (9) - 1 grid up No , it's already good >w<
01:58:037 (2,3) - Weird to see D: maybe move linearly Fix'd.

Ok here SB's image without Website spam and other ~ I think i keep the original BG.. Sorry ;_;

SPOILER

[attachment=2:d6043]SB1.jpg[/attachment:d6043]
[attachment=1:d6043]SB2.jpg[/attachment:d6043]
[attachment=0:d6043]sb3.jpg[/attachment:d6043]

wmfchris wrote:

kirby songs are awesome <3 Really? o_o

[general]
My suggestion is: background start to change when the finish hitsound appear. Since changing them is time-consuming it's also fine for this one~ I won't change this , sorry ._.

[Sky]
0:29:145 (7,8) spacing Fix'd.
09:31:020 (4,5,6) (4,5) up 1 grid, No , sorry. >w< (6) up+right 1 grid Fix'd.
1:21:304 (9) right 1 grid Fix'd.

[hard]
add some finishes each time when SB changes? Nope , sorry.

nice arrangement, star

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Low the volume please, it's too high. 'k , fix'd.
Make please audio lead in for 2 seconds? Nope , i make just 1,5 second in Lead-In~

Nothing wrong in diiffs. Nice map, Star~

1. The mp3 seems to be of pretty poor quality, please try to find a better one.
2. Move back your offset to 168ms on all difficulties. Neither beats before the initial offset, nor different offsets on each difficulty are allowed. This doesn't change the timing of the map, it only sets the offset earlier, anyway you should make sure and resnap all notes.
3. You only need the audio lead in on the [Hard], so please remove it from the other difficulties.

1. Lower the approach rate? [Normal]'s approach rate is lower, so you should fix one of them.

1. 00:30:764 (2,3) - You should snap these properly to the slider.
2. 02:02:895 (1) - Align the green line on the end properly (atm it's a bit too late).
3. You should consider adding a break in this difficulty, this is the only one without at least one, and seeing the max score of almost 15mil, it might be a good idea. Also it's a very repetitive song, so it shouldn't hurt too much.
   Right now this can be considered fast score!

jericho2442 wrote:

Easy
Combo mod

00:19:171 (3) - newcombo, your breaking your pattern
00:32:807 (5) - newcombo this, then remove the next newcombo, it looks and plays much better that way
00:38:262 (3) - newcombo, your breaking your pattern
01:02:807 (5) - newcombo this, then remove the next newcombo, it looks and plays much better that way
01:30:080 (1) - (suggestion) i think it looks much better like this

SPOILER

01:32:807 (5) - newcombo this, then remove the next newcombo, it looks and plays much better that way


Normal
Combo Mod

00:20:535 (1) - remove newcombo, your breaking your own pattern
00:32:807 (5) - newcombo this, then remove the next newcombo, it looks and plays much better that way
00:45:080 (5) - newcombo, your breaking your own pattern
01:02:807 (5) - newcombo this, then remove the next newcombo, it looks and plays much better that way
01:32:807 (6) - newcombo this, then remove the next newcombo, it looks and plays much better that way

Garven wrote:

Sorry I took so long. -_-

[Easy]
00:13:716 (1) - I'd like to recommend against these types of sliders in an easy - it tends to be confusing as to when the slider is going to end, though you don't have to change it.
00:16:443 (1) - Remove whistle from slider slide. And any other you happen to encounter. They just sound bad against this song. ><
00:45:080 (5) - Same comment as before, if you decide to try mapping something else.

[Normal]
00:10:989 (1,2) - Think you can reposition/reform something to reduce the overlap here?
01:04:171 (1) - Hrm, maybe remove the finish from the end of this slider? Having two in a row like this at this point in the song doesn't feel right.

[Dagonpater's Hard]
00:09:795 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This is going beyond the realm of a hard difficulty...
00:20:535 (5,6,7,8) - This almost is too, but it's better than a plain stream.
00:39:455 (4) - Delete this and expend the start of the spinner to here.
01:51:898 - You should just map through this break. It's so close to the end that you end up waiting, then playing for 10 seconds and you're done.

[Sky]
orz, my fingers ;_;
Neat diff here.

Good set~

ignorethis wrote:

offset sounds a bit early at later parts

<Dagonpater's Hard>
hitsounds are a bit random, like
00:10:307 (1,2,3) - remove finish Fix'd.
00:15:762 (1) - ^ Fix'd.
and many others Fix'd.

Others look nice though.

happy30 wrote:

I believe this song needs a second offset

try

Offset 80 BPM 176 Fix'd
Offset 46.459 BPM 176 Fix'd

don't forget to resnap I'll go to resnap now~

happy30 wrote:

I found the missing lead in bubble-pop worthy, sorry ._.

happy30 wrote:

rebubble

Larto wrote:

Normal:
00:46:443 (1) - Snap this circle to the new timing section!

Fix and I rank.

_LRJ_ wrote:

Larto wrote:

Normal:
00:46:443 (1) - Snap this circle to the new timing section!

Fix and I rank.

'kay , fix'd.