Leorda wrote:

[Roddie's Easy]
00:11:372 (1) - This object are too far from spinner, or else, the beginner player is difficult to reach that object Fixed.
00:19:270 (1) - ^ ^
00:58:764 (1) - ^[/color] ^
01:16:042 (3) - Move 1 grid left? Nah.
01:22:460 (1) - Too far from spinner, this object must near spinner (not timeline), so the new player can play well Fixed.

Leorda wrote:

[General]
1) You need an approachcircle.png

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Don't use a grey combo colour, it clashes with the multiplayer colours.
Set preview points.
.mp3 is 320kbps, the maximum allowed is 256.

Leorda wrote:

[General]
1) You need an approachcircle.png

Also, you need to do this.

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
Set preview points, probably to 00:18:777. k
You need an approachcircle.png, just use the default k
.mp3 is too high a bitrate, reduce below 256kbps done, 192kbps

Normal+
Get rid of that plus, this is a normal. +s on diff names look ugly anyway star rating is 4.24 (almost hit Insane) so i put a + for a reason
01:25:915 (3,1) - This is confusing, I thought 3 was the slider at first because of the similar hitcircle colours fixd

Insane
00:08:533 (7,8) - Stacked sliderends are a bitch to sightread. Separate these sliders out. changed into one repeating slider

Arusha Shuna wrote:

RandomJibberish wrote:

Get rid of that plus, this is a normal. +s on diff names look ugly anyway star rating is 4.24 (almost hit Insane) so i put a + for a reason

Nivalis wrote:

Arusha Shuna : I'll mod every diff except taiko.
[Roddie's Easy] waiting for roddie's response
-> Add "Roddie" to the tags.
00:02:980 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Form a hexagon for the opening?
00:40:510 (3) - Make it symmetrical? (middle waypoint : 1 lv3 grid left, last waypoint : 1 lv3 grid up)
01:30:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - The pattern seems messy, place it tidier?

[Normal+]
00:29:893 (3) - Elevate it higher. k
00:35:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - One grid down? (so (3) would be in the center) k
01:01:004 (3) - Add clap at start nah
01:27:918 (5) - This jump is surprising (it breaks my combo), perhaps reduce distance? oops
01:30:387 (3,4) - Curve it? k

[Insane]
...nothing to say about this Insane diff, actually. The approach rate is too fast, but that's just me. GET GOOD

RandomJibberish wrote:

Star rating is incredibly inaccurate. You're making it more confusing by trusting it with your diff name if you say so

James2250 wrote:

You need a cursor trail for your cursor (template skin one should work)

Roddie's Easy:waiting for roddie's response
Add Roddie to tags
Make sure all timing sections that change the audio are placed 1/4 earlier
00:06:930 (1,2) - I would stack these on the previous '1'
00:46:930 (1,2,3) - make this a straight line
01:30:387 (1,4) - align
01:31:375 (2,3,1,2) - align these too
01:35:819 (1) - end where the other difficulties end?

Normal+:
00:50:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would change this around so they all make a circle but anyway :/ it's not easy you know, can you at least help me with it?

Insane:
00:24:708 (1,2,3,5) - align k

Nivalis wrote:

[Roddie's Easy]
-> Add "Roddie" to the tags.
00:02:980 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Form a hexagon for the opening? No.
00:40:510 (3) - Make it symmetrical? (middle waypoint : 1 lv3 grid left, last waypoint : 1 lv3 grid up) Fixed.
01:30:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - The pattern seems messy, place it tidier? Fixed.

James2250 wrote:

Roddie's Easy:
Add Roddie to tags
Make sure all timing sections that change the audio are placed 1/4 earlier Fixed some.
00:06:930 (1,2) - I would stack these on the previous '1 Fixed.
00:46:930 (1,2,3) - make this a straight line Fixed?
01:30:387 (1,4) - align Fixed.
01:31:375 (2,3,1,2) - align these too Pattern changed from previous mod. ._.
01:35:819 (1) - end where the other difficulties end? I'm sure its fine?

lepidopodus wrote:

Almost all of my mods are merely suggestions so you don't need to be too serious.

Taiko Oni
HP drain 8 and OD 8? Oh gosh that's really high, and I think raising both of them is too much. How about lower them? (I usually use 5/5, and seems lots of mapper using 5/5, but depending on the map some mappers set higher.)oops, ok changed
00:08:165 (2,1) - There's no sound in the end of the slider & spinner in Taiko, so shorten them by 1/2 and add a note in 00:10:881. k
00:27:177 (1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,4) - How about kddkdkkkk --> kddkdkddk? (d = don = red note, k = kat = blue note) done
00:31:128 (1,2,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - How about kkdkdkkkk --> kkdkdkddk? k
00:33:103 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Just to mention, I usually don't recommend to use 1/8 cause it makes the map significantly hard, but this song actually has 1/8 so never mind. 1/8 notes in this song isn't really hard to hit
00:44:955 (4) - Hmm... I don't like this slider fix'd
00:48:905 (6,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4) - How about d kkkkdkkkk --> d kkkkdkdkd or dk kkkdkdkd? 1st suggestion
01:02:239 (3) - I recommend to avoid this kind of short slider (though it's not prohibited or something) k
01:05:449 (1) - Similar with 00:08:165 (2,1). Players usually finish the spinner quite fast in actual play, so it's different with auto. done?
01:13:597 (18,19) - same as 01:02:239 (3), but If you want to keep these just keep them. k

Overall, nice patterns. So I gladly star this map. Great job.

Nivalis wrote:

Finally done, as promised (untung diingetin)
optimized for flashlight

Is 3.71 star rating good enough? First time I created this the star rating rises into 4.29

Shinde wrote:

Generali will do that later, after my internet connection return to its original state
Delete the folder "SB" and full upload. I don't see any storyboarding, so I'm assuming you just forgot to remove it. If you ever have any plans to use it, the amount of blank space is much too high, it's a bit pixelated, and you don't need all of those images. One will suffice, and you can just use storyboard scripting to change it's color.

Insane
-1 HP Drain done!

Normal
Consider renaming to Hard
00:50:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Shape these sliders around the BG better. done... hopefully :X
There are a few AiMod spacing errors you could fix.
ALL DONE!
Nivalis' Normalwaiting for Nivalis's response
+1 Approach
The slider velocity is low and you use a lot of 1/4th sliders. This makes the map look cluster fucked. There's also a fairly high amount of notes for a normal. I suggest remap with higher velocity and less 1/4th sliders.
00:29:646 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Horrible rhythm.
00:33:103 (1) - Has at least one unnecessary timing section, and the positioning of them doesn't make sense, except for the one that turns the kiai off.
00:41:745 (2,3,4,5,6) - More bad rhythm.
There are a lot of parts in the map that doesn't flow well. Then there are a lot of parts that are overmapped for a Normal, and a lot of parts that feel very empty. (ex. 01:14:091 (1,1) - )
01:37:671 (8) - I dunno about silencing the end of this note. If you had faded it out with a spinner it'd be okay but it sounds plays oddly for some reason to me.

Roddie's Easy waiting for Roddie's response
-1OD/Approach
01:14:091 (1) - Something is up with this break. It looks.. Light blue. .. Move this note around and it goes away. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25887

Shinde wrote:

Nivalis' Normal
+1 Approach +2 instead, +1 is still clustering
The slider velocity is low and you use a lot of 1/4th sliders. This makes the map look cluster fucked. There's also a fairly high amount of notes for a normal. I suggest remap with higher velocity and less 1/4th sliders. Hmm, remapped, yes. It's much better now (the further mods are skipped because of this remapping)
01:37:671 (8) - I dunno about silencing the end of this note. If you had faded it out with a spinner it'd be okay but it sounds plays oddly for some reason to me. Volume down to 40%

Shinde wrote:

Roddie's Easy
-1OD/Approach Fixed
01:14:091 (1) - Something is up with this break. It looks.. Light blue. .. Move this note around and it goes away. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/25887 Fixed...I hope.

Odaril wrote:

Roddie's Easy: waiting for Roddie's response
First thoughts: such little spacing... It confused me. The hitsounds were quite irregular to me, too.
00:25:202 (3) - I expected a custom clap on the first hit.
00:40:510 (3) - ^ on second and fourth hits.
01:28:412 (3) - ^ on first hit

Nivalis' Normal: waiting for Nivalis's Response
First thoughts: I didn't really understand most of the rythms.
Approach Rate -1.
00:16:313 (6) - I'm not a fan of the use of 1/4 in a Normal diff. Make it two 1/2 circles ?
00:19:276 (2,3,4) - Make it a repeat slider please. 1/4 rythms are confusing for new players.
00:21:251 (7,8,1) - ^
00:24:708 (5) - Same as 00:19:276 (2,3,4) -
00:25:696 (8) - Huh... Short 1/4 slider... It's ugly and confusing.
00:27:177 (2,3,4) - Make it a repeat slider please.
00:29:152 (8,9,1) - ^
00:32:486 (5) - Same as 00:25:696 (8) -
00:48:412 (1) - Same as 00:16:313 -
00:48:412 (1) - ^

Hard:
First thoughts: I SS'd it first try. It makes me sad that I will probably never SS it again. nah, you'll SS it again. It's not very hard for a player like you :3~
Set higher AR and OD. done
00:25:449 (2) - Nice slider. XD
00:53:844 (5) - Custom clap on the first hit ? k
00:53:844 (5) - Custom clap on the last hit ? nah

Insane:
First thoughts: suddenly, streams. I absolutely didn't expect that. I wonder what the taiko diff looks like now.
hm... seems fine.

Taiko Oni:
Seems fine too.

What is the storyboard ? I didn't see it. i haven't full submit it the non-SB folder mapset yet

No star yet, some fixes to be made in Normal. that's cool

Odaril wrote:

M
Nivalis' Normal:
First thoughts: I didn't really understand most of the rythms. Perhaps because of that 3/4 circles? It used to be a lot more confusing
Approach Rate -1.
00:16:313 (6) - I'm not a fan of the use of 1/4 in a Normal diff. Make it two 1/2 circles ?[/color] Done
00:19:276 (2,3,4) - Make it a repeat slider please. 1/4 rythms are confusing for new players. OK
00:21:251 (7,8,1) - ^ Done
00:24:708 (5) - Same as 00:19:276 (2,3,4) - Fixed
00:25:696 (8) - Huh... Short 1/4 slider... It's ugly and confusing. No, I prefer that 1/4
00:27:177 (2,3,4) - Make it a repeat slider please. Done
00:29:152 (8,9,1) - ^ Done
00:32:486 (5) - Same as 00:25:696 (8) - No
00:48:412 (1) - Same as 00:16:313 - Changed into non-repeating slider instead

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

[Nivalis' Normal]
01:37:424 (7) - move this note to 01:37:547 (and remove 8) No, the music will get too plain in my opinion
Slider Velocity is the same as Hard...I'd lower the speed to 1.20-1.40 since its to fast for Normal, and remap a little. I already tried 1.40 SV once, and Shinde says it's too slow ~_~ (Shinde's mod post)
I decide to keep using my current SV.

DJPop wrote:

- Roddie's Easy -
00:30:634 (1,2) - don't make them overlapped
00:40:510 (3) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
TIMING 33,967 - delete, it's the same as previous
TIMING 50,263 - delete, it's the same as previous

^All fixed.

shabao_pig wrote:

Roddie's Easy

00:38:041 (4,1) - spacing Fixed from previous mod